高三復(fù)習(xí)寫作

1、How to present a better writing？利辛高級中學(xué)高三英語備課組太擠了太擠了太亂了太亂了太空了太空了太潦草了太潦草了太花了太花了太沒譜了太沒譜了哥嘞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？哥嘞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯(cuò)的事實(shí)難掩你每句都錯(cuò)的事實(shí)?。“。∩?，你別抄閱讀理解行不？神，你別抄閱讀理解行不？俺們也會看試卷的！俺們也會看試卷的！閱卷老師最喜歡的閱卷老師最喜歡的!養(yǎng)眼的養(yǎng)眼的內(nèi)容內(nèi)容語法語法思想思想框架框架-組織結(jié)構(gòu)組織結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)全，拓展有度，有效要點(diǎn)全，拓展有度，有效連接詞，作文結(jié)構(gòu)緊連接詞，作文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；湊；流暢流暢準(zhǔn)確，復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)，準(zhǔn)確，

2、復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)，高級詞匯，多種句型高級詞匯，多種句型開放能引起讀者的共鳴開放能引起讀者的共鳴,靈魂靈魂高考書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求高考書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔（第五檔（21-2521-25分）分） 完全完成完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): :l準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無遺漏準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無遺漏l應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯l語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式 所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言應(yīng)用能力所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言應(yīng)用能力l有效地使用了語句間的連接成

3、分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔（第四檔（16-2016-20分）分） 完成完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): :l比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容l應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求l語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù) 雜語言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致雜語言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致l應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到了預(yù)期的應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到了預(yù)

4、期的寫作目的。寫作目的。Introduction (topic)1-2句句Body (supporting ideas)5-6句句Conclusion1-2句句 假定你是李華，你校將到黃山風(fēng)景區(qū)舉行假定你是李華，你校將到黃山風(fēng)景區(qū)舉行“我愛黃山我愛黃山”（Mt. Huangshan）主題活動。）主題活動。請你給交換生請你給交換生James發(fā)一封郵件告知活動的相發(fā)一封郵件告知活動的相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括：關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 1. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn) 2. 2. 活動安排活動安排 3. 3. 注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)注意：注意： 1. 1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左右 2. 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行

5、文連貫。可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Writing TaskWriting Task1. 審題審題2. 列提綱列提綱/要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3.連詞成句連詞成句4.連句成篇連句成篇5. 潤色修正潤色修正6. 定稿定稿體裁體裁人稱人稱時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)要求要求字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4開頭開頭正文正文結(jié)尾結(jié)尾體裁體裁人稱人稱時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài) 要求要求結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容內(nèi)容一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主Para.1Para.1Para.2Para.2Para.3Para.3抓要點(diǎn)抓要點(diǎn), 100個(gè)左右個(gè)左右信息信息1信息信息5學(xué)校舉行我愛黃山活動學(xué)校舉行我愛黃山活動. .邀請邀請James參加此活動參加此活動.

6、.集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)邀請參加，表達(dá)期望邀請參加，表達(dá)期望書信格式書信格式到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景，拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景，注意安全注意安全乘公交車返回乘公交車返回第一為主第一為主,我們我們學(xué)校將舉行活動學(xué)校將舉行活動.活動名稱為我愛黃山活動名稱為我愛黃山.我寫信想邀請你參加我寫信想邀請你參加. 開頭開頭信息信息1學(xué)校舉行我愛黃山活動學(xué)校舉行我愛黃山活動邀請邀請James參加此活動參加此活動. write /invite you /take part in call/I love Huang Shan Our school/hold

7、/activity集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，拍照，爬山，欣到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景賞黃山自然風(fēng)景,乘公交車返回乘公交車返回注意安全注意安全 .Be supposed to/Pay attention to/ personal safetyarriving/pick up litter /take photos/climb mountain /admire the beauty /return/ by busgather/school gate/7 am/Saturday morning.Set off for/Huang Shan信息信息2信息

8、信息3信息信息4集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景注意安全注意安全正正文文 .信息信息5邀請參加，表達(dá)期望邀請參加，表達(dá)期望結(jié)尾結(jié)尾Believe /be sure to/ participate / hope to see you 開頭開頭信息信息1 我們我們學(xué)校將舉行活動學(xué)校將舉行活動.活動名稱為我愛黃山活動名稱為我愛黃山.我寫信想邀請你參加我寫信想邀請你參加.Our school will hold an activity.The activity is called I love Huang

9、Shan.I am writing to invite you to take part in it. 6.We will go back by bus.5. arriving/ be supposed to /pick up litter /take photos/climb mountain /admire the beauty /pay attention to/personal safety信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)集合時(shí)間地點(diǎn)到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，到達(dá)之后的活動，撿垃圾，拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景拍照，爬山，欣賞黃山自然風(fēng)景,注意安全注意安全乘公交回學(xué)校乘公交回學(xué)

10、校正正文文4.gather/school gate/7 am/Saturday morning./Set off for/Huang Shan5.On arriving there, we should pick up litter. We can also take some photos, climb the mountain and admire the beauty of Huang Shan. We should pay attention to our personal safety. 6 go back /by bus4.We will gather at our school

11、gate at 7 am this Saturday morning. Then, we will set off for Huang Shan. .信息信息5邀請參加，表達(dá)期望邀請參加，表達(dá)期望結(jié)尾結(jié)尾Believe /be sure to/ participate / hope to see youI believe you will be sure to participate in this activity. Hope to see you Para.1:Our school will hold an activity. The activity is called I love H

12、uang Shan. I am writing to invite you to take part in it.Para.2:We will gather at our school gate at 7 am this Saturday morning. Then, we will set off for Huang Shan. On arriving there, we should pick up litter. We can also take some photos, climb the mountain and admire the beauty of Huang Shan. We

13、 are supposed to pay attention to our safety. We will go back by bus.Para.3:I believe you will be sure to participate in this activity. Hope to see you Dear James: Our school will hold an activity. The activity is called I love Huang Shan. I am writing to invite you to take part in it. We will gathe

14、r at our school gate at 7 am this Saturday morning. Then, we will set off for Huang Shan. On arriving there, we should pick up litter in Mt. Huang Shan. Then, we can also take some photos, climb the mountain and admire the beauty of Huang Shan. We are supposed to pay attention to our safety. After t

15、his ,We will go back by bus. I believe you will be sure to participate in this activity. Hope to see you . Yours sincerely, Li Hua二二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔三三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四四.嘗試多嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方樣化表達(dá)方式式一一.使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)定語從句定語從句名詞性從句名詞性從句(主賓表同從句主賓表同從句)各種狀語

16、從句各種狀語從句被動語態(tài)被動語態(tài) 1. Our school will hold an activity. The activity is called I love Huang Shan. It is of great significance to us. 一一.使用使用用分詞做后置定語，非限制性用分詞做后置定語，非限制性定從合并定從合并Our school will hold an activity called I love Huang Shan, which is of great significance to us.二二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔

17、We will gather at our school gate at 7 am this Saturday morning. Then, we will set off for Huang Shan.Gathering at our school gate at 7 am this Saturday morning, we will set off for Huang Shan.三三. 使用使用not onlybut also結(jié)構(gòu)，及分詞作狀語結(jié)構(gòu)，及分詞作狀語 we can also climb the mountain take some photos and admire the b

18、eauty of Huang Shan. We can not only climb the mountain but also take some photos while admiring the beauty of Huang Shan. 四四. 使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句（What is most important is that.）We are supposed to pay attention to our safety.What is the most important is that we are supposed to pay attention to our pers

19、onal safety.五五. 使用使用with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，it is time for .to do .After finishing those activities, We will go back by bus.With those activities finished, It is time for us to go back by bus.六六. 句式升級（句式升級（I hold the firm belief that）I believe you will be sure to participate in this activity. I hold the firm

20、 belief that you will be sure to participate in this activity. Dear James, Our school will hold an activity called I love Huang Shan, which is of great significance to us. I am writing to invite you to take part in it. After gathering at our school gate at 7 am this Saturday morning, we will set off for Huang Shan. On arriving there, we are supposed to pick up litter in Mt. Huang Shan. Moreover, we can not only climb the mountain b