大學英語六級考試短文寫作精講匯總

1、大學英語六級考試短文寫作精講1一、六級寫作評分標準    大學英語六級考試作文的目的旨在考核學生英語書面表達的能力。作文考試時間為30分鐘， 要求寫出不少于150個詞的短文。六級考試作文的出題方式有：命題作文，看圖畫或圖表作文，根據(jù)所給文章（英文或中文）寫出文章摘要或大意，給出關鍵詞作文等?？荚嚨淖魑膬热轂樯鐣⑽幕蛉粘Ｉ畹囊话愠ＷR，不涉及知識面過廣、專業(yè)性太強的內容。對作文的要求是：切題，文理通順，表達正確，意思連貫，無重大語言錯誤。    下面介紹六級考試作文的評分原則和標準，并通過五份樣卷作一個詳細說明。 

2、0;  （一） 作文評分原則    1. cet是檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規(guī)定的六級教學要求，對作文的評判應以此要求為準則。    2. cet作文題采用總體評分（global scoring）方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分（reward scores），而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。    3. 從內容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。內容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體，作文應表達題目所規(guī)定的內容，而內容要通過語言來表達。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而確切地表達

3、思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。    4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括0分，一名閱卷人員在所閱的全部作文卷中不應只給中間的幾種分數(shù)。    （二） 作文評分標準    1. 本題滿分為15分。    2. 閱卷標準共分五等： 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標準樣卷一至二份。    3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數(shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分數(shù)（即8分），若

4、認為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分數(shù)，即可加一分（即9分）或減一分（即7分），但不得加或減半分。    4. 評分標準：    2分條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。    5分基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。    8分基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。    11分切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。  &#

5、160; 14分切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。    注： 白卷， 作文與題目毫不相關， 或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想，則給0分。    5. 字數(shù)不足應酌情扣分    累計字數(shù)    注： 1.如題目中給出主題句， 起始句， 結束句， 均不得計入所寫字數(shù)    2. 規(guī)定內容未寫全者，按比例扣分。 實例一 2003年1月真題directions: for this part, you are all

6、owed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic it pays to be honest. you should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below: 1. 當今社會上存在著很多不誠實的現(xiàn)象。 2. 誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實。it pays to be honest in our modern social life， there are many examples around us

7、 show many people are cheated. advertisements cheat people， salesmen cheat people， even ones closest friends cheat him or her. so many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking： where is our honest exist？ everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. h

8、onesty does good not only to ourselves， but to others as well. if we are honest to others. we will be happier and be in a better mood. otherwise， well feel guilt at last. to a company and its advertisement， honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. if we cheat others， friends will never b

9、elieve you and they will leave you alone. to a company， no consumer will buy your product again. so， as the above is said， it pays to be honest. lets create a morally outstanding social. although honesty is believed to be a virtue， there are still dishonest people in our society. for example， some b

10、usinessmen sell fake product to their consumers； some students cheat in the exams. dishonest people are short-sighted. those who sell fake products may make money at first， but consumers wont buy their products any more. as a result， they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. by contras

11、t， honest people gain a lot. those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. BECause they are trustable and respectable， everyone is eager to make friends with them. b

12、esides， it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. generally speaking， every employer wants his employees to be honest. so we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.in a word， honesty wins trust， respect and honor. so it is important that we should be honest.

13、with the development of modern economic and industry， competitive is becoming more and more obvious. at the same time， the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. for example, some people found that he saled goods had

14、past the preservation date. not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. however, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.

15、 from the foregoing， we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. and it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. we should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. it is only that people all over the world are honest them our country wil

16、l be beautiful and wealthy. now in our society， many people are not honest in doing soming. we often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. for example， now we take the bus need carry cents own， and when you upstairs the bus， you should put the cent into the money box. eve

17、ry people do that， but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. for another example， it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others.i consider that every people should be honest. as a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be incr

18、ease and make our socity develop. in doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. if you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people. but if you dont be honest， people must unwilling to trath with you. so if you are want to be a

19、good people， remember honest first. nowadays， many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. we almost can find such things every day of our life： some students cheat in the exam for higher marks； some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment； and some d

20、octors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money， sometimes damaged the patients health， even their life. seeing this situation. i think it must be changed. being honest will benefit not only others， but also ourselves. first， your honesty will make others

21、willing to trust you. second， being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely， which helps to solve it. and the last， honest surely helps to make the society more harmony.so. i think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without hones

22、ty. 實例二 1999年6月真題directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic reading selectively or extensively? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below: 1. 有些人認為讀書要有選擇 2. 有些人認為應當博覽群書 3. 我的看法readin

23、g selectively or extensively? when it comes to reading， some people think that reading selectively is a good way， but some other people do not agree with them， they think that reading extensively is better.those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as man

24、y as bad books. those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. so, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. but， the other people， who hold that reading extensively is better， think th

25、at one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. even the best book only contains one field of information. so， they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more， to read more”。 so they believe that reading extensively is better.to my point, we should choose good books to read

26、and read good books as many as possible. by this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. i think reading not only selectively but also extensively. because the two sides are not contradict. our time is limited. so we can not read every book in the world. however， we will not be int

27、erested in every book. we should read those books may be useful to ours， read those books which we like. but those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge， news and so on， it also make ours become a wise man. on the one hand reading selectively let ours n

28、ot waste our time which it is limitted. moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. on the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. they are all useful to ours.most people thought that read books should have been selectived. but others belived readin

29、g extentively was correction.selective books or reading extensively?sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, there are too book to read for us. we should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us. on another hand. someones intresting was wide. each book could b

30、ring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level. i confirmed all of these ideas were good but werent wise. as a reader， the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. dont treat these books with rackless abandon.the

31、 best technology of reading is connect. how should we read？ should we read selectively or extensively？ everyone has his own view. some people think we should read selectively. they argue that with the development of modern science and technology， more and more books are published. it is impossible f

32、or us to read all the books. whats more， there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind， and we shouldnt read them. since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books， we must read selectively. but others may not agree. they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. if

33、one man has many kinds of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed. if a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields， he may be useless. since we must have many kinds of knowledge， we must read extensively. whos right？ i think both of them have something right. but i think we sh

34、ould read extensively first. we should read books in many fields， and read selectively in one field. some people think reading shall be choosed. because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.some people think that men shoud read books widely. because wide reading

35、can help man get much knowledge. and man can use it to change the world.it is my point that reading must be selectively. because reading is important to man. some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. it can be seen in the newspapers and watched on tv. we can make full use

36、 of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. it can make our life more beauiful. we must give up those unhelpful books. they are not good to us. reading them is wasting time and money. so reading selectively is an important part in reading.大學英語六級考試短文寫作精講2二、寫作常見錯誤分析一、語法錯誤(一)句子結構錯誤1. 主從句疊置1) th

37、ere are more and more students like to use the computer.2) there are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2. 簡單句疊置i like chatting on line very much, i go to the net bar almost every weekend.3. 從句疊置as is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.4. 句子成分

38、缺失if work hard, we will surely be successful.5. 語序錯誤1) why college students spend more and more time on the computer?2) i often wonder where have they got their money.(二)動詞錯誤1.時態(tài)錯誤many people thought that the internet will be more useful in the future.2.語態(tài)錯誤1) i have excited several days at the news

39、 that you will come here.2) most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.3.單復數(shù)錯誤1) wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.2) someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future.4.非謂語動詞錯誤1) let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you.2) do exercise

40、 in the morning is good for ones health.3) having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.(三)代詞錯誤1) we can use computers in doing everything you like.2) a college student should be able to do their washing on their own.(四)冠詞錯誤1) horse is an useful animal. 2) the exam

41、 will be held in the december, 2004.(五)詞性錯誤1) i wish you can consider my suggests.2) if a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用詞錯誤1) students must know how to apply a computer.2) people can touch many new things on the internet.3) the purpose of this letter is

42、to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表達習慣錯誤1) why generated so large a change?2) now 6000 yuan can buy a p4 computer.3) a room often lives 6-8 students.4) i think this great change has three reasons.5) the prices of the food are too expensive.6) the reason for this is because s

43、ome people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、標點符號及大小寫錯誤1) however, every coin has two sides, i think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) the man was racing down the street. because he was late for the class.3) at last i want to let you know, i lov

44、e our university very much.4) my favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) the best english film in my eyes isforrest gump.三、六級寫作題型分類(一)對立觀點型2000年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic is a test of spoken engl

45、ish necessary? the first sentence has already been written for you. you should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1. 很多人認為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是.2. 也有人持不同意見，.3. 我的看法和打算1999年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a

46、 composition on the topic reading selectively or extensively? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below 1. 有些人認為讀書要有選擇2. 有些人認為應當博覽群書3. 我的看法1998年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

47、 topic do “l(fā)ucky numbers” really bring good luck? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1. 有些人認為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運2. 我認為數(shù)字和運氣無關.1997年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic my view o

48、n job-hopping. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1. 有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因為.2. 有些人喜歡經(jīng)常更換工作，因為.3. 我的看法1996年1月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: why i take college engl

49、ish test band 6. you should base your composition on the following outline (given in chinese).1. 有些人認為沒有必要參加大學英語六級考試2. 我參加cet-6考試的理由1995年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic should firecrackers be banned? you should write at least 120 words and

50、you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1. 有人認為放鞭炮是好事，為什么?2. 有人認為放鞭炮是壞事，為什么?3. 我的看法1993年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic my view on opportunity. you must base your composition on the following instruction

51、s (given in chinese):有的人認為機會是極少的，另一些人則認為人人都會有某種機會。你的看法如何?寫出你的理由并且適當舉例。在你的文章結尾處不要忘記寫出你的結論。your composition should be no less than 120 words. remember to write it neatly.(二)解決問題型2003年12月directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled reduce waste on campus. yo

52、u should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1. 有些大學校園浪費的現(xiàn)象日益嚴重2. 浪費的危害3. 杜絕浪費，從我做起2000年1月directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic how i finance my college education. you should write at least 120 words, and base your compos

53、ition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1. 上大學的費用(tuition and fees)可以通過多種途徑解決。2. 哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)。大學英語六級考試短文寫作精講3   1998年1月directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic my view on fake commodities. you should write at least 120 words, and

54、base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:    1. 假冒偽劣商品的危害    2. 怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品    1995年1月    directions： for this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title： my view on the negative effects o

55、f some advertisements. you should base your composition on the following outline （given in chinese）。    1. 現(xiàn)在有些不良的商業(yè)廣告    2. 這些廣告的副作用和危害性    3. 我對這些廣告的態(tài)度you must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the composition sheet and remember to wri

56、te in readable handwriting.    1990年6月directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic how to solve the housing problem in big cities. four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. you are supposed to write in favor of one suggesti

57、on (one only) and against another (one only). you should give your reasons in both cases. you should write no less than 120 words. remember to give a short introduction and a brief conclusion. write your composition clearly.    四種可能解決住房問題的方案：    1. 多造高層建筑  

58、60; 2. 向地下發(fā)展    3. 建造衛(wèi)星城市    4. 疏散城市人口    1990年1月directions: for this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic how to solve the problem of heavy traffic according to the following outline. your composition should be no less than

59、 120 words. remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition. but you are not supposed to translate the outline word for word.outline    問題：城市交通擁擠    解決方案（solution）    1. 建造（lay down）更多道路    優(yōu)點：（1） 降低街道擁擠程度    （2） 加速車流（flow of traffic）    缺點：占地過多    2. 開辟（open