中考沖刺七：寫作技巧（鞏固練習(xí)）

【鞏固練習(xí)】I.書面表達(dá)真題演練。(2014南京)假如你是來自英國(guó)某中學(xué)的交換生Daniel,你想?yún)⒓佑⑽膱?bào)紙JinlingDaily廣告中介紹的機(jī)器人培訓(xùn)班。ROBOTROBOTCOURSERobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchoolOrganizedvisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompanyE-mail:robotcourse@J請(qǐng)根據(jù)該廣告內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封電子郵件，詢問與該班相關(guān)的具體信息，郵件內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：培訓(xùn)班的起止時(shí)間以及周末是否上課；參觀機(jī)器人公司的具體安排你還想了解到該培訓(xùn)班其他信息。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80左右，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.(2014河北)請(qǐng)閱讀Tony從美國(guó)發(fā)來的電子郵件，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求，以李華的名義回復(fù)。提示：（1）AskTonysomethingabouthisChinesecooking. （2）AnswerhisquestionaboutMid-AutumnFestival.要求： （1）郵件包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 （2）郵件中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 （3）詞數(shù)：60~80參考詞匯：thelunarcalendar(陰歷),mooncake,watchthemoon,thesymbolofreunion(團(tuán)圓的象征)(2015泰安)假如你是某中學(xué)初三（1）班班長(zhǎng)李華，請(qǐng)你為校刊“英語園地”寫一篇短文；記述前天主題班會(huì)“Tobesenttoschoolornot”的討論情況。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為上學(xué)應(yīng)該接送，省時(shí)又安全。2.部分學(xué)生認(rèn)為步行或騎自行車是最好的方式，環(huán)保又健身。3.你的看法和建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80-100；2.可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。ToBeSentToSchoolOrNot(2015福州)假設(shè)你是李杰，正通過e-mail和美國(guó)友好姐妹校的朋友Tom交流校紀(jì)班規(guī)，請(qǐng)你用英語向他介紹下面的“班級(jí)公約”。要求：1、內(nèi)容完整，書寫清楚，表達(dá)通順，書寫規(guī)范；2、請(qǐng)勿逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)90左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：schooluniform;beactiveinthinkingDearTom,I’dliketointroducemyclassrulesmadebyusall.First,weshould…It’sourdutytofollowalltherulesabove.Whataboutyours?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,LiJieII.書面表達(dá)綜合演練。作文一：在和諧社會(huì)里，人與人之間的互幫互助已構(gòu)成我們生活中的重要組成部分。下周英國(guó)友好學(xué)校將來你校訪問，你校英語俱樂部將舉行一次以“HelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderful”為主題的英語演講比賽。假如李智要參加演講比賽，請(qǐng)你以“李智”的名義用英語寫一篇講稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：1．幫助同學(xué)——友誼;2．幫助老人——幸福;3．幫助病人——快樂;4．幫助別人體會(huì)……要求：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。正文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。HelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderfulHello,everyone.I’mLiZhi.It’snicetospeakabouthelphere．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening.作文二：在今年的“地球一小時(shí)(EarthHour)”活動(dòng)中，中國(guó)很多城市的人們都自覺熄燈一小時(shí)，體現(xiàn)了低碳生活的新理念。假定你是CCTV9的記者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下采訪信息用英語寫一篇80詞左右的新聞稿。注意：部分內(nèi)容已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ThankyouforjoiningCCTV’sAroundChinashow!Nowit’s8:45p.m.duringthefamousEarthHour.Peopleinmanycitieshaveturnedofftheirlightsandarehavingaveryspecialtime.InShanghai,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Manypeoplesharewithustheirplans.___________________________________________作文三：假如你是某學(xué)生雜志社的編輯Diana，收到了讀者Steve的一封來信，心中傾訴了他的煩惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve寫一封回信。提示：與人交流課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；課間和同學(xué)們交流表達(dá)善意主動(dòng)問候同學(xué)；對(duì)同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)參加活動(dòng)積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)（如：運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等）參考詞匯：小組討論groupwork表達(dá)express要求：1．詞數(shù)：80-100個(gè)。2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3．要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDiana,Ijustcametoanewschool．AndIcan’tgetonwellwithmynewclassmates…WhatshouldIdo?SteveDearSteve,I’velearnedaboutyourproblem．Ithink________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes，Diana作文四：某英語網(wǎng)站進(jìn)行了一次中學(xué)生健康情況調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)很多中學(xué)生的健康狀況令人擔(dān)憂。主要原因有：飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理；體育鍛煉不足；心理壓力大，不能與人很好地溝通等等。為此，他們發(fā)起了題為HowtoKeepFit的征文活動(dòng)，倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生的健康生活方式。請(qǐng)你寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，說明如何保持身體健康。HowtoKeepFit——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————作文五：一說到考試，同學(xué)們總有講不完的故事。在你的記憶中，那些發(fā)生在考場(chǎng)內(nèi)外的故事，一定有使你至今感慨、難忘的吧?請(qǐng)以考試為話題，寫一篇題為“AnUnforgettable(難忘的)Experience”的短文。以下提示詞語可能對(duì)你有幫助(可根據(jù)需要選用)：finalexam,mid-termexam,nervous,warmwords,relax,confident,givethebestperformance(dowell),fail.....要求：100詞左右——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————【答案與解析】I.書面表達(dá)真題演練。(2014南京)DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.Firstly,I'dliketoknowmoreaboutthecoursearrangement.Forexample,couldyoutellmehowlongthecoursewilllast?Iprefertoknowifthereisanyclassfortheweekend.Next,I'minterestedinthevisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompany.WouldyoutellmewhetherIneedtopay?Finally,IwonderwhetherI'llbeabletodesignarobotmyselfattheendofthecourse.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursfaithfullyDaniel(2014河北)Hi,Tony,Goodtohearfromyou!It'samazingthatyou'relearningChinesecooking.Whyareyouinterestedinit?Howareyoulearning?Andwhatcanyoucook?Hopetoenjoyyourdishesnexttime!Yes,wereallyhaveMid-AutumnFestival.It'sonAugust15thofthelunarcalendar.It'soneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.Allthefamilymembersgettogetherforabigdinnerthatday.Weusuallyeatmooncakeswhilewatchingthemoonatnight.Webelievethefullmoonisthesymbolofreunion.Byefornow,LiHua(2015泰安)Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldbesenttoschoolornot.Wehavetwomainideas.Somestudentsthinkthatitcansavethestudents’timeifparentssendthemtoschool.Andparentswanttomakesurethestudentsaresafe,especiallywhentheweatheristerrible.However,ourcityismoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted,sootherstudentsthinkgoingtoschoolonfootorbybikeisthebestway.Firstofall,walkingtoschoolisawonderfulwaytoexerciseandit’sgoodforourhealth.What’smore,ifwewalk,orrideabike,therewillbefewercarsinthecity.Morewalkingandlessdrivinghelpmakeourcitycleaner.Thestreetswon’tbeascrowdedastheyarenow.Ihopemoreandmorestudentswillgotoschoolonfootorbybike.(2015福州)DearTom,I’dliketointroducemyclassrulesmadebyusall.First,weshouldcometoschoolontimeinschooluniforms.It’spolitetogreetourteacherswhenwemeetthem.Second,wemustlistencarefullyinclassandbeactiveinthinking.Also,weoughttodoourhomeworkcarefullyandhanditinontime.Third,weneedcleantheclassroomoftenandalwayskeepitclean.Andwe’rerequiredtoturnofflightsandclosewindowsanddoorsbeforeweleave.Fourth,beingfriendlyisimportant.We’resupposedtogetalongwellandhelpeachothertomakeprogresstogether.It’sourdutytofollowalltherulesabove.Whataboutyours?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,LiJieII.書面表達(dá)綜合演練。作文一：〔解析〕本題是命題作文，根據(jù)漢語提示，簡(jiǎn)述樂于助人的好處，號(hào)召大家要積極參與樂于助人活動(dòng)，從而使我們的世界更美好。OnepossibleversionHelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderfulHello,everyone.I’mLiZhi.It’snicetospeakabouthelphere.Inourlifeweoftenhelpothersandalsogethelpfromothers.Whenwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings,wecandevelopourfriendship.Ifwegiveahandtooldpeople,wecanunderstandthemeaningofpleasure.Asweknow,patientinourlife.Ithinkwecangetmuchwhenwehelpthepeoplearoundus.Asthesayinggoes,“Givingismuchbetterthanreceiving.”作文二：〔解析〕本題通過英文圖表提示，要考生敘述地球一小時(shí)活動(dòng)的情況，在關(guān)燈一小時(shí)，人們正在做什么有意義的活動(dòng)，以后打算做什么活動(dòng)來節(jié)約能源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，使我們的地球家園更美好。OnepossibleversionThankyouforjoiningCCTV’sAroundChinashow!Nowit’s8:45p.m.duringthefamousEarthHour.Peopleinmanycitieshaveturnedofftheirlightsandarehavingaveryspecialtime.Inshanghai,somepeoplearetakingawalkwiththeirfamily.Theyfeelveryrelaxed.InBeijing,somepeoplearehavinganicetalkwiththeirfriends.AndinNingbo,someyoungpeopleareholdingapartyinthepark,singinganddancing.Withoutlights,peoplecanalsoenjoythemselves.Manypeoplesharewithustheirplans.Somesaytheywillspendmoretimewiththeirfamilyandfriends.Otherssaytheywilltrytheirbesttoprotecttheenvironment,likeplantingmoretrees,savingwaterandsoon.What’smore,somepeopletellmethattheywillusepaperbothsides(driveless,ridebikes,useplasticbagsless…)intheirdailylife.LiuPengYours,LiMing作文三：〔解析〕本題要求寫一封回信，幫Steve解決問題，要根據(jù)漢語提示要點(diǎn)去寫，層次要清晰，句意不要重復(fù)，注意語氣誠(chéng)摯，句式多樣。OnepossibleversionDearSteve,I’velearnedyourproblem．Ithinkyoushouldbeactiveingroupworkinclassandbebraveenoughtoexpressyourideas．Trytotalkwithyourclassmatesatbreak．Ifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem．Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant．Youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeeting,footballgamesandsingingcompetitions．I’msureyouwillsoonbeamongfriends.BestwishesDiana作文四：〔解析〕本題要求就中學(xué)生健康問題進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，中學(xué)生如何