【英語(yǔ)】初中英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編常見(jiàn)題型及答題技巧及練習(xí)題(含答案)含解析

1、【英語(yǔ)】初中英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編常見(jiàn)題型及答題技巧及練習(xí)題( 含答案 ) 含解析一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編1（ 云南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)A Special Day提示：在每個(gè)人的生活中，總會(huì)有些特別的日子。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A Special Day寫一”篇英語(yǔ)短文，記敘你特別的一天。要求： 1、語(yǔ)言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60 個(gè)。2、文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。3、請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在試題卷上無(wú)效?！敬鸢浮?A Special DayToday is my father s birthday, which is such a special day for me,

2、 so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he wa

3、s very happy andpraised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如such a special day， give hima surprise， a lot ， make a dish， want to do ， with the help of ， return home 等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu) My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. 和 Toda

4、y is my father s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that Ican make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lo

5、t.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2（ 江蘇中考模擬）近年來(lái)，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生開(kāi)始使用手機(jī)來(lái)完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app 學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開(kāi)設(shè)專欄討

6、論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study onapps? ”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反 者學(xué)生 可以 常利用手機(jī)操 英 。自從使用手機(jī)以來(lái)， 力 差。一個(gè)理由 （ 1-2 句）一個(gè)理由 （ 1-2 句）你喜 在用app 學(xué) ？ 出你的理由（ 2-3 句）1.短文需包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求 句通 ，意思 ；2.省略號(hào)后展開(kāi)合理想象；3. 數(shù) 90 個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi) 已 出，不 入 數(shù)；4.短文必 寫在答 卷 的位置上，寫在 卷其他部位無(wú)效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are becoming

7、 more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study.【答案】 Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exe

8、rcises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.But other students don t like to muse.Theirthe eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results intheir study.I think it is useful for us to

9、 use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【 解】 干， 是屬于看法 的作文，那么在寫 作文 ，首先要分 寫出支持和反 兩方面的看法及原因，最后要 明自己的 點(diǎn)看法來(lái) 行 。亮點(diǎn) 短 ：for us to do sthpractice doing sth. 做某事； 某人來(lái) ，做某事是怎 的；learn by oneself in a proper way自學(xué)； lead to以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞健?致；it is

10、 adj.亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. 用程序上有很多 ， 使我 更容易自己學(xué) 。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他 使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，他 的 力 得更差了。they can t help playingwith other apps while studying. 他們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)時(shí)忍不住玩其他的

11、應(yīng)用程序。 Cant help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。3（ 江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國(guó)交流學(xué)生月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以Neil，你在南京Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)Neil 的名義，用英語(yǔ)給Sunshine MiddleSchool 校長(zhǎng)寫一封感謝信。?what youve learned about Chinese culture?how the teachers and students help you?what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80

12、左右，感謝信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing,I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing.

13、I enjoyed myselfvery much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P .E. teacher.It is reallyamazing! I also know something about Chinese paper- cutting in Art lessons.Though I canChinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare al

14、ways ready tohelp me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to makedumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful forwhat you have done for us. t speak【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以Neil 的名義，用英語(yǔ)給Sunshine Midd

15、le School校長(zhǎng)寫一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用

16、到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。4（ 北京中考模擬）假如你是李華, 正在美國(guó)格林中學(xué)做交換生?為了讓更多的人了解中華文化,你打算向?qū)W校申請(qǐng)建立一個(gè)社團(tuán)（Chinese Culture Club） ?請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給學(xué)校負(fù)責(zé)老師 Mr. Lee 寫一份申請(qǐng) , 內(nèi)容包括建立該社團(tuán)的原因及社團(tuán)的主要活動(dòng)安排?提示詞語(yǔ) : spread, exp

17、erience, Beijing Opera, chopsticks, speech提示問(wèn)題 : ? Why do you want to start the club? What activities will you have in the club?【答案】 Dear Mr. Lee,I m writing to apply for starting a Chinese Culture Club.As we know, more and more people are interested in Chinese culture, so a Chinese Culture Club can

18、 be a good chance for our students to learn more. In this club, students will work together to complete different projects. As a result, we can understand each other better and develop friendships.We will have a variety of activities for students to experience Chinese culture, such as performing Bei

19、jing Opera, practising Chinese calligraphy, having paper-cutting competitions and so on. Moreover, we ll hold some salons for students to share their life experiences in China and America. I believe everyone in the club will benefit a lot.I hope this application will be approved. Thank you for your

20、consideration.Regards,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下中華文化。所提供的材料中列舉了你打算向?qū)W校申請(qǐng)建立一個(gè)社團(tuán)（Chinese Culture Club）。主要從建立該社團(tuán)的原因及社團(tuán)的主要活動(dòng)安排這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄n this

21、 club, students will work together to complete different projects. 在這個(gè)俱樂(lè)部，學(xué)生們將共同完成不同的項(xiàng)目。to complete different projects是動(dòng)詞不定式，做work together的目的?！靖叻志湫投縄 believe everyone in the club will benefit a lot.我相信俱樂(lè)部里的每個(gè)人都會(huì)受益匪淺。句子 everyone in the club will benefit a lot.是賓語(yǔ)從句。5（ 寧夏中考模擬）書面表達(dá)難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束。你們班計(jì)劃舉行

22、“告別初中生活 ”的主題班會(huì)。假如你是班長(zhǎng)，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 時(shí)間： 6 月 26 日下午 3:00.2. 地點(diǎn) :六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：1） 對(duì)老師用話語(yǔ)表達(dá)謝意；2）與同學(xué)交流自己的將來(lái)的夢(mèng)想；3）師生合影，互贈(zèng)留言等等。參考詞匯： look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos.備注：詞數(shù)100 左右，通知開(kāi)頭已擬好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the

23、end._【答案】 Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on

24、the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear tea

25、chers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, wemay give our wishes to each other.Dont be late! Thats all. Thank

26、you!【解析】【詳解】In order to ， look back at ， begoing to ， have a class meeting， say goodbye to ， talk about ， the dreams of ， take some photos ， in the end ， each other ， be late 等。而復(fù)雜單句結(jié)構(gòu) In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of Ju

27、ne 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dearteachers.和 Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理

28、后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6（ 四川中考模擬）旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請(qǐng)以“ Travelling為題”，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖 Sayings 部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?. 詞數(shù)： 100 詞左右；【答案】例文Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard

29、about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime.

30、Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如one of the best ways ， learnmuch， an exact picture of ， a careful observer ， seeing is beli

31、eving， no matter ， a lot 等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. 和 If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educa

32、ted you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. 等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7（ 揚(yáng)州市竹西中學(xué)中考模擬）寫作“

33、百善孝為先 ”,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正在舉辦以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你以 “We should honor ourparents 為”題 ,寫一篇短文參加征文活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:What do you often do for your parents?Why should we honor our parents?How should we honor our parents?要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)： 100 詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。W

34、e should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition ofChina._【答案】 We should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I oftenhelp my parents do housework in my spare time.I think its our duty to honor our

35、parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so its important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.N

36、ext, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.Wed better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.Its also important to tell our parents we love them.【解析】【分析】本 要求考生以“我 尊敬我 的父母” 合所 的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫一篇作文【 解】 是篇材料作文，主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已 ，所以考生要 著要點(diǎn)， 行寫作，不要 漏，當(dāng)然 序可以適當(dāng) 整。 篇作文又句型亮點(diǎn)，例如：As we know，

37、 眾所周知； .I think itsour duty to do sth 等等，其次文章 構(gòu)也比 清晰，例如第二段的 接 ，F(xiàn)irst of all，Then，Next，使用的 而恰當(dāng)。82月20日，中央宣 部授予北京榜 秀群體“”（ 北京中考模 ）年 代楷模 稱號(hào)。 代楷模充分體 “ 國(guó)、敬 、 信、友善 ”的價(jià) 準(zhǔn) 。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“”向 代楷模學(xué) 主 的英 征文活 。假如你是李 ， 用英 寫一篇短文投稿， 生活中你 怎么做，以及 做的意 。提示 ： pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示 ： What should you do in

38、 your daily life? Why do you do so?As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. S

39、econd, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】【 解】 干解 ： 目屬于 用文寫作，但寫作 要按照 用文格式寫，寫作 承接短文開(kāi) ，具體寫出怎

40、 做以及 做的意 。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述具體怎么做時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)： protect the environment ； pick up the rubbish ； behave well ； be kind to sb ；more andmore beautiful 。句型： By doing so, our world will become more and more beautifulrecycle things in our daily life, and so on 。； we can pic

41、k up the rubbish,9（ 河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小 ,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)。 ”我們大多數(shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題用英語(yǔ)寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)得引以自豪一件事情。要求 :1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2.詞數(shù) 80 左右?！敬鸢浮?One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my

42、love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I triedmany times but failed before sh e came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn t controlthe temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn t give up, and finally Isucceeded. Watching the deli

43、cious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開(kāi)放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過(guò)的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開(kāi)頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開(kāi)頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過(guò)

44、程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過(guò)的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描

45、寫了事情的過(guò)程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了 狀 從句、并列句、非 等復(fù) 句式 構(gòu)。短文中 好的句型和短 有：Iwill never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dis

46、hes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn t control the temperature of oil and got several eggsburned 、 Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10 （ 西 大附中中考模 ） 面表達(dá)三年初中生活即將 束，在你學(xué) 和成 的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓勵(lì)，支持和幫助。 然你就要和一些人 再 了，但 有些人是你一生都 以忘 的。 以I ll

47、 never forget_ ， 你最 忘的人。老 、好友，家人，同桌 是基本信息：（ 1） Who is he/she?（2） What kind of person is he/she?（3） What did he/she do for you ?（4） Why is he/she unforgettable?參考 ： loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent,optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful要求：1.

48、全 ；2.文中不得出 真 姓名和地名3. 介 他/她的具體情況以及 你的影響；4. 數(shù)不少于70 。I ll never forget _【答案】 I ll never forget my English teacherIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am

49、in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help,

50、 I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I m very thankful for all that she has done for me.【解析】【 解】本文屬于 作文， 你最 忘的人。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用 ，上下文意思 ，符合 ，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn) 明： 是一篇 秀的作文，很好的完成了 定的任 ， 言表達(dá)符合英 慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如help sb with, be in trouble,encourage sb to do, with one s help, m

51、ake great progress, become interested以in,及oncecheerup。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用

52、自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11 （ 山東中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)你的的筆友 Tom 居住在北京，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80 詞左右）時(shí)間來(lái)到中國(guó)已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。喜好過(guò)去喜歡看科幻小說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在對(duì)中國(guó)古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了 2 本名著。工作情況早晨 8 點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。夢(mèng)想去很多不同的地方，了解中國(guó)文化，品嘗中國(guó)美食。I have a pen friend named Tom.【答案】 I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the F