高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：感恩罐的魔力：從消極到積極的人生轉變+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習《感恩罐的魔力：從消極到積極的人生轉變》1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文TheGratitudeJar(感恩)Emily,ayoungwomanwithagoldenhair,livedinasmall,busytown.Shewasinherearlythirtiesandwasunfortunate.Shewasknownforhernegativefeelingsandpessimisticcharacters.Whenfacinglife’schallenges,shealwaysthoughttheGodneverblessedherandfeltasenseofdesperation,whichmadethepeoplearoundsadaswell.Oneday,Emilymetwithanold,dustyjarinthecornerofanantiqueshop.Curious,shepickeditupandnoticedasmalllabelthatread,“TheGratitudeJar.”Theshopkeeperexplainedthatthejarwasmeantforcollectingmomentsofgratitude—tinynotesthatillustratedtheessenceofthankfulness.4續(xù)寫原文Excitedbytheidea,Emilydecidedtostartajourneyofgratitude.Sheplacedthejarontheshelfnearherdesk.Eachday,beforethesundippedbelowthehorizon(地平線),shewouldsitdownwithherGratitudeJarandreflectontheblessingsoftheday.Fromthewarmthofthemorningsuntothelaughterofchildrenplayinginthepark,Emilyfoundjoyinthesimplethings.Asthedaysturnedintoweeksandtheweeksintomonths,Emily’sjarbegantofillwithanamountofgratitude:Shewasamazedbyhowherattitudetolifehadshifted.Insteadofdwellingon(強調)whatshelacked,Emilyfocusedontherichnessofwhatshehad—theloveoffamily,thesupportoffriends,andthebeautyoftheworldaroundher.Gradually,Emilybecameasunnyandpositivepersonwholovedlifeandwasgratefultoothers.5段首句Paragraph1:Onecoldautumnevening,Emilywastoldshelostherjob.Paragraph2:Emily’spositiveattitudetolifehelpedhergetanewjob.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8艾米麗是一位三十出頭的金發(fā)年輕女性，住在一個忙碌的小鎮(zhèn)上。她性格消極悲觀，面對生活的挑戰(zhàn)時，總覺得自己不被上帝眷顧，感到絕望，這也讓周圍的人感到難過。一天，她在古董店的角落里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個布滿灰塵的舊罐子，上面的標簽寫著“感恩罐”。店主解釋說，這個罐子是用來收集感恩時刻的，人們可以把那些體現(xiàn)感恩之情的小事寫在紙條上放進去。艾米麗對這個想法很感興趣，于是開啟了她的感恩之旅。她每天都會在日落前，坐在感恩罐前，回顧一天中的美好瞬間，并把它們寫下來放進罐子里。隨著時間的推移，感恩罐漸漸裝滿了紙條，艾米麗也驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對生活的態(tài)度發(fā)生了巨大的轉變，她不再糾結于自己缺少什么，而是關注自己所擁有的東西，逐漸變成了一個陽光積極、熱愛生活、心懷感恩的人。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Onecoldautumnevening,Emilywastoldshelostherjob.一個寒冷的秋日傍晚，艾米麗被告知她失業(yè)了。聽到這個消息的瞬間，她的世界仿佛崩塌了，恐懼和絕望如潮水般向她涌來。她的第一反應是習慣性地陷入悲傷和抱怨，畢竟失業(yè)意味著失去了穩(wěn)定的收入，生活的壓力瞬間撲面而來。但就在這時，她的目光落在了書桌上那只裝滿感恩紙條的罐子上。那些紙條承載著她過去無數(shù)個美好的瞬間和感恩的時刻，它們就像一束光，照亮了她此刻黑暗的內(nèi)心。艾米麗深吸一口氣，告訴自己不能再像以前那樣消極對待。她開始冷靜下來，回顧自己的生活，雖然失去了工作，但她還有愛她的家人，每當她遇到困難時，家人都會給予她無條件的支持和鼓勵；她還有一群真誠的朋友，他們會在她開心或難過時陪伴在她身邊；她還有健康的身體，能夠自由地去感受生活中的美好。想到這些，艾米麗的心情漸漸平靜下來，她決定把這次失業(yè)當作一次重新審視自己、尋找新機會的契機。她開始積極地修改簡歷，參加各種招聘會，利用業(yè)余時間學習新的技能，提升自己的競爭力。在這個過程中，她也會遇到很多挫折和困難，但每當她感到沮喪時，她都會打開感恩罐，讀一讀那些紙條，從中汲取力量和勇氣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Emily’spositiveattitudetolifehelpedhergetanewjob.艾米麗的積極態(tài)度對生活幫助她找到了一份新工作。在經(jīng)過了一段時間的努力后，她終于收到了一家心儀公司的錄用通知。當她拿到錄用通知的那一刻，她激動得熱淚盈眶。她知道，這一切都得益于她這一段時間以來的積極心態(tài)和不懈努力。新工作的環(huán)境很好，同事們也都很友善，艾米麗在這里如魚得水，工作表現(xiàn)十分出色。她并沒有因為找到了新工作而忘記感恩，相反，她更加珍惜現(xiàn)在的一切。她每天都會在感恩罐里添加新的紙條，記錄下工作中的點滴美好和同事們給予她的幫助。她還會把自己的故事分享給身邊的人，鼓勵他們也嘗試用感恩的心態(tài)去面對生活。在她的影響下，身邊的很多人也開始關注生活中的美好，變得更加積極樂觀。艾米麗深知，感恩罐不僅改變了她的生活態(tài)度，還讓她收獲了成長和幸福。她會一直將這份感恩之心傳遞下去，讓更多的人感受到感恩的力量。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Onecoldautumnevening,Emilywastoldshelostherjob.Themomentsheheardthenews,herworldseemedtocollapse.Fearanddespairsurgedoverherlikeatidalwave.Herfirstreactionwastofallintosadnessandcomplaintshabitually.Afterall,losingherjobmeantlosingastableincome,andthepressureoflifesuddenlycamecrashingdownonher.Butjustthen,hereyesfellonthegratitudejarfullofnotesonherdesk.Thosenotescarriedcountlessbeautifulmomentsandfeelingsofgratitudefromherpast.Theywerelikeabeamoflightthatilluminatedherdarkheartatthismoment.Emilytookadeepbreathandtoldherselfthatshecouldn'tbenegativeanymore.Shebegantocalmdownandreviewherlife.Althoughshelostherjob,shestillhadherlovingfamilywhowouldalwaysgiveherunconditionalsupportandencouragementwhenevershefaceddifficulties.Shealsohadagroupofsincerefriendswhowouldaccompanyherwhethershewashappyorsad.Andshestillhadahealthybodythatallowedhertofreelyexperiencethebeautyoflife.Thinkingofthese,Emily'smoodgraduallycalmeddown.Shedecidedtoregardthisjoblossasanopportunitytore-examineherselfandlookfornewopportunities.Shestartedtoactivelyreviseherresume,attendvariousjobfairs,andusehersparetimetolearnnewskillsandimprovehercompetitiveness.Duringthisprocess,shealsoencounteredmanysetbacksanddifficulties.Butwhenevershefeltfrustrated,shewouldopenthegratitudejarandreadthosenotestodrawstrengthandcouragefromthem.13范文呈現(xiàn)Emily'spositiveattitudetolifehelpedhergetanewjob.Afteraperiodofhardwork,shefinallyreceivedajobofferfromacompanysheadmired.Themomentshegottheoffer,shewassoexcitedthattearsfilledhereyes.Sheknewthatallofthiswasthankstoherpositiveattitudeandunremittingeffortsduringthisperiod.Theworkingenvironmentofthenewjobwasgreat,andhercolleagueswereveryfriendly.Emilyfitinwellhereandperformedexcellentlyatwork.Shedidn'tforgettobegratefuljustbecauseshefoundanewjob.Onthecontrary,shecherishedeverythingshehadnowevenmore.Sheaddednewnotestothegratitudejareveryday,recordingthelittlebeautiesatworkandthehelpfromhercolleagues.Shealsosharedherstorywiththepeoplearoundher,encouragingthemtotrytofacelifewithagratefulattitude.Underherinfluence,manypeoplearoundheralsobegantopayattentiontothebeautyinlifeandbecamemorepositiveandoptimistic.Emilydeeplyunderstoodthatthegratitudejarnotonlychangedherattitudetowardslifebutalsomadehergaingrowthandhappiness.Shewouldalwayspassonthisgratefulheartandletmorepeoplefeelthepowerofgratitude.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onecoldautumnevening,Emilywastoldshelostherjob.Theinstantthenewsreachedherears,herworldseemedtocrumblebeneathherfeet.Fearanddespairengulfedherlikeaviolentstorm.Byinstinct,shewasonthevergeofsinkingintoapitofsadnessandcomplaints.Afterall,joblossmeantthelossofastableincome,andtheweightoflife'spressuresboredownonherheavily.However,atthatverymoment,hereyesfelluponthegratitudejar,brimmingwithnotes,sittingonherdesk.Thosenotes,eachatestamenttothebeautifulmomentsandfeelingsofgratitudefromherpast,shonelikeabeaconoflightinthedarknessofherheart.Emilytookadeep,steadyingbreathandresolvednottosuccumbtonegativity.Shebegantocalmherselfandreflectonherlife.Despitethejobloss,shestillhadalovingfamilywhohadalwaysstoodbyherside,offeringunwaveringsupportandencouragementintimesoftrouble.Shehadacircleofsincerefriendswhosharedinherjoysandsorrows.Moreover,shepossessedahealthybodythatenabledhertoembracethewondersoflife.Withthesethoughtsinmind,Emily'sheartgraduallystilled.Shedecidedtoviewthissetbackasanopportunityforself-explorationandnewbeginnings.Sheimmediatelysetaboutrevisingherresume,activelyparticipatinginjobfairs,anddevotinghersparetimetoacquiringnewskillsandenhancinghercompetitiveness.Alongtheway,sheencounterednumerousobstaclesandsetbacks.Butwhenevershefeltdisheartened,shewouldturntothegratitudejar,readingthroughthenotesanddrawingstrengthandinspirationfromthem.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Emily'spositiveattitudetolifehelpedhergetanewjob.Afteraperiodofarduousefforts,shefinallyreceivedajobofferfromacompanyshehadlongadmired.Themomentsheheldtheofferletterinherhands,tearsofjoywelledupinhereyes.Shewasacutelyawarethathersuccesswasaresultofherpositivemindsetandrelentlessperseverance.Thenewworkplaceboastedapleasantenvironment,andhercolleagueswerewarmandfriend