高中英語書面表達(dá)集 建議信

1、參考醫(yī)學(xué)高中英語書面表達(dá)集 建議信 (Letter of suggestion)一、簡介 (1) 建議信寫作注意事項, 寫作目的是提出建議或忠告。觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。 (2) 寫作方法 首段：說明目的，注意語氣。 主體：提出具體建議；首先肯定優(yōu)點，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則變成投訴信；經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對方感受，時時提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文，因為內(nèi)容與議論文相似。尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，易于接受。 (3) 寫作流程圖提出建議介紹詳情、說明原因說明寫信的目的 提出希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)一key words and phrases1. some advice, some

2、suggestions, 2.learn from3.take sth into consideration= take sth into account4.in addition, 5. I am sorry to hear that6. If I were you, I would 7. I learn that you have trouble in 8. widen their eyes. 9. especially for us students. 10. A majority of students 11. What is known to us is that 12. for t

3、he reason that二key sentences1. Thank you for trusting me and Id like to give you some advice.2. I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration.3. I am sorry to learn about your problem and Id like to give you some advice.寫作指導(dǎo)首段：表明寫作意圖，陳述事由。It is my pleasure to offer you some adv

4、ice on .I am writing to express my views concerning .主體：提出建議并闡述理由。I would like to suggest that . If I were you, I would .In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures .I think it would be more beneficial if you could .我建議Id like to suggest that In my opinion I would like to make a r

5、ecommendation that I am writing to advise you to If I were you, I would I think it would be more beneficial if you could I feel that it would be beneficial if結(jié)尾：希望收信人接受建議。注意措辭要有禮貌，使對方容易接受。1. In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. 2. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope yo

6、u will consider my suggestions.3. I believe you will take my advice into account / consideration.4. I hope you will find these suggestions practical / useful / helpful.5. I do hope you will consider my suggestions.6. I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered.7. 請仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。 P

7、lease take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.8. 英語建議信格式-結(jié)尾常用句式I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.I would be ready to discuss about t

8、his matter with you to further details.Whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！I am looking forward to your reply.范文一：假如你叫李華，最近一名手臂有殘疾的美國學(xué)生Bruce和父母來中國定居，轉(zhuǎn)到你們班，他很擔(dān)心同學(xué)們會嘲笑他，因此他感到很沮喪。請你用英語寫信給他。1. 表達(dá)歡迎新同學(xué)的心情2. 點出對方的問題，并給出你的建議3. 告訴他同學(xué)們都愿意做他的朋友Dear Bruce, I am glad that you have become

9、 a member of our class. However, I find you are always depressed these days. I may know the reason why you are so worried . In fact, there is no need for you to be worried. The teachers and students are all friendly , so you neednt be afraid of being laughed at . In addition, you can communicate wit

10、h others as much as possible, then you will surely find your worry is really unnecessary. Having a disability does not mean life is not satisfying. Do you think so? Comparing with many other disabled people, you may find you are not that unfortunate. Do you think so? We are all ready to be your frie

11、nds and wish you happy in our class.據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會（ACS）決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹 2.得知的情況 3.表示鼓勵 4.打算為她做什么 5. 祝她早日康復(fù)注意：1.信的格式已為你寫好2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實情況。3.詞數(shù)100左右。4.請在答題卡上作答。Dear Amy,I am a student from Xinhua Middle S

12、chool. 不唯一Dear Amy,I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you

13、will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，首先對題目進(jìn)行審清，先對自己進(jìn)行自我介紹，并表達(dá)得知她的遭遇后

14、同樣感到很傷心。再對所知的情況進(jìn)行描述，將表示鼓勵的話語表達(dá)出來，可以使用諸如inspire sb to take the steps towards future life.鼓勵某人朝著未來的生活邁進(jìn)。這樣的話語進(jìn)行行文，并表達(dá)相信她一定能成功。最后，說出自己如何幫助她，可用上諸如try ones best to do sth 盡某人最大的努力做某事，這樣的表達(dá)來起句子，并表達(dá)對她的祝福。點評：對于應(yīng)用文寫作是高考?？嫉奈捏w，把握好各個應(yīng)用文的寫作格式也是平時學(xué)習(xí)過程中必須注意的，同時平時學(xué)習(xí)時多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬能句型的積累，高中作文寫作，要注意在寫作之前，首先對題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并

15、在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會錯的。寫的過程中，多注意靈活使用定語從句，包括非限制性定語從句。要熟悉英美人寫文章的習(xí)慣，遇到專有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)唯一性。平時的英語作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達(dá)，考試時才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。Dear Amy,I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung

16、cancer.At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates a

17、nd relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.May you recover soon.Yours,Li Hua試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信。要點都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點包括：自我介紹，得知的情況，表示鼓勵，打算為她做什么，祝她早日康復(fù)，審題時注意時態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的I hope yo

18、u will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.使用了no matter how引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.用了非限制性定語從句。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。點評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。Dear Amy I am LiHua from XinHua Middle School,I am aboy a