初中英語(yǔ)寫作公開課實(shí)用教案

1、 I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician.第1頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第一頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。2009 CCTV Spring Festival Galasurpriseddid magic showsHe did magic shows so well that everyone was really surprised.sothat(春節(jié)(Chn Ji)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)）He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised.第2頁(yè)

2、/共18頁(yè)第二頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。He took the ring out of an egg.People cheered for him.whenas soon asafterbecause第3頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第三頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。won many prizesworked hard,Make sentences with suitable conjunctionbecause sothatbeforeafterwhen(連詞(linc)）第4頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第四頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。not like, fish, healthyalthoughsothat butbecauseMake sentences wit

3、h suitable conjunction(連詞(linc)）第5頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第五頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。knew Liu Qian,met, 2001, Beijingnotuntil whenas soon as beforeaftersinceMake sentences with suitable conjunction(連詞(linc)）Jay第6頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第六頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。Which article do you think is better? Why? Liu Qin was 7 years old. He fell in love with magic. He graduated

4、from the university, then he became a magician. He doesnt have a teacher to teach him, but he works very hard. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. Everyone knows it is the biggest challenge for a magician. When Liu Qian was 7 year

5、s old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on street

6、s to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician. complex sentence(復(fù)合句） 第7頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第七頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。JackLiu Qian s pen pal第8頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第八頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。NameJackFamilyparents, died, car accidentHobbywatch Liu Qians magic showsweekendactivitiesbusy, do homework, take lessonsProblemstressed out, ex

7、amHis parents died in a car accident.He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows.On weekends he is busy. He does his homework and takes lessons.He is too stressed out because of the exams.BirthdayMarch. 12th, 1994He was born on March. 12th, 1994.The boys name is Jack.第9頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第九頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。 Jack used to have

8、a happy family. Unluckily, his parents died in a car accident. He was 10 years old. However, he doesnt give up himself. He works very hard. He gets good grades. He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows to relax himself. He is a top student. He has a big problem these days. He is too stressed out. The

9、 important exam is coming.whensothatAlthoughbecausebecause, although, when, sothat第10頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。Dear Jack, I know you have many problems. You have much homework. You have to sleep late. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. You study hard. Your English is

10、not good. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? You dont waste time. You can finish your homework quickly. Second, youd better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Liu Qian第11頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十一頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。Dear Ja

11、ck, I know you have many problems. You have so much homework that you have to stay up. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. Although you study hard, you are not good at English. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? If you ma

12、ke full use of every minute, you will finish your homework quickly.Second, youd better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Liu Qian充分利用第12頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十二頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。 proper conjunctions (適當(dāng)(shdng)的連詞) Other ways :good phrases（詞組(cz)）How can w

13、e make the articles more fluent (流暢(lichng)的）and more beautiful?wonderful sentence patterns（句型）第13頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十三頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。假如你是Jack, 寫信給劉謙，感謝他的建議(jiny)，并告訴他你的變化以及對(duì)考試的信心。你的變化包括：你的變化包括：1. 按時(shí)完成作業(yè)，睡眠每天按時(shí)完成作業(yè)，睡眠每天8小時(shí)小時(shí)2. 學(xué)習(xí)努力學(xué)習(xí)努力取得好成績(jī)?nèi)〉煤贸煽?jī)(chngj)3. 自信，不緊張自信，不緊張第14頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十四頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。Dear Liu Qin, Thanks for your last

14、 letter. Your advice is really helpful. I have changed a lot. Now The exam is coming soon. Actually I am not worried at all. I believe I will do a good job after working hard. Yours, JackDont forget to show us wonderful sentences!第15頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十五頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。 I have changed a lot. Now, I finish my homework on

15、 time and hardly stay up late at night . Because I sleep 8 hours every day, I am energetic in class. Also, I make full use of every minute. I study so hard that I can get good grades. To tell you the truth, I am pretty confident now and dont feel nervous at all. Whats more, I often watch your shows when I feel tired. How wonderful your shows are!第16頁(yè)/共18頁(yè)第十六頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。A. Improve the letter you wrote .B. Share the letter with your friend, find