英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文解析及寫(xiě)作素材積累話(huà)題04 家庭環(huán)境與教育-五年高考（2014-2018年）

1、高考資源網(wǎng)（ ），您身邊的高考專(zhuān)家歡迎廣大教師踴躍來(lái)稿，稿酬豐厚。 高考資源網(wǎng)（ ），您身邊的高考專(zhuān)家歡迎廣大教師踴躍來(lái)稿，稿酬豐厚。 家庭教育和教育類(lèi)是在高考作文考試中比較常見(jiàn)的，與社會(huì)類(lèi)和環(huán)境類(lèi)并稱(chēng)為作文話(huà)題三劍客，同學(xué)們?cè)趶?fù)習(xí)的時(shí)候，命題者可能會(huì)圍繞這三類(lèi)話(huà)題：1 教育的功能中學(xué)階段應(yīng)當(dāng)提供通才教育還是專(zhuān)才教育？要不要延長(zhǎng)義務(wù)教育年限？要不要讓農(nóng)村地區(qū)的學(xué)生更容易上學(xué)？老師要教學(xué)生如何判斷是非嗎？對(duì)于社會(huì)角度，學(xué)生們可以從促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展、增加社會(huì)流動(dòng)性、維護(hù)社會(huì)穩(wěn)定這幾個(gè)方面來(lái)展開(kāi)，對(duì)于個(gè)人，可以寫(xiě)改變思維模式、有利于就業(yè)和便利生活這幾個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)。2 學(xué)校的科目應(yīng)當(dāng)由誰(shuí)選擇比如說(shuō)：政府選課

2、or 老師選課？學(xué)生選擇所有的科目or根據(jù)興趣自行選擇？還有一種是讓你分析學(xué)習(xí)各類(lèi)科目的重要性。比如：要不要學(xué)歷史？要不要中學(xué)階段就學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)？要不要學(xué)數(shù)學(xué)哲學(xué)這類(lèi)的科目？3 什么樣的教學(xué)方式最好一般會(huì)考到的話(huà)題有：私立學(xué)校好不好？留學(xué)好不好？要不要分快慢班？小組學(xué)習(xí)還是單獨(dú)學(xué)習(xí)好？現(xiàn)在還出現(xiàn)一種考題就是：遠(yuǎn)程教育的利弊，同學(xué)們可以關(guān)注一下。4 學(xué)費(fèi)應(yīng)該誰(shuí)來(lái)付這些話(huà)題都有一個(gè)共同的特征，就是題目中往往會(huì)說(shuō)：高等教育只對(duì)學(xué)生自己有好處，因此學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)為高等教育買(mǎi)單。同學(xué)們?cè)谶M(jìn)行寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可以先反駁這種理由，再交代學(xué)生自己支付學(xué)費(fèi)的后果。5 學(xué)生需要參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐嗎當(dāng)代大學(xué)生對(duì)于課外活動(dòng)的態(tài)度？學(xué)生要不要

3、參加無(wú)償社會(huì)勞動(dòng)？畢業(yè)后需要去農(nóng)村鍛煉嗎？要不要從小遠(yuǎn)離父母居?。吭谶@類(lèi)題目中，學(xué)生可以闡述一下現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生對(duì)于參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的態(tài)度，并說(shuō)明參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的好處。6 家庭教育與學(xué)校教育遇到這一類(lèi)的題目，同學(xué)們可以寫(xiě)一下家庭教育與學(xué)校教育各自的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。另外，家庭教育中還會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣的題目：窮人家的孩子是否早當(dāng)家？要不要把孩子趁早送到學(xué)校去？老師對(duì)兒童的智力和社會(huì)發(fā)展所起的作用大于家長(zhǎng)嗎？教育類(lèi)話(huà)題答題技巧首先審題，看清題目要你表達(dá)的是什么內(nèi)容。對(duì)于個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)題目：第一段：開(kāi)頭段，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，闡述題目背景并引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二段：第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，正面舉例論證你的觀點(diǎn)。第三段：第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，可依然正面舉例論證，

4、也可反面論證你的觀點(diǎn)。第四段：自然結(jié)尾，重申主題。對(duì)于題目給出觀點(diǎn)的題目：第一段：一般題目中會(huì)給出兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，學(xué)生可以先說(shuō)明題目中觀點(diǎn)各自闡述的內(nèi)容，并分析觀點(diǎn)沖突的原因。第二段：論證第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性，與其不合理性。第三段：論證第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性與不合理性。第四段：結(jié)尾，并引出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。一、話(huà)題常用單詞1.parenting/upbringing家長(zhǎng)對(duì)孩子的教育2.schooling學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生的教育3.awareness意識(shí)4.cultivate=develop=nurture=foster培養(yǎng)5.creative有創(chuàng)造力的6.physical身體的7.psychological心理的8.pe

5、er同齡人9.motivation動(dòng)力10.motivated有動(dòng)力的11.adapt to適應(yīng)12.discipline紀(jì)律13.stimulating令人思維活躍的14.mental development智力發(fā)展15.physical development身體發(fā)展16.promote促進(jìn)17.attend school上學(xué)18.innate先天就具有的19.help students to sharpen their skills幫助學(xué)生提高某種技能20.social sciences社會(huì)科學(xué)二、話(huà)題常用短語(yǔ)1. adapt oneself to the development of使

6、自己適應(yīng)的發(fā)展2. scope of knowledge知識(shí)面3. instill high moral values灌輸高尚的道德觀4. lighten / relieve / ease the burden of減輕的負(fù)擔(dān)5. comprehensive knowledge淵博的知識(shí)6. enrich the teaching method豐富教育手段7. impart / inculcate knowledge 傳授知識(shí)8.receive education接受教育9. schooling upbringing學(xué)校教育10.parenting vocational education家庭

7、教育 11.long-distance education遠(yuǎn)程教育12. narrow down the gap between縮小的差距13. down-to-earth / practical切合實(shí)際的 14. enjoy equal rights享有平等權(quán)利15. solid professional working experience扎實(shí)的職業(yè)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)16. exchange experience交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)17. undertake the obligations 承擔(dān)責(zé)任18. offer a chance of education提供教育機(jī)會(huì)19. vocational guida

8、nce職業(yè)指導(dǎo) 20. vocational training職業(yè)訓(xùn)練21. face up to possible pressure and competition勇敢面對(duì)可能的壓力和競(jìng)爭(zhēng) 22. Exam-oriented Education應(yīng)試教育23.Quality-oriented Education (Quality Education) 素質(zhì)教育三、參考語(yǔ)句 話(huà)題常用句型1.Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and

9、 at any place.盡管這一觀點(diǎn)被廣泛接受，很少有證據(jù)表明教育能夠在任何地點(diǎn)、任何年齡進(jìn)行。2. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.沒(méi)有人能否認(rèn)：教育是人生最重要的一方面。3. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.說(shuō)到教育，大部分人認(rèn)為其是一個(gè)終生的學(xué)習(xí)。4. An increasing n

10、umber of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始意識(shí)到教育不能隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束。5. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.人們似乎忽視了教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束這一事實(shí)。6. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opport

11、unities or promotion opportunities.人們相信擁有計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)可以獲得更多工作或提升的機(jī)會(huì)。7. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.從這幾年我搜集的信息來(lái)看，這些知識(shí)并沒(méi)有人們想象的那么有用。8. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate

12、 its students by the time they graduation.現(xiàn)在，人們普遍認(rèn)為沒(méi)有一所大學(xué)能夠在畢業(yè)的時(shí)候教給學(xué)生所有的知識(shí)。9. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.當(dāng)前高校和研究機(jī)構(gòu)關(guān)于教育問(wèn)題存在著大量爭(zhēng)論。其中一個(gè)問(wèn)題就是教育是否是個(gè)終身學(xué)習(xí)的過(guò)程。10. This issu

13、e has caused wide public concern.這個(gè)問(wèn)題已經(jīng)引起了廣泛關(guān)注。11. As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons：.就我而言，我同意教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束的觀點(diǎn)，有以下原因：12. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person

14、.即使最優(yōu)秀的畢業(yè)生，要想成為一個(gè)博學(xué)的人也要不斷地學(xué)習(xí)。13. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始相信學(xué)習(xí)新的技術(shù)和知識(shí)能直接幫助他們獲得工作機(jī)會(huì)或提升的機(jī)會(huì)。14. There is a general debate on the campus tod

15、ay over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.對(duì)于大學(xué)生或高中生打工這一現(xiàn)象，校園里進(jìn)行著廣泛的爭(zhēng)論。15. By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通過(guò)做一份和專(zhuān)業(yè)相關(guān)的工作，學(xué)生不僅能夠提高他

16、們的專(zhuān)業(yè)能力，而且能獲得從課本上得不到的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。16. Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.近幾十年，

17、盡管人們的生活有了驚人的改變，但必須承認(rèn)，由于學(xué)費(fèi)和書(shū)費(fèi)日益飛漲，資金短缺仍然是學(xué)生們面臨的最大問(wèn)題之一。17. Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.因此，業(yè)余工作掙來(lái)的錢(qián)將強(qiáng)有力地支持學(xué)生們繼續(xù)他們的求學(xué)生活。18. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job

18、can produce a farreaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.通過(guò)上面的討論，我們不難得出結(jié)論：業(yè)余工作對(duì)學(xué)生們會(huì)產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響，我們應(yīng)鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生從事業(yè)余工作，這將有利于學(xué)生和他們的家庭，甚至整個(gè)社會(huì)。【典例01】（2018年北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，

19、計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢(xún)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1) 表示歡迎；(2) 推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；(3) 建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。注意：(1). 詞數(shù)不少于50；(2). 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【思路點(diǎn)撥】 本文為提綱式作文，文章要求寫(xiě)推薦信，為英國(guó)朋友介紹北京的大學(xué)。首先可以介紹一下寫(xiě)作背景（Jim對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)），表達(dá)歡迎。然后推薦一所大學(xué)，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹推薦的原因（如大學(xué)的特色，可以學(xué)到什么等）。再次簡(jiǎn)單介紹應(yīng)該做哪方面的準(zhǔn)備，如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，讀點(diǎn)有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū)，了解中國(guó)的習(xí)俗，讓自己更好地適應(yīng)中國(guó)的生

20、活。文章可采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)可以使用第二人稱(chēng)?！緷M(mǎn)分范文】Dear Jim, Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. I sincerely hope your dream will

21、 come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua【典例0】（2015年湖南卷）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.請(qǐng)以老師當(dāng)眾表?yè)P(yáng)你為話(huà)題，用下面所給的句子開(kāi)頭，續(xù)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。As a student

22、, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.注意：1.將所有句子寫(xiě)在答題卡上；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。_【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇開(kāi)放性作文，考生只要根據(jù)所給的信息進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作即可。題中給出的內(nèi)容是：作為一名學(xué)生，在同學(xué)面前受老師表?yè)P(yáng)是世界上最好的事。故事、感想等寫(xiě)作空間很大，可以自由發(fā)揮?？芍饕獓@受表?yè)P(yáng)的原因、感受來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)主要采用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。寫(xiě)作步驟：(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)一件當(dāng)眾受到老師表?yè)P(yáng)

23、的經(jīng)歷； (2)總結(jié)這次經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生的影響。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。【范文賞析】As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmatesNever will I forget one experience in an English class last year【典例03】假如你是李華，已經(jīng)被大學(xué)錄取，即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給好友Sam寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)

24、后的打算。短文應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：1、盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境;2、注重能力發(fā)展。注意：1. 全文100詞左右；2. 書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Sam,How are you getting along with your life recently? _Yours sincerely,Li Hua【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要求用英語(yǔ)給好友Sam寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)后的打算。要點(diǎn)包括：1.盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境；2. 注重能力發(fā)展。注意要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容是高度概括的，需要增加細(xì)節(jié)，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)主要采用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來(lái)時(shí)。寫(xiě)作步驟：(1)舉例說(shuō)明如

25、何適應(yīng)新環(huán)境； (2)培養(yǎng)哪些方面的能力。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。【范文賞析】Dear Sam,How are you getting along with your life recently? Today Im writing to talk about my plan for college life in the near future.Can you give me some advice? As a sophomore, you must have a lot to tell me.Yours sincerely,L

26、i Hua【典例04】 假定你是高中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jim即將升入中國(guó)的一所高中學(xué)習(xí)，想讓你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 與老師交流，征求老師意見(jiàn)； 2. 上課積極參與討論，專(zhuān)心聽(tīng)講，做好筆記； 3. 課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識(shí)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要求給美國(guó)朋友Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，提供一些學(xué)習(xí)建議。要點(diǎn)包括：1. 與老師交流，征求老師意見(jiàn)；2. 上課積極參與討論，專(zhuān)心聽(tīng)講，做好筆記；3. 課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識(shí)。這篇作文的要點(diǎn)比較

27、詳細(xì)，學(xué)生要將它們表達(dá)清楚，不能遺漏，但是需要注意不能逐字逐句翻譯。寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)主要采用第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。【范文賞析】Dear Jim, Having learned that youll be a senior student, how delighted I am. In your last email you mentioned that you are confused by how to study well in senior high school. Now, Id like t

28、o share my study tips with you.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【典例05】眾所周知，課堂是每個(gè)學(xué)生實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的地方，然而，有一部分同學(xué)沒(méi)有很好地利用它。請(qǐng)以How should we make good use of classes? 為題，寫(xiě)一篇文章，應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)；1.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明課堂的意義；2.目前課堂中存在的主要問(wèn)題；3.分析原因并提出建議。注意：1. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當(dāng)拓展，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)100左右。How should we make good use of classes?_【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇提綱作文，考生只要根據(jù)所給的信息

29、進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作即可。話(huà)題是How should we make good use of classes? 題中給出三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明課堂的意義； 2.目前課堂中存在的主要問(wèn)題； 3.分析原因并提出建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)主要采用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。【范文賞析】How should we make good use of classes?As we all know, class is a place where students ought to work hard to realize their d

30、reams. However, there are some students not using class properly, making things go from bad to worse. For example, some students play mobile phones or sleep in class, wasting quantities of precious time. Whats worse, some students enjoy chatting with others. Not only does it affect their own study,

31、but also it will do harm to others.As far as I am concerned, the main reason is that they dont realize the importance of study. To solve this problem, they have to understand making full use of class is the best way to improve the efficiency of study. After all, time waits for no man.（1）假定你是李華，寒假期間應(yīng)

32、邀去紐約的孔子學(xué)院，并與該校學(xué)生交流。請(qǐng)你按照以下要求寫(xiě)出發(fā)言稿。 要點(diǎn)： 1闡述漢語(yǔ)的廣泛用途； 2介紹學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法。 注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)工，以使行文連貫；3開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear friends, I am honored to have a chance to be with you today. _ Thanks a million!【范文】Dear friends,I am honored to have a chance to be with you today.As is well-known to all, with a good kn

33、owledge of Chinese, you will get a better understanding of China, a 2000-year-old multi-cultural country. Furthermore, learning Chinese is an up-to-date trend you dont want to miss. It is likely that you can make lots of Chinese friends as well.As for the tips of learning Chinese, I would say that R

34、ome wasnt built in a day, so learning Chinese takes time. Please use what you learn in class whenever you canthe more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. Besides, listening to tapes, watching films and reading stories in Chinese are of great help.I hope you all become fluent Chinese speak

35、ers in the near future.Thanks a million!【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文要求按照以下要求寫(xiě)出發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)包括：1）闡述漢語(yǔ)的廣泛用途； 2）介紹學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容只是一個(gè)提綱，具體內(nèi)容要學(xué)生拓展，考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先要審清楚題目，將所要表達(dá)的語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)都表達(dá)到位，不要遺漏了某一點(diǎn)。同時(shí)應(yīng)盡量選擇自己最熟悉的單詞、句型來(lái)表達(dá)自己的意思。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意使用起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞和高級(jí)詞匯，這樣作文就能得到比較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：get a better understanding of更好地理解, an up-to-date trend最新潮流，as

36、for至于， of great help很有幫助； As is well-known to all, with a good knowledge of Chinese, you will get a better understanding of China, a 2000-year-old multi-cultural country.這句話(huà)使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， It is likely that you can make lots of Chinese friends as well.這句話(huà)使用省略句和it做形式主語(yǔ)， As for the tips of learning Chine

37、se, I would say that Rome wasnt built in a day, so learning Chinese takes time.這句話(huà)使用諺語(yǔ)；Please use what you learn in class whenever you canthe more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it.這句話(huà)使用了賓語(yǔ)從句，還有范文使用了Furthermore，besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。總之，范文使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和句型，考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用。（2）假如你是高三（一）班班長(zhǎng)李華，學(xué)

38、校安排你在新學(xué)年的升旗儀式中發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你談?wù)劯咧须A段需要學(xué)習(xí)什么，怎么學(xué)習(xí)。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to make a speech here._Thank you!【范文】Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to make a speech here. I will share with you what to learn in senior high school and how.Only in this way can you

39、 enjoy a rich and colorful life in high school.Thank you!【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇開(kāi)放式作文。文章要求給高一新生做個(gè)發(fā)言，介紹高中學(xué)習(xí)中要注意什么。學(xué)生要以此為中心，拓展寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，要言之有物，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，確定內(nèi)容后要考慮使用正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱(chēng)。還要注意遣詞造句，平時(shí)可以背誦一些佳句，簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句可以搭配使用，使句式富有變化，多使用高中英語(yǔ)中學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，另外還要注意使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】此文語(yǔ)言流暢，言簡(jiǎn)意賅，要點(diǎn)齊全。關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用得恰到好處，使整個(gè)語(yǔ)篇銜接緊密,邏輯清楚。而短文中較多高

40、級(jí)詞語(yǔ)和句式的使用也提升了文章的得分檔次。關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)：in addition to，whats more，last but not least等。亮點(diǎn)詞匯：a period of discovery, fundamental, of great significance, show respect to, enjoy a rich and colorful life等。高級(jí)句式：it作形式主語(yǔ)（It is so vital that we should make our efforts to learn it.）；倒裝句(Only in this way can you enjoy a rich

41、 and colorful life in high school.)等。 （3）高考過(guò)后，總有一些學(xué)習(xí)用品商家千方百計(jì)在高考狀元身上下工夫，讓狀元們說(shuō)是使用過(guò)他們的產(chǎn)品后才取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下要點(diǎn)：1 簡(jiǎn)要描述這種現(xiàn)象； 2 個(gè)人對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法 3給狀元們提一點(diǎn)建議注意： 1 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 2 參考詞匯： 狀元 Number one scholar（NOS）_【范文】After the college entrance examinations, some companies that sell learning

42、 products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholar in order to sell their products.I do hope that NOS can think of the poor students instead of themselves only.【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本次寫(xiě)作是提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，考生要先審清題目要求，確定好作文人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)、段落等基本內(nèi)容。本文是關(guān)于商家利用高考狀元宣傳自己產(chǎn)品的問(wèn)題，內(nèi)容有：1 簡(jiǎn)要描述這種現(xiàn)象； 2 個(gè)人對(duì)這種

43、現(xiàn)象的看法 3給狀元們提一點(diǎn)建議，要點(diǎn)不夠詳細(xì)，給考生發(fā)揮的余地較大，也增加了難度，考生要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，明確作文的基本內(nèi)容后，就是選用準(zhǔn)確的詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥觼?lái)表達(dá)。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如： Besides, Whats more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文的特點(diǎn)是使用了一些很好的詞組并且句式多變，make full use of 充分利用，be suitable for適合， Most important of all最重要的是,After the college en

44、trance examinations, some companies that sell learning products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholar in order to sell their products.這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句，使用了兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句和不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)， In fact, its not easy for students to become Number One Scholar. 這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，Most of them succe

45、ed not because of the products, but their proper way of learning and hard work. 這句話(huà)用了notbut結(jié)構(gòu)， not all of these products are good enough to help us study.這句話(huà)用了部分否定， I do hope that NOS can think of the poor students instead of themselves only這句話(huà)對(duì)謂語(yǔ)進(jìn)行了強(qiáng)調(diào)。 （4）假如你叫李華，今年暑假即將跨入高三的學(xué)習(xí)，壓力很大，想和父母說(shuō)說(shuō)心里話(huà)，請(qǐng)你用英文在你

46、的博客上用書(shū)信形式表達(dá)出來(lái)。主要內(nèi)容如下：知心話(huà)感恩感謝父母的關(guān)心、鼓勵(lì) 對(duì)父母的期望1. 多加交流2. 適時(shí)提供幫助學(xué)習(xí)打算考生自擬（至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù)：120左右（開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。Dear Mom and Dad,With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!_Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good he

47、alth and a happy life. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Mom and Dad,With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.Since i