廣東高考新人教版應(yīng)用文寫作指導(dǎo)求助信課件

求助信假如你是李華，你的一張照片被人發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上，你因此受到同學(xué)的取笑。對(duì)此你感到煩惱，所以決定寫一封信給你的老師，尋求她的幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 具體的煩惱；2. 希望得到的幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第一段：開頭：（1）自我介紹（如果是向朋友求助就不用自我介紹，而是改為問候,如:Howareyou?或者Howiseverythinggoing?）；（2）背景和目的。相關(guān)句型開頭：Ihavesomedifficulties/troublein….Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavour.

DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主體部分：困難/麻煩的具體內(nèi)容和希望得到的幫助。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.

HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主體部分：困難/麻煩的具體內(nèi)容：（應(yīng)說明因果，不能寫過多無助于主題的內(nèi)容。）可采取總分式或列舉式。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主體部分：希望得到的幫助：（可以有針對(duì)性地提出求助）可參考句子：I'dliketoknowwhattodo.Iwonderhowtodealwiththeproblem.Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Couldyoubesokindtogivemesomeusefulsuggestions?DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第三段：結(jié)尾：表達(dá)期盼之情。相關(guān)句型

結(jié)尾：Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.二、牛刀小試假定你是李華，是一名剛到美國(guó)學(xué)校的交換生，你在生活上和學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些困難，請(qǐng)你給你的好友John寫一封求助信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.不適應(yīng)西方飲食；2.感到孤獨(dú)；3.上課聽不懂。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?IhavesomedifficultiesinlifeandstudyinAmerica.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Tobeginwith,Ican’tadapttothewesterndiet.Meanwhile,Ioftenfeelhomesickandlonely.What’sworse,Istillfindithardtofollowthenativeteachersinclass,whichresultsinmypoorgrades.Iwonderhowtodealwith