Unit 2 No Rules,No Order .（話題寫作指導）（教師版）

Unit2NoRules,NoOrder.(話題寫作指導）【話題分析】談論規(guī)則本單元話題為“規(guī)則”，要求我們介紹某個處所的規(guī)則，如學校、家、教室、圖書館等。我們可采用“總—分—總”的結構進行寫作：首先要點明是哪個處所的規(guī)則；其次具體介紹該處所的規(guī)則；最后發(fā)表自己對這些規(guī)則的看法（是否喜歡它們）。寫作時我們主要用第一人稱I或we,介紹規(guī)則時應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。常用句型：Wecan/must/havetodo...Wecan'tdo...or...Wehavetoomanyrules.【寫作實例】孟子曰：“不以規(guī)矩，不能成方圓?！边@告訴我們做任何事情都要有一定的規(guī)矩或規(guī)則。你們學校都有哪些規(guī)則呢？假設你是李明，下面是你們學校的一些規(guī)則，請你寫一封電子郵件，向你的筆友Tom作一下介紹。詞數(shù)不少于60。1.上課不能遲到；2.課堂上保持安靜；3.見到老師要問好；4.不許在教室里吃東西；5.不許在課堂上聽音樂、玩游戲。DearTom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiMing【思路點撥】【教材典句】...Ican’tbelateforschool.(SB,1b)Inthelibrary,wemustkeepquiet.(SA,3b)AndIhavetoweartheuniform.(SB,1b)【經(jīng)典范文】DearTom,Thanksforyourlaste-mail.Youwanttoknowtherulesinourschool,right?Nowletmetellyouaboutthem.Wecan'tbelateforclass.Wemustarriveontime.Wecan'ttalkloudlyinclass.Wemustkeepquietinclass.Whenwemeetourteachersonourway,weshouldsayhellotothem.Wecan'teatintheclassroom,andwehavetoeatinthedininghall.Wemustn'tlistentomusicorplaygamesinclass.Yours,LiMing【亮點點評】①用“Thanksfor.”表示感謝。②用“Youwanttoknowtherules...”及“...letmetellyou.”表明寫作的主題是校規(guī)。③用“Wecan’...”“Wemust...”“Wehaveto...”及“Wemustn't...”具體介紹校規(guī)的內(nèi)容?！就綑z測】1．假如你是Alice，請你根據(jù)下面的提示介紹一下你們班的班規(guī)，并說明你對這些班規(guī)的看法。不少于60詞，可適當發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要點提示：①beforeclass:don’tbelateforclass;beontime②inclass:don’ttalkloudly;don’teatordrinkinclass;don’tplaygamesorlistentomusic______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisAlice.Therearetoomanyrulesinourclass.Wecan’tbelateforclass.Wemustgettoschoolontime.Inclass,wecan’ttalkloudly.Wecan’teatordrinkinclass.Wecan’tplaygamesorlistentomusicinclass.Someoftherulesarestrict,butIthinktheyareuseful.Sowemustfollowthem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題；第二步，具體介紹班規(guī)；第三步，表達自己的看法。[亮點詞匯]①toomany太多②belatefor遲到③listentomusic聽音樂[高分句型]Someoftherulesarestrict,butIthinktheyareuseful.（并列句）2．下面是你父母為你制定的一些規(guī)則，請你用自己的話寫一篇60詞左右的英語短文，并說說你的感受。提示詞匯：haveto；must；canMyRules1.Getupat6:30a.m.2.Gotoschoolat7:15a.m.3.Don’teatoutside.4.Don’tlistentomusiconschooldays.5.Don’twatchTVonschoolnights.6.Bebackhomebefore11:30inthemorningandbefore6:00intheafternoon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mnothappybecauseIhavetoomanyrulesathome.Ihavetogetupat6:30everymorning,becauseImustgotoschoolat7:15.Ican’teatoutside.Ican’tlistentomusiconschooldaysandIcan’twatchTVonschoolnights.Imustbebackhomebefore11:30inthemorningandbefore6:00intheafternoon.Idon’thaveagoodtimeathome.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求寫一篇有關規(guī)則的短文；要求包含所有內(nèi)容提示。2.寫作指導：此作文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時；采用第一人稱口吻；闡述清楚父母制定的規(guī)則，并闡述自己的感受。保證無語法和拼寫錯誤。3．無論在家里還是在學校里，劉剛總要遵守許多規(guī)則，他很苦惱。于是，他寫信給他的好朋友Jack，向他傾訴他內(nèi)心的不快。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示幫他寫信給Jack。詞數(shù)不少于60。開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容提示：1.6:30起床。2.在校穿校服；3.上課不準遲到；4.上課時不能戴帽子；5.在家不能看電視，每晚練習彈鋼琴；6.9:00上床睡覺；7.周末打掃房間，洗衣服。DearJack,I’mnothappyeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhatcanIdo?Yours,LiuGang【答案】DearJack,I’mnothappyeveryday.Ihavetoomanyrulesatschoolandinmyhouse.Ihavetogetupat6:30inthemorning.Ihavetowearauniformatschool.Ican’tarrivelateforclass.Ican’twearahatinclass,either.AthomeIcan’twatchTV.Ihavetopracticeplayingthepianoeveryevening.Ihavetogotobedat9:00.OntheweekendIhavetocleanmyroomandwashmyclothes.Althoughmyparentsandteachersmakerulestohelpme,Idon’thaveanyfuneveryday.WhatcanIdo?Yours,LiuGang【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示給好朋友Jack寫信，傾訴內(nèi)心的不快。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱采用第一人稱。根據(jù)要點提示，緊扣主題，力求語句通順，條理清晰，注意語意連貫，無語法單詞錯誤。4．學生應當遵守學校的規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，以“SchoolRules”為題，敘述中學生應遵守的一些規(guī)章制度，并談談你的看法。60詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。要點提示：1.在課堂上不亂講話，要認真聽老師講課，不帶食物進教室，保持教室安靜、整潔；2.課后要按時完成作業(yè)；3.在學校，要穿校服；4.保護學校的一草一木；5.與老師和同學們友好相處。SchoolRulesEveryschoolhasrulesforstudents.Asstudents,wemustobeythem.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SchoolRulesEveryschoolhasrulesforstudents.Asstudents,wemustobeythem.Firstofall,weshouldn’ttalkinclass.Wemustlistentotheteacherscarefully.Wearenotsupposedtotakefoodordrinksintotheclassroom.Weshouldkeepourclassroomquietandclean.Afterclass,weshouldfinishourhomeworkontime.Onemorething,weshouldwearourschooluniformsatschool.Besides,weshouldprotecttrees,grassandflowerstherebecausetheymakeourschoolmorebeautiful.Atlast,weshouldbegoodwithourteachersandclassmates.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“學校制度”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導：本文采用第一人稱，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。在寫作時，多運用firstofall，besides，atlast等詞，讓整篇文章看起來更有層次感。內(nèi)容要涵蓋所給的每個提示要點，寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標點錯誤。5．沒有規(guī)矩不成方圓。每個人的生活都離不開規(guī)矩的約束。你的家里有什么規(guī)矩呢？你是如何看待這些規(guī)矩的呢？假如你叫Tina，請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示以“Myfamilyrules”為題寫一篇英文短文。要求60詞以上。內(nèi)容提示：1.

不能晚回家；2.

必須早睡早起；3.

周一到周五不能看電視，玩電腦游戲；4.

不能吃太多垃圾食品（junkfood）。Myfamilyrules【答案】MyfamilyrulesEveryfamilyhasitsownrules.Myfamilyalsohasrules.Now,letmeshowyousomeofmyfamilyrules.Firstly,Ican’tcomebackhomelate,becauseit’sdangerousforyounggirlstocomebackhomelate.Secondly,Imustgotobedandgetupearlybefore6:30everyday,becauseIhavetoreadEnglishbeforegoingtoschool.Thirdly,Ican’twatchTVorplaycomputergamesfromMondaytoFriday.It’snotgoodformystudy.Fourthly,Ican’teattoomuchjunkfood.It’snotgoodformyhealth.Therulesareveryboring,butIknowtheyaregoodforme.【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時要把給出的規(guī)矩具體寫出，最后做出總結。例文點評：例文采用一段式，用第一人稱來敘述規(guī)矩的內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述規(guī)矩時，詳細具體，邏輯性強，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：itsownrules；comebackhomelate；getupearly；fromMondaytoFriday。句型：Everyfamilyhasitsownrules；it’sdangerousforyounggirlstocomebackhomelate?！菊骖}鏈接】1．（23-24七年級下·山東濰坊·期末）假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike想了解一下你們學校的校規(guī)，請根據(jù)以下思維導圖寫一封英文郵件，介紹一下你們的校規(guī)。注意1.禁止抄襲本試卷中所有語篇內(nèi)容；2.70詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,I’dliketointroduceourschoolrulestoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,I’dliketointroduceourschoolrulestoyou.Intheclassroom,wecan’tbelateforclass.Wemustlistencarefully.Wealsoneedtobepolite.Weshouldalsotakecareofourownthingsandsoon.Inthelab,wedon’tallowfoodordrink.Weareforbiddentoenterthelabalone.Wehavetocleanthelabtwiceaweek.Atthediningroom,wehavetowaitinline.Weforbidtalkingloudly.Wecan’tthrowfoodandsoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當發(fā)揮，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，介紹學校校規(guī)；第二步，從教室、實驗室以及餐廳除，詳細介紹這些地方的規(guī)則。[亮點詞匯]①belatefor遲到②takecareof照顧③waitinline排隊等待[高分句型]Weareforbiddentoenterthelabalone.（被動語態(tài)）2．（23-24七年級下·湖北武漢·期中）假如你是Tina，你有很多家規(guī)。請給你的好朋友Julie發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴她你的家規(guī)并談談你對這些家規(guī)的看法。內(nèi)容提示：Whatdoyouhavetodoathome?Whatcan’tyoudoathome?Whatdoyouthinkofthefamilyrules?Why?Somethingmoreaboutyourfamilyrules.注意：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；2.文中不得透漏個人真實信息；詞數(shù)80左右，部分標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJulie,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Tina【答案】DearJulie,Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Ihavelotsofrulesathome.I?havetogetupat6:00everymorning.Ihavetoarrivehomebeforesixo’clockeveryday,soIcan’thangoutwithmyfriends.Iamnotallowedtoplaycomputergamesorwatch?TVonweekdays.Ihavetocleantheroomonweekends.Theserules,thoughstrict,aregoodforme.SoIalwaysfollowthemcarefully.Whataboutyourfamilyrules?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,Tina【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作時注意圍繞內(nèi)容提示的問題展開，合理組織語言，可適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達寒暄，引出主題；第二步，具體介紹有哪些家規(guī)；第三步，表達自己對家規(guī)的看法，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①lotsof很多②haveto不得不③hangout閑逛④begoodfor對……有好處[高分句型]①Ihavetoarrivehomebeforesixo’clockeveryday,soIcan’thangoutwithmyfriends.（并列句）②IamnotallowedtoplaycomputergamesorwatchTVonweekdays.（被動語態(tài)）3．（22-23七年級下·遼寧撫順·期中）根據(jù)要求完成作文，詞數(shù)：約60-80詞。假如你是David，現(xiàn)在是周六晚上八點，你收到了你的美國朋友Jim的微信消息。請你根據(jù)消息內(nèi)容回復他。注意：1.短文須包含微信消息中Jim詢問的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得透露任何個人和學校的真實信息。JimJim:Hi,David.Whatareyoudoingnow?It’s8:00a.m.Saturday,butIcan’tgooutwithmyfriendsbecauseIhavetohelplookaftermysisterandcleanthehouse.Andafterthat,Imustpracticethepianoforanhour.Whataboutyou?Doyouhaveanyrulesathome?Whatdoyouthinkofthem?DavidHi,Jim.It’s8:00p.m.inChina.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DavidHi,Jim.It’s8:00p.m.SaturdayinChina.I’mwatchingaTVshowwithmyparents.Ialsohavesomerulestofollowathome.First,Imustgotobedbeforeteno’clockandgetupbeforehalfpastsix.Second,Imustgethomebeforeseveno’clockonschooldaysandbeforeeightonweekends.Third,IcanwatchTVorplaycomputergamesonlyonweekends.Ithinktheserulesarestrictbuttheyaregoodforme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己正在做什么；第二步，介紹自己的家規(guī)；第三步，介紹對自己家規(guī)的看法。[亮點詞匯]①followrules遵守規(guī)則②gotobed就寢③onweekends在周末④strict嚴格的⑤begoodfor…對……有好處[高分句型]Ithinktheserulesarestrictbuttheyaregoodforme.(省略that的賓語從句)4．（22-23七年級下·江西上饒·期中）假如下面是你父母為你制訂的一些家規(guī)。請你以“MyFamilyRules”為題，寫一篇英語短文。1.每天早上六點必須起床，七點去上學；2.下午六點之前必須到家；3.不能在外面吃飯；4.在上學日的晚上，不能看電視和玩電腦游戲；5.晚上九點半之前必須上床睡覺。要求：1.不要逐句翻譯；

2.60詞左右。MyFamilyRules____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFamilyRulesIhavemanyrulesinmyfamily.EverymorningIhavetogetupatsixo’clockandgotoschoolatseveno’clock.Imustgethomebeforesixo’clockintheafternoon.Ican’teatout.Ican’twatchTVorplaycomputergamesonschoolnights.AndImustgotobedbeforeninethirtyintheevening.Idon’tliketheserules.Ithinktheyareterrible.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：本文應使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點應注意題干給出的“介紹自己的家規(guī)”并適當補充，使文章內(nèi)容充實。[寫作步驟]第一步，點題，介紹家里有很多規(guī)則；第二步，根據(jù)題干中的要點，介紹具體的家規(guī)；第三步，點評這些家規(guī)，并收尾。[亮點詞匯]①haveto不得不②getup起床[高分句型]①EverymorningIhavetogetupatsixo’clockandgotoschoolatseveno’clock.（and連接并列結構）②Ithinktheyareterrible.（賓語從句）5．（22-23七年級下·河南安陽·期中）假如下面是你父母為你定的一些規(guī)矩。請你以“MyFamilyRules”為題，寫一篇短文介紹一下你的家規(guī)以及你對它們的看法。提示：1.每天早上六點必須起床；2.下午六點前必須回家；3.不能在上學日的晚上外出；4.在上學日不能看電視，不能玩電腦游戲；5.九點半之前必須上床睡覺。要求：1.短文必須包含所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)100左右。MyFamilyRules_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFamilyRulesTherearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Everymorning,Ihavetogetupatsixo’clockandthenmakemybed.Afterbreakfast,Igotoschoolatseveno’clock.Afterschool,Imustgethomebeforesixo’clockintheafternoon.AndIcan’tgooutonschoolnights.Ican’twatchTVorplaycomputergamesonschooldays.Imustgotobedbeforeninethirtyintheevening.Onweekends,Ihavetocleanmyroom.Sometimes,Ihavetohelpmyparentswithhousework.Myparentsareverystrictwithme,butIknowtheymakerulestohelpme.Andtherulesaregoodforme.SoImustfollowthem.Doyouhavemanyrulesinyourfamily?Whatdoyouthinkofthem?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求以“MyFamilyRules”為題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的家規(guī)；第二步，介紹自己對家規(guī)的看法；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①getup起床②Onweekends在周末③bestrictwith對……嚴格④begoodfor對……好[高分句型]Myparentsareverystrictwithme,butIknowtheymakerulestohelpme.（并列句）6．（21-22七年級下·內(nèi)蒙古巴彥淖爾·期中）無論在家里還是在學校里，Lucy總要遵守許多制度，她很苦惱，于是寫信給她的好朋友Mike，傾訴她內(nèi)心的不快。請你根據(jù)漢語提示寫出她的rules，然后幫她寫信給Mike。（1）6:00起床，6:30吃早餐；（2）在校穿校服，不準帶手機；（3）上課不準遲到；（4）在家不能看電視，每晚練鋼琴；（5）9:00上床睡覺；（6）周末打掃房間。要求：1.短文應包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2.字跡工整，語句通順；3.70詞左右。（郵件的開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）DearMike,I’mnothappyeveryday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lucy【答案】DearMike,I’mnothappyeveryday.Ihavetoomanyrulesatschoolandinmyhouse.Ihavetogetupat6:00inthemorningandhavebreakfastat6:30.Ihavetowearuniformsatschool.Iamnotallowedtobringmymobilephonetoschool.Ican’tbelateforclass,either.AthomeIcan’twatchTV.Ihavetopracticeplayingthepianoeveryevening.Ihavetogotobedat9:00.OntheweekendIhavetocleanmyroomandwashmyclothes.Althoughmyparentsandteachersmakerulestohelpme,Idon’thaveanyfuneveryday.WhatcanIdo?Yours,Lucy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)要點提示介紹在學校和家里需要遵循的規(guī)則，可適當發(fā)揮，注意語句通順，表達清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，開門見山，講述有很多規(guī)則要遵守；第二步，具體介紹在學校需要遵循的規(guī)則及家里需要遵循的規(guī)則；第三步，書寫結語，表達自己的感受及尋求對方的建議。[亮點詞匯]①haveto必須②practicedoingsth練習做某事③belatefor遲到[高分句型]①Iamnotallowedtobringmymobilephonetoschool.（被動語態(tài)）②Althoughmyparentsandteachersmakerulestohelpme,Idon’thaveanyfuneveryday.（although引導讓步狀語從句）7．（20-21七年級下·浙江杭州·期中）假設你叫Alice，最近你收到了你的英國筆友Tom的電子郵件。請閱讀這份郵件，根據(jù)郵件中提到的問題給Tom回信。要求：（1）包含要點，適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，注意連貫；（2）詞數(shù)不少于60個詞，開頭和結尾都已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱以及本人的姓名。DearAl