2018高考英語-寫作過渡課

BeautifyyourComposition遇難心不慌，遇易心更細(xì)。discussingroupYesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.I

sawaforeignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.

YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.

Isawa

foreignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.ButSeeingthis,IwentuptothemandwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChinese.orhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.

YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwhospokeEnglishwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.Buttheshopassistantcouldn'tcatchhim.Seeingthis,IwentuptothemandtranslatedwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChineseforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguageorhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.

書面表達(dá)在評(píng)閱時(shí)遵循三原則語言第一位（語言高級(jí)）內(nèi)容第二位（要點(diǎn)齊全）結(jié)構(gòu)第三位（文章分段）一、高級(jí)詞匯和句式二、修辭手法三、有效的連詞四、名人名言或諺語語言第一位（語言高級(jí)）漂亮、地道詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復(fù)原則

4、后、高、長原則—

后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長詞匯。四項(xiàng)原則

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.

4、后高長原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長詞匯hardvery

payattentionto

happy

moreandmore3、避免重復(fù)原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.替換詞

diligently

ratherextremelyattachimportanceto;focusondelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberofAdj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife. EX、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：1.Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)2.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高級(jí))ShewenttoAustriawiththepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高級(jí))Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruck/hitme(高級(jí))Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent

palewithsorrow(高級(jí))Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高級(jí))1.Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)2.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：思考：什么樣的作文會(huì)成為一篇好作文

地道的高級(jí)詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~組無遺漏信息點(diǎn)（審題）篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advancedsentences定語從句名詞性從句非謂語動(dòng)詞常用諺語被動(dòng)句…一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級(jí)句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少

修辭的使用在書面表達(dá)中算作很大的亮點(diǎn)，在高中階段很少有學(xué)生會(huì)注重修辭的應(yīng)用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對(duì)于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設(shè)計(jì)雙重否定的句子。就變成了亮點(diǎn)句，起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime

倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應(yīng)對(duì)書面表達(dá)，如何應(yīng)用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。二、陳述不如倒裝妙1.Wecansolvetheproblemofpollutionwhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.Timeissopreciousthatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Ashewasdiligent,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.每次可以借五本書最多借十天Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪種表達(dá)法分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)更高？三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.四、從句不如分詞傲1.我們學(xué)校周圍種了很多花和樹，吸引了大量的學(xué)生來參觀。（with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）______________________________________,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.2.Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.（定語從句）Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,

___________________________3.Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.（主語從句）______________mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.Whereweboughtalotofclothes.WhatimpressedmeEX、改寫句子

Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool

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4.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice.（使用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)）__________________,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.5.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.6.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Frightenedoflosinghisjob

7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijin