Unit12+Innovation+Writing+Workshop+寫作課件 高中英語北師大版（2019）選擇性必修第四冊(cè)

新北師大版高中英語選擇性必修四Unit12writing

1.Studentshouldmasterthebasicstructureofthepassage.2.Studentsareabletousephrasesandsentencesthatdescribethebriefintroduction,the

mainachievementsandinfluencesofaperson.3.Students'writingskillscanbeimproved.learningobjectivesleadinEinsteinAlexanderFlemingStephenHawkingpre-writingbrainstormingfamilyidentitybirthdayachievementcharacter我校英文報(bào)新開設(shè)的欄目正面向全校學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇介紹一位名人的短文。Whataspectscanwewriteinourcomposition?......Howcanweorganizeouressay?StephenHawking,oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientists,wasbornin1942.Hewasfamous,notjustforhisbrilliantwork,butalsoforovercomingthechallenges

ofdisease.Whenhewas21,Stephengotaseriousillness.Hecouldn’twalkorspeak.Hehadtositinawheelchairandspeakthroughacomputer.Buthedidn’tgiveup.Hebecameagreatscientistthroughhishardwork.Heenjoyedwriting.OneofhismostfamousbooksisABriefHistoryofTime.

Hehadapositiveattitudetowardslifeandhenevergotdisappointedordiscouragedfromhisillness.Hewasabrightstarintheworldofscience.StephenHawkingAnswerthefellowingquestionsQ1:Whoisthisarticlemainlyabout?Q2:whatdidhedoordiscover?Q3：Whatcontributiondidhemaketohumansociety?StephenHawkingHewroteABriefHistoryofTimeHewasabrightstarintheworldofscienceStephenHawking,oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientists,wasbornin1942.Hewasfamous,notjustforhisbrilliantwork,butalsoforovercomingthechallenges

ofdisease.

Whenhewas21,Stephengotaseriousillness.Hecouldn’twalkorspeak.Hehadtositinawheelchairandspeakthroughacomputer.Buthedidn’tgiveup.Hebecameagreatscientistthroughhishardwork.Heenjoyedwriting.OneofhismostfamousbooksisABriefHistoryofTime.

Hehadapositiveattitudetowardslifeandhenevergotdisappointedordiscouragedfromhisillness.Hewasabrightstarintheworldofscience.StephenHawkingAnalyzethestructurethepassage.para1.(thebeginnning)para2.(themainbody)para3.(conclusion)briefintroductionexperience/mainachievementscomment/influenceStephenHawkingunderlinebeautifulsentencesandexpressionsthatwecanuseinourowncompositions.1.briefintroduction①oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientistsinfluential:famous/well-known/excellent/brilliant/premier/gifted/...②befamous

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Whenhewas21:attheageof213.comment/influencepositive/nevergotdisappointedordisappointedhumble/outspoken/optimistic/generousdetermined/humorous/gratefulHewasabrightstarintheworldof....StephenHawking,oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientists,wasbornin1942.Hewasfamous,notjustforhisbrilliantwork,butalsoforovercomingthechallenges

ofdisease.Whenhewas21,Stephengotaseriousillness.Hecouldn’twalkorspeak.Hehadtositinawheelchairandspeakthroughacomputer.Buthedidn’tgiveup.Hebecameagreatscientistthroughhishardwork.Heenjoyedwriting.OneofhismostfamousbooksisABriefHistoryofTime.

Hehadapositiveattitudetowardslifeandhenevergotdisappointedordiscouragedfromhisillness.Hewasabrightstarintheworldofscience.scientists:biologist/musician/engineer/inventor/composer...StephenHawkingunderlinebeautifulsentencesandexpressionsthatwecanuseinourowncompositions.①oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientistsinfluential:famous/excellent/gifted/well-known/brilliant/premier...scientists:biologist/musician/engineer/inventor/composer...②befamous

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Whenhewas21:attheageof213.comment/influencepositive/nevergotdisappointedordisappointedhumble/outspoken/optimistic/generousdetermined/humorous/gratefulHewasabrightstarintheworld.StephenHawking,oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialscientists,wasbornin1942.Hewasfamous,notjustforhisbrilliantwork,butalsoforovercomingthechallenges

ofdisease.Whenhewas21,Stephengotaseriousillness.Hecouldn’twalkorspeak.Hehadtositinawheelchairandspeakthroughacomputer.Buthedidn’tgiveup.Hebecameagreatscientistthroughhishardwork.Heenjoyedwriting.OneofhismostfamousbooksisABriefHistoryofTime.

Hehadapositiveattitudetowardslifeandhenevergotdisappointedordiscouragedfromhisillness.Hewasabrightstarintheworldofscience.1.briefintroductionwhile-writing你校英文報(bào)新開設(shè)的欄目正面向全校學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇介紹著名音樂家弗里德里克·肖邦(Frederic

Chopin)的短文。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫提示詞：巴黎Paris

鋼琴詩人thepoetofthepiano

makeyouressaywell-structuredandincludebriefintroduction,experience/mainachievements,comment/influenceusethepasttensetowriteyourcomposition.useavarietyoftimeexpressionstointroducetipspost-writingEditing.Edityouressayinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.EditingSheetDoesthewriterclearlyintroducetheperson?Istheessaywell-structured,includingbriefintroduction,experience/mainachievements,comment/influence?Doesthewriterusetimeexpressionstointroducetheperson?Doesthewriterusepasttensetodescribetheperson?Markanyspelling,punctuationorgrammarerrors.Markanyunclearexpressions.Givesuggestionsifyoucan.Underlinetheexpressionsyoulike.Comments:____________________________________范文展示The

Great

Composer—Chopin

Frederic

Chopin,oneoftheworld’smostinfluentialcomposers,wasbornin

1810.Hewasfamous,notjustforhisbrilliantwork,butalsofor

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