大學(xué)英語四六級寫作范文賞析18篇

1、 范文 賞 析（一）My View on Fake Commodities假冒偽 劣商品的危害。怎樣杜 絕 假冒 偽 劣商品。My View on Fake CommoditiesNowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it is highly probable that you h

2、ave bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality。Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such

3、products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities?

4、 To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better

5、 job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.范文 賞 析（ 二 ）Knowledge and Diploma. 目前社 會 上存在 這樣 一 種說 法：文憑越高越吃香;.而有些人則認(rèn)為 文憑不等于知識 ; 你 的 觀 點Knowledg

6、e and DiplomaIt is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social real

7、ity - the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn t automatically translainto knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one esducational experience rather than a guarantee of one s ability. Therefore

8、, we can never measure the depthof one s knowledge by the grade of one s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people donhave a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world s most learned men.So I must say no one should ever e

9、quate a diploma with knowledge, becausea diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one lsif elong devotion.范文 賞 析（ 三 ）The Rise of Shanzhai Culture.最近興起了一股他寨熱II;.你 如何看待山寨現(xiàn) 象 審題概 述 本文是一篇論 述山寨 現(xiàn) 象以及人 們 和 你對 此看法的文章。第一段，概 述方 興 未艾的山寨熱 。第二段，闡 述山寨 產(chǎn) 品的 優(yōu)勢 以及 給 人 們帶來

10、的好 處 。第三段，論述人 們 和 你對 山寨 現(xiàn) 象的反 對 立 場 和 觀 點，即山寨產(chǎn) 品的非法性。The Rise of Shanzhai CultureThe vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made shanzhaithlb hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai vid

11、eo games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions ar

12、e clearly divided.Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindednessand practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the ori

13、ginal. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all th

14、e popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violat

15、ing intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people s risks.范文 賞 析（ 四 ）It s Time to Stop Software Piracy. 盜 版 軟

16、 件比比皆是;.盜 版 軟 件猖獗的原因;.如何打擊盜 版 軟 件 審題概 述 這 是一篇主要論 述 盜 版 軟 件猖獗原因和打擊盜 版 軟 件的措施的文章。第一段， 概 述中 國盜 版 軟 件泛 濫 的情 況 。第二段，重點分析盜 版 軟 件猖獗的主要原因。第三段， 側(cè) 重 闡 述打 擊盜 版 軟 件的措施。It s Time to Stop Software PiracyChina has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on

17、pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft elsectronic dictionaries and translators

18、. It nso exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, ea

19、sy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents

20、 unfair competition and by nature it as no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tigh

21、ten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.范文 賞 析（ 五 ）金融危機.金融危機給 各行各 業(yè) 都造成了一定影響 ;.金融危機對 大 學(xué) 生造成何 種 影 響 ;.作 為 大 學(xué) 生， 應(yīng)怎樣應(yīng)對這種影 響 . 審題概 述 這 是一篇主要論 述金融危機與 大 學(xué) 生 關(guān) 系的文章。第一段，概 述金融危機 給 世界造成的影響 。第二段，論 述金融危機給 大 學(xué) 生 帶來 的就 業(yè) 、 經(jīng)濟 等影 響 。第三段， 闡 述大 學(xué) 生面 對 金融危機 帶來 的影

22、響應(yīng) 提高 專業(yè) 技能等。Effects of Financial Crisis on College StudentsSince the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, m

23、illions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.College studentsinevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies

24、are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their stu

25、dies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagernessmight be taken advantage of by some malicious business people, or even criminal gang.In response to these threa

26、ts, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it csrucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, a

27、pply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust ourinstinct there nos free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.范文 賞 析（ 六 ）志愿者活 動

28、越 來 越多的人 從 事志愿者工作;志愿者工作的社會 意 義 ;作 為 大 學(xué) 生， 應(yīng)該怎么 做Volunteering actionsIn recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an in

29、creasing number of people become volunteers every year in China。Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough ta

30、sk to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success ofthese gamesAs modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our in

31、terpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.范文 賞 析（ 七 ）大城市就 業(yè)還 是小城 鎮(zhèn)很多的大 學(xué) 生 畢業(yè) 后留在大城市工作；也有人 選擇 到小城 鎮(zhèn)開 始自己的 職業(yè) 生涯；結(jié) 合自己的 實際 情 況談?wù)?自己的想法。Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the ot

32、her way round? Every graduate faces this question when starting his career. A large number of college graduatesprefer to stay in big cities,which mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more spacefor career development. At the sam e time, higher salary is another temptatio

33、。 nBut some other graduates intend to start in small towns. Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the management s attentionwin promotion earlier。As far as

34、 I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai. A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.范文 賞 析（ 八 ）Should College Students

35、 Live on Campusa.有些人喜歡住在學(xué)校的宿舍，因為b.有些人喜歡住在校外，因為c. 我的看法Should College Students Live on CampusThere are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus. Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently. They voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-ca

36、mpus lifestyles getting out of control. However, collegestudents have their own reasons for their choice。 sSome students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First, campus residents are closer to classes,the library, and other resources,so they are more likely to succeedin college and

37、 complete their bachelor s degree in four years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is agreat opportunity to meet all kinds of new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are more sociable. Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient. Often tim

38、es, off-campus housing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while living on campus, you don t have two orry about monthly rent payments and utility bills 。Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more

39、quiet time. Living off campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own. The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own hom。 eAs for me, I ma faithful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus

40、myself, have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so. To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experien ce范文 賞 析（ 九 ）Pursuit of A Master s Degree根據(jù)下 圖 描述某校 畢業(yè) 生 畢業(yè) 意向的 變 化分析 選擇讀研 的 畢業(yè) 生 數(shù) 目增加的原因說 明 選擇讀研對個人和社 會產(chǎn) 生的影 響It is illus

41、trated in the pie charts that graduates choices after graduation have experienmuch change. The number of students choosing to pursue a master s degree and study abrogrows several times over the decad。 eThe reasons of the increasing number of students pursuing a master dsegree are as follows. First,

42、with the number of college graduates growing each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter. The public awareness of the situation has created a surge of interest in seeking a master s degree. Secondly,-nmaatinoynaclrocsosmpanies set a muchhigher standard for new recruits

43、than ever. It seems that the higher education you have, the higher salary you may receive。Choosing to study for master s degree will benefit the individuals and the whole society as well. The quality of Chinese intellectuals will be considerably enhanced, which in turn willboost the progress of the

44、whole society范文 賞 析（十）Directions: For this part, you are allowe d 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say Thank You 11 to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:很多的大 學(xué) 生 從 未跟父母道過謝請說 明原因你 的建 議According to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergr

45、aduates,35% of university students have never said Thank you II to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitudeThe subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter of the interviewe

46、d students regard it as parents duty to support them spiritually and financially. Andit is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents. However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parentslovtenbuirare not accustomed to sayingThank you II . Someeven find a generation gap between

47、 themselves and their parents, thus feeling reluctant to express their affection for their parents。In my opinion, extending thankfulness to our parents is a way of respecting them and their love. We should express our feelings directly and bravely, but what ms ore important is, we should do all that

48、 we can to reward them。范文 賞 析（十 一 ）Fire Prevention on Campus前段 時間 校 園 火災(zāi) 頻發(fā) ，造成生命和財產(chǎn)損 失分析火災(zāi) 發(fā) 生的原因作 為學(xué) 生，如何 預(yù) 防校 園 火災(zāi) 發(fā) 生 審題概 述 這 是一分析火災(zāi)原因和如何預(yù) 防火災(zāi) 為 中心的文章，撰寫時 重點即在于此。開 篇 綜述校 園 火災(zāi) 頻發(fā) 情形及造成的生命和財產(chǎn)損 失，然后 說 明火災(zāi)原因，最后提出可能的火災(zāi) 預(yù) 防措施。第一段，主要概 述；第二段，說 明原因；第三段，詳細(xì)論 述措施。Fire Prevention on CampusPeople are alarmed

49、by the successionof campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported- houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking,earth results in these repeated tragedies?IIA brief surve

50、y of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heatersunattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is aro

51、und to turn off the power. In other cases,fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, e。 tcSince most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following th

52、ree reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.范文 賞 析（十 二 ）Enhance Awar

53、eness to Guard against Campus Thefts校 園盜 竊案件 時 有 發(fā) 生物品被 盜 的原因?qū)W 生如何加強防盜 意 識 審題概述 這 是一篇 論 述校 園 物品被 盜 和加強防 盜 意 識 的文章。第一段，主要陳 述校 園盜 竊案件 發(fā) 生的情 況 。第二段，主要分析校園 物品被 盜 的原因。第三段，主要闡 述 學(xué) 生 怎樣 增強防 盜 意 識 。 【范文】Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus TheftsIf you don t want to wake up and find you have no pants t

54、o wear, you d better put thon in sleep, goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses

55、, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dimeis likely to be stolen。What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of aler

56、tness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phonecall.

57、 These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monste。 rsIn order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempti

58、ng amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms。范文 賞 析（十 三 ）How Will Our Life Go on

59、 without Internet?網(wǎng)絡(luò) 提供 給 了人 們 豐富多彩和便捷的生活很多人 開 始感 覺 離 開網(wǎng)絡(luò) 寸步 難 行你對網(wǎng)絡(luò) 依 賴 癥的看法 審題概 述 本文是一篇論 述 你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人 們 生活 關(guān) 系的文章。第一段，側(cè) 重 簡 述 網(wǎng)絡(luò)給 人 們 生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳 述 網(wǎng)絡(luò)與 人 們 生活的 緊 密度。第三段，論 述 對網(wǎng)絡(luò) 依 賴 的觀 點。How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th cent

60、ury, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant li。 feToday, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest