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網(wǎng)上購物1.現(xiàn)在流行網(wǎng)上購物2.網(wǎng)上購物的利弊3.我的看法Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexample,shoppingontheinternetcansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedistancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lackofthefacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.What’smorethedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheinternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimeweshouldtakesomemeasurestomakeitperfect.1)近年來越來越多的大學(xué)生開始使用信用卡2)分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因3)針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出你的建議【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求針對該現(xiàn)象給出“我”的建議，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述大學(xué)生使用信用卡的現(xiàn)狀;分析大學(xué)生信用卡用戶增加的原因;針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出“我”的建議。【參考范文】CreditCardsonCampusInrecentyears,creditcardshavegainedmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforcreditcardsandbeguntoconsumebythem.Thefollowingthreefactorscanaccountforthepopularityofcreditcardsoncampus.Firstly,acreditcardprovidesoverdrawingservice,whichisabigattractionforthosestudentswhohavenotmuchmoneyfortheirdomination.Secondly,acreditcardcanhelpreleasefinancialburdensonthosepoorstudents,andhencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschoolforlackingmoney.Besides,manybanksmakesomepreferentialpoliciesoncreditcards,likesendingagift,loweringyearcost.Drawnbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentshaveappliedforcreditcards.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnotabadthingforcollegestudentstoowncreditcards.However,thereismisuseofcreditcardsamongcollegestudents.Manystudentsusecreditcardstobuyluxuriousthingstheydon’tneedreally,andevensomeofthemoweabigcreditcarddebt.Therefore,schoolsandbankshaveresponsibilitytoletcollegestudentslearnhowtousecreditcardsproperly.Onlyinthiswaycancollegestudentsenjoyreallytheadvantagesofcreditcards.1.越來越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好處2.信用卡的弊端3.你自己的觀點(diǎn)

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PersonalcreditcardsarebecomingmorecommoninChina.Banksandotherfinancialinstitutionsareencouragingtheircustomerstochangethewaytheybuythings.Creditcards,otherwiseknownas“plasticmoney”,arebeingofferedonverygoodtermstoencouragethechange.Consumerswillbeableto“buynow,paylater”,andmanyseethisasanadvantage.Butpeopleneedtobecareful.Therearedangersassociatedwithcreditcards.Somepeoplefinditveryeasytoexceedtheirbudget.Theyaretemptedtopurchasegoodsthattheydonotreallyneed,andcanbecomequicklyoverburdenedbydebt.Thecreditcardsoftenchargeahighrateofinterest,whichexacerbatestheproblemsforthesepeople.However,usedwiselycreditcardscanimprovethequalityofpeople’slives.Theycangivepeopleaccesstomoneytomeetsuddenunplannedexpenses.Properlyhandled,theycanletpeoplecontroltheirexpenditureandthemonthlystatementsprovidearecordofwheretheirmoneyhasgone.1)近年來“博客”越來越流行2)博客流行的原因3)目前的博客中可能存在的問題【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求說明導(dǎo)致該現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求分析該現(xiàn)象中可能存在的問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹什么是“博客”，描述博客的流行情況;說明博客流行的原因;指出目前博客中可能存在的問題?！緟⒖挤段摹縏hePopularityofBlogInrecentyears,bloghasbecomeverypopular.Moreandmorepeoplehavecreatedtheirownblogsandoftenvisitothers’blogs.Whydoesblogbecomesopopularnowadays?Firstly,itisthewidespreadofInternetthatprovidesaplatformfortheappearanceandpopularityofblog.Secondly,anyonecancreatehisownblogashewishes.Bloghasnofixedrulesandneedn’tprofessionalknowledgeandskills.Thirdly,peopleuseblogtorevealtheirinnervoice,orcollectandsharethoughtsandthingstheyfindinteresting.However,bloghassomeproblems.Foronething,plagiarisminblogisnotunusual.Theprotectionofblogcopyrightcannotbeguaranteed.Foranother,manyblogcontentsareinamess,andsomeevenincludeunhealthythings.Therefore,blogstillhasalongwaytogobeforeitbecomesmature.1)根據(jù)下圖描述某高校近兩年畢業(yè)生去向分布情況2)分析這樣分布的原因3)你的看法畢業(yè)去向就業(yè)考研出國留學(xué)其它所占比例50%30%17%3%【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式圖表命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求根據(jù)所給圖表描述一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡目捶?，由此可判斷本文?yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：根據(jù)圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)，描述近兩年某高校畢業(yè)生去向分布情況;分析導(dǎo)致這樣分布的原因;闡述“我”對畢業(yè)生去向的看法?！緟⒖挤段摹緾hoicesafterGraduationFromtheabovetable,wecanseethatthestudentsofthisuniversityhavethreemainchoicesaftergraduation.Ofthesechoices,thestudentswhohavefoundajobonlytakeup50%.Incontrast,studentswhopursuefurtherstudybytakingthepostgraduateentranceexamorgoingabroadhaveincreasedgreatlythanbefore,withthetotalpercentageof47%.Indeed,thisphenomenonisalsoquitecommoninotheruniversities.Thefollowingfactorscanaccountforthechoicesofgraduates.Aboveall,withtheenrollmentextensionofuniversities,collegegraduatesarefacingthesevereemploymentsituation,whichforcesthemtofindanotherwayout.Moreover,ininformationage,knowledgeisupdatedveryrapidly.Manycollegestudentsfindtheirknowledgeisnotenoughfortheirfuturecareer.Besides,somecollegestudentswouldnotliketoenterintothecomplicatedsocietyandwanttoescapefromtherealitytemporarilybygoingtofurtherstudy.Frommypointofview,one’schoiceaftergraduationshouldbebasedonhisindividualcondition.Thoughtakingthepostgraduateentranceexamorgoingabroadforfurtherstudyisagoodchoice,itisnotnecessarilytrueofeveryone,becauseitmightinvolvemanyfactors,suchasyourfuturecareerdirection,youreconomiccondition.Therefore,weshouldtakeafullaccountbeforewemakeourdecisions.1)一些人喜歡和人打交道多的工作2)然而也有一些人更愿意和機(jī)器打交道3)你更喜歡哪種工作?為什么?【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求指出人們的一種喜好，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求指出人們的另外一種喜好，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求“我”從中做出選擇，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對比選擇型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：指出人們對于工作的兩種喜好：喜歡和人打交道多的工作，喜歡和機(jī)器打交道多的工作;對比闡述兩種工作各自的特點(diǎn);表明“我”更喜歡哪種工作，并說明理由。【參考范文】WorkwithaPersonorWorkwithaMachine?Whenaskedaboutworkpreference,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers.Somepeoplelikeworkingwithpeople.However,otherspreferjobswhichmainlyinvolveobjectsormachines.Thosepeoplewhohavethefirstpreferencebelieveworkingwithpeopleusuallymakesonefeelinterestingandefficient.Inaddition,theymaintainpeoplecanbeinspiredtobringforwardnewideasbycommunicatingorconsultingwiththosearoundthem.However,stillothershavedifferentpreferences.Intheiropinions,workingwithobjectsormachinescanmakeoneenjoymorepeaceandquiet.Besides,theyargue,undersuchpeacefulconditions,onecandomorepracticalwork,improvehisskillandmaketechnicalrenovations.Weighingupthesetwokindsofwork,Ipreferworkingwithpeople.Foronething,Iliketocooperatewithothersandworkinateam.Foranother,althoughtherearecompetitionandrivalry,wecanlearnsomethingfromotherpeople.Consideringthese,Ithink,workingwithpeopleisbeneficialtoourcareerdevelopment.：Shoppingontheinternet1.現(xiàn)在流行網(wǎng)上購物2.網(wǎng)上購物的利弊3.我的看法Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shop