短文改錯(cuò)歸納課件-高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

Proof-reading短文改錯(cuò)

綏德中學(xué)

馬春霞Learningaims1.Icanknowthetestingrulesofproof-reading2.Icangrasptheeffectiveskillsofcorrectingthemistakes

Whatisproofreading？滿分10分，給出一篇10個(gè)錯(cuò)誤的短文，要求考生將錯(cuò)誤找出并規(guī)范改正。錯(cuò)誤所占比例為1(添)：1（刪）：8（改）建議時(shí)間：8分鐘

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvised

himwork

asacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.“InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.Practice1

Longlongago,therewasthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecould_________for_________histo介詞冠詞代詞a非謂語∧形容詞最高級(jí)

findintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighbor____________wassurprise動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)固定搭配after邏輯錯(cuò)誤angry.“InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.”_______has形容詞angrily動(dòng)詞的主謂一致?？煎e(cuò)誤類型錯(cuò)誤類型

句法行文邏輯詞法名詞動(dòng)詞形容詞副詞代詞冠詞介詞連詞固定搭配名從定從狀從主謂一致時(shí)態(tài)一致人稱一致邏輯一致

動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副非謂語，細(xì)辨別習(xí)慣用法要記住

代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟句子成分多分析冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注ALimerickPracticemakesperfect.

高考真題演練

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!

.1.通讀全文，把握大意2.細(xì)讀全文，仔細(xì)斟酌3.再讀全文,復(fù)核審查Themethodofcorrecting改明顯錯(cuò)誤對(duì)照考點(diǎn)，排除法三種題型是否齊，題量分布是否符合命題規(guī)律3steps幻燈片20

動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副非謂語，細(xì)辨別習(xí)慣用法要記住

代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟句子成分多分析冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注ALimerickHomework:Finishthepoof-readingfromnationalpapersof20142.Analyzethemistakepoints

Haveaniceday!Thankyou!1.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.(3.Katia,likemanyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.2.Itwasawonderfulsurpriseasnothinglikethathadeverbeenhappenedtous.

動(dòng)詞形heldis

1.動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤.

2.主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。1.名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式誤用注意可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞1.…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.

2.Hecollectedsomeinformationsaboutcomputers.

subjectsinformationprogress,furniture,equipment,fun,news,information,advice名詞數(shù)1.分清形容詞和副詞用法2.正確使用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrily名詞作定語表語動(dòng)詞,形容詞,副詞,作狀語

還要注意形和副

1Playfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong.2Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.Playingfeeling1）不定式；2）動(dòng)名詞作主語、賓語；3）并列連詞and等連接的不定式或動(dòng)名詞前后要一致(注意距離較遠(yuǎn)時(shí))；4）現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的區(qū)別等。非謂語，細(xì)辨別

inhurryinSundayafternoonsuchmanypeopleaon∨so

習(xí)慣用法要記住 1.Marydidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.

2.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.

her(一）人稱代詞要一致(性/數(shù)/格)(二）反身代詞(三)不定代詞誤用(someone,something,anyone,anything等)(四)it作形主、形賓或指代時(shí)有無缺漏(make,find,think)

∨it

代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟（一）單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前須加a/an(泛指)或the(特指)（二）注意用或不用冠詞特殊情況

1.

Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.

2.Whatafunitistogoswimminginsummer.

the冠詞

1.Everybodysleepsintents,thatisveryinteresting.

2.Althoughitisrainingheavily,butIdecidedtogoout.3.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.which(一)注意定語從句中關(guān)系代詞和關(guān)系副詞正確用法

名詞性從句（連接代詞/副詞/從屬連詞的混用）(二)注意連詞and/but,and/or,but/however之間錯(cuò)用(三)注意從屬連詞如because與so,though/although與but,if與and/or等不能同時(shí)使用.what連詞

與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤.Theangeltouchedhiseyes,buthecouldseeeverythingclearly.

and

邏輯錯(cuò)誤需關(guān)注

動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副非謂語，細(xì)辨別習(xí)慣用法要記住

代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟句子成分多分析冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注ALimerick

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvised

himwork

asacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.“InthecemeteryallothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.練一練

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecould_________for_________histo介詞冠詞代詞格a非謂語∧形容詞最高級(jí)

findintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighbor____________wassurprise動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)固定搭配after邏輯錯(cuò)誤

Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI’dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn’tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI’ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.Practicemakesperfect.Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI'dalwayswanted.

Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn'tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI'ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermenti