基礎(chǔ)寫作-地點(diǎn)介紹

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belocatedin(on/to)theeast/north/centerof…2)Sp.

liein(on/to)thetop/footof…

介紹地點(diǎn)常用的短語(yǔ)和句型：

1)Theareaof+Sp.

is…2)Sp.

＋covers/hasanareaof….3)withanareaof…

Area:Population:

1)Sp.

hasapopulationof…2)Thepopulationhasgrown/increased/decreasedto…3)Thecity,withapopulationof…,is…

__________theeastofAsia,China________________9.6millionsquarekilometers__________________1.3billion.Location:intheeastofAsiaArea:9.6millionK㎡Population:

1.3billionLocatedincoversanareaofwithapopulationofLocation+area+populationLocatedin(to/on)…,Sp.coversan

areaof…withapopulationof…History:

1)…h(huán)as/ownsalonghistoryof…

2)withalonghistoryof…History+symbol+cultureWithahistoryof…,Sp.,whosesymbolis…,isfamousfor…History:over4,000yearsSymbol:FiveGoatsCulture:

LingnanCultureGuangzhou_________________over4,000years,Guangzhou,______________isthe“FiveGoats”,_____________LingnanCulture.Withahistoryofwhosesymbolisfamousforclimate:1)

Itisvery/quitecold(hot…)alltheyearround.2)Sp.hasawarm/coldclimatewithplentyof…3)Theaveragetemperatureof…is…4)Itisneithertoocoldnortoohot.2)Sp.hasawarm/coldclimatewithplentyof…3)Theaveragetemperatureof…is…

Climate:

warm,plentyofsunshineTheaveragetemperature:25.5℃

SanyainHainanProvince,has_______climate____________sunshineand_____________________is25.5℃.Sanya

awarmwithplentyoftheaveragetemperaturescenery

1）Sp.hasmanyfamous/well-knownplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.2）Sp.beafamoussummerresort.1）Sp.hasmanyfamous/well-knownplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.FeishaBeachhotsprings

Taishanhasmany_________________,_______FeishaBeachinShuangchuanIsland,hotspringsand_____.placesofinterestsuchassoonseafoodTaishan____________riceandseafood.riceisrichinLocalproducts:

Localproducts:1)Sp.isrichin…2)…befamous/well-knownfor…3)…behometo…UsefulExpressions寫作組合建議運(yùn)用句型位置+

面積+人口歷史文化或特色氣候特征名勝景觀物產(chǎn)Locatedin(to/on)…,Sp.coversanareaof…withapopulationof…①Sp.isacitywithalonghistory.②Withahistoryof…,Sp.,whosesymbolis…,isfamousfor…①Sp.hasa…climatewithplentyof…②Theaveragetemperature

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…Sp.hasmanyplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.①Sp.isrichin…②Sp.isfamousfor…/behometoPractice基礎(chǔ)寫作Step1:

審題（內(nèi)容、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱）Step2:

理清要點(diǎn)，整理成5個(gè)句子Step3:句子翻譯Step4:

檢查、潤(rùn)飾,

添加適當(dāng)過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)ThestepsofBasicWriting

假設(shè)你是廣州亞運(yùn)會(huì)一名志愿者，請(qǐng)你用5個(gè)句子寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向外賓介紹廣州。【寫作內(nèi)容】城市名稱廣州，廣東省的省府地理位置廣東省中部面積7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000歷史文化不僅歷史悠久,還是中國(guó)古代“海上絲綢之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的發(fā)祥地;以“五羊”

為象征,以嶺南文化著稱.氣候特征氣候溫暖，陽(yáng)光充足，雨水充沛，年平均氣溫為21.8℃

。風(fēng)景名勝旅游資源豐富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)Step1:審題第三人稱(Guangzhou)審內(nèi)容：介紹廣州審時(shí)態(tài)：地點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)介屬于說(shuō)明文，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)審人稱：

Step2:理清要點(diǎn)整理成5個(gè)句子城市名稱廣州，廣東省的省府地理位置廣東省中部面積7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000歷史文化不僅歷史悠久,還是中國(guó)古代“海上絲綢之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的發(fā)祥地;以“五羊”為象征,以嶺南文化著稱。氣候特征氣候溫暖，陽(yáng)光充足，雨水充沛，年平均氣溫為21.8℃。風(fēng)景名勝旅游資源豐富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)①②③⑤④

Step3:翻譯句子城市名稱廣州，廣東省的省府地理位置廣東省中部面積7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000歷史文化不僅歷史悠久,還是中國(guó)古代“海上絲綢之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的發(fā)祥地;以“五羊”為象征,以嶺南文化著稱。氣候特征氣候溫暖，陽(yáng)光充足，雨水充沛，年平均氣溫為21.8℃。風(fēng)景名勝旅游資源豐富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)①②③⑤④10分鐘◆

Exchangeyourcompositionwithyourdeskmateandhelpeachothertoimproveyourwriting.

在評(píng)改時(shí)，應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：

1、在語(yǔ)言方面,重點(diǎn)評(píng)判句子的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確、用詞是否規(guī)范;是否使用了合適而且較豐富的句型結(jié)構(gòu);是否用上了較高級(jí)詞匯。2、在內(nèi)容方面，重點(diǎn)評(píng)判是否表達(dá)全部規(guī)定的5項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，在表達(dá)完整的5項(xiàng)內(nèi)容時(shí)，適當(dāng)添加一些內(nèi)容，不扣分。

3、在連貫性方面，重點(diǎn)評(píng)判5個(gè)句子是否構(gòu)成一篇連貫的短文；是否合理使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)。

Step3句子翻譯廣州，廣東省的省府，位于廣東的中部，面積是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。①_____________________Guangdongprovince,Guangzhou,_________________ofGuangdongProvince,________________7434.4squarekilometers______________________9.98million.Locatedinthemiddleofthecapitalcitycoversanareaofwithapopulationof

Step3句子翻譯②不僅歷史悠久，還是中國(guó)古代“海上絲綢之路”的發(fā)祥地。Guangzhouis_______acity_______________,_______thebirthplaceoftheancient“SilkRoadontheSea”.notonlywithalonghistorybutalso③以“五羊”為象征，以嶺南文化著稱。Guangzhou,______________is“FiveGoats”,_______________LingnanCulture.whosesymbolisfamousfor

Step3句子翻譯④氣候溫暖，陽(yáng)光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛，年平均氣溫為21.8℃Guangzhouhasa__________climatewith______________________________and_______________________isabout21.8℃.warmplentyof

sunshineandrainfalltheaveragetemperature⑤旅游資源豐富,如著名的“羊城八景”。Guangzhou_________________________fortouriststovisit,______________the“EightScenesofGuangzhou”.hasmanyplacesofinterestparticularly

Step4:檢查、潤(rùn)飾,添加適當(dāng)過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)

①LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdongProvince,Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdongProvince,coversanareaof7434.4squarekilometerswithapopulationof9.98million.

②Guangzhou

isnotonlyacitywithalonghistory,butalsothebirthplaceoftheancient“SilkRoadontheSea”.

③__________,Guangzhou,whosesymbolis“FiveGoats”,isfamousforLingnanCulture.

④________________,Guangzhou

hasawarmclimatewithplentyofsunshineandrainfallandtheaveragetemperatureisabout21.8℃.⑤_______________,Guangzhou

hasmanyplacesofinterestfortouriststovisit,particularlythe“EightScenesofGuangzhou”.What’sm