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描述一件你曾經(jīng)不愿但卻不得不做的事；2.

說說這件事最終帶給你的收獲和啟示。

We

need

to

face

many

pains

as

we

growsup.

But

these

pains

eventually

bring

us

gains.審題：1

曾經(jīng)不愿但卻不得不做的事選材應(yīng)虛實結(jié)合同學們的話題涉及到“與同學的分歧、游泳、學騎車、學習某種藝術(shù)特長、年幼時單獨在家、獨自旅行、鍛煉減肥、高空跳傘”等話題，體現(xiàn)了一定的思維拓展性。2

你的收獲和啟示同學們總結(jié)出如“determination/

courage/tough

character”等，說明寫作時有感而發(fā)。

We

need

to

face

many

pains

as

we

grow

up.

Butthesepainseventuallybringusgains.(描述經(jīng)歷）As

for

me,I

remember

that

my

parentsmade

me

learn

to

play

the

violin

during

mychildhood,

so

I

had

little

time

to

play

with

myfriends,

which

annoyed

me

quite

a

lot.

I

hatedviolin

at

that

time,

just

because

it

was

what

theyforced

me

to

do.

Now

looking

back,

（經(jīng)歷給我的收獲）Iappreciate

what

my

parents

did

for

me.In

fact,music

has

enrich

my

life.

It

gives

me

comfort,relief

and

joy,especially

when

I

am

underpressure.I

have

come

to

understand

why

myparents

were

always

pushing

me

along.

Everybody

will

experience

pains.

Alittle

hard

work

and

sweat

will

never

hurtus.

If

we

realize

these

pains

are

just

small

bumps

on

our

road

to

success,

wewill

understand

they

are

actually

gains.（將觀點升華）Good

expressions1.

My

mother

urged

me

to

take

up

lessons

forthe

reason

that

a

person

can’t

be

held

back

bysuch

a

small

problem.2.

I

did

something

just

opposite

to

our

parents’wishes.3.

Only

if

you

learn

to

strike

a

balance

betweenour

hearts

and

reality,

can

we

even

seize

theslimmest

chance

to

bring

potential

to

full

play.4.

we

should

owe

what

we

obtain

in

the

future

towhat

we

once

suffered.5.

Those

troubles

may

cast

a

shadow

on

you

atthat

time,

but

the

experiences

will

turn

out

to

beworthwhile.Students’writings

高三2

張馳

Perhaps

many

children

had

a

tough

periodwhen

they

were

against

playing

the

piano.

Sodid

I.

However

brilliant

the

sound

of

piano

was,repeating

thousands

of

times

would

drive

memad.

It

was

those

dull

little

black

things

mixedwith

parents’

yelling

and

criticizing

that

robbedme

of

my

interests

towards

the

piano.

In

spite

ofmy

tiredness,

the

piano,

as

a

road

block,

stoodon

my

way

of

life.Luckily,

after

struggling

for

several

years,

Istopped

practicing

because

of

increasingly

hardlessons.

Not

until

a

concert

at

school

did

I

realize

theimportance

of

mastering

a

talent.

What

means

alot

is

that

your

confidence

as

well

as

your

talentmakes

you

distinguished.

I

played

the

piano

atconcert,

which

won

the

applause

of

audience.Maybe

I

didn’t

taste

the

sweetness

of

playing

thepiano

when

I

was

a

child.

But,

as

I

grow

up,

thegains

piano

brings

me e

more

and

moreapparent.高三2

莊愛玲?

When

I

was

young,

there

was

a

time

when

Iwas

too

afraid

to

be

alone.

I

used

to

follow

myparents

all

the

time

and

once

they

were

out

ofsight,

I

would

burst

into

tears

until

I

saw

themagain.

It

was

hard

to

tell

why

a

child

was

sosensitive

to

being

alone.

But

that

was

what

I

was,a

girl

who

would

get

nervous

without

companyeven

when

I

grew

older.However,

things

had

to

be

changed

when

thenews

came

that

I

was

admitted

to

a

high

schoolfar

away

from

home.

The

day

finally

came

when

Ihad

to

step

on

my

journey

to

another

city

andleave

my

parents

behind.It

cost

too

much

effort

to

move

on,

for

I

couldn’timagine

what

life

was

waiting

for

me.

But

itturned

out

to

be

all

right.

I

did

everything

on

myown

and

was

accustomed

to

a

new

environment.

When

I

saw

the

smile

and

comfort

on

myparents’

faces,

I

eventually

understood

that

Ihad

grown

up

by

the

push

of

fate.

Only

whenyou

step

a

new

road

and

keep

on,

will

you

findan

independent

yourself.

And

I

am

sure

now

theexperience

of

living

alone

will

benefit

me

a

lotonce

I

start

a

new

journey

in

college.?高三（2）黃靈英

I

am

reminded

of

my

experience

several

yearsago

from

time

to

time,

which

has

shaped

mycharacteristic

to

some

degree.In

junior

high

school,

with

the

holidaydrawing

near,

there

was

a

time

when

word

camethat

we

had

to

take

extra

classes

for

writingpractice

within

ten

days

to

come.

As

we

all

wererequired

to

take

the

class,

no

one

could

be

theexception.

I

was

so

disappointed

that

I

employedmyself

in

complaining

to

my

deskmate

about

thefact

that

the

extra-class

had

ruined

my

planscompletely

in

the

beginning.Three

days

later,

I

gradually

got

down

to

taking

towhat

the

teacher

had

taught,

only

to

find

I

hadjust

killed

such

precious

time.

Seizing

the

chance

in

time,

I

made

progressmore

or

less.

However,

it

is

not

what

I

had

learntbut

my

attitude

towards

this

sort

of

problem

thatmatters.

I

come

to

realize

there

is

no

point

inescaping

from

something

we

are

to

go

through.The

real

winners

in

life

are

the

people

who

lookat

every

situation

with

an

expectation

that

theycan

make

it

work

or

make

it

better.

While

we

cannot

change

it,

we

may

as

well

shift

our

point

ofview,

learning

to

dance

in

the

rain

.高三2

林凡凡

Mentioning

it,

my

experience

of

learning

toplay

the

piano

flashed

across

my

mindimmediately.

When

my

6th

birthday

came,

myparents

bought

me

a

piano

of

great

value,whose

price

was

a

little

higher

than

expected.However,

with

the

hope

of

I

developing

in

an

all-around

way

,they

finally

bought

it

and

pushedme

to

practice

every

day,

which

was

thought

tobe

a

severe

disaster

to

me

at

that

time.

Thanksto

the

piano,

I

lost

the

happy

free

time

afterschool.

Seeing

my

friends

watching

TV