上海中考英語作文指導(dǎo)

1、作文目錄1.AgoodwaytostudyEnglish學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法2.Agoodwaytostudywell努力學(xué)習(xí)的方法3.Travelling(7篇)旅游4.HazeweatherinShanghai（3篇）上海的霧霾天氣5.Myviewoncomicstrips漫畫之我見6.Mywaytoschool（2篇）上學(xué)路上7.MyviewsonanEnglishFestival（2篇）英語節(jié)之我見8.UsingtheInternetmakesourlifeconvenient運(yùn)用網(wǎng)絡(luò)使生活更便利9.Letslearntosmile學(xué)會淺笑10.Growingupwithgoodbooks（

2、2篇）好書伴我成長11.ThebestgiftIvereceived（3篇）我收到的最好的禮品12.Encouragementbringsmepower（5篇）鼓舞帶給我能量13.Beingapoliteperson做一個有禮貌的人14.Howtoprotectmyself2013上海中考滿分作文15.Writealetter寫一封信16.Thistimenextyear明年此時-1-AgoodwaytostudyEnglishMywayofstudyingEnglishistoreadlotsofEnglishbooks.Itisveryefficient.WhenIreadEnglishb

3、ooks,Icanlearnlotsofextra-curricularwordswhichenablemetowritebettersentencesaswellasunderstandarticlesbetter.）Besides,itcansetexamplesofwritingarticlesforme.SoIthinkreadingbooksisagoodway.Itenablesmetolearnbetterwithlesstime.However,thereisnodoubtthattherearestillsomebetterways.Butnomatterhowwelearn

4、,theideaofusinggoodmethodsneverchanges.Agoodmethodcanalwaysimprovethequantityandqualityofwhatwedo,notonlyforstudyingEnglish.AgoodwaytostudywellInmyopinion,readingwidelyisagoodwaytostudywell.Ononehand,readingwidelycanbringuslotsofpowerfulknowledgewhichwecantlearninclassaswellasgiveusmuchfun.Readingis

5、likestairsofahighmountain.Themoreyouread,thehigheryouwillgoandthebetteryouwilllearn.Ontheotherhand,readingcanalsoopenyourmind,whichwillhelpyoueasilysolvetheproblemswhicharesodifficultthatfewpeoplecanworkout.Howusefulthewayis!Tosumup,ifyoureadabookeveryday,youwillstudybetterandbetter.Nowadays,travell

6、ingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Astourists,weoughttopayattentiontoourbehaviors.First,respectinglocalcustomsisofgreatimportance.Weshouldlearnsometraditionsoftheplacebeforewetravelsothatwewontdothingsthatmakelocalpeopleunhappy.Also,wearingasmileisagoodwaytoshowourpoliteness.Whereverweg

7、oandwhateverwedo,smileisagreatpassportthatshowskindnessandfriendliness.Whenweareabroadorinothercities,weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandkindtolocalpeople.Inanutshell,lhopeyoucanfollowmytipswhenyoutravel.Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Manystudentsplantotravelwiththeirparents

8、onholidays.Butwhenwearetravelling,weshouldpayattentiontoourbehaviorsandtravelpolitely.Firstly,weshouldkeepquietwhenweretravelling.Secondly,itwillbeterribletodrawsomepicturesonfamousbuildings.Ithinkthatifwedothesethingswell,wellhaveagoodtimewhenwearetravelling.-2-Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreand

9、moreimportantpartofourlife.Asatourist,wemustpayattentiontoourbehaviors.Firstofall,wemustobeytherules.Next,wemustkeeptheenvironmentclean.Forexample,weshouldleaverubbishinrubbishbins.Acleanenvironmentcanmakeusfeelhappy.wemustrespectlocalcustomssothatwecangivethemagoodimpression.Moreimportantly,itwillb

10、everybadtohurttheancientbuildingsbecausetheyareverypreciousandtheyshouldbeprotected.inaword,itisimportantforustocontrolourselveswhenwearegoingforatrip.Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Quiteafewpeoplegoabroadtospendtheirholidays.Weshouldpayattentiontoourbehaviors.First,

11、weshouldputrubbishintorubbishbinsinsteadofleavingiteverywhere.Second,whenwehaveawalkalongthelakes,weshouldnthrowstonesintothelake.Whatsmore,weshouldntshoutorsmokeinpublicplaces.Weshouldgiveothersahelpinghandwhentheyareintrouble.Lastbutnotleast,itwillbenecessarynottodrawhereandthere.Ithinkifwedothese

12、,ourtravellingwillbebetter.Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Whiletravelling,weshouldpayattentiontoourbehaviors.Itisasimportantasenjoyingtheviews.First,whenwetraveltoanothercountry,weshouldrespectlocalcustoms.Ifwedont,wemaybenotpopularamongthepeopleinthatcountry.Second,

13、itwillbeterribletoleaverubbishintheriverorontheroad.Itmaymaketheviewlessbeautiful.Finally,weshouldbequietinpublicpplaces.Ifwearenoisy,wemaymakeothersunhappy.Asaresult,Ithinkweshouldpayattentiontoourbehaviorswhiletravelling.Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Whenwetravelt

14、ootherplaces,weshouldpayattentiontoourbehaviors.Firstly,wemustrespectlocalcustoms.Weshouldnworwritedraonthewall.Whatsmore,itwillbeterribletoleaverubbish.Instead,weoughttoputitintorubbishbins.Lastbutnotleast,wemustnttakephotosifitisntallowed.Ihopethateveryonecanbehavewellduringthetrip.Inthisway,ourli

15、fewillbebetter.Nowadays,travellingisbecomingamoreandmoreimportantpartofourlife.Asstudents,itiscommonthatwegotravellingwithourparentswhenwearefree.Butwemustpayattentiontoourbehaviorswhenwetraveltoothercountriesandlocalplaces.Firstly,weshouldrespectthelocalculture.Everycountryhasitsowncultureanditspre

16、cious.Sowecantberudetotheirculture.Whatsmore,whenweavearriveatafamoussceneryspot,weecantakephotoswithitsothatwecanhaveanicememoryaboutit.butwecantdestroyanyofit.Instead,we-3-shouldprotectit.Lastbutnotleast,ifweseesomeonedoingsomethingwrongwhenwetravel,wemuststopthem.Allinall,onlytravelinarightwaycan

17、wefeelthehappinessfromtravelling.HazeweatherinShanghaiItcommonsknowledgethatShanghaiisamoderncitywithconstantheavyhaze.Ithascausedgreattroubleandbroughtmuchinconvenience.Onthestreet,wealwayswearmasksandgetsickbecauseofthedirtyair.Atthecrossing,accidentsalwayshappenbecausethedriverscanseetclearly.The

18、flightsareputoffbecauseofthesmoggyweather.Toavoidthehazeweather,Ihopethatwewillprotecttheenvironmentfromnowon.Ononehand,peopleshouldplantmoretreestoreducecarbondioxide.Ontheotherhand,peoplecanwalkorrideinsteadofdrivingcars.Onlybydoingso,canwereducethesmoggydaysandmakeShanghaimorebeautiful.Hazeweathe

19、rinShanghaiAsweallknow,thehazeweatherinShanghaibringsuslotsofinconvenience.First,ouroutdooractivitieshavetobecancelled.Second,wehavetowearmasksbecauseofthepoorairquality.Inaddition,wecantseeclearlyinhazeweathersotherearemoretrafficaccidentsandtrafficjamsontheroad.Therefore,inordertohavemorefreshair,

20、Isuggestwedbettergooutonfootorbybusinsteadofdrivingcars.HazeweatherinShanghaiNowadays,moreandmorehazeappearsinShanghai.Itcausesalotofproblemsinourdailylife.Inhazeweather,Imustputonmymaskinsteadofbreathingfreely.Ievencantplayoutsidewithmyfriends.Inordertoimproveairquality,peopleshouldwalkinsteadofdri

21、vingcarsandfactoriesmustreducethereleaseofthedirtygas.Allinall,Ihopetherewillbenomorehazeweatherandairpollutioninthefutureandeveryonecanbreathefreelywithoutthemasks.-4-MyviewoncomicstripsThereisnodoubtthatcomicstripsplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.Itsbecausecomicstripscanmakeourlifecolorfulandmean

22、ingfulifwereadthemproperly.Firstly,theplotsaresoattractiveandinterestingthatIcanthelpfallinginlovewiththem.Whatsmore,eachcharacterincomicstripsashhisorherownstrongpersonalitiesfromwhichIcanlearnthevalueofpersonslifeanddiffergoodandbadvirtues.Lastbutnottheleast,amountsoffunnypicturesandtextsincomicst

23、ripsoftenmakemeburstintoloudlaughter.Howrelaxingitistoreadcomicstrips.Eachcoinhastwosides.Weshouldbearinmindthatwecantbetooindulgedinreadingcomicstripstowasteourprecioustimeinstudying.MywaytoschoolTherearemanywaystogotoschool,suchasridingabikeandtakingabus.Astome,Iusuallygotoschoolbybike.Ithinkitisa

24、goodway.Thefollowingarethereasons.First,itisfasttoridetobike.Thereisusuallyatrafficjamonmywaytoschool,soridingabikecanbeevenfasterthandrivingacar.Second,itishealthytorideabike.Itcanmakemestrong.Inaddition,ridingabikecanhelpprotecttheenvironment.Itwontuseanyoilorelectricity.Therefore,itcansaveenergy.

25、Inaword,ridingtoschoolcanbeagoodchoice.MywaytoschoolIgotoschoolonfoot,andIthinkitsnotonlygoodforourenvironmentbutalsogoodformyhealth.Walkingtoschooldoesntneedpetrollikecarsandbuses,soitwontpollutetheair.Whatsmore,Icandoitasakindofexercise.Imaginethatgoingtoschooleverydayisjustlikeexercisingregularly

26、,howgooditisforourhealth!Inaddition,towalktoschoolisanotherwaytorelaxmyself.Icanenjoythesceneryonbothsidesofstreetssuchastress,flowersandbuyroads.Itisenjoyabletowalktoschool.Doyouwanttohaveatrytogotoschoolonfoot?AnEnglishFestivalSupposethereisanEnglishFestivalinyourschooleveryyear.Somestudentsthinki

27、tishelpful,butothersdontthinkso.Whatdoyou）think,why?AsfarasImconcerned,anEnglishFestivalshouldbeheldinourschool.Thereareseveralreasonsforit.First,anEnglishFestivalcanopenoureyesandaddourknowledge.Second,anEnglishFestivalcanletusmakealotoffriends.Third,anEnglishFestivalcanenrichourschoollifeandmakeou

28、rschoollifemorecolorfulandmoreenjoyable.Therefore,IthinkitisnecessarytoholdanEnglishFestivalinourschooleveryyear.-5-AsfarasImconcerned,anEnglishFestivalisveryusefultoourstudyandschoollife.Ononehand,celebratinganEnglishFestivalcanmakeourschoollifecolorfulandinteresting.Itsenjoyabletospendourschooltim

29、eincelebratingtheFestival.Ontheotherhand,wecanlearnalotformthisfestivalsuchasthetraditionofforeigncountriesandtheforeigncultures.WecanalsoimproveourEnglishspeakingskillbytalkingtoothers.Aboveall,wecancommunicatewithteacherandclassmatesregularlyanddiscusswiththemwarmly.Asaresult,wecangetalongwellwith

30、them.BecauseofthereasonsIvementioned,IthinkitisusefultohaveanEnglishFestivalinourschooleveryyear.UsingtheInternetmakesourlifeconvenientNow,thereisnodoubtthattheInternetplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Itmakesourlifemoreconvenient.Iuseitmonthly.WiththeInternet,wecansearchforanyinformation（wewanttok

31、now）athome.Wedonthavetogotothelibraryorlookitupinbooksanymore.Thiscanhelpussaveourtime.Whatsmore,buyingthingsontheInternetisalsoveryconvenient.Weneedntgotothemall.WecanjustbuythingswewantontheInternet.Howwonderfulitsounds!Moreimportantly,wecannotonlycommunicatewithothersthroughtheInternetbutalsomake

32、newfriendsthroughit.Itmustbeveryinteresting,isntit?Inaword,usingtheInternetmakesourlifeconvenient.IcantimaginewhatourlifewillbelikewithouttheInternetnowadays.LetslearntosmileTotellyouthetruth,smileisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Ioftensmileinmydailylife.Ononehand,smilecanmakeusrelaxedandbringha

33、ppinessandfuntous.Ontheotherhand,smileshowsfriendshiptoothersandcomfortsotherswhentheyareupset.Whenwemeetdifficulties,itsagoodideatosmileandencourageourselvestotryagain.Weshouldkeepsmilingwhenwefeelangryinsteadoflosingourtemper.Itshowsthatwerepoliteandhitsthepersonwho-6-oftenmakesusangry.Inaword,smi

34、lecanmakeourlifebetter.Weoughttolearntosmilemoreoften.GrowingupwithgoodbooksWhenspeakingofgoodbooks,thefirstthingtocomeintomymindisthebookwithothercountriesculturesandcustom.Youwillfindalotofadvantagesaslongasreadingthem.Firstofall,wecangetenoughknowledgeweveneverknown,andwidenourviews.Besides,theya

35、reveryinteresting.Nomatterhownoisyoutside,IIalwaysburymyselfinreading.Howamazing!Wecanalsotravelaroundtheworldwithoutleavingachair.Themorebooksweveread,themorecultureandcustomwewillknow.Tosumup,growingupwithgoodbooksareveryessential.Whynotpickupabooktoreadwithme!GrowingupwithgoodbooksWhenspeakingofg

36、oodbooks,thefirstthingtocomeintomymindisthebookwithothercountriesculturesandcustom.Youwillfindalotofadvantagesaslongasreadingthem.Firstofall,wecangetenoughknowledgeweveneverknown,andwidenourviews.Besides,theyareveryinteresting.Nomatterhownoisyoutside,IIalwaysburymyselfinreading.Howamazing!Wecanalsot

37、ravelaroundtheworldwithoutleavingachair.Themorebooksweveread,themorecultureandcustomwewillknow.Tosumup,growingupwithgoodbooksareveryessential.Whynotpickupabooktoreadwithme!ThebestgiftIvereceivedInmymind,thebestgiftIvereceivedisabasketballMysister.gaveittomeonmyfifteenthbirthday.Weusuallyplaybasketba

38、llonweekends.Itnotonlyhelpsmebecomestrongerandhealthierbutalsoteachesmehowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inaword,IreallyloveplayingbasketballandthisisthebestgiftIvereceived.-7-ThebestgiftIvereceivedWhenwetalkaboutgifts,IcanthelpthinkingtheofbestpresentfromPeterwhichisthebridgeofourfriendship.WhenIwasinGra

39、deSix,IfeltlonelyandhelplessbecauseIhadnofriends.Butsomethingunexpectedhappened.Aboycalledpetergavemeafootballwhichissmallandroundasagift.Afterthat,webecamethebestfriendsandplayedfootballtogetherwithoutworryorfearregularly.Thefootballnotonlybroughtushappinessandamusementbutalsostoodforourlonglasting

40、friendship.Therefore,itisnodoubtthebestgiftIvereceived.ThebestgiftIvereceivedItwassurprisingthatmyauntgavemeadressonmy10thbirthday.Thedresswasbeautifulwithcolorfulbutterfliesonit.ItshockedmealotbecauseIwasjustlikeaTomboyatthattime.IalwaysworejeansandshirtssothatIcouldplayfreelywithboysalldaylong.How

41、ever,thisdresschangedme.Myaunttoldme“Agirlneedstowearadressandbequietlikealittlecatbutnotrudelikeaboy.”ThiswonderfulgiftchangedmealotandIamthankfultomyauntbecauseofherwordsandthemeaningfulgift.EncouragementbringsmepowerEncouragementisimportantinourdailylife.Itbringsmethepowertodoeverything.OnceIwass

42、onervouswhentakingpartinaspeechcompetitionthatIwantedtogiveup.Atthattime,Isawthesmileonmyteachersface.Suddenly,thewarmthspreadthroughmybodyandarousedmyconfidence.Itwasmyteachersencouragementthatgavemepowertobebrave.詳盡地記述一件事Indeed,encouragementgivesusthepowertoconquerthedifficultiesnomatterhowhardthe

43、yare.Itcanlightenupourroadsinthedistanceandletusgainthehope.Tosumup,encouragementmakesmepowerfulandtough.EncouragementbringsmepowerAlthoughithasbeenseveralyearssincemyfirsttimetoperformonthestage,Istillremembereverydetailofit.Thatwasmyfirsttimetostandbeforesuchalargeaudience.Myhandsweresweating,myle

44、gswereshakingandIcouldevenhardlysayaword.Underthiscircumstance,Isawmyparents-8-smilingatme.Ijustdidntwanttodisappointthem,soIdeterminedtotrymybest.Asmyshakingvoicebroketheembarrassingatmosphere,Ifeltincreasinglyconfident.Thankstomyparentsencouragement,Ifinallyhadmyperformanceperfectlyended.Itstruckm

45、ethatitisparentsencouragementthatleadstochildrensinspirationofsuccess.Theirencouragementgivesmepower.Andsometimesevenasimplesmilecontainstheirloveandunderstanding.EncouragementbringsmepowerEncouragementisthemostamazingthingintheworld.Myparentsencouragementbringsmepower.開頭點(diǎn)題。WhenIwasyoung,Ididntlikes

46、wimming.Ithoughtitwasdifficult.Everyweekend,myparenttookmetotheswimmingpool.SometimesmyfatherswamhimselfsothatIcouldunderstandhowtoswimclearly.Theyencouragedmeandsaid“Dontworry.Letitgo.”NowIcanswimverywell.Myparentsencouragementbringsmepowerandmakesmestrong.EncouragementbringsmepowerEncouragementist

47、hebrightestsunshinewhichbringsmewarmthandpower.AmongtheencouragementIhavereceived,themostmemorableonehappenedatthechemistrylab.Withexcitement,Istartedmyfirstexperiment.ThoughIhadlearnedthemethodsfrombooks,mybrainwentblankwhenIsawvariousinstruments.ButmypartnercalmedmeandsaidIcouldcertainlysucceedbec

48、auseofmygoodpreparation.Shehadconfidenceinme.Justthen,everythingbecameclearandwecooperatedperfectly.Anotherexamplecamefrommyphysicsteacher.WhenIfailed,herencouragementalwayssupportedmetotryagain.Theirencouragementsarethepricelesspresents.Iwanttopassontheirkindnessandbringpowertomorepeoplebyencouragi

49、ngthem.-9-EncouragementbringsmepowerEncouragementisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Itsliketheleadinglightinthedarkness,adropofwaterinthedesertandmedicineforthepatients.Itbringsmepower.OnceIgotapoorscoreinmathsandfeltreallydisappointedforIhadtriedmybestforsolongbuthadnothinginreturn.Itwasmyteacher

50、whoencouragedmetokeepworkinghard,believeinmyselfandnevergiveup.Thosewordsmakemepowerful.Igotmyconfidencebackandwasdeterminedtofacemyweakness.Afteralongtermofhardwork,Ieventuallymanagedtodowellinmaths.Iwouldnevermakeitwithoutteachersencouragement.BeingapolitepersonInmyopinion,beingapolitepersonisveryimportanttous.However,whatcanIdotobeapoliteperson?Firstofall,weshouldsaypolitewordsinsteadofdirtywords.Forexample,Ialwayssay“Bye”tomyparentswhenIleaveforschool.Secondly,weshouldntspeakloudlyin