中考英語作文高分模板

1、 中考英語作文高分模板高分作文“十字訣”一、結構：三段式：觀點-要點-總結二、要點：全，圍繞中心三、邏輯：邏輯詞遞進：first, second, third, finally; first of all, in addition/whats more/ more over(都是另外的意思), in a word/all in all(表示總結); last but not least(最后但同樣重要的是)轉折：but, yet, however等因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, t

2、hus, therefore, as a result, so that, so/such.that.總結：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary四、語法：硬性要求，如人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、從句、單復數(shù)等問題五、亮點：高級詞匯和加分句型1. 表達不同觀點看法的句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Different people have different ideas/opinio

3、ns on this problem. 關于這個問題，不同的人有不同的觀點 = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人認為做某事是的 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Some of them are against the idea that it is 他們中有些人反對的想法 = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that(觀點一或二). It is not on

4、ly because, but also because All in all, the more., the more.2. 解決問題的句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT In recent days, we have to face a problem-_, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我們不得不面臨一個問題：_, 這個問題變得越來越嚴重； = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Faced with., we should take a series of effective measures to d

5、eal with the situation. For one thing, (解決方法一). For another, (解決方法二). Finally, (解決方法三). = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better. 我相信如果每個人都能對做出貢獻，這個.將會變得越來越好。3. 說明原因句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT The reason for this are as follows. 這一點的

6、幾種原因如下 = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT For one reason is that For another reason is that 一個原因是, 另一個原因是 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT On the one hand, ; On the other hand, 一方面，另一方面4. 說明利弊型句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (作文題目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvan

7、tages in.(題目議題). = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常來說，人們相信有如下幾點優(yōu)勢。 = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺點一；In addition, 缺點二. =

8、 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In that case, we will make a better use of 總之，我們應該盡力充分利用其優(yōu)勢，同時減少缺點。如果那樣的話，我們將能更好的利用5. 正反觀點式句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Recently we have had a discussion about whether we s

9、hould Our opinions are divided on this topic. (導入，觀點有分歧) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方觀點) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出2-3個理由) However, the others are strongly against it. (反方觀點). Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more.In a

10、ddition.(列出2-3個反對理由) = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms, so I support it. (個人觀點)6. 個人觀點論述句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for this are as follo

11、ws. (亮明自己的觀點） = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT First of all SecondlyBesides (列出2-3個贊成或反對的理由) = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT In conclusion, I believe that (總結，構成總分總結構)7. 提出建議類句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Im so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in in you last last letter(背景介紹). As far as I am concerned, it wou

12、ld be wise to take the following suggestions. (導入下文) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT To begin with, Id like to suggest that you should Because it can In add

13、ition, if I were you, I would This is a good way of Whats more, you are supposed to Only then you will(列舉建議內容以及理由) = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. (表達愿望)8. 表達活動邀請類句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I know that you are i

14、nterested in And I am writing to invite you to take part in (背景介紹，提出邀請) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT There is an activity about(活動名稱), which will be held (活動地點). It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on July 1st(時間) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, will be put on. (活動內容). = 3 * GB3 * MERG

15、EFORMAT Come and join us! I think well have a great time. (再次提出邀請) = 4 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)9. 表達求助類句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT (背景介紹). I find it is quite hard to (提出問題). Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/ give me a hand

16、. (表達目的) = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Im faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with Whats more What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you can help me with these difficult

17、ies. I really appreciate it if you could help me.10. 表達感謝類句型 = 1 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多虧） Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. = 2 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Without your help, its impossible for me to. (沒有你的幫助，對我來視說是不可能的) Without your help, its

18、impossible for me to get such good grades. = 3 * GB3 * MERGEFORMAT Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的幫助使得我做某事成為可能。)Your help makes it possible for me to change myself. 中考英語作文范文必備1. 【低碳生活-環(huán)?！楷F(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴重。作為一個中學生，我們應節(jié)約資源，保護環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個“低碳生活”的中學生。請以“My Low-carbon Life”為題，寫一篇短文描述

19、自己的“低碳生活”。My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always

20、 turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.2. 【朋友-社交】每當朋友之間即將分手的時候，耳邊常常會響起這首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，請你忘記我”。請你以Friends為題，寫一

21、篇90詞左右的短文，可以圍繞主題適當展開，闡述交友的重要性和好處。FriendsWhat are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Dont forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is h

22、ard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You cant walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.3. 【是否應該幫助陌生人-社會現(xiàn)象】最近，你們班就“是否應該幫助陌生人”展開了討論，同學們就這一話題意見不一，

23、你的看法如何?根據(jù)所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”為題，寫一篇短文。贊成幫助他人是美德；幫助他人就是幫助自己反對怕陷入麻煩；怕被誤解Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions.Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,

24、 and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, its hard to imagine what our world will be like.However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us troubl

25、e.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.4.【對我

26、影響最深的人-人物介紹】 學校英語社團在舉辦征文比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示內容，寫一篇題為“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英語文章。內容要點：1. 對我影響最大的人是我的媽媽，她四十幾歲;2. 她總是耐心傾聽我的問題，并建議我如何解決它們;3. 作為一名醫(yī)生，她常說再怎么仔細也不為過。她總是加班，把她的大部分時間都奉獻給了工作;4. 所以，我認為她不僅是位好媽媽，也是名好醫(yī)生。5. 我希望 The Person Who Has Influenced Me MostMy mother is the person who has influenced m

27、e most.She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she cant be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good do

28、ctor.I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. Shed better have more time to relax herself.5.【如何與父母保持良好的關系-家庭教育】某英文報社正就青少年與父母關系這一話題開展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點, 寫一篇80個詞左右的英語短文參加此次活動:1. 父母規(guī)矩太多, 過于強調學習成績, 不理解自己等問題;

29、2. 你對這些問題的看法;3. 你與父母保持良好關系的做法。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They dont allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my pa

30、rents dont quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they dont allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I stud

31、y hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.6.【安全演講】為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以”安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。1.慎重交友 2.遇險報警 3.安全飲食 4. 其他(1-2點)How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe

32、? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our h

33、ealth. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first !7.【關于閱讀】你喜歡閱讀嗎?請你以 “ReadingA good Habit” 為題寫一篇有關閱讀的短文。內容包括：1. 你的閱讀習慣(喜歡的書籍、閱讀的時間地點、購書方式等等)。2. 閱讀帶給你什么益處(至少兩點)。3. 號召大家都讀書。ReadingA good HabitReading is a very good ha

34、bit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some

35、 of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since readin

36、g can benefits us a lot, its time for us to have our good reading habit now!8.【養(yǎng)成良好的生活和學習習慣】養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣和學習習慣，對于我們每一位學生成長很有幫助。請根據(jù)提示要點用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)80-100左右的短文，發(fā)表在學校網(wǎng)站上。A Good Habit, a Successful School LifeA habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that

37、is hard to stop doing.In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet.Also, its necessary for us to exercise a lot.And we should learn to make good use of our time.In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson.In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully.Besides, its important f

38、or us to do our homework on our own.In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills.We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.9.【文明行為】為了使同學們與人交往時舉止更加文雅，你校學生會正在舉辦以“How to behave well?”為主題的英語征文比賽，請你寫

39、一篇短文。(以上背景內容無需表述)短文要點如下：1.學生應該守時、守信、不撒謊、不說臟話;2.禮貌待人，熱心助人;3.遵守交通規(guī)則;不在公共場所喧嘩;不亂扔垃圾;4.請你就此話題再補充一至兩點個人看法。How to behave wellBehaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.As a student, I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty word

40、s. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally，learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.10.【關于夢想】每一個人,每一個國家，都擁有夢想?！爸袊鴫簟笔悄壳白顭岬脑掝}。作為中學生，你是如何理解中國夢的?你

41、的中國夢是什么呢?為實現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢?假設你叫李紅(Li Hong),請以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的英語短文。My DreamEveryone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My

42、names Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I wont give it up , I must get it over .Im sure its very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, o

43、thers are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.11.【與他人相處】當今社會，與人交往越來越成為一種不可或缺的能力，作為中學生，學會如何與人相處尤為重要。假如上周你們班對“如何與人相處”展開了討論，請根據(jù)以下的討論結果，以“How to get on well with others?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。討論結果1.尊重他人；2.學會溝通；3.樂于助人；4我的建議How to get on well with othersAs w

44、e all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.

45、Whats more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.12.【飲食文化】在不同的地方有不同的風俗習慣，飲食文化很重要。中國的飲食文化不同于西方。請你談談中國的三餐，以“when you in China, do as

46、 the Chinese do!” 為題寫一篇短文。When in China, do as the Chinese doMeals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West.In China, lunch is usually served around 12 oclock.As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West.Chopsticks are used to eat most food.Generally, f

47、or dinner, there will be lots of different dishes, not just three courses.Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so its a good topic during a meal.The golden rule is: when youre in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!13.【傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-春節(jié)】近年來我國的發(fā)展世人矚目，中國的傳統(tǒng)文化正越來越受到各國朋友的關注。請根據(jù)提示，以“The Spring F

48、estival”為題寫一篇短文，向外國朋友介紹我國的春節(jié)。The Spring FestivalThe Spring Festival is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It is on the first day of the lunar year.People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate

49、 their homes. On Chinese New Years Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky mo

50、ney from them.14.【談論ipad使用利弊】假如你是李華,是一名初中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展,iPad已成為中學生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂,閱讀純文本電子書,又可以玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一篇短文,談談中學生使用iPad的利弊。短文內容必須包括以下幾點:1. 使用iPad對學習的好處;2. 對課堂紀律和學習可能產(chǎn)生的負面影響;3. 提出自己的建議并說明理由。Is iPad good or bad for middle school studentsIm a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many studen

51、ts have iPads and they think its a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and li

52、sten to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to stud

53、y, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.15.【感謝】三年的初中生活即將結束,靜坐在考場中的你,一定會思緒萬千。三年來,你在學習、生活等方面取得了優(yōu)異的成績,這些成績的背后有老師的辛勤教誨、家長的次次鼓勵,還有現(xiàn)在想來你很感謝他們。請以“Thank you,my.”為題寫一篇英語短文。Thank

54、 you,My English teacherI should say “thank you”to my English teacher.Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. Hes kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that w

55、e know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.I will remember him forever.16.【關于網(wǎng)購】隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念轉變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化。“網(wǎng)購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物

56、的文章。優(yōu)點：1. 足不出戶；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累。2. 價格通常比較便宜。3. 可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。缺點：1. 只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Ju

57、st by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two

58、sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.17.【保護野生動物】2020年，一種新型冠狀病毒 (novel coronavirus ) 在全球蔓延。據(jù)傳，這種病毒是從野生動物傳染給人類。假定你是李華，今天你班召開了“敬畏自然，保護野生動物”的主題班會，此次活動讓你認識到保護野生動物的重要性。班會后，你打算寫一份英文倡議書投給你校英文校報，以此號召全校同學行動起來，為保護野生動物而努力。Wild animals are our friends. We live on