2020高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)35分寫作規(guī)范練(五)Word版含解析

1、35分寫作規(guī)范練（五）寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌 寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯 誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。2019 豫南九校聯(lián)考My grandmother is 73 year old. She is a

2、 great reader, but she reads only newspapers. He has a very good habit of readi ng the n ewspaper daily. After her morning housework, she sat dow n to read the n ewspaper for at least an hour. She does nt like to be disturb ing at that time. In fact she is so much updated that every one else in the

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6、r改為years year作“歲”講時為可數(shù)名詞，此前有數(shù)詞73 修飾，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將 year改為years He改為She 此處代指grandmother,應(yīng)用代詞 She,故將He 改為 She。 sat改為sits綜觀全文可知，本文主要介紹的是一般情況，應(yīng) 用一般現(xiàn)在時，故將sat改為sits。 disturbing改為disturbed disturb與其邏輯主語 She之間為被動 關(guān)系,應(yīng)用被動形式,故將 disturbing 改為 disturbed。 刪除 much “soadj./adv.that.”為固定搭配,意為“如此以至于”，且much常用于修飾形容詞的比較級或不可

7、數(shù)名詞,此處 much 多余,故刪除 much。 在 relies 后加 on rely 是不及物動詞, 其后常接 on 后再接賓語, rely on表示“依賴；依靠”，故在relies后加on。 are改為is 分析句子成分可知，本句中 My grandmothers habit of reading newspapersf乍主語，其核心詞為 habit,為單數(shù)概念，謂語動 詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式，故將are改為is。 especial改為especially根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示“尤其是；特 別是”，作狀語，應(yīng)用副詞 especially,故將especial改為especially。 hardl

8、y改為hard根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示“因為他們都努力工 作，沒有時間讀報紙”。hardly意為“幾乎不”；hard意為“努力地”， 故將 hardly 改為 hard。 few改為little time作“時間”講時，為不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)用little 修飾； few 修飾可數(shù)名詞,故將 few 改為 little 。第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá) （滿分 25 分）2019昆明市診斷假定你是李華，你的好友Peter在你校上周舉辦 的“美麗校園”攝影比賽中獲獎了。 請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封郵件：1 表示祝賀；2你對獲獎作品的看法；3希望他分享攝影經(jīng)驗。1 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫De

9、ar Peter,參考范文：Dear Pete,Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.Your work stands out in the competition, which is quite representative of all works and close to the theme reflecting our school culture. Besides, skills of taking photos are also in the prior position. In a word, youve done well in all the required aspects. So youve got the prize and I fe