高中英語短文改錯課件

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短文改錯Howtodo短文改錯2Objectives考查目標1）識別錯誤并正確校正語篇的能力2）綜合運用英語知識的能力3）準確理解語篇，掌握內容及行文邏輯的能力Objectives考查目標1）識別錯誤并正確校正語3解題步驟1.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.（整句理解，上下兼顧）3.（復讀全文，檢查驗證）解題步驟1.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.（整句理解，上下兼顧4動詞形，名詞數(shù)，還要注意形和副代詞格，細領悟介詞短語須關注．習慣用法要記住冠詞連詞常光顧．

常見錯誤動詞形，名詞數(shù)，還要注意形和副．常見錯5謂語非謂語

動詞語態(tài)donetodo主謂一致時態(tài)doing謂語非謂語6

1.動詞的時態(tài)錯誤.

1.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全國）2Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全國卷2)3Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.

flew

動詞形2.主、謂不一致的錯誤3.andbutso等連詞前后動詞時態(tài)不一致was__________visited4主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)的錯用4Tooursurprise,themanwasturnedoutathief\謂語1.動詞的時態(tài)75.非謂語動詞

錯誤高考鏈接:1IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011新課標全國卷）buying2Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutofabuilding.(2011陜西卷)disappointed3TheywereeagerknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions∧to5.非謂語動詞錯誤高考鏈接:1Iwasatt8二、名詞數(shù)

指名詞單、復數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。高考鏈接：1Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.（2011新課標全國卷）luggage2InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks.(2011遼寧卷）week根據(jù)名詞前的修飾語或謂語動詞的單復數(shù)來判斷不可數(shù)名詞progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,adviceequipment,luggage=baggageknowledge

二、名詞數(shù)指名詞單、復數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。高考鏈接9三、還要注意形和副高考鏈接：

1Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.（2011浙江卷）

2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.slowly3Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpected.(2009陜西）faster１形容詞修飾名詞，be動詞，系動詞后要用形容詞２副詞修飾動詞，形容詞，過去分詞，整個句子３比較級和最高級的使用clear三、還要注意形和副高考鏈接：1Whenshedro10再叮囑幾句：五不改原則1.單詞拼寫不改2.大小寫不改3.詞序不改4標點符號不改5原意不改解題步驟1.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.（整句理解，上下兼顧）3.（復讀全文，檢查驗證）再叮囑幾句：五不改原則解題步驟1.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）11實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練12

短文改錯（共10小題；每題一分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞.刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分短文改錯（共10小題；每題一分，滿分10分）13

AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancehappily.AtChristmasEve,Jimwen14AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting____On_________chose_______tall_______it動詞形介詞短語常?？?，習慣用法要記住還要注意形和副代詞格，細領悟AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwit15room.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked

reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChistmas

treelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhis

parentssinginganddancehappily.＼_______lights_____________beautiful_____and∧were動詞形還要注意形和副動詞形名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關注________dancingroom.Katewascovereditwith16Practicemakesperfect!Practicemakesperfect!17Homework

MyfatherandIamtakingacampingtripinJulyandAugust.WewilltravelforabouttwomonthsbutwilltourtheUnitedStatesandpartsoftheCanada.Wehavedecidedtocampbecauseitdoesnotspendasmuchasvacationinginhotel,butwehadtoplancarefully.Ithinkthecarwhatwearegoingtodriveisverysmall,sowedecidetotakeonlyonesmallsuitcaseforbothofthemandasfewcampingthingsaspossibly.Wewilltakesomemedicinewithuspreventinsectsfromhurtingus,andalsosomefoodforpicnics.I'msurethatwewillhavefuns.HomeworkMyfatherandI18∨werelikes

excitingNotonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.

2.Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthem.3.TheyeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions.

4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.

practicecome∨werelikesexcitingNotonlyth191.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.

2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.

3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrily

clearpractice1.Heaskedangryifwehadf202.takeplacehappenbreakoutcomeaboutoccur發(fā)生1.looksoundsmellfeeltaste感官系動詞3.belongtoconsistofdatefrom=datebackto4.turnoutcomeoutcometruecomeup2.takeplacehappenbrea21Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessary

word高考短文改錯的考查方式theWrongword∧MissingwordofUn22四、代詞格，細領悟3.it作形主、形賓或指代時有缺漏

(make,find,think)

高考鏈接4：WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme…(2011重慶卷）mimeItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegintounderstand…(2010遼寧卷）Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.our∨it1.人稱代詞，物主代詞,反身代詞的使用．2.代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤.四、代詞格，細領悟3.it作形主、形賓或指代時有缺漏(232.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.

3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.

4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowed

tomyteacher.

myselfeverything∨itSomestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.theirpractice2.Iwaslearningtoexpressm24五、介詞短語須關注，

習慣用法要記?。?/p>

1.主要考查固定短語，固定介詞的搭配。高考鏈接５：

TherewasoneonparticularI’dreallywanted.(2011浙江卷)∧2.不定式后的動詞短語中介詞不能省3.時間狀語前有指示代詞this,that或one,next,last等修飾時不用介詞.

inHehadonlyasmallcoldroomtolive.inHepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon.五、介詞短語須關注，1.主要考查固定短語，固定介詞的25practiceI’msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.3.