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1、現(xiàn)象解釋模板試題八一、題目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：The Impact of Pesticides on Public Health and the Environment. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1隨著城市的擴(kuò)展與日益擁擠，廣大

2、農(nóng)村也成了各種農(nóng)藥的肆虐之所； 2農(nóng)藥對人們健康及生態(tài)環(huán)境的影響和表現(xiàn)；3我的看法。二、類型：現(xiàn)象解釋型三、方法提示：1審題：第一步：結(jié)合提綱推斷題意：這是一個(gè)鮮明的觀點(diǎn)。第二步：根據(jù)題目給出的提綱可知文章應(yīng)包含如下三個(gè)基本部分：現(xiàn)象部分：隨著城市的擴(kuò)展與日益擁擠，廣大農(nóng)村也成了各種農(nóng)藥的肆虐之所；解釋部分：農(nóng)藥對人們健康及生態(tài)環(huán)境的影響和表現(xiàn)；表明作者態(tài)度部分：我的看法。完全符合現(xiàn)象解釋型作文的結(jié)構(gòu)。2選擇王長喜十二句作文模板中的現(xiàn)象解釋型模板。3結(jié)合題意套用模板：現(xiàn)象解釋四級作文模板。四、范文與點(diǎn)評1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowadays,_. What impr

3、esses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all these reasons, personally, _. On the one hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12) In a word, _.2.范文范文點(diǎn)評The Impact of Pesticides on Public Health and

4、 the EnvironmentIt is true that over the past thirty years or so the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. Nowadays while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also bee

5、n affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. What impresses us most is that there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a WHO report. Of course, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people wou

6、ld become victims.There is also a growing concern over the contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. The main reason for this is that fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. What is more, la

7、rge use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. As a result, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.Considering all these reasons, personally, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultural i

8、ndustry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the environment. On the one hand, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) On the other hand, research

9、 indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations（異變） and congenital defects（先天缺陷）. (12) In a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.首句通過deteriorate指出一個(gè)與人們生

10、活密切相關(guān)的問題：在某些領(lǐng)域，科技進(jìn)步惡化了人們的生活質(zhì)量。使用連詞while點(diǎn)出城市和農(nóng)村的現(xiàn)存問題，對首句進(jìn)一步具體化。世衛(wèi)組織提供的確切數(shù)據(jù)令人信服地表明問題之嚴(yán)重。urgent measures點(diǎn)明了問題的迫切性起到了承上啟下的作用;該句運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣。分詞結(jié)構(gòu)sprayed with 與定語從句the people who 用得不錯(cuò)，做到了句型的多樣化。endanger進(jìn)一步闡明的嚴(yán)重后果。表讓步關(guān)系的介詞despite令作者的觀點(diǎn)更加客觀全面。，(11)從生態(tài)及人類健康兩方面再次總結(jié)出農(nóng)藥的危害。(12)總結(jié)全文，提出呼吁。3.模板二：Nowadays, wherever you

11、go, _. As is known to all, _. In a word,_.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, _. Second, _. And consequently, _. And finally, _.In fact, _ in the long run. Besides, _. (11) And whats more, _. (12) Therefore, lets remember

12、that _.4.范文范文點(diǎn)評The impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentNowadays, wherever you go, you will find that the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. As is known to all, while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowd

13、ed due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. In a word, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the follo

14、wing ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. Second, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. And consequently, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, pl

15、ants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered. And finally, the killing of insects by pesticides has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds.In fact, it pays to limit the use of pesticides to t

16、he minimum in the long run, and this would do good to both public health and the environment. Besides, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and congenital defects. (11) And whats more, the killing of insects by pesticides will break the balanc

17、e in the nature. (12) Therefore, lets remember that the impact of pesticides on our health, wildlife and the environment has become so urgent a problem that it should not be ignored any more. 首句通過deteriorate指出一個(gè)與人們生活密切相關(guān)的問題：在某些領(lǐng)域，科技進(jìn)步惡化了人們的生活質(zhì)量。使用連詞while點(diǎn)出城市和農(nóng)村的現(xiàn)存問題，對首句進(jìn)一步具體化。urgent measures點(diǎn)明了問題的迫切

18、性起到了承上啟下的作用;該句中運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣。分詞結(jié)構(gòu)sprayed with 與定語從句the people who 用得不錯(cuò)，做到了句型的多樣化。endanger進(jìn)一步闡明的嚴(yán)重后果。loss of balance in the ecology點(diǎn)明了農(nóng)藥對環(huán)境的最終危害。limit the use與do good to 表明了作者的觀點(diǎn)。，(11)從人類健康及生態(tài)兩方面再次總結(jié)出農(nóng)藥的危害。(12)總結(jié)全文，呼吁人們關(guān)注農(nóng)藥對人類健康及環(huán)境的影響。5.模板三： As is known to all, _. For one thing,_. For another,_. It is obvi

19、ous that _.There is an increasing concern over _. First of all, _. In addition, _. Therefore, _.As far as I am concerned, _. As we all know, _. (11) Furthermore, _. (12) In a word, _.6.范文The impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentAs is known to all, over the past thirty years or so

20、 the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. For one thing, nowadays, while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides.

21、 For another, there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a WHO report. It is obvious that if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.There is an increasing concern over the

22、contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First of all, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. In addition, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. Therefore

23、, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.As far as I am concerned, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultural industry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the enviro

24、nment. As we all know, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) Furthermore, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and congenital defe

25、cts. (12) In a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.試題九一、題目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic： College Students Job-hunting. You s

26、hould write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.隨著大學(xué)的不斷擴(kuò)招，越來越多的畢業(yè)生體會到了找工作的壓力；2.大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的原因；3.我的看法。二、類型：現(xiàn)象解釋型三、方法提示：1.審題：第一步：結(jié)合提綱推斷題意：這是一個(gè)鮮明的觀點(diǎn)。第二步：根據(jù)題目給出的提綱可知文章應(yīng)包含如下三個(gè)基本部分：現(xiàn)象部分：隨著大學(xué)的不斷擴(kuò)招，越來越多的畢業(yè)生體會到了找工作的壓力；解釋部分：大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的原因；表明作者態(tài)度部分：我的看法。完全符合現(xiàn)

27、象解釋型作文的結(jié)構(gòu)。2.選擇王長喜十二句作文模板中的現(xiàn)象解釋型模板。3.結(jié)合題意套用模板：現(xiàn)象解釋四級作文模板。四、范文與點(diǎn)評1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowadays,_. What impresses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all these reasons, personally, _. On the on

28、e hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12) In a word, _.2.范文College Students Job-huntingIt is true that with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.Nowadays, college

29、students employment has been a hot topic in China.What impresses us most is that a survey conducted recently suggests that about 80 percent of college students listed "pressure in job-hunting" as their top headache. Of course, many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to lower

30、 their expectations.There is also a growing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. The main reason for this is that since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four years a

31、nd the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. What is more, most graduates have too high expectations for their future jobs. As a result, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside.Considering a

32、ll these reasons, personally, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened. On the one hand, the universities' employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different ch

33、annels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) On the other hand, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) In a word, it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intens

34、e competition in the job market. 3.模板二：Nowadays, wherever you go, _. As is known to all, _. In a word, _.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, _. Second, _. And consequently, _. And finally, _.In fact, _ in the long run. Bes

35、ides, _. (11) And whats more, _. (12) Therefore, lets remember that _. 4.范文College Students Job-huntingNowadays, wherever you go, you will find college students employment has been a hot topic in China. As is known to all, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job m

36、arkets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before. In a word, there is a growing concern over the great pressure college graduates face in job-hunting.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth men

37、tioning. First, since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. Second, most graduates have too high expectati

38、ons for their future jobs. And consequently, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. And finally, many employers also raise their standards when recruiting new staff.In fact, if both colleges and students take mea

39、sures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened in the long run. Besides, the universities' employment centers should also play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services

40、to graduates. (11) And whats more, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) Therefore, lets remember that it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in the job market.5.模板三:A

41、s is known to all, _. For one thing,_. For another,_. It is obvious that _.There is an increasing concern over _. First of all, _. In addition, _. Therefore, _.As far as I am concerned, _. As we all know, _. (11) Furthermore, _. (12) In a word, _.6.范文College Students Job-huntingAs is known to all, n

42、owadays, college students employment has been a hot topic in China.For one thing, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.For another, a survey conducted recently

43、 suggests that about 80 percent of college students listed "pressure in job-hunting" as their top headache. It is obvious that many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to lower their expectations.There is an increasing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. Fir

44、st of all, since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. In addition, most graduates have too high expectati

45、ons for their future jobs. Therefore, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. As far as I am concerned, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expec

46、tations could be shortened. As we all know, the universities' employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) Furthermore, the students should improve themselves and develop sp

47、ecial skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) In a word, it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in the job market. 試題十一、題目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：The role of

48、 man in modern family. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.越來越多的男人參與到家務(wù)活或教育子女的活動(dòng)中；2.男人在工作之余承擔(dān)家庭義務(wù)的原因及優(yōu)點(diǎn)；3.我的觀點(diǎn)。二、類型：現(xiàn)象解釋型三、方法提示：1.審題：第一步：結(jié)合提綱推斷題意：這是一個(gè)鮮明的觀點(diǎn)。第二步：根據(jù)題目給出的提綱可知文章應(yīng)包含如下三個(gè)基本部分：現(xiàn)象部分：越來越多的男人參與到家務(wù)活或教育子女的活動(dòng)中；解釋部分：男人在

49、工作之余承擔(dān)家庭義務(wù)的原因及優(yōu)點(diǎn)；表明作者態(tài)度部分：我的觀點(diǎn)。完全符合現(xiàn)象解釋型作文的結(jié)構(gòu)。2.選擇王長喜十二句作文模板中的現(xiàn)象解釋型模板。3.結(jié)合題意套用模板：現(xiàn)象解釋四級作文模板。四、范文與點(diǎn)評1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowadays,_. What impresses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all the

50、se reasons, personally, _. On the one hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12)In a word, _.2.范文The role of man in modern familyIt is true that in the past men had no real place in the home and that their only real value to their children was to provide for their financial needs. Nowadays, with the r

51、apid advancement of our society, our family life have underwent many changes. What impresses us most is that more and more men recognize that bringing up children involves a partnership of equals and their family roles are just as important as their career roles. Of course, mens active participation

52、 in doing family duties besides earning money can do a lot of good to their family life.There is also a growing concern over the benefits of male participation in assuming family responsibilities for the healthy development of the child. The main reason for this is that fathers' positive and sen

53、sitive attitudes toward their babies are related to their children's problem solving competence later in their childrens lives. What is more, in a family where the roles of men and women are not sharply separated and where many household tasks are shared to a greater or lesser extent, notions of

54、 male superiority are hard to maintain. As a result, in such a home, the growing boy and girl can learn to accept that equality more easily than did their parents and to prepare more fully for participation in a world characterized by cooperation rather than by the “battle of the sexes.”Considering

55、all these reasons, personally, fathers role in their childrens up-bringing is very important. On the one hand, fathers participation in family life can relieve the conflict between work and family responsibilities that many working mothers face. (11) On the other hand, fathers' involvement is essential to children's intellectual and emotional development and children who are disliked by their peers commonly reported having poor relationship