托福寫作高分句式變化

1、.托福寫作高分：句式變化一、句式變化變換句子的開頭結構名詞做主語介詞短語作狀語副詞作狀語狀語從句分詞短語作狀語形容詞短語作狀語主語從句不定式短語做主語或狀語動名詞做主語To begin with, even in such areas as puter science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue

2、 to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on plex issues or research proj

3、ects. And even if the technical information relevant to pleting a graduate-level project bees outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will not.使用不同的句型結構Todays education system places too much emphasis on students desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students ar

4、e searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to ins

5、ure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.二、承上啟下表示結論in conclusionin sumto concludeto sum up表示肯定程度certainlyclearlyobviouslyplainlyapparentlysurelyundoubtedlynaturallyfor certainfor sureof courseneveralwayspossiblyperhapslikelyprobablypote

6、ntiallypresumablyto some extendin a large sensegenerally speakingin a sensegenerallyin some sensenormallyideally引出新觀點firstsecondthirdfinallyin the first placein the second placelast but not leastfirst of allnextanotherIn additionadditionallyfurtherfurthermoremoreoveralsolikewisesimilarlymore importa

7、ntlyimaginesupposemost importantlyfor one thingfor another引出詳細解釋specificallyparticularlyfor examplefor instancein this casein that caseas well asin thatsuch asin addition to表示對照或其他觀點otherwisehoweverneverthelessthoughalthoughyetmeanwhilewhileButinsteadstillanywayunlikeon the contraryby contrastby par

8、isonin any caseat any ratein spite ofrather thanon the one handon the other handeven ifapart frominstead ofeven so表示證據出現(xiàn)sincebecauseactuallyin factas a matter of factas a resultdue toowing to表示推理as a resultaccordinglyconsequentlyhencethusultimatelytherebythereforeas a consequenceif soif notaccording

9、 to表示反復說明in other wordsbrieflythat is三、巧用修辭排比對稱結構Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects will be and whether any remedy is possible.Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of

10、global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any possible remedy.比喻(1)明喻：比喻詞出現(xiàn)：as, like, as ifIn many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more plex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our plexities remain futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too

11、 can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are delicately curved in order to look straighter still.(2)暗喻：比喻詞不出現(xiàn)。America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has e back marked insufficient funds.對照：加深印象Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; mod

12、eration is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.類比The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is natures and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe

13、 will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white mans systemhas pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to we