熱點12理想2020-2021學年中考英語最具熱度話題作文（教師版）

熱點12理想理想無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活增添了希望。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：理想?！绢A(yù)測題目】（一）每個人都有自己理想中的工作，一切工作都有其意義。你理想中的工作是什么呢？現(xiàn)我市某微信公眾平臺正在舉辦"Mydreamjob"的主題演講比賽。請根據(jù)思維導圖寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀憷硐氲墓ぷ?。要求?.短文需包括思維導圖中所給出的所有提示，可適當發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于80，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.正確靈活的用準時態(tài)；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)與你自己相關(guān)的真實信息。MydreamjobWhatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?Whydoyouwanttodothat?Howareyougoingtodothat?Whenareyougoingtostart?Whereareyougoingtowork?MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis"Mydreamjob".____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis“Mydreamjob”.Everyonehashisowndreamjobandeachjobhasitsmeaning.Ialsohavemydreamjob.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.Ithinkteachersaregreat.Ontheonehand,theyteachtheirstudentsmuchknowledge.Ontheotherhand,theycanlearnsomethingnewfromtheirstudentswhileteaching.What’smore,Ithinkteacherscanbeforeveryoungbyteachingandplayingwithkids.SoIthinkthisjobismeaningful.Tomakemydreametrue,I’mgoingtostudyhardandlearnsomethingabouteducation.I’mgoingtostartwhenIfinishmyhighschoolandcollegefirst.IamgoingtoworkinJiujiang.Becauseit’smyhometownandIloveit.IbelieveI’llrealizemydream—tobeateacher.Thanksforyourlistening.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于演講稿寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己理想中的工作是什么，為什么選擇這份工作，將怎樣實現(xiàn)夢想，什么時間開始以及在哪里開始這份理想的工作。2.寫作指導：本文用第一人稱來寫作，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主，講述自己理想中的工作以及選擇的原因敘述完整，條理清晰。（二）根據(jù)中英文提示寫一段話。要求：意思連貫、符合邏輯，字數(shù)不少于60詞。人生如船，夢想是帆。英語課上，同學們以“MyDreamJob”為題展開討論，暢想自己理想的職業(yè)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，向?qū)W校廣播站投稿，說說自己理想的職業(yè)及理由，告訴老師和同學們，你打算如何實現(xiàn)自己的理想。提示詞語：discussion,difficult,decide,knowledge,improve,

MyDreamJob____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wehadadiscussioninourclassroomlastmonth.Thetopicis,“Whatisyourdreamjob?”Everybodyhashisdream.Somewanttobeteachers,otherswanttobescientists.Mydreamistobeeadoctor.Myfriendsaskedmewhy.Itoldthemmystory.WhenIwasasmallboy,Iwasveryweak.OnceIwasterriblyill.Ihadahighfever.Myparentssentmetothenearbyhospital,butthedoctorscoulddonothingforme.Thenmyparentsheardtherewasaverygooddoctorinanothertown.Theytookmethere.Iwassaved.Agooddoctorcansavepeople’slives.Fromthenon,Idecidedtobeeadoctor.Iknowitisnoteasytobeadoctor.ButIamdeterminedtostudyhard.Iamsuremydreamwilletrue.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。（一）為了解同學們的理想，我們在學校的l00名學生中進行了一次調(diào)查采訪。采訪主要是圍繞“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?”和“Why?”這兩個問題進行的，請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)寫—份以“thedreamjobs”為主題的報告．并談?wù)勀阕约旱睦硐肱c原因。詞數(shù)80個左右。(報告開頭語已給出．不計人作文總詞數(shù)。)TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals(理想),wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschool.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals,wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschoollastweek.Herearetheresults.Mostofthestudentswanttohebusinessmen,becausetheywanttoberichandbuywhattheyneedinthefuture.Morestudentsaredreamingofbeingdoctors,becausetheyareproudofsavingthesickpeople.Andbeinggoodteachersissomestudents’dream.Theythinkit’sapleasuretomakestudentslearnmorefromthem.Differentstudentshavedifferentideals.Asforme,Iwanttobeapoliceman,andmakeoursocietymuchsafer.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。（二）最近，你在校200名學生中做了一項關(guān)于“你的理想職業(yè)”的調(diào)查，請你就調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一份報告，在英語課上進行匯報，并談?wù)勀愕睦硐肼殬I(yè)和理由。理想職業(yè)所占比率理由你的理想職業(yè)及理由老師超過30%善于與孩子打交道，愛教書……園藝工大約25%讓城市更美廚師22%喜歡吃，為別人做健康美食注意：短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；你的理想職業(yè)及理由至少各一條；詞數(shù)：80—100；(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：園藝工gardenerRecentlyIhavedoneasurveyaboutstudents'dreamjobsinourschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently_I_have_done_a_survey_about_students'_dream_jobs_in_our_school.Morethan30%ofthestudentswanttobeteachersbecausetheythinktheyaregoodwithkidsandtheyloveteaching.About25%ofthemexpecttobegardeners.Theywanttoplayaroleinmakingthecitiesmoreandmorebeautiful.It'sinterestingtosee22%ofthemaregoingtobecooks.Thereasonsforthisarethattheyenjoyeatingandwanttocookdeliciousandhealthyfoodforothers.Asforme,I'dliketobeawriterbecauseIfallinlovewithreadingandwanttosharemywonderfulstorieswithothers.【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，寫一個關(guān)于“你的理想職業(yè)”的調(diào)查報告及你的理想職業(yè)以及理由。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如morethan,begoodwith,expectto,playarole,thereasonfor,asfor,wouldliketo,fallinlovewith,sharesthwithsb。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語供選用。文章必須包括表格內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。初中三年的學習和生活即將結(jié)束。你一定對未來的生活充滿向往。將來你理想的職業(yè)是什么？假如你是周杰，想?yún)⒓佑⒄Z?？M織的“我理想的職業(yè)”征文活動。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。

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理想的職業(yè)及原因

如：老師、醫(yī)生、籃球運動員等…

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提示詞語：studyhard;knowledge;makeprogress;growup;inthefuture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisZhouJie.I’mafifteenyearoldmiddleschoolstudent.I’magenerousgirl/boyandIhavelotsofgoodfriends.Everyonehashisdream.MyidealjobistobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.Ithinkdoctorsarekindandhelpful,theylovetheirpatientsasmuchaspossibleandhelpthemoutofdanger.Inordertomakemydreametrue,Iwillstudyhardandgetmoreknowledge.What’smore,I’mgoingtodomoreexercisestokeepmeber.Tobeadoctorisreallygreat.Ithinkmydreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己理想的職業(yè)的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。考點：提綱類作文點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。（四）6．IWantto提示：理想是希望的燈，照亮我們美好的前程；理想是閃亮的星，指引我們奔向黎明。播撒理想的種子，讓你的青春綠意盎然。請以“IWantto”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕睦硐胧鞘裁?，你打算怎樣實現(xiàn)你的理想。要求：請將題目補充完整；語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個；3、文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeanEnglishteacherinthefuture

Iwanttobeateacherinthefuture,becauseIthinkteacherisagoodjob.Myteachersareverygood.Someofthemaregentle,butsomeofthemarenot.ButIthinktheyallcareforstudentsverymuch.Iwanttobeagoodteacherlikethem.IthinkIwillbestricttomystudentsintheclass.Butafterclass,Iwanttobetheirfriendandhelptheminstudyandlife.Besides,itcanhelpmetokeepayounghearttostaywithyoungstudents.Imustworkhardformydream.【解析】本文要求敘述你的理想是什么，你打算怎樣實現(xiàn)你的理想，對于學生來說，所以句子的主語用第一人稱，句子的時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時，所寫的句子應(yīng)該用一些高級詞匯及句式，不要使用漢語式的英語，短文用了一些短語和句式，如：carefor關(guān)心；helpsbtodosth幫助某人做某事；staywithsb和某人呆在一起；workhardfor為……而努力學習。用了because引導的原因狀語從句；that引導的賓語從句，增加了文章的亮點。（一）理想是人生的指路燈,中學生常談?wù)撟砸盐磥淼睦硐肼殬I(yè),有人想成為工程師,有人想成為科學家,有人想成為演員……請你以"Iwanttobea/an…"為題,寫一篇英語短文,講述你的理想職業(yè),以及你選擇這個職業(yè)的原因和你將如何實現(xiàn)這個理想.要求:1.條理消晰,意思連貫,語句通順,標點正確,書寫規(guī)范,80詞左右;2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名,可適當增加細節(jié)描寫.3.用適當?shù)脑~匯將題目補充完整.Iwanttobea/an______.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeateacherIwanttobeateacher.（點題）Doyouknowwhy?Becausewecanlearnallkindsofknowledgewiththehelpoftheteachers.Whenweareintrouble,teachersalwaystakegoodcareofus.【高分句型一】Theydomanythingsforusasourparentsdo.Wealllikethemverymuch.（想當老師的原因）HowcanImakemydreametrue?First,Imusttrymybesttostudyhardatallsubjects.Second,Iwillreadmorebooks,suchasEnglish,history,scienceandsoon.Inaddition,Iwillgetintoagooduniversity.（怎樣實現(xiàn)夢想）IbelievemydreamcanetrueifIputmyheartintoit.【高分句型二】（愿望）【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。本文介紹了自己的理想是做一名老師，文中圍繞選擇這個職業(yè)的原因及如何實現(xiàn)這個理想而展開描述。2.例文點評：本文采用的是第一人稱，時態(tài)采用的是一般將來時。準確運用時態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。邏輯性強，語句表達通順。3.高分亮點：短語：introuble處于困境中；takegoodcareof好好照顧；withthehelpof在……的幫助下；tryone’sbesttodosth盡某人最大努力做某事；suchas例如。

句子：Whenweareintrouble,teachersalwaystakegoodcareofus句中when引導的是時間狀語從句，IbelievemydreamcanetrueifIputmyheartintoit句中if引導的是條件狀語從句。（二）每個人都夢想未來有一份理想的職業(yè)，請根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，補充自己的理想的職業(yè)，并以DreamJobs為題，寫一篇70詞左右的文章。（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。一定要寫自己的理想的職業(yè)哦?。㏄eople

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Everyonehashisorherowndreamjob.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DreamjobsEveryonehashisorherowndreamjob.Annwantstobeadancerbecauseshecandancewell.Sheisgoingtotakemoredancinglessons.Jimwantstobeanastronautbecausehewantstoflytootherplanets.Heisgoingtoexerciseeveryday.Sohecanbestrong.Iwanttobea/an...BecauseI....Iamgoingto....Ifyouworkhard,yourdreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。（三）假如你是中學生李平，曾經(jīng)在你們班學習的交換生Peter看了你發(fā)布的朋友圈，他對你們班上周舉行的主題班會很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫一封信，向他介紹班會的情況并和他交流一下中學生如何才能實現(xiàn)自己的理想。寫作要點：1.班會的主題：我的理想2.介紹你和幾名同學的理想：（1）趙勇：想成為一名勇敢的警察；（2）張紅：想做一名志愿者；（3）你：想成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。3.說說中學生如何才能實現(xiàn)（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2.可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.Thethemeofitwas“MyIdeal”.Ourmonitorhostedthemeeting.Duringit,allofustookanactivepartinthediscussionandsharedouropinionswitheachother.ZhaoYongisgoingtobeabravepoliceman.Hehopestohelppeopleindanger.ZhangHongwantstobeavolunteer,shewillhelppeopleinneedespeciallythedisabledandthehomeless.Mydreamistobeanexcellentdoctor,Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.Torealizeourideals,Ihavesomeopinions.Firstly,wemusttrytoworkharderfromnowonandlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，介紹班會的情況，班會的主題是談?wù)摾硐?，通過分析可知，除了短文開頭介紹上周班會情況，我們應(yīng)該使用一般過去時態(tài)，其他內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，注意謂語動詞要隨著時態(tài)和人稱的變化而改變。2.例文點評：例文采用分段式，文中銜接流暢，在寫作的時候選擇了一些相對高級的詞匯，也運用多種句型，句式豐富多彩，避免單一化，增加了文章的亮點，潤色了文章的內(nèi)容。3.高分亮點：短語：hostthemeeting；takeanactivepartin；indanger；ameaningfuljob；fromnowon；learnfrom。句型：①Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.②Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.③Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullype