高考?xì)v年-改錯真題

1、短文改錯參考答案20162012年各省市高考題A卷全國卷Passage 1(2016全國)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Thou

2、gh not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle s

3、ays that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big， the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even

4、 to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes that business will grow .1thatwhere考查賓語從句的連詞用法。由句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，介詞to之后為賓語

5、從句。從句謂語是不及物動詞live。故用where引導(dǎo)。 2去掉but考查從屬連詞與并列連詞。從屬連詞though不可與并列連詞but連用。3had have考查語境中的時態(tài)運用。根據(jù)上下文語境可知此處要用一般現(xiàn)在時。4honest honesty考查名詞作表語。由句意“他成功的關(guān)鍵是誠信”可知應(yīng)當(dāng)用名詞形式。5orand考查并列連詞的用法。根據(jù)句意可知二者之間為并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系。6usingused考查固定短語的用法。be used for“用來做”，為固定短語。7在dreams之后加上of或about考查短語動詞。固定短語dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“

6、夢想做某事”。8thea考查代詞的用法。in a short period of time為固定詞組，意思是“短時間內(nèi)”。9ourhis考查冠詞的用法。短文介紹了my uncle誠信經(jīng)營餐館的事情，故將our改為his。10steadysteadily考查副詞的用法。修飾謂語動詞用副詞。Passage 2(2016全國)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞

7、下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we wil

8、l learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答案The summer holiday is comi

9、ng.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden view and gain we can not get

10、from books.Some classmates suggest we go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost ， yet we can still learn a lot.1howwhat 考查疑問詞的用法。我和同學(xué)正在談?wù)摷倨诶镒鍪裁?。固定表達(dá)what to do，如果用how結(jié)構(gòu)為how to do sth.2chosechoose考查動詞形式。根據(jù)語法知識可知，情態(tài)動詞can后要用動詞原形。3taketaking考查非謂語動詞的用法。此處為between.and.結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)前

11、面的staying at home可知，此處也要用動名詞形式，與前面保持一致。4butand考查連詞的用法。如果呆在家里，感覺舒適，還不花錢。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。5world前加the考查定冠詞的用法。此處特指我們所生活的這個世界。6yourour考查形容詞性物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)前面的主語we可知，此處要用our，表示“我們能夠開闊我們的視野”。7knowledgesknowledge考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法。knowledge為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。8去掉can或canshould考查虛擬語氣。suggest表示“建議”，后面的賓語從句要用should do形式，

12、should可以省略，故答案有兩種改法。9thoughtthink考查一般現(xiàn)在時的用法。我認(rèn)為這是一個好主意。根據(jù)上下文可知，此處并不是過去的看法，而是現(xiàn)在的看法。10manymuch考查代詞的用法。這樣不會花很多錢。cost much花費很多。此處也可理解為much money的省略。Passage 3(2016全國)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞

13、下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They al

14、ways tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to

15、 whenever need help.答案The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and years in my life.At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think .They always me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever fe

16、lt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent by strange clothes.Now I am leaving home college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.【語篇導(dǎo)讀】本文主要講述了青少與父母之間的關(guān)系。1yearyears此處指1319 歲的年齡，故用復(fù)數(shù)。2wors

17、eworst與前面的best并列，此處應(yīng)用最高級。3去掉theat first 固定短語。4yourselfmyself根據(jù)句意，此處指“我自己”。5suchsoso 指已經(jīng)提到的事。6telltold此處應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)。7freelyfree此處應(yīng)用形容詞作表語。8wearwearing此處用動名詞作介詞的賓語。9tofor固定搭配 leave for 去。10whenever后加Iwhenever引導(dǎo)狀語從句，從句缺少主語I。Passage 4(2015新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及

18、一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mou

19、ntains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found

20、 ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.答案When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industri

21、alization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.1thinkthought考

22、查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)前面一句可知，這是發(fā)生在小時候的事情，故用一般過去時態(tài)。2countryside前加the考查冠詞的用法。in the countryside (在鄉(xiāng)村)為固定短語。3orand考查并列詞的用法。那兒的空氣潔凈，群山蔥綠。由句意可知兩個分句之間顯然為并列關(guān)系，而非選擇關(guān)系。4onwith考查介詞的用法。with the development of.為一固定短語，意思是“隨著的發(fā)展”。5去掉been考查被動語態(tài)的用法。眾多研究表明，全球變暖已經(jīng)成為一個十分嚴(yán)重的問題。由句意可知，studies和謂語show之間為主動關(guān)系，故要用主動語態(tài)。6seriouslyserious考查

23、形容詞的用法。修飾名詞problem應(yīng)當(dāng)用形容詞。7airsair考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法。air作“空氣”講時為不可數(shù)名詞。8MuchMany考查代詞的用法。animals為可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故用many。9foundfind考查情態(tài)動詞的用法。情態(tài)動詞后面要接動詞原形。10yourour/the考查語境中代詞的用法。依據(jù)前后句的語境及邏輯關(guān)系可知your與上下文相悖，結(jié)合句意應(yīng)當(dāng)改為our/the才能使句意通順。Passage 5(2015新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除

24、或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After loo

25、ks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised

26、her that this would never happen again.答案One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy a shop window.He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop.After at the toy for some time，he turned around and found his parents were missing.Tony was scare

27、d and to cry.A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.1parentparents考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此處應(yīng)當(dāng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。2onin考查介詞的用法。玩具是擺放在商

28、店的櫥窗里面的，故用介詞in。3veryso考查固定句型的用法。由語境可知，托尼非常喜歡這個玩具，于是快速走進(jìn)商店。so.that.為固定句型，意思是“如此以至于”4lookslooking考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主語he，he與look at之間為邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故應(yīng)當(dāng)用現(xiàn)在分詞。5去掉where或wherethat考查賓語從句連接詞的用法。動詞found之后為賓語從句，從句為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，意思完整，故將where去掉或改為沒有詞義且不作成分的that。6begunbegan考查并列謂語的用法。由句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，begin與was scared并列，因此，要用一般過去時。7telli

29、ngtold考查并列謂語的用法。有一位婦女看到他哭泣就告訴他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell這一動作是這個婦女發(fā)出的，應(yīng)當(dāng)與saw構(gòu)成并列謂語。故改用told。8athe考查冠詞的用法。表示談話雙方共知的名詞前要用定冠詞。9saw后加his考查物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)句意及英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，應(yīng)當(dāng)在parents前加上與主語相一致的物主代詞。10terribleterribly考查副詞的用法。形容詞worried之前要用副詞來修飾。Passage 6(2014新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個

30、單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing

31、 tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had

32、any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案Nearly five years ，and with the help our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these we been allowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As resu

33、lt，the plants are growing .The fruits are small in size，but juicy and .There are so that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year， we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing tomatoes at no cost!1befor

34、eagoago常與一般過去時連用；before常與完成時連用，這里謂語是planted，用的是過去式，故用ago。2byofwith the help of.在的幫助下。3yearyears由前面all these可知應(yīng)用year的復(fù)數(shù)形式。4hadhave根據(jù)時間狀語“since then”可知，主句應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在完成時，所以把had變?yōu)閔ave。5as后加aas a result為固定搭配，譯為“結(jié)果”。6somewhereeverywhere因為種子落在哪里就在哪里生根發(fā)芽，所以這種植物長得到處都是。everywhere到處；somewhere某處。7tastetastyare后面應(yīng)用形容詞，

35、and連接形容詞juicy和tasty。8muchmany根據(jù)謂語are可知后面應(yīng)用修飾可數(shù)名詞的many，而much修飾不可數(shù)名詞。9去掉but或改為yetalthough引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，不可與but連用，但可以與yet連用。10wonderfullywonderful因tomatoes為名詞應(yīng)用形容詞修飾，所以把副詞改為形容詞。Passage 7(2014新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多

36、余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。My dream school starts at 8：30 am.and ends at 3：30 pm.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities.For exam

37、ple，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees around which.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not onl

38、y our teachers but also our friends.答案My dream school starts at 8：30 am.and ends at 3：30 pm. are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We need to do so homework.Therefore，we have more time after-school activities. For example，we can do reading for one and a half and play sports for o

39、ne hour every day.My dream school like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees around which. We can lie on the grass for a rest，or by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and .They are not only our teachers but also our friends.1TheyThere考查固定句型。There be句型，表示“有”。故把They改為There。

40、2didntdont考查動詞時態(tài)。此處敘述每天要做的事情。應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，故把didnt改為dont。3manymuchhomework是不可數(shù)名詞，故用much修飾。4withfor考查介詞詞義辨析。此處句意是“為課外活動留出更多時間”。5hourhours考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。one and a half hours為一個半小時。6looklooks考查主謂一致。school為單數(shù)名詞，故謂語用looks。7whichit非定語從句，此處應(yīng)為代詞。8satsit考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)前句內(nèi)容可知此處是接情態(tài)動詞can，故用動詞原形。9listening后面加to考查固定短語。listen to“聽

41、”。10helpfullyhelpful此處and連接并列的兩個形容詞kind和helpful。Passage 8(2013新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。I hardly remember my grandmother.She us

42、ed to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall，with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice，which set himself apart

43、from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only fo

44、ur when she away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very .He was tall，with broad and a beard that turned from black gray over the years.He had a deep voice，which set apart from others in our small town， he was strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates

45、away they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have known.Passage 9(2013新課標(biāo)全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第

46、11處起)不計分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner，that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting，it ha

47、d a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案The book Im reading of talks

48、 about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s. tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner， might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon another meal of day.，it had a connection the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China w

49、as traditionally from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good with handles to suit British habits.This made for the in the porcelain industry.B卷地方卷Passage 1(2016四川)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符

50、號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do some

51、thing on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner，we said to her，”Happy

52、Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.答案It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job， she has to do most of the .She is a great mother.Both Dad I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and

53、then went shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes I cooked were Moms .At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！”Mom was grateful and .1sobut前后句之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。2houseworkshouseworkhousework是不可數(shù)名詞。3or andboth.a

54、nd是固定搭配。4getgot這里說的是發(fā)生在過去的事情，因此用一般過去時。5去掉ongo shopping去買東西。6herhis爸爸去購物，從句主語是he，因此物主代詞形式用his。7kitchen前加the上文雖未提及kitchen，但聽話者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠詞。8whatwhich/that或去掉what引導(dǎo)定語從句，并在從句中作賓語，指物，用關(guān)系代詞that/which，也可省略。9favoritiestfavoritefavorite 為無等級形容詞。10movingmovedmoving多用來修飾事物，moved用來指人。Passage 2(2016浙江)

55、下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，wed gree

56、t her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.答案When I was a very young ，my father created a regular practice I remember well