廣東省南海桂城中學(xué)2016屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第二篇 分類寫作1 邀請(qǐng)信課件

1、第二篇第二篇 分類寫作分類寫作 本書所有作文題的寫作要求相同，為了避免累贅，不再每篇附上。統(tǒng)一附注如下：1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4. 如果有提供開頭語或結(jié)束語，或者兩者都有，所給內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；5. 答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。the nursing home 敬老院敬老院show our respect 表現(xiàn)我們的尊敬表現(xiàn)我們的尊敬gain a better understanding 獲得更好的理解獲得更好的理解a romantic story 一個(gè)浪漫故事一個(gè)浪漫故事sincerely 真誠(chéng)地真誠(chéng)地be fa

2、miliar with 對(duì)對(duì)熟悉熟悉art gallery 藝術(shù)館藝術(shù)館judge 裁判裁判speech contest 演講比賽演講比賽deliver ones speech 做演講做演講is convenient for sb./sth. 對(duì)對(duì)方便方便locate 位于位于promote students interest 提高學(xué)生的興趣提高學(xué)生的興趣theme 主題主題participant 參與者，選手參與者，選手compete with sb. 和某人競(jìng)爭(zhēng)比賽和某人競(jìng)爭(zhēng)比賽feel honored 覺得榮幸覺得榮幸dragon boat racing 龍舟賽龍舟賽training c

3、amp 訓(xùn)練營(yíng)訓(xùn)練營(yíng)1. Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. 我代表同學(xué)寫信邀請(qǐng)您來參我代表同學(xué)寫信邀請(qǐng)您來參加，如果您能抽出時(shí)間的話。加，如果您能抽出時(shí)間的話。2. Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us. 我相信您會(huì)和我相信您會(huì)和我們一起度過愉快的時(shí)光。我們一起度過愉快的時(shí)光。3. Looking forward to your coming. 期待著

4、您的到來。期待著您的到來。4. We would feel much honored if you could come. 如果您能來，我們?nèi)绻軄?，我們?huì)覺得非常榮幸。會(huì)覺得非常榮幸。5. If you have any suggestions, please let us know. 如果您有任何建議，如果您有任何建議，請(qǐng)告訴我們。請(qǐng)告訴我們。6. I sincerely invite you to watch the show because. 我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)您我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)您來看演出，因?yàn)閬砜囱莩?，因?yàn)?. You can reach me through my phone number

5、 44876655 at your convenience. 您可以在您方便的時(shí)候打我的電話，號(hào)碼是您可以在您方便的時(shí)候打我的電話，號(hào)碼是44876655。8. I wonder if youd like to go with me. 我想知道您是否想和我一起去。我想知道您是否想和我一起去。1. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.1. convenience改為convenient2. Let me know as soon as possible that you are able to c

6、ome or not.2. that改為whether/if3. Since you are such eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.3. such改為so4. Ive read in the paper about a five-days tour, which I think suits you, so now Id like to recommend it to you.4. five-days改為five-day5. CCTY is inviting foreign students

7、to perform at the Spring Festival Gala, that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9, the Chinese New Years Eve.5. that改為which6. Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.6. 刪掉to7. Im writing to tell you well have an English Corner active which

8、will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.7. active改為activity8. We have never been abroad ago, so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.8. ago改為before9. This is Li Hua, a monitor of Class Two, Grade Three of GuangMing High School.9. 刪掉a10. Therefore, to make it a succe

9、ss, we would like to invite you to be our guide, give us some help with our spoken English.10. give改為giving；或give前加and 【2012全國(guó)全國(guó)2卷：邀請(qǐng)外教參加生日聚會(huì)卷：邀請(qǐng)外教參加生日聚會(huì)】假定你是李華。你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你寫信邀請(qǐng)假定你是李華。你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你寫信邀請(qǐng)外教外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括：參加，要點(diǎn)包括：1. 時(shí)間：周五晚時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)點(diǎn)2. 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部3. 內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等內(nèi)容：生日

10、歌、蛋糕、游戲等4. 要求：備小禮物要求：備小禮物滿分佳作（一）滿分佳作（一）Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Just as the name suggests, the party is still kept a secret from him. This Friday evening, well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18th birthday. Im now writing on behalf of the

11、 classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. The details of the celebration, which will last about an hour until 9 pm, are as follows. At the start, the candle will be lighted and well sing “Happy Birthday” together for him, after which well enjoy the birthday cake and

12、 have fun together, playing games and singing songs. Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua滿分賞析滿分賞析 Just as the name suggests(正如名字所說一樣正如名字所說一樣)，語言運(yùn)，語言運(yùn)用地道，很自然地引出細(xì)節(jié)。用地道，很自然地引出細(xì)節(jié)。 用到用到Im now writing on behalf ofto(我代表我代表寫寫信信)，句式高級(jí)地道，點(diǎn)明寫信目的；，句式高級(jí)

13、地道，點(diǎn)明寫信目的；if you can spare the time又顯示出交際中的禮貌，十分得體。又顯示出交際中的禮貌，十分得體。 用到了用到了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句；引導(dǎo)的定語從句；are as follows也是很好也是很好的引出列舉的主題句。注意：的引出列舉的主題句。注意：follows不要漏了不要漏了s，否則效果會(huì)歸零。，否則效果會(huì)歸零。 用用after which 介詞提前的定語從句和介詞提前的定語從句和playing games and singing songs現(xiàn)在分詞短語，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式顯現(xiàn)在分詞短語，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式顯得高級(jí)，句法復(fù)雜度高。得高

14、級(jí)，句法復(fù)雜度高。 本句是作者添加的細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容合適。本句是作者添加的細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容合適。滿分佳作（二）滿分佳作（二）Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday.As scheduled, all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaomings birthday. We would feel much honored

15、if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour. As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him. Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which well sing songs and play some small games. Whats more,

16、as a surprise, well all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him, and itll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts. As its a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua滿分賞

17、析滿分賞析 We would feel much honored if you could，語氣委婉禮貌，語氣委婉禮貌，句式高級(jí)，用句式高級(jí)，用would和和could的過去式更體現(xiàn)出客氣語氣；且用到了的過去式更體現(xiàn)出客氣語氣；且用到了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和引導(dǎo)的定語從句和lasting現(xiàn)在分詞，體現(xiàn)句法能力。現(xiàn)在分詞，體現(xiàn)句法能力。 following which是一大亮點(diǎn)，現(xiàn)在分詞短語中包含一句定語是一大亮點(diǎn)，現(xiàn)在分詞短語中包含一句定語從句。從句。 用用whats more連接自然，條理清楚；用連接自然，條理清楚；用and有效地整合了信有效地整合了信息。息。 本句是自己添加的內(nèi)容合適，

18、且用本句是自己添加的內(nèi)容合適，且用do強(qiáng)調(diào)，更顯邀請(qǐng)的誠(chéng)意。強(qiáng)調(diào)，更顯邀請(qǐng)的誠(chéng)意。 這是寫信的必備用語，必須做到零差錯(cuò)。這是寫信的必備用語，必須做到零差錯(cuò)?！?0072007湖北卷改編：邀請(qǐng)國(guó)際學(xué)生慰問老人湖北卷改編：邀請(qǐng)國(guó)際學(xué)生慰問老人】 作文原題作文原題 假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校與本地一所國(guó)際學(xué)校經(jīng)假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校與本地一所國(guó)際學(xué)校經(jīng)常舉辦聯(lián)誼活動(dòng)，你計(jì)劃在重陽節(jié)組織學(xué)生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，常舉辦聯(lián)誼活動(dòng)，你計(jì)劃在重陽節(jié)組織學(xué)生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，擬邀請(qǐng)國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)擬邀請(qǐng)國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)

19、生會(huì)主席生會(huì)主席TonyTony寫一封信。寫一封信。 要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)： 向老人贈(zèng)送禮物向老人贈(zèng)送禮物( (鮮花、自制賀卡鮮花、自制賀卡)； 為老人提供服務(wù)為老人提供服務(wù)( (做清潔、陪老人聊天做清潔、陪老人聊天)； 為老人表演節(jié)目為老人表演節(jié)目( (唱歌、跳舞唱歌、跳舞)。作文翻譯作文翻譯親愛的親愛的TonyTony， 重陽，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的老人節(jié)日，即將到來。我們計(jì)劃去敬老院慶重陽，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的老人節(jié)日，即將到來。我們計(jì)劃去敬老院慶祝這特別的日子，我們也想邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生加入我們。祝這特別的日子，我們也想邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生加入我們。 我們計(jì)劃了幾項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。當(dāng)我們到達(dá)那里時(shí)，我們會(huì)分小組在老我們計(jì)劃了幾項(xiàng)

20、活動(dòng)。當(dāng)我們到達(dá)那里時(shí)，我們會(huì)分小組在老人們的房間拜訪他們，給他們送花和自制的卡片，以表達(dá)我們的尊人們的房間拜訪他們，給他們送花和自制的卡片，以表達(dá)我們的尊重和愛。然后，我們會(huì)在護(hù)士的幫助下為他們搞清潔和洗刷。重和愛。然后，我們會(huì)在護(hù)士的幫助下為他們搞清潔和洗刷。因?yàn)橛行├先擞X得孤單，我們可以和他們聊他們以前的日子、因?yàn)橛行├先擞X得孤單，我們可以和他們聊他們以前的日子、我們城市的變化、或者他們感興趣的任何事情。我們也可以給他們我們城市的變化、或者他們感興趣的任何事情。我們也可以給他們一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。 我堅(jiān)信我們都會(huì)對(duì)中國(guó)的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有

21、任何我堅(jiān)信我們都會(huì)對(duì)中國(guó)的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何建議，請(qǐng)讓我知道。建議，請(qǐng)讓我知道。 期待著你及早的回復(fù)。期待著你及早的回復(fù)。 你的你的， 李華李華Dear Tony, Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to jo

22、in us. We have planned several activities. When we get there, we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses. As some old people feel lon

23、ely, we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances, such as singing, dancing, and so on.I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestions, please let u

24、s know. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【20122012天津卷改編：邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友觀看演出天津卷改編：邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友觀看演出】作文原題作文原題 假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友ChrisChris就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校。就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校。他熟悉中國(guó)文化，特別是戲曲文化。他熟悉中國(guó)文化，特別是戲曲文化。8 8月月5 5日下午日下午2 2：0000在新落成的在新落成的天津大劇院將上演越劇天津大劇院將上演越劇梁山伯與祝英臺(tái)梁山伯與祝英臺(tái)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給用英語給ChrisChri

25、s寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他一起觀看演出。寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他一起觀看演出。 1. 1. 提出邀請(qǐng)并簡(jiǎn)述原因；提出邀請(qǐng)并簡(jiǎn)述原因； 2. 2. 提出觀劇后活動(dòng)建議（如參觀附近的博物館或美術(shù)館等）；提出觀劇后活動(dòng)建議（如參觀附近的博物館或美術(shù)館等）； 3. 3. 請(qǐng)求對(duì)方回復(fù)。請(qǐng)求對(duì)方回復(fù)。參考詞匯：越?。簠⒖荚~匯：越劇：Shaoxing OperaShaoxing Opera 梁山伯與祝英臺(tái)梁山伯與祝英臺(tái) Butterfly Lovers Butterfly Lovers 天津大劇院天津大劇院Tianjin Grand TheaterTianjin Grand Theater作文翻譯作文翻譯親愛

26、的親愛的Chris,Chris, 我有好消息告訴你。我有好消息告訴你。8 8月月5 5日下午日下午2 2：0000在新落成的天津大劇院在新落成的天津大劇院將上演越劇將上演越劇梁山伯與祝英臺(tái)梁山伯與祝英臺(tái)。它是關(guān)于中國(guó)的一個(gè)浪漫故事，。它是關(guān)于中國(guó)的一個(gè)浪漫故事，典型的中國(guó)文化。我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)你去觀看演出，因?yàn)槟闶煜ぶ袊?guó)文典型的中國(guó)文化。我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)你去觀看演出，因?yàn)槟闶煜ぶ袊?guó)文化，特別是戲曲文化。化，特別是戲曲文化。 看完演出后，我們計(jì)劃安排一些其他的活動(dòng)。例如，我們可看完演出后，我們計(jì)劃安排一些其他的活動(dòng)。例如，我們可以參觀附近的博物館或美術(shù)館，以便了解更多中國(guó)文化和藝術(shù)。以參觀附近的博物館或

27、美術(shù)館，以便了解更多中國(guó)文化和藝術(shù)。 如果你有任何建議，請(qǐng)盡快聯(lián)系我。我期待著你的答復(fù)。如果你有任何建議，請(qǐng)盡快聯(lián)系我。我期待著你的答復(fù)。 你你的的,李華李華Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. There will be staged Shaoxing Opera “Butterfly Lovers” in new Tianjin Grand Theatre at 2 p.m. on August 5. It is about a Chinese romantic story, typical of Chinese culture. I sinc

28、erely invite you to watch the show because you are familiar with Chinese culture, especially Chinese opera culture.After watching the show, we plan to arrange some other activities. For example, we can visit the nearby museums or art galleries in order to know much more about Chinese culture and art

29、. If you have any suggestions, please contact me as soon as possible. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【20152015新課標(biāo)新課標(biāo)2 2卷：邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院卷：邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院】假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursing home)(nursing home)陪老陪老人們過重陽節(jié)人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)(the Double Ninth Festival)。請(qǐng)給外教。請(qǐng)給外教露西寫封郵件

30、，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 1. 出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間； 2. 2. 活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。Dear Lucy,.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi HuaLi Hua e【20152015新課標(biāo)新課標(biāo)2 2卷：邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院卷：邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院】Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ni

31、nth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you ar

32、e able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi HuaLi Hua 【20102010全國(guó)全國(guó)1 1卷：邀請(qǐng)外教做比賽評(píng)委卷：邀請(qǐng)外教做比賽評(píng)委】假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽講比賽(speech contest)(speech contest)。希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師。希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師

33、SmithSmith女士女士來做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。來做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。英語演講比賽主題：人與自然時(shí)間：英語演講比賽主題：人與自然時(shí)間：6月月15日下午日下午2:005:00地點(diǎn)：地點(diǎn)：501教室參賽選手：教室參賽選手：10名學(xué)生聯(lián)系人：李華（電話名學(xué)生聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655）歡迎）歡迎大家光臨大家光臨 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1. 1. 自我介紹自我介紹2. 2. 邀請(qǐng)做評(píng)委邀請(qǐng)做評(píng)委3. 3. 演講主題演講主題 4. 4. 比賽時(shí)間比賽時(shí)間 5. 5. 參賽選手參賽選手 6. 6. 聯(lián)系方式聯(lián)系方式Dear Ms. Smith,Dear Ms

34、. Smith,With best wishes,With best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua【20102010全國(guó)全國(guó)1 1卷：邀請(qǐng)外教做比賽評(píng)委卷：邀請(qǐng)外教做比賽評(píng)委】Dear Ms. Smith,Dear Ms. Smith, This is Li Hua, President of the Student Union of This is Li Hua, President of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is located near the university Yucai Middle Schoo

35、l, which is located near the university where youre teaching. Im writing to see if we could where youre teaching. Im writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming petition. You see, to promote students interest

36、in learning You see, to promote students interest in learning English, weve planned to hold an English speech English, weve planned to hold an English speech competition, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”. It competition, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”. It will begin at two on the after

37、noon of June 15th, lasting will begin at two on the afternoon of June 15th, lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom 501.each other in Classroom 501. We would feel much honored if you could j

38、oin us. You We would feel much honored if you could join us. You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.convenience. Looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.With best wishes.Li HuaLi Hua【20152015北京卷改編：邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)北京卷改編：邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)】 假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友JimJim寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)，希望他一寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)，希望他一起參加，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：起參加，郵