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1、最近，你校舉辦了一場學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽?；顒訉W(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽時間/地點 12月7日下午，學(xué)校禮堂主題愛國宗旨激發(fā)興趣，陶冶情操，保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐富校園生活內(nèi)容共有30位參賽者，分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝感想給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化提供了機會【參考詞匯】朗誦recitation；禮堂auditorium；愛國精神patriotism；陶冶情操cultivate ones taste【寫作內(nèi)容】請根據(jù)以上情景說明，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時間地點和主題；2. 宗旨和內(nèi)容；3. 你的感想?！緦懽饕蟆?. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)

2、準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。一一. .信息點的整合信息點的整合二二. .要點不全要點不全 三三. .書寫書寫存在的問題：存在的問題：1.1.單詞拼寫錯誤單詞拼寫錯誤2.2.詞匯的用法模糊詞匯的用法模糊3.3.時態(tài)、語態(tài)混亂時態(tài)、語態(tài)混亂4. 4. 缺少成分缺少成分5. 5. 短語與從句混亂一片短語與從句混亂一片 With the theme of “l(fā)ove our country”, our school held a poem recitation competition in the afternoon on Dec. 7th on our school auditorium.2.

3、 In order to inspire students interest, cultivate our taste, make us protect the traditional culture and rich the school life.3. There were 30 students to take part in/attended the match and the winner is who got the highest grades.4. As a result/Deeply moved, I think the activity gave us show talen

4、t and give /offer a chance to understand ancient culture of China On the afternoon of Dec. 7th, our school held a poetry recitation competition in the auditorium of our school with the theme of patriotism.The competition was designed to/aimed to inspire students interest, cultivate our taste, protec

5、t the traditional culture and enrich our school life.30 competitors took part in the competition and the student who got the highest score was the winner.In my opinion, the activity offered us a chance to show our talent and understand ancient Chinese culture.1 1、認(rèn)真審題、認(rèn)真審題 2 2、歸納、整合信息點、歸納、整合信息點 3 3、

6、確定短語和句型、確定短語和句型,連詞成句連詞成句4 4、組句成篇、組句成篇5 5、檢查潤色檢查潤色,添加適當(dāng)過渡詞語添加適當(dāng)過渡詞語6 6、書寫書寫基礎(chǔ)寫作的推薦步驟：基礎(chǔ)寫作的推薦步驟：最近，你校舉辦了一場學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽?；顒踊顒訉W(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽時間時間/地點地點12月月7日下午，學(xué)校禮堂日下午，學(xué)校禮堂主題主題愛國愛國宗旨宗旨激發(fā)興趣，陶冶情操，保護傳統(tǒng)文化，激發(fā)興趣，陶冶情操，保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐富校園生活豐富校園生活內(nèi)容內(nèi)容共有共有30位參賽者，分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝位參賽者，分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝感想感想給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化提供了機會提供了機

7、會【參考詞匯】朗誦recitation；禮堂auditorium；愛國精神patriotism；陶冶情操cultivate ones taste【寫作內(nèi)容】請根據(jù)以上情景說明，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時間地點和主題；2. 宗旨和內(nèi)容；3. 你的感想。【寫作要求】1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。1.1.1212月月7 7日下午，我校日下午，我校在學(xué)校在學(xué)校禮堂禮堂舉辦了一場（關(guān)于）愛舉辦了一場（關(guān)于）愛國的學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽。國的學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽。2.2.（這次比賽的目的在于）（這次比賽的目

8、的在于）激發(fā)（學(xué)生）興趣，陶冶（學(xué)激發(fā)（學(xué)生）興趣，陶冶（學(xué)生）情操生）情操。3.3.（它還旨在）（它還旨在）保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐富（學(xué)生）校園生活保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐富（學(xué)生）校園生活。4.4.共有共有3030位參賽者，（參賽者中）分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝位參賽者，（參賽者中）分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝。5.5.（此次活動）（此次活動）給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化提供給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化提供了機會了機會。依要點依要點, , 擬草綱擬草綱, , 組織成句組織成句. .1.12月月7日下午，我校（學(xué)生）日下午，我校（學(xué)生）在學(xué)校在學(xué)校禮堂禮堂舉辦了舉辦了一場（關(guān)于）愛國的學(xué)生詩歌朗誦比賽。一場（關(guān)于）愛國的學(xué)

9、生詩歌朗誦比賽。On the afternoon of December 7th, a poetry recitation competition was held in the auditorium of our school with the theme of patriotism. 2.（這次比賽的目的在于）（這次比賽的目的在于）激發(fā)（學(xué)生）興趣，陶激發(fā)（學(xué)生）興趣，陶冶（學(xué)生）情操冶（學(xué)生）情操。The competition aimed to arouse our interest as well as cultivate our taste.3.（它旨在）（它旨在）保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐

10、富（學(xué)生）校園生活保護傳統(tǒng)文化，豐富（學(xué)生）校園生活。The competition was designed to protect traditional culture and enrich our school life. 4.共有共有30位參賽者，（參賽者中）分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝位參賽者，（參賽者中）分?jǐn)?shù)最高者得勝。30 students took part in the competition, among whom the ones with the highest scores were winners.5.（此次活動）（此次活動）給我們展示才能和理解中國古代文化提給我們展示才能和理解

11、中國古代文化提供了機會供了機會。The activity provided us with a chance to show our talent and understand ancient Chinese culture better.On the afternoon of December 7th, a poetry recitation competition was held in the auditorium of our school with the theme of patriotism. The competition aimed to arouse our interes

12、t as well as cultivate our taste. _, the competition was designed to protect traditional culture and enrich our school life. 30 students took part in the competition, among whom the ones with the highest scores were winners. _, the activity provided us with a chance to show our talent and understand

13、 ancient Chinese culture better.In addition/Whats moreIn my opinion/As far as I am concerned,ItitOn the afternoon of December 7th, a poetry recitation competition was held in the auditorium of our school with the theme of patriotism. It aimed to arouse our interest as well as cultivate our taste. Wh

14、ats more, it was designed to protect traditional culture and enrich our school life. 30 students took part in the competition, among whom the ones with the highest scores were winners. As far as Im concerned, the activity provided us with a chance to show our talent and understand ancient Chinese cu

15、lture better. On the afternoon of December 7, a poetry recitation contest was held in the auditorium of our school with the theme of patriotism. It was designed to arouse our interest in reading and writing poems, cultivate our taste, protect traditional culture and enrich our school life. 30 studen

16、ts in all participated in the contest. Those who received the highest scores were the winners. The activity provided an opportunity for us to display our talent and have a better understanding of ancient Chinese culture.Possible version:你校即將開展“環(huán)境保護周”活動, 請你為校英語角墻報寫一篇相關(guān)報道?！緦懽鲀?nèi)容】1.活動目的：支持北京舉辦2008年奧運會,

17、保護我們生存的環(huán)境。2. 活動時間：6月3日到6月8日。3. 主辦單位：校學(xué)生會和團委。4. 活動內(nèi)容：打掃操場, 給樹木花草澆水, 收集舊報紙, 舊書, 空罐頭盒, 廢玩具, 分類后送交回收中心。5. 活動意義：提高同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識?！緦懽饕蟆?1只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容； 2文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫Students Union and the Youth Leaguesort, recycling centre1.為了支持北京舉辦2008年奧運會, 保護我們生存的環(huán)境，校學(xué)生會和團委在6月3日到6月8日期間開展“環(huán)境保護周

18、”活動。2.一些學(xué)生打掃操場, 給樹木花草澆水。3. 一些學(xué)生收集舊報紙, 舊書, 空罐頭盒, 廢玩具。4. 學(xué)生們把廢舊物品分類后送交回收中心。5. 這個活動大大提高同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識。1.為了支持北京舉辦2008年奧運會, 保護我們生存的環(huán)境，校學(xué)生會和團委在6月3日到6月8日期間開展“環(huán)境保護周”活動。In order to support Beijing to held the 2008 Olympic Games and protect our environment, an activity was organized by the Youth League and Students

19、 Union of our school during the week from June 3rd to June 8th. 2. 一些學(xué)生打掃操場, 給樹木花草澆水。Some students cleaned the playground, watered the young trees and flowers, and removed weeds; 3. 一些學(xué)生收集舊報紙, 舊書, 空罐頭盒, 廢玩具。some students collected waste paper, old books, empty cans and old toys.4. 學(xué)生們把廢舊物品分類后送交回收中心。

20、5. 這個活動大大提高同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識。The students had the waste materials sorted and sent them to the recycling centre. The activity greatly improves students awareness of protecting the environment.In order to support Beijing to held the 2008 Olympic Games and protect our environment, an activity was organized by t

21、he Youth League and Students Union of our school during the week from June 3rd to June 8th. _, Some students cleaned the playground, watered the young trees and flowers, and removed weeds _ some students collected waste paper, old books, empty cans and old toys. The students had the waste materials sorted and sent them to the recycling centre. _, the activity greatly improves students awaren