2024-2025學年新教材高中英語Unit5Revealingnature表達作文巧升格學案外研版選擇性必修第一冊

PAGEUnit5Revealingnature視察日志本單元寫作項目是描寫植物生長過程的視察日志。[基本框架]1．開頭(beginning)——寫作目的；2．主體(body)——植物成長的過程；3．結尾(ending)——你的感受。[常用詞塊]1．growthconditionoftheplant植物生長條件2．aholelargeenough一個足夠大的洞3．puttheearthbackinthehole把土回填到洞里4．upto20feetinlength長度達20英尺5．selectproperseeds選擇合適的種子6．alightapplicationoffertilizer運用微量的肥料[常用語句]精彩開頭1．Doyouhaveanexperienceofplantingakindofplant？你有過種植植物的經驗嗎？2．Letmeshareyouwiththeprocessaboutmyexperienceofgrowingwatermelon?讓我和你共享我種植西瓜的經驗。3．Ioncelivedinthecountrysideandplantedsomegarlicinthegarden.我曾經在鄉(xiāng)村住過，在菜園里種過大蒜。豐滿主體1．Checktoseeifthereareanylocalrequirementsaboutdigging.檢查當地是否有關于挖掘的要求。2．Takeasuitableshovelanddigaholethatis4－5timesthewidthoftherootball，morethanenoughsoitwillfit.用一把合適的鏟子挖一個比球寬4－5倍的洞，足夠大，這樣就合適了。3．Usethegardencultivatortoloosenthedirtallaroundtheholetomakeiteasierfortherootstospread.用園藝耕耘機把洞四周的泥土松掉，使根部更簡單散開。余味結尾1．Seeingtheflowers，Iwastooexcitedtoexpressmyfeelings.看到這些花，我太興奮了不能表達我的感受。2．Ican'twaittoshowmygrandparentsthefruittreesIhaveplanted.我迫不及待地給祖父母看我種的果樹。3．Nopains，nogains.不勞無獲。假定你是正在英國留學的李華，在生物課上，老師要求同學們課后視察一種植物的生長過程，并用日志的形式將該過程記錄下來。請你寫一篇日志介紹草莓的生長過程，內容包括：1．幼苗(seedling)植入土壤；2．兩周后：幼苗葉子變大，呈傘狀；3．一個月后：長出花苞(bud)；4．兩個月后：雌蕊(pistil)變成草莓，約5天后，草莓成熟(mature)。留意：1.詞數80左右；2．可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[學生習作]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruit.Somepeoplewanttoplantstrawberries.Thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgrowintolargerumbrella-shapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Ittakesabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Fivedayslater，wecanenjoyfreshmaturestrawberries.點評：1．草莓生長過程記述詳盡；2．結尾處沒有涉及感受；3．句與句之間的連接還不太緊湊。[升格作文]Strawberriesaremanypeople'sfavouritefruitandsomepeopleevenwanttoplantstrawberriesbythemselves.Actually，thegrowthprocessofthemisprettylong.Hereismyobservationaboutthem.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrella-shapedonesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Onemonthlater，smallbudsbegintoappear.Thefollowingprocessisalittlelonger，takingabouttwomonthsforthepistilstogrowintorealstrawberries.Andfivedayslater，wecanhavefreshmaturestrawberries.Isn'titinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocess?假如你是李華，請你寫一篇短文，描述你種植綠豆(mung)的經驗。1．購買種子，種在菜園里；2．幾天后，綠豆長出地面；3．又過了幾天，長出綠葉；4．給綠豆?jié)菜?，長得很好；5．綠豆不斷生長，三個月后最終開花結籽。留意：1.詞數：80左右；2．可適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：長出地面comeup；長葉子comeintoleaf；灑水sprinklewater；開花結籽gotoseed___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LastsummerIplantedsomemunginmygarden.FirstIboughtsomeseedsfromaseedman.ThenIsowedtheminthegarden.Afewdayslater，Iwenttothegardenandfoundthemungwerebeginningtocomeup.Anotherfewdayspassedandthemungwerecomingintoleaf.NowandthenIs