上海市2021年高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷分類(lèi)匯編：書(shū)面表達(dá) 含答案

上海市2021年高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷分類(lèi)匯編

書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題

2021屆上海高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷1

V.GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

如今，電子支付(electronicpayment)成為潮流，現(xiàn)金的使用頻率越來(lái)越低。請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明

電子支付在生活中的具體應(yīng)用，并談?wù)勀銜r(shí)電子支付是否會(huì)取代現(xiàn)金的看法。你的文章必

須包括：

1.簡(jiǎn)耍說(shuō)明電子支付在生活中的具體應(yīng)用；

2.電子支付是否會(huì)取代現(xiàn)金？為什么？

【答案】Thereisagrowingtrendthatelectronicpaymenthasdominatedourlives,andweare

graduallysteppingintoacashlesssociety.

Takeaquicklookatyourdailylife,andyouwillfinde-paymenthascoveredeveryaspectof

lifetoday.IfshardtoimaginewithoutAlipayhowyoucanmakeonlinepurchasesonTaobaowith

afewsimpleclicks.WithoutWeChat,howcanyouunlockasharedbikeandpayforthefee?E-

paymentsarealsoalmostuniversallyacceptedbybrick-and-mortarstores.Inonesense,wenow

literallyhaveeverythingatourfingertipsthankstoelectronicpayment.

Eventually,Ibelieve,e-paymentwillreplacecash.Foronething,itstandsoutforits

incomparableconvenience.Notonlydoesitspareusthetroubleofcarryingcasheverywhere,but

italsosavesusenormousamountsoftimethatwouldhaveotherwisebeenwasted,forexample,

inlongqueues.Foranother,iteliminatesthenecessitytoworryaboutwhetherthebanknotes

you'vereceivedarerealoffake.E-paymentalsomakesiteasierforthegovernmenttosupervise

thecirculationofmoneybyofferingatransparentenvironmentforelectronicpayments.

Admittedly,e-paymenthasitsowndrawbacks,suchaspotentiallysevereconsequencesif

one'saccountishackedorstolen.Butwiththeimprovementofrelevantlawandregulations,the

problemissuretobekeptatbay.

Toputitinanutshell,electronicpaymentcansimplifydailyaffairs,regulatetheflowof

moneyandwillultimatelydominateoureverydaylife.Iamlookingforwardtoaconvenient,

time-savingandsafecashlesssociety.

2021屆上海高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷2

VLGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)有四個(gè)社團(tuán)正招募新人（如下圖所示），你希望加入其中一個(gè)。

請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)征信，談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容必須包括：

1.你希望加入的社團(tuán)

2.選擇該社團(tuán)的原因

3.你可以為該社團(tuán)做些什么

注意：請(qǐng)勿透露本人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

DearSir,

IamLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromClassoneGradethree.Hearingthenews

thatthestudentunionisrecruitingnewmembersforfourcommunitiesincludingScienceclub,

Englishtheatreclub,Ecoclubandsportsclubinmyschool,whichhasattachedmanystudents9

attention.NowIcanhardlywaittoforwardaformalapplication,hopingtojoina

communitythat1amkeenonafterclass

Asfaras1amconcerned,1ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardinordertoacquiremoreand

moreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.Inthesecond

place,thereasonwhyIpreferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemostusefulwaysto

havearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneed

ofcooperationamongstudentssuchasfootball,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteam

spiritsothatweareawarethatunionisstrengthandknowtheimportanceofcooperation.All

thesereasonsmakemebeabsorbedinjoiningSportsclub.If1amelectedtobeamemberof

Sportsclub,1willtakeactivepartinallactivities.What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionof

thecommunityisthatIcanconveythepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesand

awakenthemtotherealizationthatjoiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.lamfascinatedbybeing

amemberofSportsclub.

I'dappreciateitsomuchifyoucouldpossiblyconsidermyapplication.Lookingforward

toyoureply.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)于加入社團(tuán)的選擇及內(nèi)心想法。

【詳解】第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)征信（夾敘夾議）

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法（或總分總）

要求：

1.你希望加入的社團(tuán)

2.選擇該社團(tuán)的原因

3.你可以為該社團(tuán)做些什么

第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

joinSportsclub

doexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness

oneofthemostusefulwaystohavearelaxation

cultivateourteamspirit

第三步：連詞成句

LAsfaras1amconcerned,!ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

2.wealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.

3.Inthesecondplace,thereasonwhy1preferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemost

usefulwaystohavearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.

4.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneedofcooperationamongstudentssuchas

football,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteamspirit.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

用詞參考：

Asfaras1amconcerned

notonly...butalso...

Firstandforemost

Inthesecondplace

Lastbutnotleast

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardin

ordertoacquiremoreandmoreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysical

fitness.（notonly位于句首的部分倒裝）

[高分句型2]If1amelectedtobeamemberofSportsclubjwilllakeactivepartinallactivities,

（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型3]What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionofthecommunityisthat1canconvey

thepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesandawakenthemtotherealizationthat

joiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.（what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）

2021屆上海高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷3

VILGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

現(xiàn)在中國(guó)購(gòu)物網(wǎng)站非常繁榮，很多人選擇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物而不是去商場(chǎng)實(shí)體店購(gòu)物，你更傾向于哪

種購(gòu)物方式，并說(shuō)出你的理由。

注意：請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校及姓名。

Nowadays,onlineshoppinghasbecomeanirreversibletrend.Somepeopleclaimthatonline

shoppinghasmoreadvantageswhileothersmaintainthatphysicalstoresarebetter.

Frommyperspective,Ipreferonlineshoppingforthreereasons.Firstofall,itssuper

convenienceisofvitalimportancetomebecauseitenablesmetosavemoretimeandenergyfor

mywork.Secondly,morechoicesandmoredifferentkindsofcommoditiesareofferedonthe

InternetsothatIcancompareprices,types,qualitiesandcanevenrefertopeople'scomments

beforechoosingtheappropriateoneforme.Lastbutnotleast,onlineshoppingenablesmetobuy

thingsacrossdifferentcountrieswithouttravellingaroundtheworld,whichisofgreat

convenienceonadailybasis.

Allinall,onlineshoppingismoreappealingtomeandwilldefinitelykeepaccompanying

meinthefuture.

2021屆上海高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷4

V.GuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假如你是Tom,在網(wǎng)上訂了一款MP3作為生日禮物送給好朋友，但收到的MP3卻存在

質(zhì)量問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給銷(xiāo)售經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封投訴信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.MP3有質(zhì)量問(wèn)題；

2.給你造成的損失；

3.你的合理要求.

Dearmanager,

I'mwritingtotellyouabouttheMP3IboughtlastweekfromyourcompanyontheInternet,

whichwasintendedformygoodfriendasabirthdaygift.

WhenIopenedthedelivery,Iwassurprisedtofindthewrappingpaperbroken.Whatwas

worse,IfindtheMP3doesn'twork,nomatterhowmanymeasuresIhavetaken.

WithreferencetomyorderNo.1314,thereisnodoubtthattheMP3youdeliveredreally

comesfromyourcompany,whosepoorqualitymademeverydisappointed,anditisthepoorMP3

thatmademesufferagreatlossfromit.Anyway,itcostme200yuan,whichIsavedfornearly

halfayear.Tosomeextent,thebrokenMP3hasnotonlybroughtmegreateconomiclossbutalso

lessenedmytrustasaconsumer.

Asmyfriend\birthdayisdrawingnear,IamanxioustoknowwhetheranewMP3canbe

redeliveredassoonaspossible.Pleasetakemycaseintodeepconsiderationratherthanturna

blindeyetomyrequirement.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifmuchattentioncouldbepaidto

myrequirement!

Yourstruly,

Tom

2021屆上海高考英語(yǔ)沖刺模擬試卷5

WLGuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

學(xué)校學(xué)生廣播正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（科學(xué)技術(shù)、興趣愛(ài)好、文學(xué)藝術(shù)）

中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（旅行、環(huán)保、健身）中挑選一個(gè)納入該電視臺(tái)節(jié)目。假設(shè)

你是該校學(xué)生李華，給廣播臺(tái)長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；

2.你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。

參考范文：

GuidedWriting

DearPresent,

I'mwritingtoexpresssomeofmyopinionstowardsourschool'sbroadcastwhichintendsto

changeoneoftheprogramsfromsciencetechnology,interesthobbyandliteratureartandselect

oneofthemfromtravelling,environmentalp