高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典：專題01-四年(2020-2023)新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高考真題(解析版)

《高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題01四年（2020-2023）新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫綜述及真題（解析版）一、讀后續(xù)寫題型概述P1二、讀后續(xù)寫考向統(tǒng)計P1三、讀后續(xù)寫黃金法則P2四、讀后續(xù)寫評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)P2五、命題專家談讀后續(xù)寫P3六、讀后續(xù)寫思維導(dǎo)圖P3七、讀后續(xù)寫高考真題P401--2023年新高考I&II卷P402--2023年浙江1月卷P503--2022年新高考I&II卷P704--2022年浙江6月卷P905--2022年浙江1月卷P1006--2021年新高考I&II卷P1207--2021年浙江6月卷P1408--2021年浙江1月卷P1509--2020年浙江7月卷P1710--2020年浙江1月卷P1811--2020年新高考卷P19成良好的答題習(xí)慣，是決定高考英語成敗的決定性因素之一。做題前，要認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求、題干和選項，并對答案內(nèi)容作出合理預(yù)測;答題時，切忌跟著感覺走，最好按照題目序號來做，不會的或存在疑問的，要做好標(biāo)記，要善于發(fā)現(xiàn)，找到題目的題眼所在，規(guī)范答題，書寫工整;答題完畢時，要認(rèn)真檢查，查漏補缺，糾正錯誤。一、讀后續(xù)寫題型概述讀后續(xù)寫是隨著我國高考改革由教育部考試中心研制的英語高考新題型，2016年10月在浙江省首次使用。該題型通過讀寫結(jié)合，檢測學(xué)生的英語書面語言理解與表達(dá)能力。要求學(xué)生能夠梳理故事文體的結(jié)構(gòu)、分析故事發(fā)展的線索、想象故事發(fā)展的情節(jié)以及續(xù)寫故事的發(fā)展和結(jié)局。讀后續(xù)寫的閱讀材料一般以350詞以內(nèi)的記敘文和夾敘夾議文為主。考生要在此文的后面續(xù)寫約150詞左右的文字與前文構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。要求考生續(xù)寫的部分多是故事發(fā)展的高潮或結(jié)局。情節(jié)曲折跌宕，線索性和邏輯性較強。二、讀后續(xù)寫考向統(tǒng)計四年(2020-2023)高考英語讀后續(xù)寫考情統(tǒng)計年份卷別類型話題2023新高考I&II卷勵志類在老師的鼓勵下參加作文比賽2023浙江1月卷情感類“我”與蜂鳥的神奇邂逅2022新高考I&II卷勵志類鼓勵身殘志堅男孩繼續(xù)參加越野賽 2022浙江6月卷情感類為無家可歸的人們發(fā)放食物2022浙江1月卷情感類與“最不合拍”搭檔成為好友2021新高考I&II卷情感類雙胞胎在母親節(jié)給媽媽做早餐2021浙江6月卷情感類作者上學(xué)時的一次打工掙錢的經(jīng)歷2021浙江1月卷歷險類少年意外將頭卡在南瓜中而爆紅網(wǎng)絡(luò)2020新高考卷情感類三個孩子幫助一個貧困家庭孩子掙錢2020浙江7月卷歷險類與北極熊面對面的一次脫險經(jīng)歷2020浙江1月卷情感類幫助寵物狗重獲快樂三、讀后續(xù)寫黃金法則一個中心：傳遞正能量弘揚價值觀兩條主線：故事發(fā)展情節(jié)線人物動作心理線三個不要：不要盲目增加人物不要突破所給行數(shù)不要忽略段首銜接四個環(huán)節(jié)：研讀材料畫詞匯研讀首句畫導(dǎo)圖細(xì)思斟酌慢成文研讀答案背靚點五大法寶：獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)簡簡并復(fù)交替運用倒裝句倒出精彩無靈主語出奇兵動作鏈烘托氣氛六大主題：個人成長類助人為樂類遇困脫險類親情關(guān)愛類人與動物類生活故事類四、讀后續(xù)寫評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一、評卷要求1、本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分，每個檔次5分。評分時先根據(jù)作答的具體情況初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來綜合衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分。2、評分時，從故事內(nèi)容，詞匯語法和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三個方面考慮，具體為（1）創(chuàng)造內(nèi)容的質(zhì)量，續(xù)寫的完整性以及與原文情境的融洽度。（2）使用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，恰當(dāng)性和多樣性。（3）上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。閱卷應(yīng)整體評分，從主題是否明確、內(nèi)容是否完整、內(nèi)容和原文銜接度高不高、語言是否符合原文風(fēng)格、語言使用是否正確等方面綜合考慮檔次。先確定檔次，再具體給分。3、 續(xù)寫內(nèi)容必須符合故事主線。不符合的一律不及格（15分以下）。抄襲原文或不相干的內(nèi)容達(dá)到1/3的（連著抄，間隔著抄都算）、充滿負(fù)能量或不道德的內(nèi)容，均判零分。4、閱讀材料的語言：主要以第一人稱敘事為主，因此續(xù)寫部分的語言也應(yīng)是敘事風(fēng)格，否則分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次或扣5分。5、語法：文章時態(tài)為一般過去時。使用時態(tài)錯誤，扣3分。詞匯、語法錯誤：一般大錯扣1分，如出現(xiàn)1個小錯，從總分中減去半分。相同的錯誤不重復(fù)扣分。如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。注意事項：續(xù)寫部分應(yīng)該以第一人稱講述故事，主要用過去時（如果人稱或者時態(tài)用錯，降一檔）；與原材料的語言風(fēng)格保持一致，否則分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。二、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21~25分）1.創(chuàng)造了豐富合理的內(nèi)容，富有邏輯性，續(xù)寫完整與原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了多樣并且恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，可能有個別小錯，但完全不影響理解3.有效地使用了語句間的銜接手段。全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，意義連貫。第四檔（16~20分）1.創(chuàng)造了比較豐富合理的內(nèi)容，比較有邏輯性，續(xù)寫比較完整，與原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了比較多樣并且恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)?？赡苡行┰S錯誤，但不影響理解。3.比較有效地使用了語句間的銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，意義比較連貫。第三檔（11~15分）1.創(chuàng)造了基本合理的內(nèi)容，有一定的邏輯性，續(xù)寫基本完整，與原文情境相關(guān)。2.使用了簡單的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，有一些錯誤或不恰當(dāng)之處，但基本不影響理解。3.基本有效地使用了語句間銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)基本清晰，意義基本連貫。第二檔（6~10分）1.內(nèi)容或邏輯上有一些重大問題，續(xù)寫不夠完整，與原文情境有一定程度脫節(jié)。2.所使用的詞匯有限，語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，錯誤較多，影響理解。3.未能有效地使用語句間的銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰，意義不夠連貫。第一檔（1~5分）1.內(nèi)容或邏輯上有較多重大問題，或有部分內(nèi)容抄自原文，續(xù)寫不完整，與原文情境基本脫節(jié)。2.所使用的詞匯有限，語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，錯誤很多，嚴(yán)重影響理解。3.幾乎沒有使用語句間的銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰，意不連貫。零分未作答，所寫內(nèi)容太少或無法看清，以致無法評判。所寫內(nèi)容全部抄自原文或與題目要求完全不相關(guān)。五、命題專家談讀后續(xù)寫1.高考讀后續(xù)寫以學(xué)科素養(yǎng)為導(dǎo)向,突出綜合性和創(chuàng)新性,倡導(dǎo)讀寫融合。2.語篇文體為記敘文,文章結(jié)構(gòu)簡單,時間、地點明確,語言生動,但難度不大。3.段落的開頭語提供了明確的信息。段落的開頭語規(guī)劃了寫作思路和框架,寫作內(nèi)容基本明確。4.話題積極向上,傳播正能量,倡導(dǎo)人與自然的和諧共處。5.方向和努力一樣重要。研透題型特點,明確考查的各項能力,加強針對性訓(xùn)練。6.變的是語篇,不變的是思路。高考中的文本材料通常為記敘文,要根據(jù)記敘文的要素來理清文本的主要內(nèi)容和故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展脈絡(luò),從而進(jìn)行合理的續(xù)寫。7.千里之行,始于足下。要想快速提煉出故事梗概,弄清人物特點,理清故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展脈絡(luò),就要加大日常詞匯背誦,大量閱讀記敘文材料,總結(jié)歸納其寫作特點。8.整體布局,科學(xué)規(guī)劃。讀后續(xù)寫是一個寫作大工程,除了要有厚實的閱讀基礎(chǔ)外,還要對讀后續(xù)寫的思路進(jìn)行整體布局,并對整個寫作訓(xùn)練的過程進(jìn)行科學(xué)規(guī)劃。除了加大詞匯量外,還要系統(tǒng)地梳理各種情景描寫、人物刻畫、情節(jié)發(fā)展、故事結(jié)局與啟示的高級語句與段落,并在寫作中嘗試使用。只有從大局出發(fā),整篇布局并進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的訓(xùn)練,才能寫出高分佳作。9.走出一條屬于自己的路,享受讀寫的快樂。二輪復(fù)習(xí)時間短,一篇完整的讀后續(xù)寫用時多,因此在課堂上練習(xí)的時間比較有限。但是,讀后續(xù)寫分值較高,這就要求我們有自己的復(fù)習(xí)計劃和節(jié)奏,合理安排閱讀和寫作的練習(xí)。小段的時間可以進(jìn)行小語段、小情節(jié)的微寫作;大段的時間就可以進(jìn)行整篇的續(xù)寫,養(yǎng)成提筆能寫、見情景能表達(dá)的寫作習(xí)慣,走出一條屬于自己的路,享受讀寫的快樂。六、讀后續(xù)寫思維導(dǎo)圖七、讀后續(xù)寫高考真題01--2023年新高考I&II卷閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者上中學(xué)的時候，社會學(xué)老師邀請作者參加一個寫作比賽。作者不喜歡寫作，于是想都沒想就拒絕了。但是在老師的鼓勵下，作者同意試一試。作者在寫作過程中雖然很累，但是沒有放棄，堅持下來了。在作者最終完成寫作時，作者感到寫作讓他很快樂，他已經(jīng)不在乎輸贏了?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個星期后，當(dāng)我?guī)缀跬洷荣惖臅r候，傳來了消息?！焙偷诙问拙洹邦C獎后我去了老師的辦公室?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者獲得比賽一等獎，在頒獎典禮上作者表達(dá)了對社會老師的感激。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“頒獎后我去了老師的辦公室?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫老師鼓勵作者繼續(xù)寫作，自此作者堅持寫作取得了成功，作者將這一切歸功于自己的老師。2.續(xù)寫線索：比賽消息傳來——作者獲獎——高興——頒獎典禮感謝老師——頒獎后來到老師辦公室——老師告訴作者堅持寫作——作者表達(dá)了對寫作的喜愛——作者寫作取得了成功——感激老師3.詞匯激活行為類①告知：inform/tell②成功做到：makeit/succeed③表達(dá)：express/convey情緒類①高興的：happy/glad②激動地：excitedly/withexcitement【點睛】[高分句型1]IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.（運用了由連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）[高分句型2]It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.（運用了強調(diào)句）[高分句型3]Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.（運用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）02--2023年浙江1月卷閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.DuringthecookoutItoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者被邀請去一個農(nóng)場野餐，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個房子里有只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網(wǎng)困住了，作者把蜂鳥救了，把蜂鳥帶出去的時候它遲遲不肯走，當(dāng)作者走到一條布滿黑莓的小路時，它開始動了，但是卻不肯飛走，徘徊著，后來終于飛走了，當(dāng)作者準(zhǔn)備離開時，蜂鳥又飛到作者面前，好像是在和作者告別?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個星期后，我又去了農(nóng)場?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡呋氐睫r(nóng)場時所看到的和所想到的。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我正要離開，這時蜂鳥出現(xiàn)了。”可知，第二段可描寫蜂鳥是如何對作者的以及作者的感想。2.續(xù)寫線索：想起救蜂鳥的時候——回到那個房子——想到那只蜂鳥——看見蜂鳥——蜂鳥的表現(xiàn)——作者的感想3.詞匯激活行為類①思緒回到……：thoughtsdriftbackto/thoughtsreturnto②匆匆回到：rushbackto/hurrybackto③盯著：eyeslockedon/eyesstaringat情緒類①寬慰：feelasurgeofrelief/feelrelieved②感激：grateful/thankful【點睛】[高分句型1]AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.(由as引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和when引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.(由that引導(dǎo)的主語從句)03--2022年新高考I&II卷閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【簡要分析】【原文解讀】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者是一名特殊教育教師，在大型越野賽跑那天，發(fā)現(xiàn)患有大腦疾病的大衛(wèi)獨自站在一旁。作者問其原因，他說準(zhǔn)備放棄比賽。從教練口中得知，因為擔(dān)心同學(xué)們會嘲笑大衛(wèi)，所以教練想讓大衛(wèi)自己去決定是否參加賽跑。作者讓大衛(wèi)追尋自己的內(nèi)心，不理會別人的看法，大衛(wèi)最終參賽，盡管遇到困難，他戰(zhàn)勝了自己，這已經(jīng)無關(guān)名次，而是他的勇敢和堅定讓這一切成為可能?！纠m(xù)寫線索】鼓勵大衛(wèi)——心理變化——決定參賽——克服困難——加油助威——完成比賽——感悟【段落續(xù)寫】1.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們挨著坐著，但大衛(wèi)不愿看我一眼”可知，第一段可描寫作者鼓勵大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)完成比賽，大衛(wèi)經(jīng)過強烈的心理斗爭，最終決定參加比賽。2.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上”可知，第二段可描寫大衛(wèi)開始參賽，雖然中途遇到困難，仍然堅持到最后，完成比賽?！敬鸢浮縒esatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone’sjoy,hereachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.【導(dǎo)語】本文以賽跑為線索展開。作者是一名特殊教育教師，在大型越野賽跑那天，發(fā)現(xiàn)患有大腦疾病的大衛(wèi)獨自站在一旁。作者問其原因，他說準(zhǔn)備放棄比賽。從教練口中得知，因為擔(dān)心同學(xué)們會嘲笑大衛(wèi)，所以教練想讓大衛(wèi)自己去決定是否參加賽跑。作者讓大衛(wèi)追尋自己的內(nèi)心，不理會別人的看法，大衛(wèi)最終參賽，盡管遇到困難，他戰(zhàn)勝了自己，這已經(jīng)無關(guān)名次，而是他的勇敢和堅定讓這一切成為可能?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們挨著坐著，但大衛(wèi)不愿看我一眼?！焙偷诙问拙鋬?nèi)容”我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者鼓勵大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)完成比賽，大衛(wèi)經(jīng)過強烈的心理斗爭，最終決定參加比賽。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫大衛(wèi)開始參賽，雖然中途遇到困難，仍然堅持到最后，完成比賽。2.續(xù)寫線索：鼓勵大衛(wèi)——心理變化——決定參賽——克服困難——加油助威——完成比賽3.詞匯激活：行動類：①深呼吸：withadeepbreath/breathedeeply②堅持做：insistedondoing/besticktodoing情緒類：①熱情：enthusiastically/withgreatpassion②驕傲：beproudof/takepridein【點睛】[高分句型1].Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere.(由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和why引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2].Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和省略that的賓語從句)[高分句型3].Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.(含有Itwas…that結(jié)構(gòu)的強調(diào)句型)04--2022年浙江6月卷閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社區(qū))inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasn’tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I’dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididn’thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she’dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn’thaveaplacetocallhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.IwantedtomakethemknowthatIwasreallyanxioustohelpthem.Tomyrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile,andIcouldseetheirexhaustionintheireyes.IwantedtoknowwhattheyweregoingthroughandIwasdesperatetoknowwhatIcoulddoforthem.TheynoddedgratefullyasIpushedmyspoonintothepotandtookalargespoonfulandpoureditintotheirbowls.IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.Thisexperiencemademerealizethattherearesomanypeopleinthisworldwhoneedourhelp.Italsomademerealizethatoursmallactofkindnesscanmakethemfeelwarmandmakeagreatdifferencetothem.Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.Iamanxioustourgetheworldtodoeverythingpossibletohelpthoseinneed.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者為了完成高中畢業(yè)所需的社區(qū)服務(wù)時間，需要在所在的社區(qū)做點什么，作者去了施粥所，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)備過程中要做的事情很多，作者看到無家可歸的人靠近時心里有點害怕，但是卻忙得沒有時間去擔(dān)心這些，作者看到了年齡和國籍各不相同的人，這讓作者感到很難過?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)他們朝我走來的時候，我露出了最燦爛、最幸福的笑容?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者是怎么為無家可歸的人施粥。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我很高興我用這種方式贏得了我的服務(wù)時間?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者對這次社區(qū)服務(wù)的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：無家可歸的人笑——作者舀粥——無家可歸的人感激——作者感悟——作者發(fā)出呼吁3.詞匯激活行為類①倒：pour/decant②意識到：realizethat/beawarethat③主張：urgesb.todo/advocatesb.todo情緒類①感謝：gratefully/thankfully②急切的：anxious/eager【點睛】[高分句型1]Thisexperiencemademerealizethattherearesomanypeopleinthisworldwhoneedourhelp.(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)[高分句型2]Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.(由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，省略了that和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)05--2022年浙江1月卷閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning（指定）projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedhewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn'tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitive,extremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate（命運）wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren'tthere.IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn'tmeanorabusive;hejustgavemetheimpressionhecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.Needlesstosay,Ididn'tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn'tsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis（假說）,setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iwasoutmatched.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn'twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn'tsurewhatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.結(jié)部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Para1.Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________◆Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.ThoughIwantedtosharemyideaswithhimfully,IfailedtodosoforfearthatIwouldholdhimback.Ijustkeptnoddingwhenheaskedmewhetheritisoktodothiswayorthatway.Ithoughtitwasimpossibletopersuadehimintoacceptingmyviews,soIdidn’twanttowasteourtimetodiscuss.Istartedtowaittoleaveimmediatelywearrivedattheplace,andsodidhe.Ijusthopedthatthepresentationdaycouldcomeearlier.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.IfeltsosorrytohearthatandIthoughtIshouldvisithiminanycase.HewasalittlesurprisedtoseemewhenIsteppedintohiswardwithsomeflowersandfruits.Iofferedtodotherestworkofourprojectandheinvitedmetosharemyideastoperfectit.Webegantoworkasafineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime.OurhardworkpaidoffandDr.Henderson’swasverysatisfiedwithourwonderfulfindings.Fromthisproject,wealsolearnedthesignificanceofteammates.Justasthesayinggoes,onepersoncangofar,butagroupofpersonscantravelfarther.【分析】本文以事件為線索展開，講述了作者在一次課上被分配了一個不想要的隊友共同完成作業(yè)共享分?jǐn)?shù)，他們從最開始的無法配合到最后圓滿完成任務(wù)的溫暖故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由續(xù)寫段落第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們開始定期見面起草計劃?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫見面起草過程中所發(fā)生的事情以及過程中的心理活動。②由續(xù)寫段落第二段首句內(nèi)容“有一天，我聽說他因為嚴(yán)重的疾病住院了”可知，第二段可描寫我的搭檔住院以后我們是如何應(yīng)對并最終圓滿完成作業(yè)的。2.續(xù)寫線索：見面起草——我害怕說錯，基本保持沉默，只是順從他的想法——搭檔生病住院——探望取得互信——合作圓滿完成——懂得了團(tuán)隊合作的意義

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①與…分享：sharesthwithsb/exchangesthwithsb

②沒能做：failtodo/beunabletodo/notmakeit

③到達(dá)：arrivedat/getto/reach/④走進(jìn)：stepinto/enter/comeinto情緒類①驚訝的：surprised/amazed/shocked②滿意的：satisfied/content/pleased【點睛】[高分句型1].Istartedtowaittoleaveimmediatelywearrivedattheplace,andsodidhe.（使用了“so+（助）動詞+主語”表示“……也一樣”的倒裝句型）

[高分句型2].ThoughIwantedtosharemyideaswithhimfully,IfailedtodosoforfearthatIwouldholdhimback.（使用了though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）06--2021年新高考I&II卷AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmothe