【英語(yǔ)】英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)練習(xí)題含答案及解析

1、【英語(yǔ)】英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)練習(xí)題含答案及解析一、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1如今，很多城市出 了一種 色出行方式共享 （便捷而 受青 ，但同 也引 了一些 。 你根據(jù)提示以bike-sharing ），它因 保、Bike-sharing 寫一篇英 短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建 。要點(diǎn)提示：Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減 交通 力）AdvantagesTake exerciseProblemsThrow away, damage （ ） , be stolenAdviceCivilized（文明的） , follow the ru

2、les, take good care of注意：1. 短文 包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng) ，以使行文 ；2. 文中不得出 真 的人名、校名及地名；3. 數(shù)： 80-100（文章開(kāi) 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities._【答案】 Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and

3、 more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere. 【高分句型一】 Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing help

4、s people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health. （ ） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen. （ ）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the

5、 rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful. 【高分句型二】（建 ）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，.如 : Its known that ithas many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, its very

6、convenient for people to go somewhere. ， Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion, 等?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以 “Bike-sharing ”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題；最后，根據(jù)問(wèn)題給出個(gè)人建議。2 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開(kāi)，你的印度朋友Danny 收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道，

7、對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信給Danny。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長(zhǎng)（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點(diǎn)）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯 : civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are intere

8、sted in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization

9、（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival,

10、 Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They arealso called “ three major Chinese holidays ” ine theChinacustoms.Here ofar eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀） . Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all

11、learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you s

12、oon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny 寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。【詳解】文章需要介紹下中國(guó)的文化。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀 ”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時(shí)目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is

13、one of theoldest and longest civilizations in the world中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀），中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。3書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中

14、不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮?Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes.

15、 Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is agood idea to buy something useful for our parents or teache

16、rs so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)

17、越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，不能逐字翻譯。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。【點(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子： In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following

18、 things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. 這些給文章增色不少。4近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅 ”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文 ,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他 ,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :1.課堂上認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講,做好筆記 ;2.不要害怕犯錯(cuò)誤,與同學(xué)們用中文交流;3.課下經(jīng)常閱讀中文雜志、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目;4.經(jīng)常用中

19、文給外國(guó)筆友寫電子郵件等。注意 :1.詞數(shù) 80-100;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 ;3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】 Dear Sam,Im happy to he

20、ar from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. Third, youd better read Chinese magazines or

21、 newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【

22、詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam 寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過(guò)審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先應(yīng)和 Sam 先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來(lái)給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章

23、敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給 Sam 寫了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與 Sam 之間的問(wèn)候以及引出 Sam 學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second， Third， lastly 等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正

24、確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher andtake notes carefully in class. 、 Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese 、 I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 In a word, if

25、 you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well. 等等。5書(shū)面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛(ài)的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛(ài)的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（ n）_ Ihave ”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛(ài)的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求： 1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80 詞左右。A（ n） _ I have_【答案】 A（ n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he

26、like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a

27、little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box

28、to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy

29、 gun and sayyou, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth （用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（ small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，

30、準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier ），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。6自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧Ｌ崾驹~語(yǔ)： powerful ， h

31、appy， believe in ， keep doing提示問(wèn)題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】 It s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to u

32、s.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then Ibreathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and fin

33、ished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that

34、we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ；

35、 Then ； From then on, 等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。7書(shū)面表達(dá)為了配合 “足球進(jìn)校園 ”活動(dòng)，你們班開(kāi)展了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。歷史悠久，深受喜愛(ài)常 識(shí)世界杯 4 年舉行一次男生女生皆可參加好 處利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1 點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬（至少1 點(diǎn)）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；2.短文中不得

36、真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西MessiDear classmates,I m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.Thank you for your attention.【答案】 Dear classmates，I m very excited to hear that China will build 20， 000 football-themed schools by 2020 Football has a very long history It

37、 is liked by people all over the world The World Cup takes place every four years Playing football has lots of advantages First ，both boys and girls can take part in it Second， it helps develop team spirit What s more， playing football is good for our health I m a football fanMessi is my hero He has

38、 a gift for playing football My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi I hope China will hold the World Cup some day Thank you for your attention 【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來(lái)寫：介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處；說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的

39、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言精煉，像第二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop teamspirit. What s more, playingotballfois good for our health.等等句子，簡(jiǎn)潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、不定式作表語(yǔ)等等語(yǔ)法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了 firs

40、t, second 等使得短文層次清楚。8 中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)，代代相傳。近期各校都在開(kāi)展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以 “弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化 ”為題征文，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國(guó)成語(yǔ)故事 ”活動(dòng)并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。提示詞語(yǔ)：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問(wèn)題： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity?

41、What do you think of it?【答案】 The activity of“Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our schoolk. last weeIn order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each

42、 story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on t

43、he activity. 【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)： in order to ，take part in ， lots of ， learn from ， in the process of ， Whats more， have agood time 。句型：被動(dòng)句型。9 假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友 Ja

44、ck給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬?guó)學(xué)生舉辦的漢語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的愿望，希望你告知活動(dòng)舉辦的具體時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)安排以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問(wèn)題： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chine se Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that y

45、ou are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this sum

46、mer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deep

47、ly.What s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：該題要求寫作體裁為書(shū)信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I 進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書(shū)信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)