必修第一冊Unit3SportsandfitnessSectionⅤWriting教案

SectionⅤWriting有關健康生活習慣的說明文寫作指導eq\a\vs4\al()文體感知寫有關健康生活習慣的說明文時，一般要寫明什么樣的做法會對健康有利或有害，人們應該怎樣做才能保持健康等。該類文章一般采用以下寫作策略：1．開門見山提出主題，說明自己所發(fā)現(xiàn)的關于健康問題的現(xiàn)象。2．分析所給內容，然后進行詳細說明。說明所給內容時可以先說明現(xiàn)象，也可以先說明結果，再說明引起這種結果的原因。3．最后歸納總結或發(fā)表意見。這一局部的內容主要是提出解決方法及給出自己的保持健康的建議。eq\a\vs4\al()增分佳句1．AsfarasIamconcerned,healthismoreimportantthanwealth．依我看，健康遠比財富重要。2．Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth．做運動和健康息息相關。3．Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesapersonhealthy,wealthyandwise．早睡早起會使人健康、富有和聰明。4．Itiswidelybelievedthatplentyoffreshaircontributestogoodhealth．人們普遍認為足夠的新鮮空氣有助于健康。5．Nowadayspeoplearebeginningtopaymoreattentiontotheirhealththaneverbefore．目前人們開始比以前更關注健康。6．Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers．我們應該拒絕垃圾食品，例如方便面和漢堡。7．Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepatleast8hourseachday．醫(yī)生建議我們青少年每天至少要睡8個小時。8．Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave．人們開始意識到健康是人所能擁有的最有價值的東西。典型例題eq\a\vs4\al()寫作要求假設你是王林。過去，由于一些不健康的生活習慣，你的健康出現(xiàn)了問題。之后，你改變了生活方式，現(xiàn)在又恢復了健康。請你根據(jù)此經歷寫一篇英語短文，內容包括：1．之前不健康的生活習慣：不吃早飯，經常熬夜，很少鍛煉；2．導致的問題：肥胖，易生?。?．解決的方法：保持均衡飲食，積極鍛煉，早睡早起；4．給其他同學的建議：盡快改掉不健康的生活習慣，以保持身體健康。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。eq\a\vs4\al()審題謀篇eq\a\vs4\al()詞匯推敲1．不健康的生活習慣unhealthy_living_habits/unhealthy_lifestyle2．不吃早餐skip_breakfast/no_breakfast3．垃圾食品junk_food/rubbish_food4．熬夜stay_up_late5．鍛煉take_exercise/have_physical_training/do_physical_exercise6．結果；因此as_a_result/therefore/thus7．意識到be/become_aware_of8．保持健康keep_fit/healthy9．擺脫壞習慣break_oneself_of/get_out_of_bad_habits10．均衡飲食a_balanced_dieteq\a\vs4\al()遣詞造句1．完成句子①過去，我養(yǎng)成了一些不健康的生活習慣。(主謂賓結構)In_the_past,_I_formed_some_unhealthy_living_habits．_②我經常熬夜，并且很少進行體育鍛煉。(and連接兩個并列謂語)I_often_stayed_up_late_and_took_little_physical_exercise．③結果，我肥胖，易生病。(and連接兩個系表結構)As_a_result,_I_became_too_fat_and_often_fell_ill．④我意識到了不健康的生活習慣引起的危害。(which引導定語從句)I_became_aware_of_the_harm_which_was_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑤為了保持健康，我決心改掉這些壞習慣。(sothat引導目的狀語從句；不定式短語作賓語)I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits_so_that_I_could_keep_fit．⑥我養(yǎng)成了早睡早起的習慣。(主謂賓結構)I_developed_the_habit_of_going_to_bed_early_and_getting_up_early．⑦兩個月過去了，我恢復了健康。(as引導時間狀語從句)As_two_months_passed,_I_recovered．⑧我建議其他同學盡快改掉他們不健康的生活習慣。因為健康比任何其他事情都重要。(suggest；because引導原因狀語從句)I_suggest_other_students_get_out_of_their_unhealthy_living_habits_as_soon_as_possible,_because_health_is_more_valuable_than_anything_else．2．句式升級⑨用過去分詞作定語改寫句④I_became_aware_of_the_harm_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑩用不定式作目的狀語改寫句⑤To_keep_fit,_I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits．?用with復合結構改寫句⑦With_two_months_passing,_I_recovered．eq\a\vs4\al()妙筆成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Inthepast,Iformedsomeunhealthylivinghabits．Forexample,Ioftenskippedbreakfastandlikedeatingjunkfood．Besides,Ioftenstayeduplateandtooklittlephysicalexercise．Asaresult,Ibecametoofatandoftenfellill．Luckily,Ibecameawareoftheharmcausedbyunhealthylivinghabits．Tokeepfit,Ideterminedtobreakmyselfofthesebadhabits．Firstly,Ibegantohaveabalanceddiet．Secondly,Itookexerciseactivelyeveryday．Lastly,Idevelopedthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly．Withtwomonthspassing,Irecovered．Isuggestotherstudentsgetoutoftheirunhealthylivinghabitsassoonaspossible,becausehealthismorevaluablethananythingelse．訓練假設你是李華，你的筆友Jane最近總是感覺身體不適，因此寫信向你詢問如何保持身體健康，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示用英文給她回信。1．合理飲食，防止吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果；2．鍛煉身體，合理鍛煉有助于身體健康；3．保證充足睡眠，不要熬夜；4．你的其他建議……注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．信的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJane,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter．Butatthesametime,I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotverywellthesedays．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_Jane，I’m_glad_to_receive_your_letter．_But_at_the_same_time,_I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_not_very_well_these_days．Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthy．Hereismyadvice．Firstly,youshouldkeepabalanceddiet．Youshouldavoideatingfoodhighinfatandtoomuchsweetfood．You’dbettereatmorefreshvegetablesandfruit．Secondly,takingexerciseeverydayhelpsbuild(up)astrongbody．Whynottakemoreexerciseinyoursparetime?Asweallknow,regularexerciseisanimportantpartofkeepingushealthy．Finally,makesureyouha