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1、Writing 1(2018杭州) 假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住濱海市人民路1號。你在美國旅行期間不慎遺失錢包,曾 向賓館詢問。 以下是賓館的答復郵件,請你閱讀后進行回復,詞數(shù)80左右。 A組 20142018年浙江中考題組 五年中考 答案 寫作要點 1.本文是應用文。 2.寫作時應使用第一人稱,時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。 3.寫作中應包含何時入住賓館、所住房間和對失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和電話 號碼。 參考范文 Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on J

2、uly 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 13612345

3、67 if needed. Thanks again. Yours, Li Ping 精彩語句 1.精美詞匯 remember doing記得做過 2.出彩結構 Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China.?(拜托您 ) 注意:文中若出現(xiàn)“Jack”以外的人名或任何學校名稱,該作文得分不超過12分。 Weekend or Not? Writing 2(2018溫州) 如今,國內外很多孩子在父母的安排下沒有了自己的周末,如下圖中的Jack。請分析圖中的這 種現(xiàn)象并談談你的看法,

4、以Weekend or Not?為題寫一篇約110詞的英語短文向Parents雜志投 稿,讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章能有所啟發(fā)。 答案 寫作提示 1.本文是看圖作文。 2.寫作時應以第三人稱為主,時態(tài)應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。 3.寫作中應先描述Jack周末的基本情況,而后分析現(xiàn)象,談論自己的看法。 參考范文 Weekend or Not? Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sportsoccer. Still, his parents are pushing him

5、to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot. Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learni

6、ng anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life. I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends. 精彩語句 1.精美詞匯 make full use of充分利用 as a result結果是 be stressed out緊張,飽受壓力 at weekends在周末 2.出彩結構 Still, his parents

7、 are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.(使用定語從 句) Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. (it是形式賓語,真正的賓語是動詞不定式短語) What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.(連接詞的使用) Writing 3(2

8、018寧波) 今年5月11日,你校組織了一次社會實踐活動,部分學生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(見導圖一),其余學 生選擇去了科技博物館(見導圖二)。請根據(jù)你所選擇的實踐活動寫一篇英語日記,記錄當天 的經(jīng)歷和感受。 注意:(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導圖的所有要點,并適當發(fā)揮; (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名; (3)詞數(shù):80100。日記格式及首句已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip. 答案 寫作要點 1.本文是應用文。 2.寫作時應使用第一人稱,時態(tài)應為一般過去時。 3.寫作中應按照導圖介紹人物、出行方式、活動,并補充自己對活動

9、的感受,合理拓展。 參考范文1 Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning. The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excite

10、ment and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were pick- ing, we ate a lot. How sweet they were! I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future! 參考范文2 Friday, May 11th Today I had a sc

11、hool trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Muse- um by subway at 7:00. As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. Its unbelievable that technology has

12、 progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends. I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again! 精彩語句 1.精美詞匯 set off出發(fā) with excitement興奮

13、地 be amazed to do驚訝地做 in such a rapid way以如此快速的方式 as soon as一就 2. 出彩結構 Its unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm.(the minute一就) How sweet they were!(感嘆句的使用) Writing 4(2018金華) 在即將舉行的中學生國際文化交流活動中,你將代表學校介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,請你從所給的 卡片

14、中任選一張,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹該節(jié)日。 注意: 1.發(fā)言稿中必須包含卡片上的信息,并適當發(fā)揮; 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息; 3.詞數(shù)80100; 4.文章的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Thats all. Thanks for listening. 答案 寫作要點 1.本文是應用文。 2.寫作時應使用一般現(xiàn)在時。 3.寫作中注意包含時間、活動、意義,在列提綱時注意把必要的活動和意義補充完整。 參考范文1 Ladies and gentlemen, Wel

15、come to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a

16、big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting? Thats a

17、ll. Thanks for listening. 參考范文2 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in

18、 the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At

19、 the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting? Thats all. Thanks for listening. 精彩語句 1.精美詞匯 allow sb. to do sth.允許某人做某事 fall in January or February恰巧在一月或者二月 their elders 他們的長輩 have a bright new start 擁有一個全新的開始 as well as也,又 2.出彩結構 The Mid-Autumn Festival usua

20、lly falls in September or October. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(現(xiàn)在 分詞作伴隨狀語) At the same time,they will express wishes and hopes for them. Writing 5(2017杭州) 答案 寫作提示 1.本文時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.文章應對來信的兩個問題進行答復,一是table manners,二是推薦杭州的景點。 參考范文 Hi Armino

21、, Glad to hear from you again. As you mentioned in your email, there are indeed some table manners in China. For example, we are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. And its impolite to point at anyone with chopsticks. As for places of interest, I suggest you go

22、 to the Hangzhou National Tea Museum, where you could watch tea art performances and drink tea. Im looking forward to seeing you! Li Ping 精美語句 1.精美詞匯 be supposed to do sth.應該做某事;hear from 收到的信 2.出彩結構 As you mentioned in your email.(as引導定語從句) Its impolite to do. (“it is+形容詞+不定式短語”句型) Writing 6(2017溫州

23、) 假如你是李華,就讀于Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School。你想去美國的Washington International School(WIS)讀高中。現(xiàn)在你需要給對方學校寫一封簡明扼要、有說服力的自薦信,爭取讓學 校錄取你。 參考要點: 個人信息 學習成績 愛好、能力 要求: (1)不能出現(xiàn)真實的個人身份信息; (2)詞數(shù): 110左右。開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am looking forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 答案 寫作提示 1.本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)

24、,要寫清楚個人信息。 2.介紹自己喜愛的學科及成績。 3.寫出自己的愛好和能力。 參考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports,but maths and science are my favourite. I like Chinese, English and music as well. I have won several

25、prizes in various competitions, including a second prize in an international maths competition. I have joined in three one-month-tour-study programs in the US, learnt a lot about American cul- ture and made many friends there. So WIS is my first choice to study abroad. Although I am not the best now

26、, I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me. I am looking forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 精美語句 1.精美詞匯 make every effort 盡最大的努力 2.出彩結構 I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. (動詞不定式作定語是英語表達中的一種特色) enjoy doing 喜歡做 Advice for studen

27、tsAdvice for parents keep healthy join clubs develop your study skills . encourage.more not compare.with allow.to make decisions . Writing 7(2017寧波) 三年的初中生活讓你收獲滿滿。校英語報邀你寫一篇短文,給即將升入九年級的學弟學妹或 他們的父母提一些建議。請你結合自己的學習經(jīng)歷選擇其中一個對象,闡述你的觀點。 注意: (1)短文必須包括你所選擇一方的所有要點,并適當發(fā)揮; (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名; (3)詞數(shù):80100; (4)短文首句

28、僅供參考,不計入總詞數(shù)。 短文首句:How time flies! Now (you/your children)are students of Grade 9. 答案 寫作提示 1.本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 2.覆蓋答題要點。 3.行為連貫,連接詞使用恰當,指代清晰。 參考范文 Possible version 1: How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. Here Id like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and won

29、derful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so dont forget to exercise every day. Second, youd better join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. Third, you will be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, there are many ways for yo

30、u to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies. I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. Possible version 2: How time flies! Now your children are students of Grade 9. Here Id like to tell you something that will make their sc

31、hool life more wonderful. First of all, it is important to encourage your children more so that they will be more confident. Second, please do not compare your children with others, because if you push them too hard, they will feel stressed out. Third, the children should be allowed to make their ow

32、n decisions. There is no need to get everything ready for them. Besides, being a good listener will help you get along well with your children. I hope your childrens dreams will come true with your help. 深度解析題目大膽創(chuàng)新,突出兩個關鍵詞:“自主選擇”、“自由發(fā)揮”,使不同層次的學生 都能表達自己的真實感受,讓不同層次的學生都有發(fā)揮的空間。 精美語句 1.精美詞匯 forget to do

33、sth.忘記做某事 make great progress取得巨大的進步 compare.with.把和做比較 make ones own decision做好自己的決定 2.出彩結構 Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.而且,有很多減輕你壓力的方式,比如聽音樂、和朋友閑逛、 看電影。 注意: (1)短文可結合圖片信息或自身經(jīng)歷,作適當發(fā)揮; (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的

34、姓名和校名; (3)詞數(shù):80100,短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。 短文首句:Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”. Writing 8(2017湖州) 英語課上,老師組織大家就以下兩幅圖進行“To change or not”的話題討論,請用英語闡述你 對此話題的看法。 答案 寫作提示 1.本文要恰當運用時態(tài),對一般事實的論述用一般現(xiàn)在時,而對自己的經(jīng)歷要用一般過去時。 2.書寫規(guī)范整潔。 3.用詞恰當,句型變化多樣。 參考范文 Last week, we had a discussion a

35、bout the topic“To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems. For example, when meeting with the weight problem, some people decide to take exercise to lose weight while others think they cant do anything about it. When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty wi

36、th my spoken English. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day. Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot. In a word, facing problems, we should take actions to change. Surely it will make a great differ- ence. 深度解析本文是一篇夾敘夾議的文章。語言

37、運用中要注意時態(tài)的結構和形式,特別要避免 be動詞與實義動詞的混淆。在寫作前,請務必將答題要點歸納為提綱,這樣就不會遺漏要點 了。 精美語句 1.精美詞匯 deal with處理 lose weight減重 try ones best to do sth.盡某人最大的努力去做某事 2.出彩結構 When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English.當我在七年級的時候,我的口語 有很大困難。 Writing 9(2016杭州) 請查看你校英語節(jié)安排表(Schedule),給外教老師Dave寫一封80詞左右的電子郵件,告知 他

38、調整的內容并給出你認為恰當?shù)睦碛伞?Schedule for English Day DateTimeActivitiesPlace June 21st13:0014:30 12:3014:00 English Talk ShowArt Theater 14:0015:30English Speech ContestLibrary 15:4016:40English CornerSchool Hall Playground 答案 寫作要點 1.英語節(jié)調整的內容有兩個:English Talk Show的時間;English Corner的地點。 2.恰當?shù)睦碛伞?3.對調整表示道歉,并邀請外教

39、參加。 參考范文 Hi Dave,Im sorry to inform you that there are two changes to the schedule for English Day. First, there will be a very important meeting after lunch in our school, so English Talk Show will be put off by 30 minutes. That is, it starts at 13:00 and ends at 14:30. Second, the place of English

40、 Corner will be changed from Playground to School Hall because the weather report says its going to rain that afternoon. Please come and join us on time. Li Ping 精彩語句 Im sorry to inform you that.我很遺憾地通知您 First第一 Second第二 Writing 10(2016寧波) “傳遞愛心,服務他人”是文明社會所倡導的理念。獅子會(the Lions)就是一個以此為宗 旨的國際性服務團隊。楊敏是獅

41、子會的一名成員,多年來她一直樂于助人。請根據(jù)提示用英 語寫一篇短文,向?？腅nglish World欄目投稿,簡要介紹楊敏的事跡,然后談談你的觀點和打 算。 要求: 1.短文內容必須包含表格所提供的要點,可適當發(fā)揮; 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名; 3.詞數(shù):80100(短文開頭已給出,僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù))。 短文開頭:From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most. 答案 寫作要點 1.本文要記敘

42、和議論相結合,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。 2.第一段介紹Yang Min助人為樂的事情。觀點包括:(1) 她是獅子會的成員。(2)她幫助他人多 年。(3)經(jīng)常去養(yǎng)老院幫忙。(4)在雨天借給他人雨傘和雨衣。 3.第二段表明自己的觀點,并表明自己的計劃。 4.語句通順,行文流暢。 參考范文 From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the per- sons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has been

43、 helping others for many years. She goes to the old peoples home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free. Im deeply moved by her story.Im going to start with small things around me. I plan to give

44、 books and clothes to children in poor villages. Whats more, Ill ask my parents and more friends to join me. Small action can make a big difference. Lets help those who need help! 精彩語句As a member of.作為的一員 be deeply moved被深深感動 make a difference產(chǎn)生不同,有影響 Writing 11(2016溫州) 假如你是Lingling,學校根據(jù)下表中新西蘭來溫暑期交流

45、師生的意愿,決定安排他們去100公里 外的許村游玩一天,但自行車來回路程需要89小時,權衡利弊,需調整這項內容,請你發(fā)郵件 給對方帶隊老師Mr. Black做好說明、溝通工作。 要求:(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息; (2)文本長度:110詞左右。開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)。) Dear Mr. Black, Im Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferences, but Im afraid w

46、ell have to make some changes. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Lingling 答案 寫作提示 1.首先要對活動、地點、用時和交通等情況進行描述。 2.其次表明自己對安排進行了哪些調整以及調整的理由,符合邏輯。 3.語句通順,行文流暢。 參考范文 Dear Mr. Black, Im Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferenc

47、es, but Im afraid well have to make some changes. Well visit a mountain village called Xucun, which is very famous for its old houses, fantastic sights and delicious food. Im sure you will like it. However, it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike. Even if we set out at 7:00 a.

48、m., well get there at about 11:30. Going around the beautiful, cultural places, including some old houses all with a history of over 500 years, will take us at least 2 to 3 hours. Having lunch (lo- cal food and drinks) takes another hour. Whats more, its very hot here in summer. So we think taking a

49、 bus there will be a much better choice. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Lingling 寫作分析本文具有讀寫結合的特點,試題呈現(xiàn)了“一日游”的安排和需要調整的內容,難點 在于考生首先要讀懂表格,明確需要調整的內容,并對調整寫出符合邏輯的理由。 精彩語句Im sure you will like it.我確信你會喜歡的。 be famous for因而著名 whats more而且 大部分學生愿意1.方便與同學交流; 2.學會照顧自己; 一些學生不愿意1.在家能休息得更好; 2.與家人相處時間更長

50、; 你 Writing 12(2016紹興) 針對大部分高中要求學生住校的現(xiàn)狀,英語課上同學們就“Would you like to live in school?” 這一話題展開調查。請你根據(jù)下表內容,用英語寫一篇短文,匯報調查結果,表達你的意愿并闡 述理由。 注意:1.短文必須包括表中所有內容,可適當增加細節(jié); 2.你的理由至少兩條; 3.詞數(shù):80100; 4.短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯:方便的 convenient 短文首句:Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and heres the

51、 result. 答案 寫作提示 1.匯報調查結果:大部分同學愿意,原因:方便與同學交流;學會照顧自己;一些學生不愿意, 原因:在家能休息得更好;與家人相處時間更長。 2.表達你的意愿并闡述自己的理由。 參考范文 Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and heres the result. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Als

52、o, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way. However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on bet- ter with them. As for me, Id like to live in

53、school. Thats because I can spend more time on study. Whats m ore, its a wonderful experience to live with other classmates. 精彩語句prefer to更喜歡 besides而且 As for me.對于我來說 City ACity B Flying2 hours4 hours Temperature3018 Hotel Things to do Food Writing 13(2015杭州) 根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。內容須包括:對下表中關于這兩個城市(Ci

54、ty A和 City B)的全部信息進行比較,分析利弊,確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。 In my opinion, is the better place to spend my summer holiday. 答案 寫作要點 1.本文屬于說明性的文章,主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.內容要點:確定暑假旅游的目的地;比較兩個城市的信息,分析利弊。 3.參考詞匯:flying,temperature,hotel,things to do,food 參考范文 In my opinion,City A is the better place to spend my summer holida

55、y.Although the temperature there is higher,the hotel is less comfortable,and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B,I still choose City A.The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities.Besides,it tak

56、es us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time.I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience. In my opinion,City B is the better place to spend my summer holiday.Although it takes me two more hours to fly there on an airplane,and I dont have many things to do,I still choose

57、 City B.The most important reason is that City B has better weather,not too hot or too cold.Besides,the hotel there is more comfortable and the food is more delicious than that in City A.All these make my holiday more relaxing.I hope the coming summer holiday will be an unforgettable experience. 深度解

58、析審讀所給信息,弄清楚所要表達的內容要點,然后對所給的信息進行梳理,可根據(jù)內 容要點適當調整寫作順序,使文章行文連貫。 精彩語句The most important reason is that.最重要的原因是 It takes sb. some time to do sth.花費某人多少時間做某事。 Writing 14(2015溫州) 美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期將組織學生來華學習、交流,現(xiàn)正在中國招募志愿者,幫助他 們學習中文。假如你是揚帆中學的學生李平,請按要求給該項目負責人Mr.Miller寫一封申請 信。 內容包括:(1)申請擔任志愿者; (2)說明自己樂于助人、擅長中文;

59、(3)談談學好中文的方法; (4) 參考詞匯:volunteer,be good at,improve,culture 注意:(1)申請信需要涵蓋以上所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮; (2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息; (3)詞數(shù):110 詞左右。開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。 Dear Mr.Miller, Im Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School. Thank you for your consideration. Yours truly, Li Ping 答案 寫作要點 1.本文屬于應用文,主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.內容要點:申請擔任志愿者; 說

60、明自己樂于助人、擅長中文; 談談學好中文的方法。 參考范文 Dear Mr.Miller, Im Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.I am very interested in your project and want to be the volunteer to help the students learn Chinese. I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others.I am good at Chinese.Last year,I won the first prize for the Chi