公開課英語寫作教學(xué)課件-2

1、英語書面表達(dá)English Composition Writing第1頁，共19頁。開頭句型：1.As far as I am concerned,.2.Just as an old saying goes,.3.There is no denying the fact that.4.Nothing is more important than the fact that.5.has been a hot topic for years.6.As we all know,sth.has advantages as well as disadvantages.第2頁，共19頁。高頻萬能句型：1.

2、has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.2.Its urgent and necessary that.3.As time goes by,4.Its said that.5.Its important for sb. to do sth.6.Its obvious/clear that.7.Similarly, we should pay

3、attention to.第3頁，共19頁。結(jié)尾句型：1.It is high time that we did sth.是時(shí)候我們要做某事了。2.Obviously,we can draw the conclusion that.顯然，我們可以得到一個(gè)結(jié)論.3.To sum up,/In a word,.總之.4.Thus,it can be concluded that.因此，可以得到結(jié)論.5.Therefore,we can find that.因此，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn).6.Only in this way can we.只有這種方式我們才能.第4頁，共19頁。 As a junior stu

4、dent, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made rapid progress and became very confident. I th

5、ink I couldnt have done it without a good plan. 第5頁，共19頁。 Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can develop clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworkin

6、g alone.第6頁，共19頁。 Appreciate and learn the three well organized compositions from studentsThe Essay第7頁，共19頁。What makes a good essay?Discussion第8頁，共19頁。ContentEverything needed included which is related to your view.(內(nèi)容要完整)第9頁，共19頁。Structure*Good beginning and ending (好的開頭結(jié)尾)* Well organized and smoo

7、thly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢)* Proper linking words between sentences第10頁，共19頁。1. Based on this passage, _, making a plan before doing something is essential. 2. _, well complete our goal with a reasonable plan.3. _ its important to have a plan.as far as I am concernedOn the contrary as far as I am con

8、cerned on the contrary as a consequence使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 Use proper linking wordsAs a consequence第11頁，共19頁。4. As an old saying goes, “no pains, no gains”, _, I think, only by taking pains to complete our goals with a plan, can we attain success. 5._, I have realized the vital importance of a strong plan. how

9、ever Since thenhoweverSince then第12頁，共19頁。Language * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯(cuò)誤) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用和句式的富于變化)第13頁，共19頁。Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式 this passage, as far as I am concerned, Something

10、 is essential.2. Without a detailed plan, I couldnt even allocate my time sensible, making me idle away the entire vocation 1. Based onmaking a plan before doing第14頁，共19頁。Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式For my part, I think that a detailed plan is to a person what a lighthouse is to a s

11、hip. In a word, being a student, we should learn a rule, that is, a plan of vital importance for us to achieve success. 第15頁，共19頁。Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式5. Although beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their unplanned working are always useless, leading to the waste o

12、f both their time and superb ability. 6. Therefore, the confinement to success lies not only in ones capacity for substantial actions, but also in ones advanced planning 第16頁，共19頁。assessPlease learn to Your composition第17頁，共19頁。項(xiàng)目 自評(píng)他評(píng)1.書寫工整嗎？有沒有亂涂亂劃?2.句子開頭注意大小寫了嗎?3.有沒有注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)?4將文章分段了嗎?分成了幾段?5有單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤嗎?幾個(gè)?6.有時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤嗎?誤用了哪種時(shí)態(tài)?7.注意主謂一致了嗎?8.有沒有語態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤?9.有沒有使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞?使用得當(dāng)嗎?10.有沒有詞性的錯(cuò)誤?哪一種?11.簡單句表達(dá)正確嗎?12.是否注意使用了復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)?13.表達(dá)方式是否多樣化?注意長短句搭配了嗎?14.有沒有用好詞好句?用了哪些?書面表達(dá)評(píng)價(jià)表第18頁，共19頁。1.知道空氣的質(zhì)量相對(duì)很輕，并且空氣的質(zhì)量是可以測(cè)量的。掌握測(cè)量空氣質(zhì)量的實(shí)驗(yàn)方法。2.經(jīng)歷測(cè)量一袋空氣的實(shí)驗(yàn)，培養(yǎng)細(xì)致、認(rèn)真觀察