英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題演示

1、（優(yōu)選）池國祥英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題第一頁，共五十四頁。Importance of Publication- Scientific records- Communication with international community- Contribution to scientific advancement- Social-economic impacts- Career development寫作過程也是科研的一部分：激發(fā)思維，推敲研究結(jié)果的意義。審稿和修改過程對(duì)科研有促進(jìn)作用。第二頁，共五十四頁。英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題第三頁，

2、共五十四頁?？萍颊撐膶懽鞯闹饕獑栴}是論文結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題，而不是英文問題。結(jié)構(gòu)好而英文不好的論文很容易修改，而結(jié)構(gòu)不好的論文則很難改。第四頁，共五十四頁。Highlight 只說做了什么，沒說發(fā)現(xiàn)什么Detailed petrographic work carried outImportant constraint on U mineralization recognizedXenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca BasinOnset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine format

3、ion第五頁，共五十四頁。引言的核心是 What Why How不要把研究結(jié)果在前言里講出來第六頁，共五十四頁。沒有分清目的 (purposes) 和目標(biāo) (objectives)This paper aims to carry out detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processe

4、s of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.第七頁，共五十四頁?？斩吹奈墨I(xiàn)總結(jié)Empty Review: The sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith (1978) and Walker et al. (1990). Little work has been done on dia

5、genesis, except a stable isotope study by Lee (1998). The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook (1989), .Informative Review: The Viking Formation has been interpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones (Smith, 1978; Walker et al., 1990). A diagenetic study of c

6、alcite cements by Lee (1998) yielded d18O of -18 to -15%o (PDB), which were interpreted to indicate第八頁，共五十四頁。參考文獻(xiàn)的引用不恰當(dāng)有些地區(qū)前人已做了大量工作。但這不意味這你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得當(dāng)。引用要放在恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?。引用某文（或圖）等于告訴讀者“請(qǐng)看”。要把 Credit 給該給的人。第九頁，共五十四頁。Cite references in chronological orderThere are a number of previous studies in th

7、is field (Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 2001; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Andes et al., 2001; Smith, 1999; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Sun et al., 1988; Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 2001).第十頁，共五十四頁。For first author of

8、 the the same name, the order of listing references is single-author first, two-author second, and multi-author last (in chronological order)Li, S., 2011, Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .Li, S. and Baker, A., 2003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989, .Li, S., 2011, Li, S. and Baker, A., 2

9、003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989, .Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .第十一頁，共五十四頁。區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景沒有根據(jù)本文的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行取舍區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景的介紹是很有講究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地質(zhì)背景，要根據(jù)本文的重點(diǎn)有所側(cè)重。第十二頁，共五十四頁?，F(xiàn)象或數(shù)據(jù)的描述與解釋混雜在一起We have detected high concentrations of CO2 in the fluid, which is most likely derived from the mantle. However,

10、 some crustal CO2 has also been detected, as reflected by its carbon isotope composition. The ores are characterized by laminated structures, which are likely of syngenetic origin The syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area, suggesting that these deposits are p

11、robably of SEDEX type. 第十三頁，共五十四頁。缺乏詳細(xì)的地質(zhì)描述第十四頁，共五十四頁。缺乏詳細(xì)的巖相學(xué)描述第十五頁，共五十四頁。把前人或自己已發(fā)表的數(shù)據(jù)列在結(jié)果部分Data sourcesLiang et al. 2008Liang et al. 2008Zhu et al. 2011This studyThis studyThis studyThis study第十六頁，共五十四頁。展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分第十七頁，共五十四頁。展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分第十八頁，共五十四頁。5. Discussion5.1. Ages of mineralization5.2.

12、Sources of ore-forming components5.3. Ore precipitation mechanisms5.4. Ore genesis礦床類型不等于礦床成因:Ore genesis: Based on the geological and geochemical characteristics, this mineral deposit is considered to be a MVT deposit. 把礦床成因和礦床類型混肴第十九頁，共五十四頁。討論部分沒有與引言呼應(yīng)，沒有以事實(shí)為依據(jù)Introduction: This paper aims to unde

13、rstand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.Discussion: In this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern New Brunswick, especially on the role th

14、at crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.第二十頁，共五十四頁。討論部分把在引言部分說過的話又說一遍Introduction: The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .Discussion: The origin of the Poplar Mountai

15、n gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .第二十一頁，共五十四頁。討論部分與結(jié)果部分小標(biāo)題重復(fù)2. Results2.1 Oxygen isotopes2.2 Carbon isotopes2.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discussion3.1 Oxygen isotopes3.2 Carbon isotopes3.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discus

16、sion3.1 Sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 Ore precipitation mechanisms第二十二頁，共五十四頁。圖例說明沒有直接標(biāo)在圖例旁邊第二十三頁，共五十四頁。參考文獻(xiàn)格式?jīng)]按要求作者沒列全錯(cuò)字太多名字縮寫不統(tǒng)一期刊名稱縮寫或不縮寫不統(tǒng)一卷號(hào)及頁碼格式不統(tǒng)一多余的空格第二十四頁，共五十四頁。英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題第二十五頁，共五十四頁。“The” 的用與不用Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposi

17、ts in the southern Hunan. The Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposits in southern Hunan. There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan area. 第二十六頁，共五十四頁?！皌he”, “a” 及復(fù)數(shù)的使用要根據(jù)上下文而定“The” 含有“那個(gè)”或“那些”的意思第二十七頁，共五十四頁。沒有必要的副詞VeryDefinitelyObviouslyExtremely Strongly第二十八頁，共五十四

18、頁。放在句子前面，可有可無的的副詞Basically, Actually, If fact, 第二十九頁，共五十四頁。不客觀的肯定語氣The deposit must have been formed from fluid mixing. The deposit may have been formed from fluid mixing. The deposit was likely formed from fluid mixing. 第三十頁，共五十四頁。不可數(shù)名詞不能用復(fù)數(shù)This conclusion is supported by many evidences. This concl

19、usion is supported by several lines of evidence. Researches, equipments, 第三十一頁，共五十四頁。Zircon and zirconsWater and watersWork and works有些詞可當(dāng)可數(shù)名詞或不可數(shù)名詞，但意思不同第三十二頁，共五十四頁?！?” 與“ ”的區(qū)別Fault-controlledcm-sizedRegional-scaleIce-melting1020 cmquartzpyrite assemblageNESW trendingFigs. ac 第三十三頁，共五十四頁。The Huangl

20、ong FormationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao formationsFormation 還是 formation？The Huanglong formationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao Formations第三十四頁，共五十四頁。有些中文專業(yè)詞匯可譯為多個(gè)含義不同的英文詞匯成礦：Metallogeny; Mineralization測試：Test; Analysis指示：Indicate; Suggest根據(jù)：According to; Based on包含：Contain; Include勘探：Prospecting; Explor

21、ation區(qū)： District; Area帶： Belt; Zone礦體：Ore body; Orebody特征：Features; Characteristics第三十五頁，共五十四頁。不要用不同的名詞描寫同一個(gè)東西或地方The Shizishan orefield is located in the Lower Yangtze metallogenic belt. There are numerious Mesozoic granitic intrusions in the Shizishan district. Different types of mineralization occ

22、ur in the Shizishan area . The Shizishan deposit is interpreted to have formed from . 第三十六頁，共五十四頁。“between and ” 和 “from to ” 的區(qū)別25333644555677888990The Th values are between 25o and 90oC.The Th values range from 25o to 90oC.第三十七頁，共五十四頁?？臻g副詞和時(shí)間副詞Often, frequently, sometimes, occasionally 等表示時(shí)間概念的詞不能

23、用來描述地質(zhì)現(xiàn)象出現(xiàn)的普遍性或偶然性。正確的用詞應(yīng)該是 commonly, generally, locally, in places, 等等。Gold often occurs in fractures in quartz, but sometimes it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.Gold commonly occurs in fractures in quartz, but locally it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.第三十八頁，共五十四頁。避免過長或過短的句子過長的句子容易造成誤解。過短的句子給人感覺信息量太

24、少，效率太低。長句短句相結(jié)合讀起來比較舒服第三十九頁，共五十四頁。避免主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句反復(fù)交叉使用A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area. Many researchers have studied the mineralogy and geochemistry of the deposits. However, the origin of the deposits has not been well understood.A number of mineral deposits have been

25、discovered in the study area. Many of them have been studied for mineralogy and geochemistry. However, their origin has not been well understood.第四十頁，共五十四頁。兩個(gè)句子之間不能用逗號(hào)分開The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake g

26、old deposit is located in northwestern Ontario; it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, and it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. 第四十一頁，共五十四頁。美式英語與英式英語不可混用Colour vs colorMetre vs meterCentre vs centerVapour

27、 vs vapor第四十二頁，共五十四頁。英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題第四十三頁，共五十四頁。不要用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字開始一個(gè)句子145 fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.One hundred and forty-five (145) fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temper

28、atures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.第四十四頁，共五十四頁。數(shù)據(jù)的小數(shù)點(diǎn)用的不對(duì)The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100.2o to 190.8oC, and the salinities range from 27.88 to 35.69 wt.% NaCl equivalent.The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions ran

29、ge from 100 to 191oC, and the salinities range from 27.9 to 35.7 wt.% NaCl equivalent.第四十五頁，共五十四頁。不要用 10-6 做單位The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 10-6 and 45.6 10-6, respectively.The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 ppm and 45.6 ppm, respectively.第四十六頁，共五十四頁。英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題第四十七頁，共五十四頁。Submission f