廣東省河源市八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)寫(xiě)作教程Unit5課件新版人教新目標(biāo)版.pptx

1、寫(xiě)作話題：Preferences and plans(喜好和計(jì)劃),Opinions on cartoons（對(duì)卡通片的看法）,Unit 6,Learning objectives:,能用cant stand，dont like，dont mind，like，love，描述個(gè)人的喜好； 能用hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to談?wù)撚?jì)劃與愿望； 能用不同的形容詞描述事物的特點(diǎn)； 寫(xiě)作微技能：不同句式的表達(dá)。,以寫(xiě)人物的思想行為為主的記敘文，側(cè)重描寫(xiě)人的心理變化、內(nèi)心感受、行為表現(xiàn)和情感升華等,讀寫(xiě)結(jié)合型的寫(xiě)作,命題讀寫(xiě)相結(jié)合類(lèi)型的寫(xiě)作，閱讀部

2、分是為寫(xiě)作任務(wù)服務(wù)的，閱讀的篇章與寫(xiě)作的任務(wù)通常有許多的相關(guān)性。因此，要學(xué)會(huì)從以下的途徑分析： (1)首先要分析閱讀的主題。 (2)分析文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、支撐句/段，總結(jié)句/段，同時(shí)明晰作者使用的寫(xiě)作方法。 (3)分析文本的語(yǔ)言特征，思考有哪些語(yǔ)言可以靈活遷移至自己的寫(xiě)作中，包括適切的詞塊、漂亮的句式等。,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,1. Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言） 以連線、標(biāo)序號(hào)等形式列舉本單元與本話題寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的詞塊、句子。 名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: talent show, soap opera, action movies, s

3、ports show, talk show, sitcom, cartoon,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,動(dòng)詞詞塊： find out, be ready to, plan to do sth., expect to do sth., have a discussion about, try ones best,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,形容詞詞塊： educational, meaningless, successful, wonderful, enjoyable, fantastic, serious, boring,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,名詞/

4、動(dòng)名詞詞塊: （ ）談話節(jié)目， （ ）才藝表演， （ ）體育節(jié)目， （ ）情景喜劇， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥皂劇， （ ）動(dòng)作片，,（ ）談話節(jié)目， （ ）才藝表演， （ ）體育節(jié)目， （ ）情景喜劇， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥皂劇， （ ）動(dòng)作片，,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,動(dòng)詞詞塊： （ ）計(jì)劃做某事， （ ）做有關(guān)的討論， （ ）查明；弄清， （ ）期望做某事， （ ）準(zhǔn)備好做某事， （ ）盡力做某事，,（ ）準(zhǔn)備好做某事， （ ）盡力做某事，,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）,形容詞詞塊： （ ）令人感到無(wú)聊的， （ ）毫無(wú)意義的， （ ）有教育意義的， （ ）精

5、彩的；絕妙的， （ ）成功的， （ ）嚴(yán)肅的；穩(wěn)重的 （ ）極好的；了不起的， （ ）令人愉快的,8,(2) Patterns（句型）,One of the main reasons is that Mickey was like a common man, but he always tried to face the danger. 【one of the main reasons is that 主要原因之一是】 主要原因之一是他花了太多時(shí)間在籃球上。 _,One of the main reasons is that he spends too much time on playing

6、 basketball.,（2）Patterns（句型）,2. Jack was unlucky, such as losing house or girlfriend, Linda. 【such as 比如，表示舉例子】 Tina有很多愛(ài)好，比如看談話節(jié)目、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)。 _,2. Tina has many hobbies, such as watching talk shows and listening to music.,(2) Patterns（句型）,3. However, he was always ready to try his best. 【ready to do sth. 愿

7、意做某事：try ones best 盡某人最大的努力】 Steve是一個(gè)善良的男孩，他總是愿意去幫助其他人。 _,Steve is a kind boy, and he is always ready to help other people.,(2) Patterns（句型）,盡管Tom盡他最大的努力跑著去學(xué)校，他仍是遲到了。 _,Though Tom tried his best to run to school, he was still late for class.,(2) Patterns（句型）,4. Todays cartoons are usually not so sim

8、ple as little Mickey Mouse, but everyone still knows and loves him. 【not so as 不像那樣；不如這么】 我覺(jué)得加菲貓（Garfield）不如米老鼠這么有名且受歡迎。 _,I think Garfield is not so famous or popular as Mickey Mouse.,(2) Patterns（句型）,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述個(gè)人的喜好；使用形容詞做出評(píng)價(jià)，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect t

9、o，be ready to” 等表達(dá)你的計(jì)劃與安排。 如：I like action movies because they are exciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述個(gè)人的喜好；使用形容詞做出評(píng)價(jià)，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to” 等表達(dá)你的計(jì)劃與安排。 如：I like action movies because they are e

10、xciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述個(gè)人的喜好；使用形容詞做出評(píng)價(jià)，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to” 等表達(dá)你的計(jì)劃與安排。 如：I like action movies because they are exciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,(2

11、) Patterns（句型）,（三）不同句式的表 達(dá)（用括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示詞改寫(xiě)句子） 1. I like watching the news because I hope to find out whats going on around the world. 【one of the main reasons is that 】 _ _ 2. Anna did lots of things. For example, she read some magazines and saw films. 【such as】 _ _,I like watching the news. One of the m

12、ain reasons is that I hope to find out whats going on around the world.,Anna did lots of things such as reading some magazines and seeing the films.,(2) Patterns（句型）,（三）不同句式的表 達(dá)（用括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示詞改寫(xiě)句子） 3. The talk show is a little more successful than the game show. 【not so as 】 _ 4. All children like the bla

13、ck mouse. It has two large round ears. 【with】 _,The game show is not so successful as the talk show.,All children like the black mouse with two large round ears.,Before writing,Italian,Young children,Supplying ideas to them,special pens,Computers,寫(xiě)作任務(wù),假如你非常喜歡卡通片，但全家人進(jìn)行了有關(guān)卡通片的討論，表達(dá)了不同的態(tài)度和看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫(xiě)

14、一篇80詞左右的短文描述一下你們一家人對(duì)卡通片的態(tài)度以及各自的愛(ài)好。內(nèi)容包括：,1. 審題想一想，填一填。,審題 體裁：_ 人稱：_ 時(shí)態(tài)：_,審題 體裁：_ 人稱：_ 時(shí)態(tài)：_,第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),記敘文,While writing,3. 寫(xiě)一寫(xiě): 寫(xiě)初稿,4. 同伴互賞我欣賞，我快樂(lè)！,請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì) 不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。 你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？ 根據(jù)worksheet上的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給同伴的習(xí)作打分。,請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下列評(píng)價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)作，然后給對(duì)方的習(xí)作打分。,修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號(hào)： 優(yōu)美句子； 漏詞

15、； 錯(cuò)處：； 刪除； 語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 G ； 人稱錯(cuò)誤 P； 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 T； 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤Sp,Show Time,What kind of TV shows do you like？ My brother and I like watching cartoons. We watch them on weekends when were not studying. We think they can make us happy and relaxed. Both of us expect to be cartoonists. My sister doesnt mind them. She thinks

16、that some cartoons are so successful that they even affect young peoples lifestyles. But my parents dont like watching cartoons. They think we shouldnt watch them too often, we should watch more talk shows and news because they are educational. My grandparents cant stand them. They think cartoons ar

17、e boring. They like Beijing Opera instead. The main reason is that they hope we can learn traditional cultures. What do you think of cartoons？Please tell me.,作者以不同人物為敘述線索，運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí), 緊扣提示, 過(guò)渡自然。,運(yùn)用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句等不同的句式逐一表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，拓展合理，首尾呼應(yīng)。,內(nèi)容充實(shí)，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)清晰,Do you like watching TV? Of all the TV shows, I

18、like cartoons best. So does my bother. After doing our homework, we enjoy watching them together. We think they are funny and relaxing. We want to be cartoonists when we grow up. My sister doesnt mind them because she thinks some cartoons are successful. Young people can learn something to form their life. However, my parents dont like them. In their opinions, news reports and talk shows are more educational so that we can know whats going on in the world. My grandparents cant stand them.