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1、第一組1. 是否同意：Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire of money.08.8.16NAAlthough a great number of people who maintain that money is not the only driven force for companies claim that business people also shoulder the responsibility to create well-beings of society, as far as I am concerne

2、d, I concede that the only motivation for businessmen is the tempting profit, which can be illustrated from their routine work, their benevolent behaviors, and their wrongdoing.Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is that entire routine commercial act companies do is to make

3、profit. Only when backed up with a serious of regulated and efficient operational activities can corporations increase the possibilities of sales promoting and cost cutting. For example, companies advertise their products in order to promote the sales, and hire competent workers for the purpose of i

4、mproving working efficiency. Further evidence comes from the fact that driven by the force of profit, some farsighted enterprises may resort to international cooperation in order to extend their market share.Besides, businessmen s noble and benevolent actions are driven by the desire of money. Some

5、supporters may argue that the good deed of business people are out of the purpose to reciprocate society, however, this is much more sophisticated than they think. Just as an old saying goes, where there is profit, there is businessman. The ultimate aim of entrepreneurs philanthropy is to set perfec

6、t images for their enterprises, not superficially for the mere welfare of society. Any rational and intellectual person can figure out the remarkable benefits of both money and fame which entrepreneurs can receive from their intentionally benevolent behaviors.Finally, another equally important facto

7、r is that all the wrongdoing of companies are tempted by exorbitant profit, such as making up false information or even committing the crime. For one thing, in order to coax customers into buying their products, they fabricate the image of the products as desirable, glamorous and of premium quality

8、in advertisement, while concealing the demerits. What s worse, some conscienceless companies even take risks to violate the law for the sake of sudden huge profits regardless of the interest of society. To sum up, I strongly believe that companies are only motivated by the temptation of money and pr

9、ofit which can be demonstrated by all types of their behaviors.2. do you agree or disagree the telephone has greater effects on people than television.08.5.16NA Although a great number of people who maintain that telephone is more important for us than television because it has amazingly change the

10、way people communicate, as far as I am concerned, I believe that television plays a more significant role in our daily life because of it is an effective instructor, a perfect source of entertainment, and an efficient message spreader.Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is t

11、hat television, by offering us a variety of accurate information, is of considerable help to the enlargement of our scope. For one thing, people can get informed of the current affairs around them, such as the political election across the country or the business conference in Europe. Furthermore, t

12、elevision can also inspire people s intelligence and creativity. For example, the scientific programs on Discovery Channel arouse peoples interest in science and technology, and encourage young generation to quest for truth.Suffering from a heavy pressure psychologically at work, white-collars have

13、regarded television as a delightful harbor which they resort to for relief after work. The funny or warm soap operas, suchas Friends or Desperate Housewives, desirably bring people laughter, joy and relaxation, which can help to refresh their minds and restore energy for the next days work. Even tho

14、ugh the major function of telephone is communication, television. The television can effectively and efficiently convey messages to entire spectators which is accordingly the most suitable way for the spreading of some important information, such as announcements or live reports.To sum up, I strongl

15、y believe that the benefits of television outweigh those of telephone because it has magically modified our everyday life by broadening our horizons, diversifying our ways of entertainment, and effectuating our communication.3. 是應(yīng)該放更多的錢在access internet 上，而不是public transportation.08.5.9NAAlthough a g

16、reat number people who maintain that government should invest money on the Internet rather than public transportation claim that the Internet can promote the prosperity of economy, as far as I am concerned, I concede that it is more important for authorities to pay attention to the development of pu

17、blic transportation because it can bring us remarkable social welfares by solving the severe problems of transportation, by meeting the fundamental demand of poor people, and by protecting the environment.Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is that the development of public

18、transportation can solve the serious traffic problems. Everyday, entangled in heavy traffics on our way, we have no choice but to let the traffic jams deprive of our precious time. Further evidence comes from the fact that innumerable people have lost their lives in traffic accidents, such as car cr

19、ashes. Faced with all the bothersome and miserable reality of the currently poor public transportation, shouldn t the government take effective measures to prevent things from getting worse?Besides, the need for advanced public transportation is more demanding than any other factors, such as the acc

20、ess to the Internet. For one thing, undeniably, there are still considerable poor people living below the standard living conditions in remote areas without highways or ordinary roads to the outside world, who cannot even afford the cheapest computer, let alone the access to the Internet. In that ca

21、se, building highways to promote their communication with the outside world is the principal task for the government. Furthermore, by reducing the price of public transportation and increasing the number of public vehicles, the poor can truly be benefited from the welfare of the society.Finally, ano

22、ther equally important factor is that the investment on public transportation can benefits the protection of the environment. For instance, the prosperity of public transportation can help to reduce the number of private vehicles on the road, which will make a great contribution to the reduction of

23、waste gas production of automobiles. Besides, the construction of warning signs on highway in the wild can help to protect the wild animals, such as antelopes, from being murdered by careless drivers.To sum up, I strongly believe that our government should invest money on public transportation inste

24、ad of the Internet in view of the obvious benefits it can bring our society.4Do you agree or disagree that scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries?08.11.8NAAlthough a great number of people who maintain that scientists should take the responsibility ofthe negat

25、ive influences of their discoveries claim that it is scientists who created opportunities for people to destroy the environment and complicate their own life, as far as I am concerned, I concede that scientists should not be mainly blamed for all the sins that human beings did because of the followi

26、ng reasons.Initially, one reason which makes me support my point of view is that scientists discoveries and inventions have brought people more benefits than detriment. As every coin has two sides, inevitable are the unfavorable effects caused by the development of technology. Never can we neglect t

27、he remarkable contribution scientists have made for our society. Thanks to their industrious efforts, modern technology has amazingly facilitated our life by emancipating us from heavy workload and lengthening our lifespan. In view of the improvement of our life, the advantages of technology far out

28、weigh the disadvantages.Besides, faced with the existing problems, scientists are not the only and the major party to be reproached. Looking back human history, if we have to find someone to blame, it is obviously human s endless desire. If it had not been for the exorbitant profits, innocent animal

29、s would not have died out under the gun. If it had not been for the aggressive ambition, fatal weapon would not have been used in devastating wars. Or if it were not for lack of self-discipline, addicts would not get entangled in drugs. In other words, people s boundless avarice, rather than scienti

30、sts, is the prime one to be condemned.Admittedly, when viewed from an objective perspective, their inventions and discoveries do have some adverse effects, but scientists did not create them intentionally. We ought to trust that they dedicate themselves into science and technology for the interest o

31、f the whole world, with the mere aim of refining our living condition.To sum up, I strongly believe that people should not reproach scientists for the unsatisfactory impacts of their discoveries when taking into account all their dedications and the driven force of human desire.5. Do you agree or di

32、sagree: Playing sports give you more lessons about the life.08.12.5NAAlthough a great number of people who maintain that people cannot obtain any knowledge of life by playing sports claim that the aim of doing sports is to keep a healthy condition, as far as I am concerned, I concede that individual

33、s can virtually learn some valuable lessons from sports, such as an awareness of competition, a sense of cooperation, and a better understanding of themselves. Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is that sports can help people realize the importance of competition. For one t

34、hing, since sports are often played in the forms of match, inevitable are the opportunities to face others rivals. In that case, when suffering from the pressure to win, people need to take efforts and use their wisdom. Accordingly, consciously or unconsciously, a quality of diligence is cultivated.

35、 For another, where there is competition, there is winner and loser. By playing in matches, people may get used to success and failure. Gradually, an optimistic attitude towards life will be fostered.Besides, people can also learn to cooperate with others by participating in sporting activities. Whe

36、n it comes to team sports, such as basketball and football, the success is based on the mutual efforts of the team. Each member has to cooperate with his or her fellow members in the game. For instance, in the basketball match, athletes need to pass the ball in order to score and it is almost imposs

37、ible for any individual, however preeminent he or she is, to make a dunk without the help of other team members.Finally, another equally important factor is that people s potentials can be discovered byplaying in sports. One essence of sports is to challenge limitation and conquer oneself. By taking

38、 part in sports, people can recognize their potential and valuable qualities which are previously ignored. For example, before Michael Phelps got access in swimming, he was considered a silly student with low IQ, however, things turned out that he was an unprecedented genius in the field of water. T

39、hanks to sports, his charm has ultimately been detected.To sum up, I strongly believe that sports can not only play an essential role in people physical health maintaining, but also benefit people s psychological world by improving their sense of competition and cooperation, and by excavating their

40、qualities. 第二組：6. 即使學(xué)生的專業(yè)和 basic science無關(guān)，也要讓所有大學(xué)生學(xué) basic science課.08.8.8NA Although a great number of people who maintain that it is unnecessary for students majoring in science of literature to study courses of basic science, as far as I am concerned, basic science is beneficial for students beca

41、use it can help with the learning of other subjects, with the improvement of living quality, and with the cognition of the world.Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is that the study of basic science can help with the understanding of other subjects. Basic science is the bas

42、is of both natural science and social science. For one thing, with the acceleration of modern technology, no subject can develop rapidly without the combination with other subjects. For instance, without the basic knowledge of math, one can never be recognized as a qualified accountant. Further evid

43、ence comes from the fact that an archeologist cannot conduct his or her research without a good command of chemistry, physics and biology. Furthermore, the study of basic science can improve students logical thinking ability by offering them opportunities to observe and analyze.Besides, a good knowl

44、edge of basic science is beneficial for students daily life. Take the case of gardening for example. Admittedly everyone wants to have a glamorous garden with colorful flowers and green grasses. However, only those who have a good command of botany can take good care of their garden effectively. Acc

45、ordingly, basic science is closely related to our everyday life.Finally, another equally important factor is that learning basic science can help students get to know the world they live in and learn to respect the power of nature. For example, an ecology lecture can change their attitude towards th

46、e relationship between human and environment. They will realize that all creatures are equal, and human beings have no right to pollute the environment that belongs to human, animals and plants. Only in this way, can people obtain the origin of life and the truth of nature.To sum up, I strongly conc

47、eive that university students should learn some basic science no matter what major they belong to, because of the benefits of assisting the learning of other courses, Although a great number of people who maintain that it is ridiculous to judge students success by their rooms claim that there is no

48、relationship between success and the tidiness of rooms, as far as I am concerned, I concede that students who can take good care of their rooms are more likely to succeed in the future because they tend to be more psychologically healthy, experience higher working efficiency, and have better working

49、 abilities.Initially, one issue which makes me support my point of view is that a clean and tidy environmentis beneficial for students mental health. As a reflection of peoples mind, tidy and well-organized rooms which appear spacious can have a positive effect on people psychological development, w

50、hile dirty and messy rooms affect people negatively. According to a survey, people surrounded by a mess are more likely to suffer from psychological diseases, such as repression and depression, than those who live in a neat place. In other words, the tidier the room, the broader ones mind will be.Be

51、sides, an organized and neat room can contribute to improve the working efficiency. It is reported that students living in a clean and tidy atmosphere have a more rejuvenated mind to analyze logically and memorize effectively. Furthermore, they are likely to be good time managers because they do not

52、 have to waste any time in dealing with the mess as the dirty students do, such as searching for a missing sock in a pile of newspapers, or looking for the textbook in a stock of stingy laundries.Finally, another equally important factor is that the propensity for tidiness is a reflection of student

53、s high ability of organization. An old saying goes that one who cannot manage his room can never take control over his career successively. In that case, the ability to organize ones life is essential for ones success in career because life and career are correlated greatly.To sum up, I strongly bel

54、ieve that whether a room is tidy or not is tightly related to the potential of success because it can affect a student s mental state, working efficiency, and organizational ability.8. Agree or disagree: Teacher who is a serious and strict person more effective than a teacher is humorous and easygoi

55、ng.08.8.23NAAlthough a great number of people who maintain that a strict and serious teacher is more competent for teaching effectively than a humorous and easygoing teacher claim that a harsh teacher is scrupulous and diligent, as far as I am concerned, I concede that humor is more effective than r

56、igor because of an easygoing teacher s efficient teaching method, delightful teaching atmosphere, and effective communication between students and teacher.Initially, one issue which makes support my point of view is that the teaching method of an affable teacher is more effective than that of a rigi

57、d instructor. With a flexible mind, an easygoing teacher can present knowledge in a vivid way to raise student s interest and improve their learning efficiency. For instance, when illustrating the knowledge of planets in solar system, a smart and humorous professor can associate each planet with a s

58、pecific ancient Greek mythology, which can facilitate us to obtain the knowledge of planets with ease and inspire our love for the world of astronomy. In contrast, unsatisfactory is the feedback of a stern and stubborn teacher who only imparts knowledge for its own sake without any further elaborati

59、on.Besides, the pleasant atmosphere in the classroom can act as a driven force for students to take industrious work. Immature psychologically, teenage students sometimes can be emotionally affected by the behavior of their teachers. Surrounded by a delightful atmosphere with warm encouragement and inspirational praises, they may obtain confidence and motivation to quest for truth in the ocean of knowledge. On the contrary, faced with stern restraints and critical blames, adol