第五次寫作課：社會(huì)類

Keypoints:社會(huì)類文章（以不文明出行為例）：1.因果關(guān)系的復(fù)習(xí)2.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)3.如何解公共場(chǎng)合不文明行為4.寫作中如何陳述事情的兩個(gè)方面社會(huì)類文章：1.社會(huì)類文章?？嫉膬?nèi)容2.社會(huì)類文章可用到的名言警句關(guān)注社會(huì)事件，決勝深圳中考鐵成文中考寫作：社會(huì)類文章歷年環(huán)保類文章統(tǒng)計(jì)個(gè)人生活學(xué)校社會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)健康交際環(huán)保人文景觀哲理理想2012年廣東省中山市BBCWorldHaveYourSay:“LifeinChina”Everyday,BBCNewsonTV,radioandonlinebringsyoustoriesfromacrosstheworld.Butwhatwewanttoheararethestoriesthatmattertoyou.HavegotastoryaboutlifeinChinatoday?Ifyoudo,pleaseputyourstorieshere.IliketravelingandIhavetraveledalotaroundChina.Duringthetrip,IoftenfindthatanumberofChinesedon’thavegoodpublicmanners(舉止).Theyalwaysloudlyonthephoneandsmokeeverywhere.Theworstisthattheyoftenbreaktherulesinpublic.Forexample,whenItraveledinHongKonginJanuarythisyear,Isawakideatingnoodlesontheunderground,whichisagainsttherules.However,thekid’smotherdidn’tthinkhedidwrong.Canyoubelieveit?Let’simproveourpublicmanners.(Mike,Shenzhen)Iama14-year-oldboyfromapoorvillageinFuyang,AnhuiProvince.Likemanyotherleft-behindchildren(留守兒童)inChina,llivewithmygrandparentsnow.myfatherwenttoworkinnShanghaiseveralyearsago.Lastyear,mymotherwenttheretocareforhimbecausehishealthisnotasgoodasbefore.Theytellmetolistentomygrandparentsandcallmeabouttwiceamonthtoaskaboutmystudy.IreallymissmyparentsandIhopeIcanaffordtogotoschoolinShanghai.Ithinkeverychildneedsparents’loveandcare.(WuPeigen,AnhuiProvince)B）書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（LiMing）的中學(xué)生，看了上述故事后，你想表達(dá)自己的看法。請(qǐng)你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：你對(duì)其中的哪個(gè)故事感興趣？原因是什么？你對(duì)這個(gè)故事所提及的現(xiàn)象的看法。就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問(wèn)題的建議。作文要求：不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。DearEditor,IreadthestoriesonBBCWorldHaveYourSay

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Yours,LiMing審審體裁：人稱：時(shí)態(tài)：主題：信第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)文明出行/留守兒童問(wèn)題析析對(duì)哪個(gè)感興趣？感興趣的原因?qū)υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法解決建議（至少兩條）對(duì)哪個(gè)感興趣？感興趣的原因在生活中經(jīng)?？吹筋愃频男袨?？？因果關(guān)系對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法強(qiáng)烈抨擊解決建議（至少兩條）社會(huì)大眾宣傳懲罰如何解決個(gè)人構(gòu)構(gòu)對(duì)哪個(gè)感興趣？感興趣的原因?qū)υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法：抨擊解決建議（至少兩條）宣傳懲罰篇章結(jié)構(gòu)信：開頭對(duì)哪個(gè)感興趣？感興趣的原因?qū)υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法：抨擊解決建議（至少兩條）信：結(jié)尾寫DearEditor,IreadthestoriesonBBCWorldHaveYourSay

today,________________(已經(jīng)給出)信：開頭對(duì)哪個(gè)感興趣？感興趣的原因beinterestedintakeaninetrestinarouse因果關(guān)系because(of)sinceasforduetofortheresonthat我對(duì)Mike的故事比較感興趣，因?yàn)槲以谏钪薪?jīng)常看到類似的不文明行為。IaminterestedinMike'sstory,becauseIseethesekindbadbeviorsinmydailylife.Since/becauseIseealotofbadbeviorsinpublicplace,Mike'sstorydoarousesmyinterest/taste.Wehadadiscussionaboutwhichseniorhighschoolwe'dbetterenter，theschoolsinoroutofourcity.PracticeSomestudentsprefertostudyinourcityasitisconvenientandcostsless.However,somestudentstakeaninterestonoutourcityforitsbetterlivingconditionandself-developmentofindependence.我對(duì)Mike的故事比較感興趣，因?yàn)槲以谏钪薪?jīng)?？吹筋愃频牟晃拿餍袨?。IaminterestedinMike'sstory,becauseIseethesekindbadbeviorsinmydailylife.Since/becauseIseealotofbadbeviorsinpublicplace,Mike'sstorydoarousesmyinterest/taste.對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)批評(píng)該現(xiàn)象Ithink.../Personally,Ithink...Inmyopnion/view,...Frommypointofview,...Myviewisthat...Formypart,...AsfarasIcincerned,...Iholdan/a...viewof...在我個(gè)人看來(lái)，不講公共文明是很不好的行為Inmyopnion,Itisnotgoodtobehavebadinpublicplaces.Pesonally,Ican'tstandthebadbehaviors/mannersinthepublicplaces.Suchasjumpingthequeue,throwingthelitterandcrossingtheroadwhenthelightisred.Frommypointofview,Itisunbearabletobehavebadinpulicplaces.我認(rèn)為外星人的存在是真的。Practice在我看來(lái)，這不是Mike的錯(cuò)，而是Tim的。PracticePractice”Howtobehavewell"為題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文參賽。提示：1.守時(shí)，守信，不撒謊，不說(shuō)臟話；2,禮貌待人，熱心助人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，不在公共場(chǎng)合喧嘩，不亂扔垃圾。個(gè)人解決建議（至少兩條）社會(huì)大眾宣傳懲罰如何解決個(gè)人Ontheonehand/side,ontheotherhand/side......Foronething,...Foranother,...我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，一方面，我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)宣傳，增強(qiáng)公眾的文明意識(shí)，從而阻止不文明行為。必要的時(shí)候可以采取一些懲罰措施。

另一方面，我們也應(yīng)當(dāng)從自身做起，從個(gè)人做起。AsfarasIconcerned,ontheonehand,weshouldimprovepeople'ssenseofwellbehavinginpublicplacebyadvertisement.Somepunishmentactionsshouldbetakenifnecessary.Ontheotherhand,weshouldstarttobehavewellformus.Becauseonlyinthiswaycanwehaveabetterpublicenviroment.strengthenPractice一方面,這雙鞋子并不適合你;另一方面,這太貴了.Practice一方面是經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，而另一方面則是環(huán)境的肆意破壞.Practice我很喜歡張老師，一方面他的課很生動(dòng)，另一方面，他很關(guān)心學(xué)生Practice我很糾結(jié)，一方面我想出去走走，另一方面，我又忙于學(xué)習(xí)。假定你叫張華，最近從報(bào)紙上得知美國(guó)某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：●表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；●感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；例文：Deareditor，Since/becauseIseealotofbadbeviorsinpublicplace,Mike'sstorydoarousesmyinterest/taste.Frommypointofview,Itisunbearabletobehavebadinpulicplaces.Suchasjumpingthequeue,throwingthelitterandcrossingtheroadwhenthelightisred.AsfarasIconcerned,ontheonehand,weshouldimprovepeople'ssenseofwellbehavinginpublicplacebyadvertisement.Somepunishmentactionsshouldbetakenifnecessary.Ontheotherhand,weshouldstarttobehavewellformus.Becauseonlyinthiswaycanwehaveabetterpublicenviroment.有什么不足的地方呢？段與段之間的銜接段落銜接詞或句中考寫作：社會(huì)類文章社會(huì)類文章都考哪些內(nèi)容呢？總結(jié)：文明：howtobehavewell；文明出行，文明用餐；助人為樂(lè)

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