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.#:第23頁(yè)模擬21短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastmonth,I,togetherwithmyparents,wereinvitedbymyuncleintheUSA.Myuncle,whichmovedtoAmericawhenIwasfive,hasbeenlivingintherefornearlytenyears.Hemeetsusattheairport.IwasexcitingwhenIsetfootonthelandofAmerica.Inthefollowingdays,wevisitedsomeplacesofinterestsandtookphotosinfrontoftheStatueofLiberty.WeallenjoyedvisittheMuseumofNaturalHistorybecauseitgreatenrichedourknowledge.Forme,thisisoneofthemostrewardingtripIhaveevermadeinourlife.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬22短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MrTurnerturnedoverinbedfromtimetotimelastnight,forhewasveryexcitedthathecouldnotfallasleepYesterday,shewenttoabiggardeningcompany,knownasGreenFingers,fortheinterview.MrTurner,thatlikedtohelphisgrandfathergrowflowersinthegarden,lookedforwardthejobofferedbythecompany.Whenhegottothecompany,hefoundthereweremanypeoplewaitingthereandhehadnoideaswhetherhecouldgetthejob.Whilewaited,hehelpedtheworkerstheretoremovethefallentreesandcleartheroad.Unluckily,hewastheonlyonewhofinallygotthejob,becausethemanagerdecidedtogivethejobtowhoeverhebelievedwashelp.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬23短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedthatIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasserbyforhelp,buttheycouldn’tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmemydestination.Fortunately,IwasquitefamiliarwiththeplaceInordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearaspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetoface,hetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬24短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AFrenchmanisoncevisitingLondon.Hewishedtotakingawalktoseeacity.ButhewasafraidhemightgetlosingbecauseheknewnowordsofEnglish.Soafterheleftthishotel,hestoppedatthefirstcornerandcarefulcopiedinhisnotebookthenameofthestreetwherehewasstaying.Thenhewalkedon.Atlast,hegotlost.Afterseveralhourhefoundapoliceman.TheFrenchmantriedhisbesttoexplainthepolicemanthathedidn'tknowthenameofhishotel，andheknewthenameofthestreet.Hethenshowedthepolicemanthathecopiedinhisnotebook.Itwasread;“One-waystreet〞.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬25短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamwritingthislettertothankyoufortheguidanceyougiveme.Iwasaperfectlystrangerwhenreachingthiscity.OnceIlostmyselffornotknowthewayinadowntownstreet,althoughIstoppedtoasksomepeopleforhelp.Asyouknow,thisisthefirsttimeformetocomeuptothisbigcity.Iboughtaguidebook,andtherewerestilldifficultiesingoingroundthecity.ThestreetsandshopspuzzledmyselfsomuchthatIwouldratherstayindoors.Itisyourvaluableguidancewhichhasenabledmegoaboutthecitywithoutlosingmyself.NowIbegintoknowhowtotaketheproperbus.YesterdayIwentdowntownwithsomeofmyschoolmatesforshopping.Lessonswillbeginafterafewdays.Iwillcomeovertoseeyousomedaythenextweekandtellyoueverythingthathashappenedtome.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬26短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthecollegeentranceexaminationisapproaching,itwon’ttakelongafterIgraduate.Now,Ihavemuchtisharewithmyfellowstudent.Firstly,I'dliketoshowmyappreciationtothosestandingbymealltheway,teachers，parentsandfriendsincluding.Withouttheirhelpandadvice,mylifewillbedifferent.Secondly,it'shightimeforItosaysorrytotheclassmateswhoIhurtormisunderstand.Ifirmbelievethatcommunicationandsmilesactbridgestofriendship.Thirdly,I'vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudy,ashardworkisthekeytoasuccess.Finally，Iwanttoexpressmyhopewhichalltheyoungerfellowscanmakefulluseoftime,becausetimeandtidewaitfornoman.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬27短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiYuewasawardingthetitleof“StarStudentoftheWeek〞becausewhatshedidforourclass.OnthehotafternoonoflastSaturday,LiYuewenttodowntownandwalkedfromonestoretoother,lookingfortheclotheswewouldwearinthesingingcontest.Whentherestofuswereenjoyingourleisuretimesincoolrooms,shespentthewholeafternoonsearchingfortherightclothes.Deepmovedbyher,wetriedourbestandwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.LiYueisalwayswarm-heartedandcarealotabouttheclass.Beside,sheoftendevoteshersparetimetohelpothers.Shehassetthegoodexampletous.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬28短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DickisAustralianman,aged25,whoselifeisfullofhardship.Hewasbornwithoutarmsandlegs.Heusedtobeingmadefunofbyothers.Everythingseemedimpossibletothem.However,Dicknevergaveup.Aftermanyfailures,hefinallylearnedtoswim,fishandevensurf.Thatsurprisedusmostisthathecompleteduniversityeducationandgettwodegrees.AndnowheistheCEOoftwocompany.Whenaskingboutthesecretofhissuccess,hethinksapositiveattitudeisthekeytosuccess.Dick'sstorygreatinspiredme.Comparedwithhim,andwearehealthy.However,wearealwaysfrustratedwhenwefacedifficulties.IthinkDickhassetagoodexampleforus.Weshouldlearnfromhimandnevergiveup.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬29短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Our

mother

accompanied

ustoschoolinthefirstday.Soonateachercameandledustoaclassroom.Therewewereput

into

four

separate

class.

Somechildrenbegin

to

cry

as

the

parents

were

not

allowing

intothe

classrooms.I

did

not

crybecauseI

had

been

to

kindergarten

ago.Actuallymymotherwentto

homesoon

after

for

she

knew

Iwould

be

all

right.Itwasenjoyabletimefor

me

as

Igot

to

know

my

newclassmates.The

teacher

was

verybusywrite

down

our

information

so

they

had

plenty

of

time.In

themeantimesomechildrencontinuedtosobwhentheirparentslookedinanxiousthroughthewindows.

易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬30短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ilike

eating

fruit

andvegetableswhatareofgreat

benefittoourhealthy.Notonlydotheypreventusfromfallingintoill,buttheyalsohelpusloseweight.Iused

tohate

vegetables,but

followed

the

doctor’sadvice,Igraduallykickedabad

habit.Just

as

the

oldsaying

goes,“An

apple

a

day

keeps

the

doctor

away.〞Therefore,there

are

still

many

children

who

don't

like

fruit

oravegetables.On

thecontrary,influenced

by

this

or

that

kind

of

advertisement,many

childrenwere

crazy

about

junk

food.Consequently,we

become

weakerandweakerinstead

of

getting

strong.In

my

opinion

we

must

take

action

changeit

"易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬31短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onedaylastmonth,agroupofChinesestudentarrivedinBrisbane.Iwasoneofthem.AftersaygoodbyetomydearparentsatBeijingAirport,Istartedmylongjourney.Thatwasmyfirstjourneyabroad.HowexcitingIfeltwhenIgotonabroad.WeleftShanghaitoHongKongtochangetoanotherplanetoMerbourne,secondlargestcityinAustralia.FromthereweflewtoBrisbane,thatisthecapitalcityofQueensland,Australia.WewereexchangestudentsandsendtothecountrybytheirgovernmenttolearnEnglishinBrisbanefortwelvemonths.Fromthefirstfewlessons,wefoundtheteacherstherereallyworkedhardly,andIamsureofthateverythingwillgowellinthenextmonths.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬32短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihad

anunusualexperiencetoday.

Inthemorning,IwaswalkingalongastreetwhileIsawaladyknockeddownbytruck.But

the

driver

just

drove

away.Without

hesitations,Irushed

acrossthestreettohelpher.Iputheronmybackandcarry

her

to

a

hospital

nearby.On

reaching

the

hospital,however,shestartedto

accuse

me

of

knocking

her

down

and

demanded

Ipaid

for

the

bills.That

really

surprised

me!AlthoughI

tried

to

explaining,she

insisted

thatI

was

the

very

person

whom

was

responsible

for

theaccident!

Iwastotalpuzzled.Is

it

right

or

wrong

to

help

others'

people?

WhatshouldIwilldonexttime?易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬33短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

Oneday,mycousintoldmeabouttheimportanceofprotecttheenvironment.Heaskedmehelpdoit,too.Ijustsaid,“Idon’tthinkmyhelpsisimportant.〞短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HearingwhatIsaid,hewasasked,“Howmuchdoesasnowflakeweigh?〞Ireplythatitalmostweighednothing.Thenhesaid,“Ioncereadthestory.Therewerealready8,865,219snowflakesonatinybranch.Whenthe8.865,220thfellintoit,itbroke."IgotherpointanddecidedtodothatIcantohelpprotecttheenvironment.Sinceyouthinkyoureffortdoesn'tmeananythingtotheenvironment,thinkofthe8,865,220thsnowflake.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬34短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

MynameisJack,andIamlivinginNewYorknow.Somepeoplethinkitisalargecity,andIdon’tfeellikelivehere.Idon’thavemuchmoneytobuyhouse,soIhavetorentit.Thehouseisacrossfromtherailwaystation.Icanseetrains短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________comeandgofrommywindow.It'snoisilyalldayandIcan'tseepwellatnight.Thetrafficshereisveryheavybecauseoftherearetoomanycarsinthestreet.Soit'sdifficultformetodrivetowork.Thecostoflivingareveryhigh.Togetmoremoney,Ihavetowokhardeveryday.Ireallylikemylifeonthefarmwhichtheairisfreshandlifeisquiet.ThoughIcan'tgetmuchmoney,Icanlivewithmyfamily.Iwouldmovebacktomyhousesoon.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬35短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

WeareleavingschoolandwedecidetogiveagifttoMrLiwhomhastaughtusforthreeyears.Twosuggestionshaveprovidedbyourclassmates.Oneisanalbumwithphotoofallthestudentsinourclass.Theotherisatapeinwhichourbestwishesarerecorded.Inmyopinion,wehadbettertobuyanalbumforMrLi.First,analbumiseasytobekeptthanatape.Atapemaybeeasilydestroyedafewyearslateranddonotwork.Second,IthinkthephotosinthealbumcanremindMrLionhislovelystudentsandthegooddayswhenhegottogetherwithus.Third,voicemaybechangedalotaftermanyyears,whenfacesdonothavesuchgreatchanges.Intheword,IsuggestwetakephotosintimeandpresentitinthealbumtoMrLi.短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬36短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

Ineverworkedastourguide.OnedayIseeanadvertisementinthenewspaper.Irangupthecompany,andIwasgiventhejobimmediate.Theyaskedmyselftotakeatouraroundthecitythenextmorning.ThemanagerjusttoldmetosayanythingIcouldthinkoutaboutthecity.Myfirsttourwereterrible.Theold短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________buswasnotair-conditionedanditwasthemiddleofsummer,butitwasuncomfortableinthebus.Thetouristsoonbecameveryangry.Ihadaveryhardtime.Istayedhereforafewweeks,andthenIleftandthenjoinedinabettercompany.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬37短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

Today

I'm

going

to

talk

aboutsomethingaboute-hongbao,whoseisbecoming

popular

in

China.E-hongbao

is

actual

a

kind

of

luckymoney

from

andto

relatives

andfriends

during

festivals

or

on

specialoccasion.

Formanyyoung

people,grabbing

e-hongbao

on

their

mobilephones

is

a

fairly

common

andexcitingactivity.

Unlike

the

tradition

of

elders

giveluckymoneytotheirchildren,overhalf

of

the

peoplesending

e-hongbao

is

in

their

20s.It’sjustfor短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________fun,while

the

sum

of

money

mattered

little.

In

word,e-hongbao

is

bringing

new

colour

to

the

old

tradition.Nevertheless

I'm

interested

with

the

safety

of

onlinepayment.It's

hoped

that

whether

rules

and

regulations

should

be

improved

about

the

e-hongbao

system

toguarantee

their

operation.易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬38短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________得分：________

PaulandImetinthefirsttimewhenwewerebothatuniversity.Inafact,wehatedeachotheratfirstthoughwewereinthesameclass.Ididn’tstarttolikehimuntilweendedupworkinthesamerestaurant.HehadbecomeachefbythenandI’dbeencalledinredesigntheplacetogiveitmoreatmospheres.TheowneroftherestaurantissopleasedwithmyworkwhatIhadfreemealstherewheneverIwantedto.Needlesstosay,Iatethereregular.Paul’scookingwasamazingbutgraduallyIrealizedthatI’dchangedmymindabouther,too.短語(yǔ)積累________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)整理：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬39短語(yǔ)積累___________________________________________________