高考英語（人教）總復(fù)習(xí)課件寫作導(dǎo)練第2練整齊有致的并列句

PartOne寫得對，基本句型來奠基第2練整齊有致的并列句并列句是由并列連詞連接兩個分句而組成的句子,其基本結(jié)構(gòu)是:簡單句

+并列連詞+簡單句。并列句中的前后兩個分句的邏輯關(guān)系可分為以下幾種:1.并列或遞進(jìn):常用連詞是and,notonly...butalso...(不僅……而且……)?！艚?jīng)典例句NotonlyishethefirstChinesetogotospace,butalsoheisoneofthegreatest

astronautsintheworld.他不僅是第一個進(jìn)入太空的中國人,而且是世界上最

偉大的宇航員之一。魔法導(dǎo)航◆雕詞琢句(1)(2019課標(biāo)全國Ⅲ)Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,

(而且校長將要發(fā)表演講).(2)(2020課標(biāo)全國Ⅰ)

(他不僅是我的父親),buthe

isalsothepersonthatIrespectmost.andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeechHeisnotonlymyfather2.轉(zhuǎn)折:常用的連詞是but和yet。◆經(jīng)典例句(2019江蘇)Theschooluniformsarefine,buttheyarenotspecialenoughtogive

auniqueChineseflavor.校服很好,但它們不夠特別,不能給人一種獨特的中國味道。◆雕詞琢句(1)(2020全國新高考Ⅰ)Thecross-countryrunningraceistiring,

(但我從中受益匪淺).(2)(2020課標(biāo)全國Ⅲ)I,togetherwithmyclassmates,haveadaptedashortplay

fromthetextThe

Necklace,

(但我們遇到了一些麻煩).butIhavebenefitedalotfromitbut/yetwemeetwithsometrouble3.對比:常用的連詞是while。◆經(jīng)典例句Atschool,somestudentsareactivewhilesomeareshy.在學(xué)校,有些學(xué)生積極,而有些學(xué)生害羞。◆雕詞琢句(1)(2019江蘇)LirecommendsthetraditionalChinesedress,

(而Su更喜歡校服).(2)Goodhabitscancontributetohighlearningefficiency,

(而壞習(xí)慣結(jié)果卻恰恰相反).whileSupreferstheschooluniformwhilebadonesleadtotheopposite4.因果:常用的連詞是for。◆經(jīng)典例句Itmusthaverainedlastnight,forthegroundiswet.昨晚肯定下雨了,因為地面是濕的。◆雕詞琢句Hehastroubleinreading,

(因為他的視力不好).forhehaspoorsight5.when作并列連詞,其意義為“這時”。◆經(jīng)典例句Wewerehavingameetingwhensomeonebrokein.我們正在開會,這時有人闖了進(jìn)來?！舻裨~琢句Iwasabouttogiveup

(這時我的老師鼓勵我繼續(xù)努力).whenmyteacherencouragedmetokeepontrying1.完美文章結(jié)合括號中的提示,將并列句補(bǔ)充完整。

SomestudentsthinktheNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationisonlyacommonpartoftheirwholelife,(1)

(然而很多高三的學(xué)生認(rèn)為它很重要)anddesiretobesuccessfulinit.(2)

(但是我們應(yīng)該做什么)inordertoaccomplishthegoal?Herearesomesuggestions.學(xué)以致用whileagreatnumberofseniorthreestudentsattachgreatsignificancetoitButwhatshouldwedo

Tobeginwith,it’svitaltohavearightattitude,(3)

(因為一種正常的心態(tài)和自信心有助于我們放松)andenableustoovercomedifficultybravely.Meanwhile,notonlyshouldwehaveadefinitegoal(4)

(而且我們應(yīng)該正確地評價自己).Onlyinthiswaywillwenotbeeasilypleasedordisappointedwithwhatwehaveknownanddone.Moreover,we'dbettertalkwithourparents,teachersandclassmates,(5)

(他們可能會幫助我們擺脫困境)whenweareintrouble.Finally,keepingaproperbalancebetweenstudyandrestkeepsusenergetic(6)

(健康的飲食也有用).

Withthesedone,Ithinkwecangreatlyimproveourperformance.foranormalstateofmindandselfconfidencecanhelpustorelaxbutalsoweshouldevaluateourselvescorrectlyandtheymayhelpusoutandahealthydietisusefulaswell2.連句成文◆將下列句子補(bǔ)充完整。(1)為了更好地掌握英語,我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成聽、讀英語的習(xí)慣。InordertohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,weshould

.(2)經(jīng)常背誦英語文章,因為這對提高英語語感很有益處。ReciteEnglisharticlesfrequently,

.makeitaroutinetolistentoandreadEnglishforitisbeneficialtoimprovingourEnglishlanguagesense(3)每天寫英語日記是個好主意,否則我們不能在短時間內(nèi)提高我們的寫作能

力。It’sagoodideatokeepEnglishdiarieseveryday,

inashorttime.(4)我們不僅要樹立信心,而且要勇敢地面對困難。Weshould

,butalsoweshouldfacedifficulty

bravely.orwecan'timproveourwritingabilitynotonlybuildupourconfidence◆將以上句子連成一篇邏輯通順的短文。

答案

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