2025年中考英語(yǔ)寫作話題復(fù)習(xí)之經(jīng)歷感受類講義

書(shū)面表達(dá)常用銜接詞類別單詞/短語(yǔ)例句順序firstofall/first(ly)/tostartwith/...comesfirst.首先secondly/second/next/then其次finally/intheend/atlast最后lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是atthesametime/meanwhile同時(shí)Lastbutnotleast,Ikeepontryingandnevergiveup.最后但同樣重要的是，我一直在努力，從不放棄。Tostartwith,allseemedwell.開(kāi)始時(shí),一切看上去很順利。并列補(bǔ)充and和；又；而且besides除此之外inaddition除此之外還有,notonly...butalso不但……而且ontheonehand…，ontheotherhand…一方面……另一方面……Inthefaceofthevariationofthevirus,notonlyChinabutalsoothercountrieshavetotakeactiontofightagainstthecrisis.面對(duì)病毒的變異，不僅中國(guó)而且其他國(guó)家都不得不采取行動(dòng)對(duì)抗危機(jī)。轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比but但是however然而while然而Somepeoplewastefoodwhileotherssufferfromhunger.一些人浪費(fèi)食物而還有人挨餓遞進(jìn)what’smore甚至;更重要的是what’sworse更糟糕的是even甚至especially特別是aboveall首先；最重要的是=1\*GB3①It’simportantforustostudyhard,especiallyforstudents.對(duì)于我們，尤其是青少年來(lái)說(shuō)，努力學(xué)習(xí)很重要。=2\*GB3②Youshouldrememberit,andwhat’smore,youshouldgetitright.你應(yīng)該記住它，更重要的是，應(yīng)該正確理解它。因果/目的because/as/since/becauseof/for因?yàn)閠hanksto多虧了……asaresult結(jié)果without沒(méi)有withthehelpof...在……的幫助下therefore所以forthisreason因?yàn)檫@個(gè)原因sothat以便于inorderthat/inorderto為了forthispurpose為了這個(gè)目的=1\*GB3①Thankstothistreatment,herphysicalconditionhasimproved.多虧了這種治療，她的身體狀況已經(jīng)改善了。=2\*GB3②It’srainingoutside.Forthisreason,youhavetostayathome.外面下雨，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)原因，你只能待在家。=3\*GB3③Shespentalotoftimepreparingforthespeech,sothatshewonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest.她花了很多時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備演講，結(jié)果獲得了比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。舉例forexample例如suchas...比如；例如andsoon等等Besidessuccess,wecanalsogoformanyotherthingsduringourlifetime,suchaslove,friendship,happinessandsoon.在我們一生中，除了成功，我們還應(yīng)該追求很多其他的東西，比如愛(ài)、友誼、快樂(lè)等等。觀點(diǎn)陳述自己觀點(diǎn)：asfarasIknow就我所知inmyopinion依我來(lái)看totellthetruth說(shuō)實(shí)話tobehonest誠(chéng)實(shí)地說(shuō)generallyspeaking通常來(lái)說(shuō)陳述正反方不同觀點(diǎn)：ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...一方面……又一方面……some...whileothers...一些人認(rèn)為……而另一些人為……Everythinghastwosides.事物都具有兩面性。Somepeopleholdtheviewthat...whiletheothersprefertheviewthat...一些人堅(jiān)持這種觀點(diǎn),而另一些人更喜歡另一種觀點(diǎn)=1\*GB3①Inmyopinion,Ithinkitisawonderfulcountry.依我看，這是一個(gè)美妙的國(guó)度。=2\*GB3②Somepeopleholdtheviewthatyoungpeoplenowadaysarenotashardworkingastheirparentswhiletheothersprefertheviewthatyoungpeoplestillworkhard.一些人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為如今的年輕人不如他們的父母那一代勤奮；而另一些人更喜歡另一種觀點(diǎn)——年輕人還是很努力的。總結(jié)inshort/inaword/allinall總之Allinall,toliveahappierlifeweshouldtryhardtoformgoodhabits.總之，為了過(guò)上更加幸福的生活，我們應(yīng)該努力養(yǎng)成好的習(xí)慣。詞匯升級(jí)詞性基礎(chǔ)詞匯升級(jí)詞匯基礎(chǔ)詞匯升級(jí)詞匯名詞advantage(優(yōu)點(diǎn))benefit,strength,strongpointdisadvantage(缺點(diǎn))shortcoming,weaknessdevelopment(發(fā)展)progress,becomebetterreason(原因)causeway(方法)method,means,approachthing(事情)matter,business,affairproblem(問(wèn)題)question,trouble,issuewealth(財(cái)富)treasure,fortunechance(機(jī)會(huì))opportunitychallenge動(dòng)詞use(使用)makegood/fulluseof,takeadvantageoftry(嘗試)do/tryone’sbesttodo,makeeveryefforttodohope(希望)expect,lookforwardtoknow(知道)understand,cometorealizekeep(保持)stickto,insistonlike(喜歡)befondof,fallinlovewith,becrazyaboutgrow(增長(zhǎng))raise,improve,increasecause(導(dǎo)致)leadto,resultinfinish(完成)achieve;completekeepsth.inmindface(面對(duì))befacedwith，befacedwith/standuptorealize(意識(shí)到)beconscious/awareof需要(need)inneedofmeet(遇見(jiàn))comeacrosscan(能)enable,allowsbtodo,makeitpossibletodosth.solve(解決)dealwith,workout形容詞good(好的)fantastic,amazing,excellent，perfect，outstanding,wonderfulpleasantbad(壞的)terrible，harmfulawfulhappy(高興)pleased,joyfulbeautifulpretty,attractive,charmingtired(累的)bewornoutchallengingmany/much許多a(great)numberof/quiteafew/alotof/lotsof/plentyof/varioushelpful(有幫助的)beofgreathelpimportant(重要的)beofgreatimportanceclever(聰明的)wise,bright,intelligent連詞besides此外moreover,inaddition,what’smoreand(和)aswellas,along/togetherwithbecause因?yàn)閍saresultof…but(但是)yet,ontheotherhand,howeverso(所以)therefore,asaresult,thusthough(雖然)inspiteof副詞too/also(也)aswellsometimes(有時(shí))onceinawhile短語(yǔ)thanksbfor(感謝)begratefultosbfor=express/showone’sgratitudetosb.bedeterminedtodo,makeupone’smindtodoasksb.for向某人尋求幫助turntosb.forhelp,askafavorofsb.preparefor為……做準(zhǔn)備makepreparationsfor/bepreparedforbegoodfor(對(duì)……有益)beof(great)benefitto...，behelpfultosth=beofusetosthadvisesbtodosth/suggestdoing建議It’ssuggested/advisedthatsbshoulddosb.suggest/advisethatsbshoulddowelike...best...最喜愛(ài)one’sfavoritesb.beaskedtodo...某人被要求做某事berequestedtodosth.=demand(ofsb.)todo...Itisrequired/requested/demandedthat...(should)do...)高級(jí)句式句子功能句式例句常用開(kāi)頭1.It’swellknowntousthat…眾所周知2.Asisknowntous,正如我們所知3.…isahottopicthatisbeingwidelytalkedabout………是一個(gè)正在被廣泛討論的熱門話題。4.Fromthepictures/charts,wecanseethat/itcanbeseenthat…從圖片/圖表我們可以看到……5.Astheproverbsays“…”正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)：“……”6.Onceuponatimetherewas…很久以前，曾有……7.Oneday…一天8.Longlongago,there…很久以前，有……9.Nowadays,…playsanimportantroleinpeople’sdailylife.如今，……在人們的日常生活中起著非常重要的作用10.Withthedevelopmentof...,peoplebegin...隨著……的發(fā)展，人們開(kāi)始……=1\*GB3①Weallknowfriendsareimportanttous.Astheproverbsays“Afriendislikeamirror.”It’swellknowntousthatfriendsareimportanttous.正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)：“朋友就像鏡子?！北娝苤?，朋友對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)很重要。=2\*GB3②Mobilephonesareimportantinpeople’sdailylife.Nowadays,mobilephonesplayanimportantroleinpeople’sdailylife.如今，手機(jī)在人們的日常生活中起著非常重要的作用。描述現(xiàn)象或提出問(wèn)題1.Recently,…h(huán)asbecomethefocusofthesociety.近來(lái),……已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)的焦點(diǎn)。2.Nowadays,itiscommontohear/see…現(xiàn)如今，聽(tīng)到/看到……是很普遍的。3.Thefactthat…h(huán)asattractedourattention……的事實(shí)已經(jīng)吸引了我們的關(guān)注。4.Noonewoulddisagreewiththefactthat…沒(méi)有人會(huì)不同意……的事實(shí)Theproblemofpollutionisserious.Recently,theproblemofpollutionhasbecomethefocusofthesociety.近來(lái)，污染問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)的焦點(diǎn)。說(shuō)明原因1.BecauseIhaveto…,Iwon’tbeableto…因?yàn)槲业谩?我不能……2.Becauseof…Iwon’tbeableto…因?yàn)椤也荒堋?.Thereasonfor…is…that………的原因是……4.That’swhy…這就是為什么……Chinahashadmanygreatachievements.Weareallproudofit.Chinahashadmanygreatachievementsandthat’swhyweareallproudofit.中國(guó)已經(jīng)取得了很多偉大的成績(jī)，那也是為什么我們?nèi)紴樗院馈１磉_(dá)看法/觀點(diǎn)1.Someof…thinkthatitisnecessaryto………中的一些認(rèn)為有必要……2.Someof…pointoutthatitisgoodto………中的一些指出……是有好處的3.Someof…h(huán)oldtheideasthatitisnecessaryto………中的一些持有……是必要的想法4.Someof…don’tthinkthatitisagoodideato………中的一些認(rèn)為……不是一個(gè)好主意5.Othersdon’tthinkitissuitablefor…todo…另一些認(rèn)為……不是一個(gè)好主意6.Someofthemareagainsttheideathatitis…他們中的一些人反對(duì)……的想法7.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)，8.Somepeoplebelievethat…othersarguethat…一些人認(rèn)為……,其他人認(rèn)為……9.Inmyopinion…我認(rèn)為……10.AsfarasIamconcerned…在我看來(lái)……11.Personally,I…就我個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)，我……12.Inmyview…我認(rèn)為……Eatingenoughfruitandvegetablesisimportantforus.Inmyopinion,itisimportantforustoeatenoughfruitandvegetables.我認(rèn)為，吃足夠的水果和蔬菜是很重要的。Somepeoplethinkfailureleadstosuccess.Othersdisagree.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonfailure.Somepeoplebelievethatfailureleadstosuccess.Othersareagainsttheidea.關(guān)于“失敗”人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為失敗是成功之母。其他人反對(duì)這個(gè)想法。提出建議1.Ithinkitisagoodchanceforyouto…我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)……是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)2.I’dliketosuggestyou…我想建議你……3.Ithinkyoumightliketo…我認(rèn)為你或許喜歡……4.Iwaswonderingifyou’dliketo…我在想你是否喜歡……Youshouldgoabroadtogetfurthereducation.Ithinkitisagoodchanceforyoutogoabroadtogetfurthereducation.我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)，出國(guó)深造是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。表達(dá)目的1.I…sothat…我……以便于……2.I…inordertodo…我……目的是……IhavemadeupmymindtodowhatIreallywantto.Icanachievemydream.IhavemadeupmymindtodowhatIreallywanttosothatIcanachievemydream.我已經(jīng)下定決心要做我想做的事以便于我能實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想。描述計(jì)劃1.Iamgoingtodo…我將要做……2.Iplantodo…我打算做……3.Imakeaplantodo…我制定計(jì)劃做……4.Thereisgoingtobe…將要有……5.Imakeupmymindto我下決心……Iwillstudyhard.Imakeupmymindtostudyhard.我下定決心好好學(xué)習(xí)。說(shuō)明好處壞處1.Ithasthefollowingadvantages.它有如下優(yōu)點(diǎn)2.Itdoesusalotofgood.它對(duì)我們有很多好處。3.Everythingdividesintotwo.事情要一分為二4.Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.相比優(yōu)點(diǎn)，它有更多的缺點(diǎn)。5.Itdoesusmuchharm.它對(duì)我們非常有害。6.Itisharmfultous.它對(duì)我們有害。WatchingTVisinteresting.WatchingTVcanalsobeharmfultous.WatchingTVisinteresting.However,everythingdividesintotwo.WatchingTVcanalsobeharmfultous.看電視是有趣的。然后，事情應(yīng)一分為二地看?？措娨晫?duì)我們也會(huì)產(chǎn)生危害。表示對(duì)比1.Ihadto…inthepast.However,…now.過(guò)去我必須……。然而，現(xiàn)在……2.Inthepast,I…Butnow,I…過(guò)去，我……。但是現(xiàn)在，我……3.It’squitedifferentnow.Iusedto…butnowI…現(xiàn)在非常不一樣了。我過(guò)去常?！?但是現(xiàn)在我……4.It’snotlikewhatitusedtobeatall.NowI…現(xiàn)在根本不像以前那樣了?，F(xiàn)在，我……5.ComparedwithA,B…同A相比，B……6.Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.它們之間有顯著的差異。Iwasshort.NowI’mtall.It’squitedifferentnow.IusedtobeshortbutnowI’mtall.…現(xiàn)在非常不一樣了。我過(guò)去矮,但是現(xiàn)在我長(zhǎng)高了。表達(dá)信念期待1.I’mlookingforwardto我盼望著……2.Iexpectto…assoonaspossible.我期盼著能盡快……3.Ican’twaitto…soon.我等不及快……Pleasewritetomesoon.Iexpecttohearfromyouassoonaspossible.我期望著盡快收到你的來(lái)信。常用結(jié)尾1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreachtheconclusionthat...根據(jù)以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論…2.Wemustlookforallmethods,becausethepresentsituationof...,ifpermittedtocontinue,willsureleadto/resultin...我們必須立即尋找一切辦法，因?yàn)椤默F(xiàn)狀，如果允許繼續(xù)下去，一定會(huì)導(dǎo)致……的。3.Thereisnoperfectsolutiontotheproblemof...,but...mightbehelpful.沒(méi)有完美解決……問(wèn)題的辦法，但是……可能有幫助/有益。Allinall,wemustsolvetheproblemofpollution.Wemustlookforallmethods,becausethepresentsituationofpollution,ifpermittedtocontinue,willsureleadtomoreseriousproblem.我們必須立即尋找一切辦法，因?yàn)槲廴镜默F(xiàn)狀，如果允許繼續(xù)下去，一定會(huì)導(dǎo)致更嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題的?？键c(diǎn)1經(jīng)歷感受類話題分析描述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷與感受是各地中考考查的重點(diǎn)話題。該話題通常要求學(xué)生描述一次難忘的、有意義的事件，并且抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感，講述自身收獲。學(xué)生備考時(shí)應(yīng)圍繞該話題，注意積累描述事件起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，關(guān)注抒發(fā)情感的各類句型結(jié)構(gòu)。教材鏈接寫作角度話題人教教材鏈接頁(yè)碼經(jīng)歷Everydayactivities(日?；顒?dòng))七(下)Unit6I’mwatchingTV.P31Schooltrips(校園旅行)七(下)Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip?P61Weekendactivities(周末活動(dòng))七(下)Unit12Whatdidyoudolastweekend?P67Holidaysandvacations(假期)八(上)Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?P1Unforgettableevents(難忘的事情)八(下)Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?P33Literatureandmusic(文學(xué)和音樂(lè))八(下)Unit8HaveyoureadTreasureIslandyet?P57Funplaces(有趣的地方)八(下)Unit9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum?P65Unexpectedevents(不可預(yù)知的事件)九(全)Unit12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.P89感受Schooltrips(校園旅行)七(下)Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip?P61Decisionmaking(制定計(jì)劃)八(上)Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you'llhaveagreattime！P73好詞佳句詞匯短語(yǔ)積累experience經(jīng)歷；unforgettable難忘的；meaningful有意義的；praise表?yè)P(yáng)；giveahand幫忙；makeadifference有影響，起作用；withthehelpof...在……的幫助下；takeanactivepartin積極參加；preparefor為……做準(zhǔn)備；learn...from...從……中學(xué)到……話題常用句型OnceIwaspraisedbecauseIdidsomethingmeaningfulwith...有一次我因?yàn)橛谩隽艘患幸饬x的事而受到表?yè)P(yáng)。Thoughitwasnoteasytofinish,Imadeupmymindto...即使這不容易完成，但我下定決心……Fromthis,I’velearnedthatit’simportantto...從這次經(jīng)歷中，我學(xué)到了……很重要。寫作框架Step1認(rèn)真審題，明確要求審主題寫人敘事審文體記敘文審人稱第一人稱為主審時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主審要點(diǎn)5W1H—when;where;who;what;why;howStep2分析要點(diǎn)，編制提綱開(kāi)頭引出主題，確定寫作角度。寫作角度可以從以下幾點(diǎn)考慮：=1\*GB3①確定事件發(fā)生的人物關(guān)系，如“我”與老師、朋友；=2\*GB3②選取自己經(jīng)歷的事件，讓自己有話可說(shuō)，具備真情實(shí)感；=3\*GB3③該事件有教育意義，富含正能量，可從中汲取知識(shí)、收獲感動(dòng)、體現(xiàn)積極的價(jià)值觀。正文陳述事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果等。注意：=1\*GB3①選取典型事件進(jìn)行敘述，選取的事件能服務(wù)書(shū)面表達(dá)的主題和立意。=2\*GB3②敘述事件發(fā)展時(shí)要布局合理、詳略得當(dāng)、重點(diǎn)突出。結(jié)尾再次點(diǎn)明主題，表達(dá)自己的感受、思考、收獲或啟發(fā)等。注意要緊扣主題，升華全文?？梢詮囊韵聝蓚€(gè)方面考慮：=1\*GB3①人物精神或事跡的積極作用，對(duì)個(gè)人、社會(huì)的影響；=2\*GB3②人物或個(gè)人事跡對(duì)自己的啟發(fā)及影響。Step3巧用詞句，銜接成文巧用“知識(shí)清單”中的銜接詞，詞匯升級(jí)和高級(jí)句子以及“詞匯短語(yǔ)積累”中的相關(guān)表達(dá)例初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了。在過(guò)去的三年里，你和同學(xué)們參加過(guò)很多學(xué)校組織的活動(dòng)，例如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、聯(lián)歡會(huì)、讀書(shū)交流會(huì)、外出參觀等。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文給學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊投稿，介紹一次有意義的活動(dòng)，這個(gè)活動(dòng)是什么，你(們)做了什么，你的感受是什么。Step1認(rèn)真審題，明確要求主題介紹過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷人稱第一、三人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主文體記敘文要點(diǎn)有意義的一次活動(dòng)；陳述事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、目的、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果；表達(dá)自己的感受、思考、收獲或啟發(fā)等。提示詞語(yǔ)：meaningful(有意義的),celebrate,happy

Step2列要點(diǎn)，編提綱立框架列要點(diǎn)添細(xì)節(jié)開(kāi)頭過(guò)去三年參加過(guò)許多活動(dòng)，但NewYearParty是其中最有意義的活動(dòng)點(diǎn)明活動(dòng)是開(kāi)頭過(guò)去三年參加過(guò)許多活動(dòng)，但NewYearParty是其中最有意義的活動(dòng)點(diǎn)明活動(dòng)是theNewYearParty時(shí)間：時(shí)間：onNewYear’sEve地點(diǎn)：intheschoolstudents’centre人物：theteachersandclassmates經(jīng)過(guò)：playtheguitar、singanddancetothemusic、readapoem結(jié)果：enjoyourselves陳述活動(dòng)發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果陳述活動(dòng)發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果正文正文表達(dá)自己的感受、收獲等感受：meaningful表達(dá)自己的感受、收獲等感受：meaningful、enjoyable收獲：Itwasachancetoexpressourthankstoourteachers.結(jié)尾Step3巧用詞句，銜接成文普通范文美化范文升級(jí)點(diǎn)撥Wehaveheldmanymeaningfulschoolactivitiesinthepastthreeyears.OneofthemistheNewYearPartylastyear.Theteachersandclassmatesshowedtheirtalentsinartonthefinaldaytocelebratethecomingnewyear.Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedtothemusic.Asforme,Iwantedtothankmyteachersandclassmates,soIplayedapieceofmusicontheviolin.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoemwrittenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.Weallthinkitwasaverywonderfulnight.Thispartyismeaningfulbecausewehadahappytimetogetheranditwasachancetoexpressourthankstoourteachers.TherehavebeenmanysignificantschoolactivitiesinthepastthreeyearswhichtheNewYearPartystoodoutlastyear.Inordertocelebratethecomingnewyear,boththeteachersandclassmatesshowedtheirvarioustalentsinartonthefinalday.Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedtothemusic.Asforme,toexpressmygratitudetomyteachersandclassmates,Iplayedapieceofmusicontheviolin.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoemwrittenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.Whatawonderfulnightitwas!Allinall,thispartyismeaningfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbutalsoitwasachancetoexpressourgratitudetoourteachers.What’smore,acloserrelationshiphasgrownbetweentheteachersandstudents.句型升級(jí)：改為therebe句型詞匯升級(jí)：將meaningful替換為significant句型升級(jí)：改為which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句結(jié)構(gòu)銜接：用both....and聯(lián)結(jié)theteachersandthestudents詞匯升級(jí)：增加various修飾詞匯升級(jí)：用短語(yǔ)expressone’sgratitudetosb.表達(dá)感謝句型升級(jí)：改為what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句結(jié)構(gòu)銜接：用allinall總結(jié)句型升級(jí)：用notonly...butalso連接意義升華：活動(dòng)使師生關(guān)系更加密切小試牛刀組句成篇我來(lái)美化Therehavebeenmany①importantschoolactivitiesinthepastthreeyears.②OneofthemistheNewYearPartylastyear.③Ourschoolwantstopromotesportsmanship,ourschoolorganizedagrandSportsDayevent.Itwasadayfilledwithexcitement.Studentsparticipatedin④sportsactivities,includingrelayracesandlongjump.Asforme,Ijoinedthesprintrace.Whentheracedayfinallyarrived,theatmospherewaselectric.Thecheersandapplausemotivatedustogiveourbestperformance.Irememberfeelingarushofadrenaline⑤_____Isprintedtowardsthefinishline.⑥TheSportsDaywas⑦ahighlyenjoyableevent,itplayedacrucialroleinfosteringunityandasenseofbelongingamongthestudents.①試著高級(jí)詞匯替代important。②試著用which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句升級(jí)句型。③請(qǐng)用更適切和簡(jiǎn)練的語(yǔ)言替換Ourschoolwantsto...④增加形容詞修飾sportsactivities。⑤請(qǐng)?zhí)砑右粋€(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞____⑥加入連接詞或短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。⑦請(qǐng)用notonly...butalso改寫本句。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練【2021安徽中考】假定你是李華，曾用攢下來(lái)的零花錢做了一件有意義的事并受到家人表?yè)P(yáng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.事情經(jīng)過(guò)；2.個(gè)人感悟。注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：pocketmoney（n.零花錢）;meaningful（adj