讀后續(xù)寫+父親的老房子+講義 高三上學(xué)期開學(xué)聯(lián)考英語試題

練習(xí)(父親的老房子):閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Frommymemory,myfatherwasamanoffewwordsandwewereneverclosetoeachother.Beforehejoinedthearmy,hebuiltahousewithhisownhands.Whenhewastragicallykilledinonebattle,thehousebecamemine.Asthehouseaged,itbecamearelicofthepast,andwemovedaway,carryingwithmetheechoesofhissilentpresence.Oneday,someonecalled,sayingthathewantedtobuythathouse.Isaidyes.Beforewereachedadeal,Ithoughtitamusttocheckouttheoldshack(小屋)first,justincasesomethingofvaluehadbeenleftbehind.Mytwoyoungsonsfollowedalong,andwewadedthroughthetallgrassinthemeadowwheretheoldhousesat.Timehadtakenitstoll.Thefrontporchhadcollapsedinonitself,mostofthewindowsweregone,andthesidingwasfallingoff.Weenteredthroughanopenwindow.IfeltasthoughIhadchanceduponatimecapsule(膠囊).Herelaythethingsofmydad’slives.Abrokenchair.Someoldclothes.Butthethingthatdrewmyeyewasacardboardboxstuffedwithpapers.Idugthroughitscontentsandwasinstantlytransportedbackintime.Therewasataxreturnfrom1975.Greetingcardsfromoldrelativesandfriends.Ispentmostofapleasanthourgoingthroughthatbox.Allthewhile,Ihadtoanswerastreamofquestionsfrommysonsabouttheoldhouse.Theywereamazedthatninepeopleonceoccupiedthetinystructure.AndtheyshiveredwhenItoldthemthatinthosedaysthecookstovewastheonlysourceofheat.There’snothingofvaluehadbeenleft,Iconfirmed.Sowecameback.Thehouseonceagainenjoyedthelonelysolitudeofourmeadow.Thenthepayingdaycame.Fornoreason,maybesomereason,Icametothatoldhousetosaygoodbyetosomething.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph:AsIstoodinthehouse,myeyewasdrawntoabigyellowedenvelopewithtwowords"FROMARMY”onit.Paragraph2:Ipulledoutmytelephoneandmadeacalltothatbuyer.

課堂講解(教師版):【原文詞匯】solituden.獨(dú)處，獨(dú)居wadev.跋涉porch.n.門廊stuffv.填充，充滿.chanceon/uponsb/sth偶遇，偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)takeitstoll造成損失Timehadtakenitstoll時(shí)光留下了“殘忍”的痕跡過去的遺跡:arelicofthepast一系列問題:astreamofquestions【段一】1.段首句協(xié)同abigyellowedenvelopeYellowedwithage,itseemedtoblendinwiththeoldhouse,whichmightexplainwhyIdidn'tnoticeitlasttime.(它似乎和老房子融為一體，這也許可以解釋為什么我上次沒有注意到它)2.我的情緒+動作描寫subtle.adj.微妙的tremor.n.震顫；(由于寒冷或恐懼等引起的)顫抖，戰(zhàn)栗同義詞:quiverstring.n.繩子，弦樂器scrutinize.v.仔細(xì)檢查；仔細(xì)查看tolookatorexaminesb/sthcarefullyeg:Sheleanedforwardtoscrutinizetheirfaces.我的心弦上的一陣微妙的顫動讓我上前拿起信封，仔細(xì)端詳。Asubtletremorthroughmyheartstringssentmeforwardtopickuptheenvelopeandscrutinizeit.其它:我猶豫但好奇，慢慢向前走去，撿起它，輕輕地拂去表面的灰塵，將信封撕開。Hesitantbutcurious,Iinchedforward,pickeditup,softlybrushedtheashoffitssurface,andrippeditopen.3.信件內(nèi)容描寫trance.n.恍惚，出神overlap.v.部分重疊，交疊eg:Thelanguageofscienceoverlapswiththatofeverydaylife.Itwasaletterfrommydad,writtenduringhismilitaryservice.Thefamiliarhandwritingrevealedanimageofmydadthatwasunfamiliartome(揭示了一個(gè)我不熟悉的爸爸的形象):chatteringendlessly(原文協(xié)同:amanoffewwords),missinghishometown,andcaringabouteverythingabouthisfamily(原文協(xié)同:neverclosetoeachother).Inatrance(恍惚，出神),thehandwritinginfrontofmeoverlappedwiththeimageofmydadinthepast(與過去父親的形象重疊).其它:無數(shù)用老舊而廉價(jià)的墨水寫的字進(jìn)入我的視線，空氣中彌漫著過去的好時(shí)光的氣息。句式:完全倒裝Intomysightcamecountlesswordswrittenwithold,cheapink,makingtheairbrimfulofthesmellofthegoodolddays.原文協(xié)同:amanoffewwords/silentpresence我父親的模糊形象，曾經(jīng)是遙遠(yuǎn)的記憶，慢慢地變成了一幅清晰生動的肖像。他確實(shí)是個(gè)沉默寡言的人，但正是他無聲的愛，以深沉而持久的存在填補(bǔ)了我內(nèi)心的空缺。句式:強(qiáng)調(diào)句Thevagueimageofmyfather,onceadistantmemory,wasslowlysharpeningintoadistinctandvividportrait.Hewasindeedamanoffewwords,yetitwasalsohissilentlovethatfilledtheemptinessinmyheartwithaprofoundandenduringpresence.4.情緒+反思resent.v.怨恨；憤恨eg.Sheresentedhimmakingallthedecisions.contemplation.n.深思；沉思eg.Hesattheredeepincontemplation.Ihadonceresentedhisabsence(曾經(jīng)怨恨他的缺席),unawarethatduringthetimewhenImissedhim,hewasalsomissingme.Ifellintodeepcontemplation(陷入深思).5.段二段首銜接我的動作+感受原文協(xié)同:There’snothingofvaluehadbeenleftWhenIliftedthegazefromtheletterandscannedaroundagain(把目光從信上移開，再次環(huán)顧四周時(shí)),Ifeltthatthislittlehousecarriedawholenewsignificanceandvalue(承載著全新的意義和價(jià)值).Silently,Imadearesolution(做出決定).其它:環(huán)顧四周，那些日子的記憶涌上心頭，揮之不去。Lookingaround,asurgeofmemoriesfromthosedaysswallowedme,andIcouldn'tshakethemoff.【段二】1.段首句協(xié)同：情緒+語言Withguilt(情緒),Iexpressedmysorry(情緒)fordecidingnottosellthehouseanymore(決定的具體內(nèi)容)andmadeexplanations(做出解釋).Withguilt也可以替換為Guiltyyetdetermined2.人物互動描寫:買家態(tài)度+語言gracious.adj.和藹的，有禮貌的，寬厚的eg.Sheclosedwithagraciousspeechofthanks.relive.v.再次體驗(yàn)，重溫Fortunately,thebuyergraciouslyshowedhisunderstanding(禮貌地表示理解),sayingthathewasoriginallydrawntothehouse’shistoricalcharmandhopedwecouldrelivethepastinthishouse.3.人物互動描寫:我的動作+語言Aftershoweringmygratitude(表達(dá)感激),Ihungupthephoneandreturnedtheyellowletterthatseemedtohavechangedeverything.4.環(huán)境描寫+回憶房子被陽光照亮，露出了時(shí)間流逝的痕跡和過去的記憶。Thehousewasilluminatedbythesunlight,revealingtheremainsoftime’spassageandpastmemories.爸爸的聲音和笑容似乎又出現(xiàn)在溫暖中，慢慢填補(bǔ)了我心中的空缺。Mydad'svoiceandsmilingfaceseemedtoreappearinthewarmth,slowlyfillinguptheemptinessinmyheart.5.結(jié)尾描寫原文協(xié)同:theechoesofhissilentpresenceI’doftenbringmysonsbackhere,Iguess.Inadditiontosharingthefamily'spaststories,Iwouldalsotellthemthattheirgrandpaisnevertrulygone.Andtheechoesofhissilentpresencewouldcontinuetoresonate.其它:buzzwith充滿這片高聳的草地曾經(jīng)充滿了寧靜的孤寂，現(xiàn)在卻充滿了活力，我和兒子跋涉過它，選擇保留這座房子，使它復(fù)活。Thetoweringmeadow,oncefilledwithitspeacefulsolitude,nowbuzzedwithenergyasmysonandIwadedthroughit,choosingtokeepthehouseandreviveditwithfreshlife.我從未感到與父親如此親密，他無聲的愛回蕩在每一段記憶中，告訴我愛是無與倫比的。句式:部分倒裝NeverhadIfeltsoclosetomyfather,withhissilentloveechoingineverypieceofmemory,telling-lovewassecondtonone.課堂講解(學(xué)生版):【原文詞匯】solitude____________________chanceon/uponsb/sth____________________wade____________________porch____________________takeitstoll____________________carryingwithmetheechoesofhissilentpresence____________________過去的遺跡:____________________【段一】1.段首句協(xié)同Yellowedwithage,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(它似乎和老房子融為一體，這也許可以解釋為什么我上次沒有注意到它)2.情緒+動作描寫subtle.adj.__________________tremor.n.__________________同義詞:__________________string.n.__________________scrutinize.v.__________________我的心弦一陣微妙的顫動，讓我上前拿起信封，仔細(xì)端詳。_______________________________________________________________________________其它:我猶豫但好奇，慢慢向前走去，撿起它，輕輕地拂去表面的灰塵，將信封撕開。_______________________________________________________________________________3.信件內(nèi)容描寫trance.n.__________________overlap.v.__________________eg:Thelanguageofscienceoverlapswiththatofeverydaylife.Itwasaletterfrommydad,writtenduringhismilitaryservice.Thefamiliarhandwriting_______________________________________________________________________________(揭示了一個(gè)我不熟悉的爸爸的形象):______________________(原文協(xié)同:amanoffewwords),______________________,and______________________(原文協(xié)同:neverclosetoeachother).______________________(恍惚間),thehandwritinginfrontofme_____________________________________________________.(與過去父親的形象重疊).

其它:無數(shù)用老舊而廉價(jià)的墨水寫的字進(jìn)入我的視線，空氣中彌漫著過去的好時(shí)光的氣息。句式:完全倒裝______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文協(xié)同:amanoffewwords/silentpresence我父親的模糊形象，曾經(jīng)是遙遠(yuǎn)的記憶，慢慢地變成了一幅清晰生動的肖像。他確實(shí)是個(gè)沉默寡言的人，但正是他無聲的愛，以深沉而持久的存在填補(bǔ)了我心中的空虛。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.情緒+反思resent.v.______________________eg.Sheresentedhimmakingallthedecisions.contemplation.n.______________________eg.Hesattheredeepincontemplation.Ihadonce_________________________(曾經(jīng)怨恨他的缺席),unawarethatduringthetimewhenImissedhim,____________________________________.I________________________(陷入深思).5.段二段首銜接我的動作+感受原文協(xié)同:There’snothingofvaluehadbeenleftWhenI____________________________________(把目光從信上移開，抬起頭來)again,Ifeltthatthislittlehousewas____________________________________(承載著全新的意義和價(jià)值).Silently,I____________________________(做出決定).其它:環(huán)顧四周，那些日子的記憶涌上心頭，揮之不去。_______________________________________________________________________________【段二】1.段首句協(xié)同：情緒+語言With______________(情緒),Iexpressedmy____________(情緒)for____________________________(決定的具體內(nèi)容)and____________________(做出解釋).2.互動描寫gracious.adj._________________________relive.v._________________________Fortunately,thebuyer____________________________(禮貌地表示理解),sayingthathewasoriginallydrawntothehouse’s_________________andhopedwecould________________________inthishouse.3.我的動作+語言描寫After_____