熱點(diǎn)12理想2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語(yǔ)最具熱度話題作文（教師版）

熱點(diǎn)12理想理想無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活增添了希望。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：理想?！绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）每個(gè)人都有自己理想中的工作，一切工作都有其意義。你理想中的工作是什么呢？現(xiàn)我市某微信公眾平臺(tái)正在舉辦"Mydreamjob"的主題演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀憷硐氲墓ぷ?。要求?.短文需包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所給出的所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于80，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.正確靈活的用準(zhǔn)時(shí)態(tài)；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)與你自己相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。MydreamjobWhatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?Whydoyouwanttodothat?Howareyougoingtodothat?Whenareyougoingtostart?Whereareyougoingtowork?MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis"Mydreamjob".____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis“Mydreamjob”.Everyonehashisowndreamjobandeachjobhasitsmeaning.Ialsohavemydreamjob.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.Ithinkteachersaregreat.Ontheonehand,theyteachtheirstudentsmuchknowledge.Ontheotherhand,theycanlearnsomethingnewfromtheirstudentswhileteaching.What’smore,Ithinkteacherscanbeforeveryoungbyteachingandplayingwithkids.SoIthinkthisjobismeaningful.Tomakemydreametrue,I’mgoingtostudyhardandlearnsomethingabouteducation.I’mgoingtostartwhenIfinishmyhighschoolandcollegefirst.IamgoingtoworkinJiujiang.Becauseit’smyhometownandIloveit.IbelieveI’llrealizemydream—tobeateacher.Thanksforyourlistening.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于演講稿寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己理想中的工作是什么，為什么選擇這份工作，將怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，什么時(shí)間開(kāi)始以及在哪里開(kāi)始這份理想的工作。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，講述自己理想中的工作以及選擇的原因敘述完整，條理清晰。（二）根據(jù)中英文提示寫(xiě)一段話。要求：意思連貫、符合邏輯，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。人生如船，夢(mèng)想是帆。英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們以“MyDreamJob”為題展開(kāi)討論，暢想自己理想的職業(yè)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，向?qū)W校廣播站投稿，說(shuō)說(shuō)自己理想的職業(yè)及理由，告訴老師和同學(xué)們，你打算如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。提示詞語(yǔ)：discussion,difficult,decide,knowledge,improve,

MyDreamJob____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wehadadiscussioninourclassroomlastmonth.Thetopicis,“Whatisyourdreamjob?”Everybodyhashisdream.Somewanttobeteachers,otherswanttobescientists.Mydreamistobeeadoctor.Myfriendsaskedmewhy.Itoldthemmystory.WhenIwasasmallboy,Iwasveryweak.OnceIwasterriblyill.Ihadahighfever.Myparentssentmetothenearbyhospital,butthedoctorscoulddonothingforme.Thenmyparentsheardtherewasaverygooddoctorinanothertown.Theytookmethere.Iwassaved.Agooddoctorcansavepeople’slives.Fromthenon,Idecidedtobeeadoctor.Iknowitisnoteasytobeadoctor.ButIamdeterminedtostudyhard.Iamsuremydreamwilletrue.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。（一）為了解同學(xué)們的理想，我們?cè)趯W(xué)校的l00名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查采訪。采訪主要是圍繞“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?”和“Why?”這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行的，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)寫(xiě)—份以“thedreamjobs”為主題的報(bào)告．并談?wù)勀阕约旱睦硐肱c原因。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。(報(bào)告開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出．不計(jì)人作文總詞數(shù)。)TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals(理想),wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschool.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals,wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschoollastweek.Herearetheresults.Mostofthestudentswanttohebusinessmen,becausetheywanttoberichandbuywhattheyneedinthefuture.Morestudentsaredreamingofbeingdoctors,becausetheyareproudofsavingthesickpeople.Andbeinggoodteachersissomestudents’dream.Theythinkit’sapleasuretomakestudentslearnmorefromthem.Differentstudentshavedifferentideals.Asforme,Iwanttobeapoliceman,andmakeoursocietymuchsafer.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。（二）最近，你在校200名學(xué)生中做了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“你的理想職業(yè)”的調(diào)查，請(qǐng)你就調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告，在英語(yǔ)課上進(jìn)行匯報(bào)，并談?wù)勀愕睦硐肼殬I(yè)和理由。理想職業(yè)所占比率理由你的理想職業(yè)及理由老師超過(guò)30%善于與孩子打交道，愛(ài)教書(shū)……園藝工大約25%讓城市更美廚師22%喜歡吃，為別人做健康美食注意：短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；你的理想職業(yè)及理由至少各一條；詞數(shù)：80—100；(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：園藝工gardenerRecentlyIhavedoneasurveyaboutstudents'dreamjobsinourschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently_I_have_done_a_survey_about_students'_dream_jobs_in_our_school.Morethan30%ofthestudentswanttobeteachersbecausetheythinktheyaregoodwithkidsandtheyloveteaching.About25%ofthemexpecttobegardeners.Theywanttoplayaroleinmakingthecitiesmoreandmorebeautiful.It'sinterestingtosee22%ofthemaregoingtobecooks.Thereasonsforthisarethattheyenjoyeatingandwanttocookdeliciousandhealthyfoodforothers.Asforme,I'dliketobeawriterbecauseIfallinlovewithreadingandwanttosharemywonderfulstorieswithothers.【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，寫(xiě)一個(gè)關(guān)于“你的理想職業(yè)”的調(diào)查報(bào)告及你的理想職業(yè)以及理由。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如morethan,begoodwith,expectto,playarole,thereasonfor,asfor,wouldliketo,fallinlovewith,sharesthwithsb。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)供選用。文章必須包括表格內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活即將結(jié)束。你一定對(duì)未來(lái)的生活充滿向往。將來(lái)你理想的職業(yè)是什么？假如你是周杰，想?yún)⒓佑⒄Z(yǔ)?？M織的“我理想的職業(yè)”征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文稿。

自我介紹

姓名、年齡、性格……

理想的職業(yè)及原因

如：老師、醫(yī)生、籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員等…

為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想，你打算怎么做

提示詞語(yǔ)：studyhard;knowledge;makeprogress;growup;inthefuture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisZhouJie.I’mafifteenyearoldmiddleschoolstudent.I’magenerousgirl/boyandIhavelotsofgoodfriends.Everyonehashisdream.MyidealjobistobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.Ithinkdoctorsarekindandhelpful,theylovetheirpatientsasmuchaspossibleandhelpthemoutofdanger.Inordertomakemydreametrue,Iwillstudyhardandgetmoreknowledge.What’smore,I’mgoingtodomoreexercisestokeepmeber.Tobeadoctorisreallygreat.Ithinkmydreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己理想的職業(yè)的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫(xiě)出滿意的文章來(lái)。（四）6．IWantto提示：理想是希望的燈，照亮我們美好的前程；理想是閃亮的星，指引我們奔向黎明。播撒理想的種子，讓你的青春綠意盎然。請(qǐng)以“IWantto”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕睦硐胧鞘裁?，你打算怎樣?shí)現(xiàn)你的理想。要求：請(qǐng)將題目補(bǔ)充完整；語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)；3、文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeanEnglishteacherinthefuture

Iwanttobeateacherinthefuture,becauseIthinkteacherisagoodjob.Myteachersareverygood.Someofthemaregentle,butsomeofthemarenot.ButIthinktheyallcareforstudentsverymuch.Iwanttobeagoodteacherlikethem.IthinkIwillbestricttomystudentsintheclass.Butafterclass,Iwanttobetheirfriendandhelptheminstudyandlife.Besides,itcanhelpmetokeepayounghearttostaywithyoungstudents.Imustworkhardformydream.【解析】本文要求敘述你的理想是什么，你打算怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)你的理想，對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，所以句子的主語(yǔ)用第一人稱，句子的時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)，所寫(xiě)的句子應(yīng)該用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式，不要使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：carefor關(guān)心；helpsbtodosth幫助某人做某事；staywithsb和某人呆在一起；workhardfor為……而努力學(xué)習(xí)。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。（一）理想是人生的指路燈,中學(xué)生常談?wù)撟砸盐磥?lái)的理想職業(yè),有人想成為工程師,有人想成為科學(xué)家,有人想成為演員……請(qǐng)你以"Iwanttobea/an…"為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,講述你的理想職業(yè),以及你選擇這個(gè)職業(yè)的原因和你將如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)理想.要求:1.條理消晰,意思連貫,語(yǔ)句通順,標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,80詞左右;2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě).3.用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯將題目補(bǔ)充完整.Iwanttobea/an______.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeateacherIwanttobeateacher.（點(diǎn)題）Doyouknowwhy?Becausewecanlearnallkindsofknowledgewiththehelpoftheteachers.Whenweareintrouble,teachersalwaystakegoodcareofus.【高分句型一】Theydomanythingsforusasourparentsdo.Wealllikethemverymuch.（想當(dāng)老師的原因）HowcanImakemydreametrue?First,Imusttrymybesttostudyhardatallsubjects.Second,Iwillreadmorebooks,suchasEnglish,history,scienceandsoon.Inaddition,Iwillgetintoagooduniversity.（怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）IbelievemydreamcanetrueifIputmyheartintoit.【高分句型二】（愿望）【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。本文介紹了自己的理想是做一名老師，文中圍繞選擇這個(gè)職業(yè)的原因及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)理想而展開(kāi)描述。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文采用的是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般將來(lái)時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。邏輯性強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)句表達(dá)通順。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：introuble處于困境中；takegoodcareof好好照顧；withthehelpof在……的幫助下；tryone’sbesttodosth盡某人最大努力做某事；suchas例如。

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Everyonehashisorherowndreamjob.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DreamjobsEveryonehashisorherowndreamjob.Annwantstobeadancerbecauseshecandancewell.Sheisgoingtotakemoredancinglessons.Jimwantstobeanastronautbecausehewantstoflytootherplanets.Heisgoingtoexerciseeveryday.Sohecanbestrong.Iwanttobea/an...BecauseI....Iamgoingto....Ifyouworkhard,yourdreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。（三）假如你是中學(xué)生李平，曾經(jīng)在你們班學(xué)習(xí)的交換生Peter看了你發(fā)布的朋友圈，他對(duì)你們班上周舉行的主題班會(huì)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹班會(huì)的情況并和他交流一下中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.班會(huì)的主題：我的理想2.介紹你和幾名同學(xué)的理想：（1）趙勇：想成為一名勇敢的警察；（2）張紅：想做一名志愿者；（3）你：想成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。3.說(shuō)說(shuō)中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。寫(xiě)作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.Thethemeofitwas“MyIdeal”.Ourmonitorhostedthemeeting.Duringit,allofustookanactivepartinthediscussionandsharedouropinionswitheachother.ZhaoYongisgoingtobeabravepoliceman.Hehopestohelppeopleindanger.ZhangHongwantstobeavolunteer,shewillhelppeopleinneedespeciallythedisabledandthehomeless.Mydreamistobeanexcellentdoctor,Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.Torealizeourideals,Ihavesomeopinions.Firstly,wemusttrytoworkharderfromnowonandlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，介紹班會(huì)的情況，班會(huì)的主題是談?wù)摾硐耄ㄟ^(guò)分析可知，除了短文開(kāi)頭介紹上周班會(huì)情況，我們應(yīng)該使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，其他內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要隨著時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的變化而改變。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用分段式，文中銜接流暢，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候選擇了一些相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也運(yùn)用多種句型，句式豐富多彩，避免單一化，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，潤(rùn)色了文章的內(nèi)容。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：hostthemeeting；takeanactivepartin；indanger；ameaningfuljob；fromnowon；learnfrom。句型：①I(mǎi)thinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.②Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.③Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullype