Unit 6 Rain or Shine.（話題寫作指導）（學生版）

Unit6RainorShine.(話題寫作指導）【話題分析】本單元的話題為“天氣”，要求能圍繞這一話題寫一篇有關(guān)天氣情況、人們正在進行的活動和人們感受的短文。在寫作過程中，首先要能準確使用描述天氣的形容詞及句型，并要能正確使用現(xiàn)在進行時描述人們正在進行的活動。常用句型：How'stheweatherin...?What'stheweatherlikein...?It's...Theweatherin...is......am/is/aredoingsth.Now...arehavingagoodtime.【寫作實例】“一輪皎潔月當空，佳節(jié)團圓歡笑多”。假如你是李華，Jane是你的筆友。今天是中秋節(jié)，請寫一封信告訴Jane你如何度過中秋節(jié)，并根據(jù)以下提示完成本文。內(nèi)容包括：1.天氣情況；2.中秋節(jié)所做的事情；3.你的感受。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】【教材典句】1、Climbingishard...(SB,1b)2、I’msunbathingatthemoment!(SA,2a)3、...manypeopleherearestillinhighspirits.(SB,1b)4、IstheweathermakingGrandpaSad?(SA,1c)【經(jīng)典范文】DearJane,TodayisourtraditionalMid-AutumnFestival.Gettingtogetherwithourfamilyisreallyexciting!It'sacoolautumnnight.Themoonisshininginthesky.Weareeatingabigdinnernow.Mygrand-parentsarelookingatthemoon.Myparentsaretalkingwitheachother.Myyoungerbrotheriseatingmooncakesatthemoment.Heisinhighspirits!WhenitisMid-AutumnFestival,everyoneisenjoyingtheirwonderfultime!TheMid-AutumnFestivalmakeseveryonehappy.Yours,LiHua【亮點點評】①用動名詞(短語)作主語概述中秋節(jié)的特點。②用現(xiàn)在進行時結(jié)構(gòu)bedoing和時間狀語atthemoment描述中秋節(jié)活動。③用beinhighspirits描述“我”的弟弟的情緒狀態(tài)。④"makesbadj."描述中秋節(jié)給大家的感受?！就綑z測】1．假如你是魏華，你正在加拿大的姑媽家度假。請根據(jù)下表信息，給你上海的同學李濤寫一封信，不少于60詞。WhereWeatherActivitiesFeelingsCanadacold;snowingvisitmyaunt;ski;makeasnowmanrelaxed;haveagoodtimeDearLiTao,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WeiHua【答案】DearLiTao,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’mvisitingmyauntinCanada.It’swinterherenow.It’scoldandit’ssnowingreallyhard.Whatabeautifulwhiteworlditis!Theweatherhereisjustrightforplayingwithsnow.SoIamskiingandmakingasnowmanwithmycousins.Wearehavingagoodtimeinthesnow.Wearereallyrelaxed.What’stheweatherlikeinShanghai?Areyoustudyinghardorhavingfun?Pleasewritebacktomesoon.Yours,WeiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，屬于書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“現(xiàn)在進行時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中所給出的詞匯或短語，適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，向同學問好，說明自己所在的地方及活動；第二步，闡明天氣情況，正在進行的活動及內(nèi)心的感受；第三步，詢問同學所在地的天氣及同學的活動情況，并請他盡快回信。[亮點詞匯]①snowhard下雪下得大②bejustrightfor正適合……③really確實[高分句型]Whatabeautifulwhiteworlditis!(感嘆句)2．假設(shè)今天是周日，現(xiàn)在是下午五點，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的英語短文來描述你們的活動。提示：1.Whatareyourfamilydoing?2.Whatdoyouthinkofrainydays?要求：1.語句通順，符合邏輯；2.包含提示中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。TodayisSunday.It’sfiveo’clockintheafternoonnow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.It’sfiveo’clockintheafternoonnow.It’srainingoutside,andallofmyfamilyareathome.Myfatherisusingthecomputertodohisworkinhisstudy.Mygrandparentsareplayingchessinthelivingroom.MybrotherDaleismakingamodelplaneinhisroom.Helikesmakingthingsverymuch.Mymotheriscookinginthekitchenforus.AndI’mwatchingTVwithmysisterSusaninthebedroom.Ilikerainydaysbecausewecanhaveagoodtimestayingathometogether.【總體分析】①題材：本文為材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；②時態(tài)：現(xiàn)在進行時；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生不要遺漏要點；可適當添加語句，使文章連貫?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，描述家庭成員們各自正在做的事情；第二步，描述自己對下雨天的看法。【亮點詞匯】①rain下雨②all所有的③playchess下棋④verymuch非常⑤watchTV看電視⑥because因為【高分句型】①Myfatherisusingthecomputertodohisworkinhisstudy.(usesth.todo使用某物做某事)②Ilikerainydaysbecausewecanhaveagoodtimestayingathometogether.(because引導的原因狀語從句)3．假設(shè)你是李華。上周Anna給你寫了一封信。Anna在信中介紹了她的家鄉(xiāng)并希望收到你的回信。請根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容提示，給網(wǎng)友Anna寫一封e-mail，向她介紹廣州冬天的情況以及你和家人過春節(jié)的活動和感受，并邀請她來廣州。天氣不冷，從不下雪，有時會下雨活動爬白云山，逛花市，喝早茶感受請自行補充要求：1.字數(shù)：不少于60詞（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字數(shù)）；2.文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并可作適當發(fā)揮；3.條理清楚，語句還順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。DearAnna,Iwashappytohearfromyoulastweek.Winteriscoming.Inwinter,Guangzhouisabeautifulcity._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】DearAnna,Iwashappytohearfromyoulastweek.Winteriscoming.Inwinter,Guangzhouisabeautifulcity.It’snotcoldhere.Itneversnowshere,butitrainssometimes.WeclimbedBaiyunMountain,visitedtheflowermarketandhadmorningtea.Duringthisfestival,peopleinChinagettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Inmanyplacespeopleliketosetofffirecrackersandfireworkstocelebrateit.Anddumplingsarethemosttraditionalfoodduringthefestival.ItismyfavoritefestivalbecauseIdon’thavetogotoschool,andIcangetsomenewclothes,eatalotofdeliciousfood,getsomeredenvelopes,too.I’mveryhappy.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Bestwishes,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)提示材料介紹廣州冬天的情況以及春節(jié)的活動。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹廣州冬天的天氣。第二步，介紹春節(jié)的活動。第三步，介紹自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①setofffirecrackers放鞭炮②alotof許多③lookforwardtodoingsth期待做某事[高分句型]①Inmanyplacespeopleliketosetofffirecrackersandfireworkstocelebrateit（動詞不定式作賓語）②ItismyfavoritefestivalbecauseIdon’thavetogotoschool,andIcangetsomenewclothes,eatalotofdeliciousfood,getsomeredenvelopes,too（because引導原因狀語從句）4．請從下面兩幅圖中選擇一幅圖進行描寫。要求：1.認真觀察圖畫，把觀察到的內(nèi)容寫成一段通順的話。2.可以給圖中人物起名字，展開合理的想象。3.作文內(nèi)容邏輯合理，語篇完整，關(guān)聯(lián)性強，才可以得滿分。4.不少于五句話，注意規(guī)范書寫。

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圖2__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.It’ssunny.Iamplayingintheparkwithmyfriends.Look!MaryisplayingtheviolinandKateissingingsongs.Peteristakingpicturesoftrees.Lilyisridingherbike.MikeandSarahareplayingrole-play.Mikeisactingthedoctor.Sarahisactingthepatient.Weareallhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“現(xiàn)在進行時”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主，注意時態(tài)的正確使用。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹今天是星期日，天氣很好；第二步，具體描繪公園里每個人正在做些什么；第三步，最后進行總結(jié)，今天很開心。[亮點詞匯]①inthepark在公園②takepicturesof拍……的照片③rideone’sbike騎自行車[高分句型]Look!MaryisplayingtheviolinandKateissingingsongs.（and并列句）5．現(xiàn)在是晚上八點鐘，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正給你的朋友寫一張明信片，介紹下今天的天氣，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。要求：語法規(guī)范，語句連貫，60個詞左右。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMei【答案】DearJim,

It’s8:00pm.Anditisrainingheavilyoutside.Weallstayathome.MygrandparentsarewatchingTV.Theyarelaughinghappily.Myfatherisreadingnewspaperinthelivingroom.Mymotherisdoingthedishesinthekitchen.WhatamIdoing?Ofcourse,Iamwritingtoyou.Weallhappyandrelaxedatthismoment.Whatwillyoudoonarainyday?Yours,LiMei【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。寫信給Jim告知家人的活動。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用現(xiàn)在進行時。先介紹此時的天氣，緊接著描述家人的活動信息，最后表達自己的感受。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤?！菊骖}鏈接】（21-22七年級下·河北唐山·期末）下面是公園一角人們的活動場景。請你根據(jù)提示和圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文描述你的好友Jane和人們的活動。提示：(1)How’stheweathertoday?

(2)Whatarepeopledoing?(3)WhatdoesJanelooklike?(4)WhatisJanedoing?要求:（1）短文須包含所有提示內(nèi)容。（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數(shù)不少于60詞。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）ItisSundaytoday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ItisSundaytoday.It’ssunnyandwarm.Therearemanypeopleinthepark.Look,someboysareplayingbasketball.Someareplayingsoccer.Theyareplayinghappily.Thereisamanandtwowomenstandingunderthetree.Theyarewatchingboysplayingbasketball.WhereismyfriendJane?Canyoufindher?Shehasbigeyesandshortcurlyhair.Oh,Iseeher.Sheiseatinganappleandsheistalkingwithaboyrightnow.NexttoJane,agirlisreadingabook.Howhappytheyare!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；內(nèi)容是根據(jù)提示和圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文描述你的好友Jane和人們的活動。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述作文內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；首先從今天的天氣入手；其次描寫人們在公園里的活動；接著描述簡的外貌和活動。保證行文連貫，無單詞拼寫錯誤和語法使用錯誤。2．（20-21七年級下·黑龍江哈爾濱·期末）假如你是來自澳大利亞的Alice，暑假期間你正在哈爾濱旅游，請向你的媽媽介紹一下你在哈爾濱的情況，并向她介紹你的新朋友。寫作要點：1.現(xiàn)在哈爾濱是夏天。2.介紹今天的一些情況：(1)今天天氣晴朗但有風；(2)你正在公園里踢足球；(3)一個女孩正在拍江邊的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。3.介紹你的新朋友王瑩（外貌、衣著、愛好等）。寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容完整、合理；語句正確；行文連貫；2.字跡工整、書寫規(guī)范；3.60詞以上；4.不得使用真實姓名、地點和班級、學校名。DearMom,Howareyou?IaminHarbinnow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!

Yours,

Alice【答案】DearMom,Howareyou?IaminHarbinnow.Iwillintroduceyoutomylifehere.NowHarbinisinsummer.Theweatherisfinetoday,butwindy.Ifeelverycomfortable.Iamplayingfootballinthepark.Iseeagirltakingpictures.Someboysareswimmingintheriver.Imakeanewfriendhere.HernameisWangYing.WangYinglooksverybeautiful.Sheiswearingayellowdress.Shelikestosing.Iamfinehere,youdonotneedtoworry.Bestwishes!Yours,Alice【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要是根據(jù)題干提示向媽媽介紹自己在哈爾濱的旅游情況以及自己交到的新朋友，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：本文以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第一段進行總述；第二段描述天氣、今天的活動以及介紹自己的朋友；第三段告訴媽媽自己很好，不用擔心。在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。3．（20-21七年級下·河北石家莊·期中）假設(shè)你正在和你爸爸媽媽，妹妹在三亞度假，你在朋友圈曬的旅行照片被你的美國朋友Jim看到。他對你去的地方很感興趣，發(fā)微信讓你給他簡單介紹一下，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：天氣晴朗，有風時間暑假(summervacation)地點Sanya活動畫畫，唱歌，游泳，做游戲等觀點……（你認為你的旅游怎么樣?）要求：1．條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確；2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。3．可適當發(fā)揮。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,Jim!IamonsummervacationinSanyawithmyparents.Wearehavingagreattimehere.LetmetellyousomethingaboutSanya.Theweatherhereissunnyandwindy.It’scomfortabletotravelhere.Nowwearetakingawalkandwecangoswimmingintheafternoon.SometimesIdrawpicturesonthebeach.Andmymothersingssongswithothertourists.Therearemanypeopleonthebeach.Wecanalsoplaygamestogether.IlikeSanya.It’sreallybeautifulandrelaxing.Ithinkmysummervacationiswonderful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己暑假在三亞旅游的情況，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。4．（21-22七年級下·河北邯鄲·期末）在夏季，你的家鄉(xiāng)天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么？請寫一篇介紹你們家鄉(xiāng)天氣的短文。注意事項：(1)80詞左右。(2)意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’ssummernow.Theweatherinmyhometownisveryhotandrainy.Soitisverywet.Peoplearewearingsunglassesandcoolclothes.Inthepark,myclassmatesandIarehavingagoodtime.Somegirlsaresinginganddancing.Someboysareplayingsoccer.IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.Alittleboyiseatinganicecream.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中介紹家鄉(xiāng)的天氣，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“介紹家鄉(xiāng)天氣”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“夏季家鄉(xiāng)天氣怎么樣和人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么”兩個方面重點介紹。[亮點詞匯]①haveagoodtime玩得開心②takephotos拍照[高分句型]IamswimminginariverandmybestfriendTomistakingphotos.（and連接并列句）5．（23-24七年級下·山東煙臺·期末）假如你是李華，你和你的美國朋友Helen正在網(wǎng)上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一段話向她介紹相關(guān)情況。要求：1.內(nèi)容須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮。2.60詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、班名及姓名。4.有卷面分。爺爺在公園散步奶奶在客廳澆花爸爸在客廳讀報紙媽媽在廚房洗碗妹妹在臥室做作業(yè)提示詞組：watertheflowersHi,Helen,goodevening.Now,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi,Helen,goodevening.Now,mygrandfatherisn’tathome.Heistakingawalkinthepark.Mygrandmotherlikesflowersverymuch,andsheiswateringtheflowersinthelivingroom.Myfatherisinthelivingroom,too.Heisreadinganewspaper.Mymotheriswashingthedishesinthekitchen.Mysisterisdoingherhomeworkinourbedroom.Shealwaysstudieshard.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在進行時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內(nèi)容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山介紹家人現(xiàn)在正在做什么；第二步，具體介紹家人現(xiàn)在正在做什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①athome在家②verymuch非常③readanewspaper讀報紙④studyhard努力學習[高分句型]①Heistakingawalkinthepark.(運用現(xiàn)在進行時)②Mymotheriswashingthedishesinthekitchen.(介詞短語作地點狀語)6．（22-23七年級下·山東煙臺·期末）請根據(jù)表格中的信息，進行場景描述，字數(shù)不少于50，可適當擴展。時間周日下午地點公園天氣晴朗，有點熱人物王華一家場景爸爸與哥哥在樹下下棋；王華和弟弟在踢球；媽媽在拍照。心情快樂________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayisSunday.Itissunnyandabithot.Intheafternoon,WangHua’sfamilygototheparknearhishousetoplay.Hisfatherandhiselderbrotherareplayingchessunderthetree.Hisfatherplayschessverywell.Hisfatheroftenteacheshiselderbrotherhowtoplaychess.WangHuaandhislittlebrotherareplayingfootball.ThisisWangHua’sfavoritesport.Whatishismotherdoing?Oh,hismotheristakingphotos.Shelikestakingphotosandshealwaystakessomebeautifulphotos.Theyareallveryhappy.Theyallhaveagreattime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹周日的天氣情況并引出主題；第二步，具體介紹王華一家人