環(huán)境保護 熱點02 -中考英語高分作文（廣東專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點02環(huán)境保護一、話題作文1．在國家大力提倡的垃圾回收利用中，垃圾分類是一個提升垃圾利用率的有效途徑。我們產(chǎn)生的垃圾中有很大一部分都是可以回收再利用的，如：廢紙箱、廢紙、易拉罐等。食物垃圾可以通過處理轉化為燃料與肥料，不僅能夠減輕環(huán)境壓力，還能創(chuàng)造再生資源。為了讓更多的人了解垃圾分類的好處，請你以“Wastesorting”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談談你對垃圾分類的了解與看法。詞數(shù)：80~150。Wastesorting_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】WastesortingWastesortingisputtingrubbishintodifferentbins.Wastesortingandrecyclinghavemanybenefitsforsociety.Itcanturnsomethinguselessintothingsthatareusefultopeople,anditcanalsohelptolowerenvironmentalpressure.Bysortingwaste,ourworldwillbecomecleanerandmorebeautiful.Beyondthat,cleanersspendalotoftimecollectingrubbish,sowastesortingcanhelptosavethemtimeandenergy.Iamasupporterofwastesorting.Thisismyadviceonhowtodoitbetter.Wecanmakesignsandnoticestoteachpeopleaboutwastesorting.Wecanalsoworktogethertofindmoreusefulandconvenientwaystosortwaste.Ibelievethatifwesortmorewaste,ourliveswillbemorecolorfulandwonderful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示及話題完成寫作，寫出垃圾分類的好處以及自己的看法等。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹什么是垃圾分類；第二步，具體介紹垃圾分類對各方面的好處；第三步，最后是介紹自己對垃圾分類的看法以及應該如何做。[亮點詞匯]①wastesorting垃圾分類②alotof很多③helptodosth幫助做某事[高分句型]①Thisismyadviceonhowtodoitbetter.（“疑問句+不定式”結構）②ifwesortmorewaste,ourliveswillbemorecolorfulandwonderful.（if引導的條件狀語從句）2．我們的校報將舉辦以環(huán)保為主題的征文活動。請同學們以I'dlike________toprotectourenvironment為題寫一篇短文，談談你的環(huán)保措施。要求:1.確定主題，說明原因;2.圍繞主題，進行敘述或闡述3.詞數(shù):80-100。注意:1.補全標題(參考詞匯:tolivealow-carbonlife;tobeagreenconsumer;torecyclethings:tohavenewhabit等)2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)4.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關人物的真實校名和姓名。I'dlike________toprotectourenvironmentOurearthisindanger.It'severybody'sdutytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.I'dlike______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】I'dliketolivealow-carbonlifetoprotectourenvironmentOurearthisindanger.It'severybody'sdutytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.I'dliketolivealow-carbonlife,notonlyforourselvesbutalsoforourfuturegenerations.Low-carbonlifesavesmoreenergy.First,itisagoodideaforustogotoschoolonfootorbybikeasoftenaspossible.Second,remembertoturnoffthelightsandotherelectricalappliancesbeforeleavingtheroom.It’stimethatweshouldlivealow-carbonlife.Undoubtedly,thiswayoflifeismoreeconomical,healthierandhappier.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。本文以“我想過低碳的生活來保護我們的環(huán)境”為題展開描述，文中介紹了過低碳生活的原因及建議。2.點評：本文采用的是第一人稱，時態(tài)采用的是第三人稱。準確運用時態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。句子通順，邏輯性強。3.高分亮點：短語：indanger處于危險中；notonly…butalso不但……而且；gotoschool上學；onfoot步行；turnoff關掉。句子：First,itisagoodideaforustogotoschoolonfootorbybikeasoftenaspossible句中it是作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語；Undoubtedly,thiswayoflifeismoreeconomical,healthierandhappier句中運用了形容詞比較級。3．隨著社會文明的不斷進步，環(huán)境污染日趨嚴重，為了保護地球有限的資源，我們應該采取什么措施呢？請以“Howtoprotecttheenvironment?”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.語言表達準確，短文連貫通順；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3.80詞左右。Howtoprotecttheenvironment?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Howtoprotecttheenvironment?Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.It’stimetotakestepstoprotecttheenvironment.Firstly,savewater.Wateristhesourceoflife,soit’sveryimportantforustosavewater.Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwater,butalsoshouldwemakefulluseofit.Secondly,saveelectricity.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.Thirdly,saveforests.Pleasestopcuttingthemdownanduserecycledpaperinstead.Ifwecantryourbesttosaveresources,Ibelievewecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生以“Howtoprotecttheenvironment?”為題寫一篇英語短文。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明主題，需要保護環(huán)境；第二步，分步驟具體闡述如何保護環(huán)境；第三步，總結，表達自己的期望。[亮點詞匯]①takesteps采取措施②notonly...butalso不僅……而且③makefulluseof充分利用④turnoffthelights關燈⑤cutdown減少[高分句型]①Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.（比較級+比較級，表示“越來越”）②Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.（祈使句的否定形式）二、材料作文4．假如你是王剛，上周日你們班在學校附近的公園里組織了一次環(huán)?；顒印Ｕ埬愀鶕?jù)下面的提示，寫一篇英語短文，簡單描述這次活動，并談談你的感想。不少于80詞。提示：1.清理廢紙、塑料袋等廢棄物；2.樹立標牌，告訴游客要愛護花草樹木；3.向游客宣傳污染的危害以及保護環(huán)境的重要性。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：OurclassorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionactivityintheparknearourschoollastSunday.Wedidlotsofhelpfulthingsinthepark.First,wecollectedtherubbish.suchaswastepaperandplasticbags.Second,wesetupseveralboardstoaskthetouriststotakegoodcareoftheflowersandtrees.Finally,wegaveaspeechontheharmofpollutionandtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Ithinkitiseveryone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Ifwedon’ttakeactionnow,we’llhavefewcomfortableplacestostayinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文。②時態(tài)：一般過去時為主。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“提示”中向游客宣傳污染的危害以及保護環(huán)境的重要性，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“上周日班級在學校組織環(huán)?；顒印币鲋攸c介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從具體在公園的活動到最后宣傳污染的危害及保護環(huán)境的重要性，重點介紹具體情況；第三步，簡單收尾，表達自己的看法。[亮點詞匯]①suchas例如②takegoodcareof好好關心③takeaction采取行動[高分句型]Ithinkitiseveryone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.(think后的賓語從句)5．地球是我們美麗的家園。作為地球的主人，我們應該好好保護它。在日常生活中我們應該如何去保護地球環(huán)境呢？請以Howtoprotectourenvironment為題，用英語寫一篇短文。內容包括：1.列舉目前存在的環(huán)境問題。2.結合生活實際，談談如何去保護環(huán)境？至少三個方面。3.指出環(huán)境保護的重要性并發(fā)出保護環(huán)境的號召。寫作要求：1.語言流暢，層次清晰，可以適當發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80-100詞，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生本人的學校名稱和姓名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Howtoprotectourenvironment

Thepollutionisbecomingworseandworsetoday.Wehavenocleanwatertodrink.Peoplestillcutdownmanytrees.Someanimalsaregettingfewerandfewer.Somefactoriesarepouringdirtygasintothesky.Thepollutionnotonlyaffectsourlivesandhealth,butalsohasagreateffectinthefuture.

Inordertoliveabetterlife,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Weshouldn’tthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Weshouldrecyclereduceandreusethings.Wedon’tuseplasticbags.Don’twastethingsandusethingsforaslongaspossible.Wemustplantmoretreesandstoppeoplefromcuttingthemdown.Thesecanhelpsavemoneyandreducepollution.

Wehopeourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Itisveryimportantforustoprotecttheenvironment.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)內容提示，介紹下在日常生活中我們應該如何去保護地球環(huán)境。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱以第一人稱為主。文章可分為三段，第一段介紹目前的環(huán)境的問題；第二段介紹如何去保護環(huán)境；第三段介紹保護環(huán)境的重要性以及呼吁人們保護環(huán)境。行文做到無單詞語法錯誤。6．塑料袋被稱為“白色垃圾”，請根據(jù)下表中的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，說明塑料袋的危害并提出建議。項目內容塑料袋的危害1．刮風時四處飄落，影響環(huán)境的美觀；2．易被野生動物、家畜等誤食．導致死亡；3．混雜在農(nóng)田里影響農(nóng)作物生長；4．燃燒時污染空氣，等等。你的建議1．商家應遵守政府的規(guī)定有償提供塑料袋；2．我們應……(提出至少2條建議)注意：1．短文應包括所給內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮。2．詞數(shù)為90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。3．參考詞匯：塑料袋plasticbags；農(nóng)作物crops

Asweallknow，plasticbagsmayflywiththewindandmaketheenvironmentugly．【參考范文】

Asweallknow．plasticbagsmayflywiththewindandmaketheenvironmentugly．Worsestill，animalsmayeatthembymistakeanddie．Withplasticbagsinthefields,cropscan’tgrowwillBesides,burningplasticbagswillpollutetheair．Sotryingtousefewerplasticbagsisimportant．

Ithinkalltheshopsshouldstopofferingfreeplasticbags．Weshouldtrytouseclothorpaperbagsinsteadofplasticoneswhenshopping．What’smore，wheneverweseeplasticbagsinthestreetsorfields，Weshouldpickthemupandputthemintodustbins．Ifeveryonetakesanimmediateaction,wearesuretobuildourcityintoamorebeautifulone．【詳解】本文是根據(jù)提示寫一篇對塑料—白色垃圾的認識，所以文章的時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，要使用高級的句式和詞匯。寫作中分析塑料袋的危害，發(fā)表自己的看法。寫作中可借助情態(tài)動詞may可能,can能,can’t不能,should應該。注意復合句的使用如Ithink…,Ibelieve…,及主從復合句的使用如：Ifeveryonetakesanimmediateaction,wearesuretobuildourcityintoamorebeautifulone．7．越來越多的游客喜歡美麗的山城重慶。我們作為生活在重慶的中學生，是否思考過我們的生活方式也會對城市環(huán)境造成很大的影響呢？請用英語寫一篇題為GreenLifestyleinChongqing的短文，呼吁大家保護環(huán)境，綠色生活。信息提示：1.描述你在日常生活中的綠色生活方式（節(jié)約能源、綠色出行、循環(huán)利用、日常生活……）2.號召大家低碳生活，為保護環(huán)境，為創(chuàng)建美麗山城貢獻力量。注意事項：1.120詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮，行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。GreenLifestyleinChongqing______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：GreenLifestyleinChongqingAsweallknow,itisgreatlyimportantforustoprotectourenvironment.Soweshouldkeepagreenlifestyle.Indailylife,Ialwaystrymybesttoachieveagreenlifestyle.Forexample,Iusuallygooutbybikeorbusinsteadoftakingacar.Ialsosortoutourrubbishforbetterrecycling.Inordertosaveenergy,Ioftenmaintainairconditionerstwiceayearsotheywillrunefficiently.What’smore,Imakesuretoplantatreeeveryyear.Inmyopinion,ifeveryonelivesagreenlifestyleandprotectsourenvironmentactively,ourcity,Chongqing,willbemorebeautiful.Let’shavealowcarbonlifeanddoitnow!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，指出綠色生活的重要性。第二步，介紹自己日常生活中的綠色生活方式。第三步，呼吁大家進行低碳生活。[亮點詞匯]①asweallknow眾所周知②inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]Inmyopinion,ifeveryonelivesagreenlifestyleandprotectsourenvironmentactively,ourcity,Chongqing,willbemorebeautiful.(if引導的條件狀語從句)8．請以Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear為題寫一篇關于保護水資源的短文。環(huán)境污染是當今世界上最大的問題，根據(jù)下面的提示，請用自己的話說一說應該怎么樣保護我們的水資源。內容要點：1.生命離不開水資源。2.我們的飲用水在減少。3.水資源環(huán)境污染很嚴重。4.應該保護和再利用水。要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫。2.要點包含有關信息，并且適當發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)80左右。Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtearAsweallknow,waterisveryimportanttous.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutthis.Theyoftenwastealotofwater.Theypourdirtywaterintoriversandlakes.Theythrowrubbishintothem,too.Nowmoreandmoreriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Weshoulddosomethingtostopthepollution.Wemustprotectthewaterandfindwaystoreuseit.Ifwedon’t,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文根據(jù)題干中的提示內容介紹應該怎么樣保護我們的水資源，可適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示水的重要性；第二步，介紹現(xiàn)在水資源污染問題；第三步，介紹應該如何和再利用水。[亮點詞匯]①asweallknow眾所周知②careabout關心③o把……倒進……[高分句型]①Asweallknow,waterisveryimportanttous.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.(as引導的定語從句)②Ifwedon’t,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear.(if引導的條件狀語從句)三、電子郵件9．假如你是李華，你們學校將組織一次環(huán)境保護志愿活動。請你給交換生Cathy寫一封電子郵件，邀請她參加志愿活動。內容包括：1.活動的時間、地點：周日早上九點，學校附近的公園；2.活動的具體內容：撿垃圾，張貼關于環(huán)境保護的海報；3.活動的相關準備：做一張關于環(huán)境保護的海報，帶一副手套，一個塑料袋；4.活動的意義：……寫作要求：1.書寫規(guī)范，詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.要點齊全，條理清晰，可適當發(fā)揮；3.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名、地名等。參考詞匯：theschool’svoluntaryactivity學校志愿者活動；putupposters張貼海報DearCathy,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearCathy,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheschool’svoluntaryactivitytoprotecttheenvironment.We’llgototheparknearourschoolat9o’clockonSundaymorning.Wearegoingtopickuprubbishandputuppostersaboutprotectingtheenvironment.Ifyoudecidetojoinus,youcanmakeaposterandtakeitwithyou.Andyou’dbettertakeapairofglovesandaplasticbagwithyou.Ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析］①題材:本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示:寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏所給要點和闡述活動意義，可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。[寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖，邀請Cathy參加志愿活動；第二步，介紹此次活動的具體情況，其包括活動時間、地點、具體內容、相關準備和活動意義；第三步，書寫結語。期待對方的回信。[亮點詞匯］①takepart