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山東省高考英語模擬試題---讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫下水范文(詳解版)一、續(xù)寫原題閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)為150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray(流^)dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseethelittleone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest.aShallwekeephimwithus?”Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttotallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.二、下水續(xù)寫總體思路(一):第一段第一句:Spotty回家,斷了一條腿。作者當(dāng)時的反應(yīng)是什么?看到了什么?Spotty狀態(tài)描寫。為什么會斷了一條腿?(最難處理)作者一定是誤解了,對Spotty有過激的反應(yīng)。Spotty逃跑。到處尋找,但找不到。一段時間以后得知真相。第二段第一句:一年以后,我們聽到Spotty在氣喘吁吁地叫??吹搅耸裁矗ü鞘萑绮瘢繛槭裁碨potty叫起來氣喘吁吁?看到Spotty的情感反應(yīng)?做了什么?為什么Spotty回來?(最難處理)心理的感受是什么?為此做了什么?但幾天以后,Spotty還是死了。作者的心情及感悟是什么(呼應(yīng)開頭…especiallyhiseyes)?劇情一:Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.“Oh,no!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottylimpinginwithpainedexpressiononhisface.ButSpottyseemedtotakenonoticeofmeandhidunderthebed,hiswholebodytremblingandhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Itwassounlikehimtoreactlikethis,thatforonemomentIwasatalosshowtocoaxhimtome.Feelingalittleupsetandfurious,Isomehowcameholdingalongstick,tryingtodrivehimout.However,beforethestickreachedhim,Spottysuddenlyhowledandescapedthroughthedoor.Inthenextfewdays,wesearchedeverywhereforSpotty,butinvain.Later,wewereshockedtolearnthatamanbeathimwithastickwhenSpottywasapproachingalittlegirl.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.WerushedoutofthehouseonlytoseemySpottylyingonthedoormat,dying.Uponseeingus,Spottyroseawkwardlytohisfeet,wagginghistailandhiseyessparklingwithexcitement.Immediately,Ikneltdowntohughimandtearsbegantowellupinmyeyesuncontrollably.Spottylookedatme,lickingmycheeksasiftotellmesomething.AnditwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhySpottyreturnedtome—hehadforgivenmeforwhatIhaddone.Unfortunately,Spottydidn,tstaylongandheclosedhiseyesforeverthenextday.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.思路二:本人原創(chuàng)。劇情二:(加長版)本故事中有狗,有血,因此劇情可能很狗血!Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,whichisstillbleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Whatonearthhadhappenedtohim?Later,wegottoknowthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddyandforsomereasonhewasveryobsessedwithher.However,theTeddy,sownerdidrftlikeSpottyatall,maybebecausehethoughtSpottywasveryuglyandnotanobledog.Thus,heoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Theremustbesomethingwrongoutside,becauseitwassounusualforsuchanobedientandfriendlydoglikeSpottytoactinthisway.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,fatherquicklygrabbedthewaterpipeandwateredthegarage,motherdialedthe119toreportthefireemergency,mysisterandIalsohelpedtofindthefireextinguisher.Fortunately,thefirewassoonbroughtundercontrolandweallrelieved.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandlivewiththeminharmony.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.劇情三(劇情二的精縮版):Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,bleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofdisappointmentanddistrust.Later,welearnedthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddy.However,theTeddy,sownerdidn,tlikeSpottyatall,andheoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,wequicklyfoundthefireextinguishersandgrabbedthewaterpipe,anddialedthe119toreportthefireemergency.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandli
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