非謂語動詞在寫作中的運(yùn)用.ppt

Non- finite Verbs in writing 非謂語動詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming. To relax ourselves, our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. Having a barbecue is our choice. The next day, we set off early in the morning. We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing . When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having had a big dinner, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.,What do you think of it?,高考考試說明(寫作) 考生應(yīng)能 (1)清楚、連貫地傳遞信息，表達(dá)意思； (2)有效應(yīng)用所學(xué)語言知識。,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming. To relax ourselves, our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. Having a barbecue is our choice. The next day, we set off early in the morning. We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing . When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having had a big dinner, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.,1. Making our city greener is everyones duty. 2. The government is determined to continue the green program. 3. I find my hometown changed so much. 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution. 5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference.,5.定語,2. 賓語,4. 狀語,3.賓補(bǔ),1. 主語,找出非謂語動詞，并判斷成分,1. Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook.,Correction,1、狀語動作行為者與主句主語不一致,Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,Looked from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤,2、用動詞短語充當(dāng)主語、表語和賓語,2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.,In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.,寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤,3、主動、被動含義混淆,A team calling itself the supper cook.,3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook.,A team called the supper cook.,1. It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. 2. A girl climbed so hard that she lost her temper. She complained about the long walk. 3. The monitor has set a good example for us . Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,Connection, It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.,+,目的狀語, Lucy climbed so hard that she lost her temper. She complained about the long walk.,Lucy got so angry that she lost her temper, complaining about the long walk.,伴隨狀語,+, The monitor has set a good example for us . Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,Having set a good example for us, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,原因狀語,+,高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 。,Step1：拆分成幾個簡單句(中文),高考臨近。 保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。 它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。,Step2：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句,National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely., National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence1:,Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip: Try to use different ways to express.,（2011高考模擬） 要求：1. 用2- 3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性,Having a try,Having a try,It is necessary to have enough sleep . Having enough sleep is necessary.,It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.,1. beggar, lie, sleep 2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no attention to 3. stick out，trip over(絆倒) , angry ,A beggar,A beggar,Writing,2. Mr Li hurried home, paying no attention to a beggar.,1. The beggar lay on the ground, sleeping.,3. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping over Mr Li, which made him very angry.,Make an ending,Exchange and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria.,Pair work,A beggar One day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping Mr. Li over, which made him very angry. Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give hi