專題07 語言學(xué)習(xí)-備戰(zhàn)2022年上海中考英語書面表達(dá)滿分攻略（解析版）

（一）（2020年長寧金山一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mynewway(s)to”（請以“我的新方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）在你的日常的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你習(xí)慣于老方法做某事。有一天你嘗試使用新方法，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)效果更好。請你舉例簡單敘述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介紹新方法的優(yōu)點以及談?wù)劷o你的感想。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mynewway(s)tolearnChineseChineseisourmothertongue,butwhenIstartedmiddleschool,myChinesewasverypoor.Atthattime,whenIwaslearningChinese,Ijustmemorizedtheknowledgefromtextbooks.LatermyChineseteacherencouragedmeandgavemesomeadvice.ThenIoftentookpartinsomeactivitiesaboutChineseandhadagoodtime.Inotonlylistenedmorecarefullyinclassbutalsoreadalotofbooksinmysparetime.Besides,Ioftenwrotearticlesandsharedthemwithmyteachersandclassmates.ThechangeoflearningmethodsmadememoreinterestedinChineseandmygradesimproved.IamverysatisfiedwithmyprogressandthankmyChineseteachersandstudents.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Mynewway(s)to”為題，寫一篇短文。簡單敘述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介紹新方法的優(yōu)點以及談?wù)劷o自己的感想。首先要把題目補充完整，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。2.例文點評：本文時態(tài)為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點：短語：be

weak

in，takepartin，haveagoodtime，notonly…butalso…，

alotof，sharesthwithsb。句型：when

I

started

middle

school，I

was

weak

in

Chinese.當(dāng)我上中學(xué)的時候，我的語文很薄弱．這是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，意思是"當(dāng)…的時候"，be

weak

in是一個固定短語，意思是：在某方面很差。Inotonlylistened

morecarefully

in

classbut

also

read

alotofbooksinmyspare

time.我不僅上課認(rèn)真聽講，而且業(yè)余時間也讀了很多書。notonly…butalso…固定句型，不但…而且…。（二）（2021年普陀區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Icanbeawinner”(以“我可以成為贏家”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格)提示：馬拉松愛好者Allen的人生經(jīng)歷告訴我們：每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功。請結(jié)合具體自己的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀銓@一觀點的認(rèn)識。(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。照抄語篇不得分)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IcanbeawinnerThelifeexperienceofmarathonenthusiastAllentellsusthateveryonecansucceedinsomeway.Icouldn'tagreemorewiththat.AtthebeginningoflearningEnglish,Ifeltitwasverydifficult.IdarednotspeakEnglishbecausemypronunciationwasnotstandard.Ialsothoughtmyclassmateswouldlaughatme.Itwasn'tuntilIlearnedAllen'slifestorythatIrealizedIcouldworktochangethat.IbegantogetupearlyeverydaytoreadEnglish.ItriedmybesttoimitatethepronunciationbylisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmovies.Finally,IgotanAinthefinalspeakingtest.IbelievethataslongasIpersist,myspokenEnglishwillbebetterandbetter.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，本文要求以“我可以成為贏家”為題寫一篇記敘文。根據(jù)提示可知寫作內(nèi)容包括結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷和經(jīng)驗談?wù)勱P(guān)于“每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功”。寫作要思路清晰，層次分明，邏輯清楚，語言的表達(dá)符合語法結(jié)構(gòu)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：例文采取三段式的寫作手法，時態(tài)為一般過去時和第一人稱為主，第一段寫根據(jù)馬拉松愛好者Allen的人生經(jīng)歷告訴我們：每個人都能夠在某方面取得成功；第二段聯(lián)系身邊小事和經(jīng)驗來說明；第三段寫個人觀點和感受。（2020年松江一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Warmthinwinter”.（冬日往往會令人聯(lián)想到寒冷和不適。當(dāng)你遇到“冬天”的時候，何人或何事讓你感到溫暖，像冬日的暖陽照耀在你身上？請以“冬日里的溫暖”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Thefollowingwordsarejustforreference:difficultyunluckilybravetroubleunfortunatelyconfident注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WarmthinwinterIamajuniorthreestudent.IampoorinmyEnglish.Unfortunately,IhadabaddiseasethiswinterandIstayedinhospitalforoveronemonth.IhadtroubleinlearningEnglish.Havingheardofit,myEnglishteachercametomyhousetohelpmeafterschool.Unluckily,becauseitsnowedalot,theroadwascoveredwithiceandsnow.Theroadwassowetthathenearlyfelldownontheway.Withthehelpofhim,IwasbravetofacemydifficultyinEnglish.Afteramonth,Imadegreatprogressinit.NowIamconfidenttostudymyEnglishandIfeelwarminthiscoldwinter.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時要按記敘文格式寫。在寫作時開頭介紹我的英語很差；接下來介紹我生病后，老師幫助我學(xué)習(xí)英語；最后我的英語提高了，讓我在寒冷的冬天感到溫暖。2.例文點評：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主，介紹英語老師幫助我學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點：短語：bepoorin；havetroubleindoingsth；becoveredwith；withthehelpof；makegreatprogress。句型：原因狀語從句becauseitsnowedalot；結(jié)果狀語從句sowetthathenearlyfelldownontheway。（四）（2020年徐匯區(qū)二模）請寫一封不少于60個詞的電子郵件來回復(fù)你的筆友Danny。假如你是Jo,剛收到筆友Danny的一封電子郵件，想了解最近有關(guān)你在家學(xué)習(xí)的情況。請結(jié)合具體事例談?wù)勀愕膶W(xué)習(xí)體會與感受。郵件格式已給。DearJo,Howareyouthesedays?IknowthatinthewaroffightingCOVID-19(冠狀病毒),youarenowstudyingathome,havingschoollessonsonline.It'sreallyanewandspecialwayoflearnning.Pleasetellmeyourexperienceofonlinelearningthesedays.Takecare,Danny（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。標(biāo)點符號不占格）范文：DearDanny,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Duetothissuddenoutbreak,wehadtoimplementpreventionworkathomeandtrytoavoidgoingouttocontactpeople,sothatwecouldnotreturntoschoolnormally.Onlineclassisjustanewformtocontinuelearningnewknowledge.Aftertheclass,unlikethetraditionalclassroomteaching,everyonesitstogetherandhasastronglearningatmosphere.Atthistime,intheprocessofonlineclass,itismoretestingeveryone'sconsciousness.Whetheryoucanconsciouslylistentolessonsathome,takenotesconsciously,followtheteacher’sthoughtswithoutdistractions,andactivelyinteractwiththeteacher,accordingtotheteacher’srequirements,dothepre-classpreparation,after-classreview,andcompletethecorrespondingexercisesafterclassarealltotestus.Tomydelight,myclassmatesdidnotliveuptotheteacher'sexpectations.Theywereabletostudyhardathome,attendclassesontime,andobeytheteacher'sarrangement.Thismademeveryhappy.Infact,onlyaftertakingtheonlineclassdidIrealizehowhappyitwastositintheclassroomwitheveryone.Yours,Jo.（五）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic"ThefirsttimeI.…”.(以“我第一次……”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）要求：補全作文標(biāo)題。短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：

IalwaysrememberedthefirsttimeItookpartinanEnglishcompositioncompetition.WhenIwas14yearsold,IwaschosentotakepartinanEnglishcomposition.Atfirst,Iworriedabouttheresultandcoulddonothingasusual.SoItrainedmyselfveryhardforthecompetition,whichwouldtakeplaceamonthlater.Imemorizedalotofvocabulary,sentencestructuresandreadmanygoodorrenownedarticles.Whenthedaycame,Ipreparedprettywell.Theresultcameouttwoweekslater,andIgotthefirstprize!Thiswasmyfirsttimetotakepartinancomposition,andIcouldstillsenseprideandhappinessspreadingaroundme.

（六）請你以“HowtolearnEnglish”為題寫一篇英語短文，把你四年來的英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗介紹給下一屆的初一同學(xué)，說說英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要性、談?wù)勀闶侨绾螌W(xué)習(xí)英語的、以及你對他們學(xué)習(xí)英語的建議。參考詞語：important,asmuchaspossible,writedown提示問題：●WhydoyoulearnEnglish?●HowdoyoulearnEnglish?●Whatisyouradvicetothem?要求：1、卷面整潔（無污跡），書寫工整（有美感）。2、條理清楚，句式規(guī)范。全文詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3、內(nèi)容盡量包括提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息。HowtolearnEnglishDearyoungersistersandbrothers,asweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtolearnEnglishDearyoungersistersandbrothers,asweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.Howcanwelearnitwell?Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldoftenlistentothetapes,Englishsongsandprograms.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsohelpfultous.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyou’llmake.We’dbetterjointheEnglishclubandpracticewithothers.Third,wecanreadmoreEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.It’sgoodforus.Atlast,weshouldrecitesomegoodpassagesandkeepdiaries.Inaword,aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting,wewilllearnEnglishwell.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和問題，寫出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法以及建議等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動詞，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（七）教育部近日印發(fā)通知，要求控制中小學(xué)生的書面作業(yè)總量，合理布置不同類型的作業(yè)。為此，某英文雜志社正在開展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇征文，講述自身經(jīng)歷，提出合理建議。要求：1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.做過的最有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)（內(nèi)容、收獲……）；2.更多有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)建議（形式、理由……）；3.……MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給的參考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為題寫一篇征文，從自身經(jīng)歷來談?wù)勛约旱挠袆?chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)，并提出合理的建議。注意要點齊全。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，本文寫自身經(jīng)歷時用一般過去時，提建議時可采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主