英語改錯及答案

英語改錯及答案英語改錯及答案英語改錯及答案xxx公司英語改錯及答案文件編號：文件日期：修訂次數(shù)：第1.0次更改批準審核制定方案設(shè)計，管理制度(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamous

mountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootof

themountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemples

andtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicture

sincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.

Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetop

ofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.（二）Manyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworries

muchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,all

plannedandwrittenbygrown-upstomakechildrentowant

thingsthattheydon'trealneed.

（三）

I’mthecaptainofourschoolteamsowithmy

fellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.There

willanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthe

bestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathe

wouldn’tplaybasketballoncemore.Hisparents

askedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthe

collegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.

Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportant

thanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplace

forasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadno

choice.Hewantedtomaketheirparentshappy.

(四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomany

difficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedher

adviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.

SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwas

learningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrote

alittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.

（五）DearRalph,I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwould

describemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemyclassmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingsas

wellthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeas

afool.SoIfeelhappyeveryday.

Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthatthey

don'tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangerat

once.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’t

seemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo

Yours,（六）

OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwantmyselftodooveraweekend.Iamthinkingofmakingatrip

toLondon,andvisittheBritishMuseumandsome

parks.ButIhavespentlotmymoney,soIcannot

evengooutoftown.Imaygotoafilm,oraconcert.Yes,aconcertcanbeveryexcited.Youcanwatchyourstarswhileenjoyingyourfavoritemusic.Sothen,a

concertcostsomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic,Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.IfIlistentomyownrecords,therearenoneedtospendmoney.Allright.That’showI'mgoingtodo.（七）DearSusan,I’mverygladtohearaboutyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon’tbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwon’tfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.MyclasswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahot-potrestaurantfordinnerandwe’lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours,ZhangMing(八)

Youcanfindallkindsinformationinjust

afewminuteontheInternet.It’slikegoingtoa

hugelibrarywithouthavetowalkaroundtofind

yourbooks.Recentlyeventhough,manypeople

havebeendiscussingthedangersoftheInternet.

TheyhavebeenreportsinAmericaaboutpeople

tryingtostealpersonInformationsforbadpurposes.FindinginformationontheNetiseasily.Butnotall

informationaregoodtosociety.Forexample,you

canfindsuchinformationlikehowtokillpeople.

Theproblemwillbecomemoreseriousinthefuture.（九）Nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallagetakepleasureina

hobbywhichisbothinterestedandfun.

Andeveryyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourownanddiscoveraninterestwhichcanevenlastlifetime.Starting

yourcollectionofstampsareeasybecausetheyarenowhere.Holidayandbirthdaypostcardsfromrelativesandletters

fromfriendscanallprovideyouforstampsfromallover

theworld.Soonceyou’vestartedcollectingseriously,youwillprobablywanttojoinintheStampCollectors’Club

whichexisttoaddmorestampstoyourcollection.

（十）Thoughagreatprogresshasbeenmadeinsciencetheseyears,there

arestillmanypeopleliveinpoorconditions.Theymaketheirlives

bycollectingandsellingusedthing.Theirchildrencannotgotoschoolbecausetheyhavenotenoughmoneytosendtheirchildrentothere.

Whyyouthinksomanypeoplestillsufferfrompovertynow?

Theanswerliesonthepopulationexplosion.Apresident

ofadevelopingcountryoncesaid;“Itisuswhoaretoblamefor

thepovertybecauseweusedto‘produce’childwithoutlimit.”

Althoughthisfewwordssoundsimpleenough,theyhave

clearpointedoutoneofthecausesofthepopulationexplosion.

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第二行：quietly改為quiet

第三行：well后加as；to改為at

第四行：happy改為unhappy/sad第五行：that改為why；talked改為talk

第六行：stranger改為strangers

第七行：since改為but

第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：劃掉myself

；a改為the

第二行：visit改為visiting第三行：my前加of

第四行：excited改為exciting第五行