1819 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ　Writing——建議信

1、Section Writing建議信寫作技法指導eq avs4al(文體指導)建議信大多要求我們根據(jù)所給的材料給出有針對性的解決辦法或者提出合理建議。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)建議信一般采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”。首段：表明寫作意圖，陳述事由，簡單介紹自己的觀點，注意語氣。主體段落：根據(jù)具體情況提出有針對性的建議或忠告。結(jié)尾段：對提出的建議進行總結(jié)，要注意表達方式，使對方容易接受。二、注意事項1注意結(jié)構(gòu)。通常以“三段式”結(jié)構(gòu)行文。2客觀地提出建議，針對對方的問題，給出你的觀點。3語言要委婉、精煉，同時要簡潔，表達清楚。eq avs4al(亮點句式)1建議信首段常用句式I am writing to express

2、my views about/concerning.You have asked me for my advice on.，and I will try to make some suggestions.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.2建議信中段常用句式I would like to suggest/recommend that.In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following actions.I think it would be more beneficial if you

3、 could.As to.I suggest that you should.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.For one thing.for another.To begin with.Besides.Last but not least.3建議信尾段常用句式In the end，I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Shoul

4、d you have any more problems，please feel free to contact me at any time.滿分佳作構(gòu)建eq avs4al(寫作任務(wù))假定你是李華，你的朋友張柯發(fā)email給你，就買什么樣的英語詞典想聽聽你的建議。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語給他回一封100詞左右的email，推薦他買電子詞典。1方便、快捷2內(nèi)置多部詞典、能發(fā)音3能儲存資料4其他參考詞匯：RAM 內(nèi)存eq avs4al(審題謀篇)體裁建議信時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主主題選購電子詞典人稱以第二人稱為主結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：表明寫作意圖，簡單介紹自己的觀點第二段：給出具體切合實際的建議并說明理由第三段

5、：表達期盼eq avs4al(遣詞造句).對接單元詞匯1superb adj.卓越的；極好的2possess vt. 擁有3evident adj. 明顯的4adopt vt. 采用；采納5a great deal 大量6figure out 弄明白7on (the) one hand.on the other hand. 一方面另一方面.巧用單元句式、語法(一) 完成句子1在上一次的電子郵件中你提出了這個問題。You put forward the problem in your last email.2我認為你擁有一本電子詞典是一個很好的選擇。I think it is a superb

6、choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary3無論你走到哪里，你隨身攜帶著它都很方便。It is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go. 【導學號：98892009】4很明顯，你可以盡快地在電子詞典中弄明白你想要的東西。It is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible.5查閱這種字典真是小菜一碟。Consulting this kin

7、d of dictionary is really a piece of cake.6當你遇到有用的材料時，你可以把它盡可能多地儲存起來。When you meet with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible7電子詞典里面有很多內(nèi)存。There is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.(二) 句式升級8用as for和定語從句合并句子1、2As for the problem you put forward in your last email，I thin

8、k it is a superb choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary.9用on the one hand. on the other hand.和連詞for合并句子3、4、5On the one hand，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go; on the other hand，it is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as

9、possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.10先用when分詞改寫句子6，然后再用because合并句子6、7When meeting with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible because there is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.eq avs4al(妙筆成篇)【參考范文】Dear Zhang Ke，As for the problem

10、you put forward in your last email，I think it is a superb choice for you to possess an electronic dictionary.On the one hand，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go; on the other hand，it is evident that you can figure out what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.When meeting with the useful material，you can store it as a great deal as possible because there is much RAM in the electronic dictionary.