山東高考英語模擬試題-讀后續(xù)寫

山東省高考英語模擬試題---讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫下水范文（詳解版）一、續(xù)寫原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)為150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray（流^）dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseethelittleone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest.aShallwekeephimwithus?”Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttotallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.二、下水續(xù)寫總體思路（一）：第一段第一句：Spotty回家，斷了一條腿。作者當(dāng)時的反應(yīng)是什么？看到了什么？Spotty狀態(tài)描寫。為什么會斷了一條腿？（最難處理）作者一定是誤解了，對Spotty有過激的反應(yīng)。Spotty逃跑。到處尋找，但找不到。一段時間以后得知真相。第二段第一句：一年以后，我們聽到Spotty在氣喘吁吁地叫?？吹搅耸裁矗ü鞘萑绮瘢繛槭裁碨potty叫起來氣喘吁吁？看到Spotty的情感反應(yīng)？做了什么？為什么Spotty回來？（最難處理）心理的感受是什么？為此做了什么？但幾天以后，Spotty還是死了。作者的心情及感悟是什么（呼應(yīng)開頭…especiallyhiseyes）？劇情一：Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.“Oh,no!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottylimpinginwithpainedexpressiononhisface.ButSpottyseemedtotakenonoticeofmeandhidunderthebed,hiswholebodytremblingandhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Itwassounlikehimtoreactlikethis,thatforonemomentIwasatalosshowtocoaxhimtome.Feelingalittleupsetandfurious,Isomehowcameholdingalongstick,tryingtodrivehimout.However,beforethestickreachedhim,Spottysuddenlyhowledandescapedthroughthedoor.Inthenextfewdays,wesearchedeverywhereforSpotty,butinvain.Later,wewereshockedtolearnthatamanbeathimwithastickwhenSpottywasapproachingalittlegirl.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.WerushedoutofthehouseonlytoseemySpottylyingonthedoormat,dying.Uponseeingus,Spottyroseawkwardlytohisfeet,wagginghistailandhiseyessparklingwithexcitement.Immediately,Ikneltdowntohughimandtearsbegantowellupinmyeyesuncontrollably.Spottylookedatme,lickingmycheeksasiftotellmesomething.AnditwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhySpottyreturnedtome—hehadforgivenmeforwhatIhaddone.Unfortunately,Spottydidn,tstaylongandheclosedhiseyesforeverthenextday.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.思路二：本人原創(chuàng)。劇情二：（加長版）本故事中有狗，有血，因此劇情可能很狗血！Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,whichisstillbleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Whatonearthhadhappenedtohim?Later,wegottoknowthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddyandforsomereasonhewasveryobsessedwithher.However,theTeddy,sownerdidrftlikeSpottyatall,maybebecausehethoughtSpottywasveryuglyandnotanobledog.Thus,heoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Theremustbesomethingwrongoutside,becauseitwassounusualforsuchanobedientandfriendlydoglikeSpottytoactinthisway.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,fatherquicklygrabbedthewaterpipeandwateredthegarage,motherdialedthe119toreportthefireemergency,mysisterandIalsohelpedtofindthefireextinguisher.Fortunately,thefirewassoonbroughtundercontrolandweallrelieved.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandlivewiththeminharmony.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.劇情三（劇情二的精縮版）：Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,bleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofdisappointmentanddistrust.Later,welearnedthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddy.However,theTeddy,sownerdidn,tlikeSpottyatall,andheoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,wequicklyfoundthefireextinguishersandgrabbedthewaterpipe,anddialedthe119toreportthefireemergency.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandli