2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英語作文解析與范文（下篇）

2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英語作文解析與范文（下篇）1【2024·新高考Ⅰ卷】第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondsought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised. 【原文速遞】HOWIMETGUNTER,THEBESTTAXIDRIVERINVIENNA&AUSTRIA

WhoisGunter?

Idon’tknowhissurnameorwhathisfavouritecolourisbutIcantellyouthismuch:heisthenicest,thebesttaxidriveryouwillfindinViennaandmaybeAustria.

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.

Ihadbeenflyingto

Vienna

from

Malta

enrouteto

Prague.

Theflighthadbeendelayedthanksto

ahurricane

inMalta.‘ItneverrainsinGozoorMalta.Itisalwayssunnyandbright!’

IwasreliablyinformedbymyanonGozitantaxidriveraswelefttheapartmentforMaltaLuqaairport.Iwassadtoleave.WespokeallthingsGozitantillboardingthecruiseferrytoMalta.Wemarvelledabouteverything:fromtheirdelicioussoftgoatscheesetothedreamybeautyoftheiridyllicmediterraneancoastine.

30minuteslater,asthecarrolledoutofthebellyoftheferryheretractedhisearlierstatementandreleasedamodifiedversion.

‘WehaveonebigstormeveryyearinMalta.Otherwise,itisalwayssunnyandbright’

hetriedtoreassureme,asourcabventuredforth,intoagapingholeofinfinitedarkness.

Justminutesbefore,thesunwasblazing.Piercing,blueskieswithnotaspeckofacloudinsight.

Inamatterofminutes,theskyturnedfromcobaltbluetoslategreytocharcoalblack.Thestormpickedupquickly.Spinninglongyarnsofdustandrustyautumnleaves,alustywindsnarled,swirledominouslyaroundourcar.Thencameafewriproaringburstsoflighteningfollowedbyadelugeofwater.Rain,rainlikeIhaveneverseenrainbefore.Weslipped,slidedthroughverticalcolumnsofwaterforafewnervousminutes.Almostzerovisibility.Thenlikeasaintlyapparition,MaltaLuqaairportcameintoview.Iwishedmyanonymoustaxidriverthebestofluckandgavehimageneroustip.Isilentlymutteredaprayerinhisanonymousnameashisneoncabsignfadedintothemistydistance.

Iconsenttoreceivingemailsandpersonalizedads.

TheAirMaltaladiesatthecheckindeskweresmilinghappilyasIarrivedbedraggled,waterdrippingfrommyforehead.Ifmemoryservesmeright,onmiserabledreichdayslikethisinScotland,grownwomenweepandrage.

‘Itmakesussohappywhentherainse.Wenevergetrainyousee!’myhappy,smileycheckingirlexplainedtome,asIaskedherwhatwasthesecretbehindhersmile.

Thenshehastilyadded,‘Oh.Btw.Yourflighthasbeendelayedbyanhour.’

andthenhandedovermyboardingpasswhichInervouslyaccepted.

Ihadlefta2hourbufferbetweenmyflightlandingin

Vienna

andmy

StudentAgencyBus

departureto

Prague.

Iwaitedattheannouncedgateofdeparture.Raisedmyheadevery2minutesforthenexthourlookingatthemonitor.Inbetween,Ipushedmyfaceagainsttheperspiringwindows,peeringthroughtheincessantbandsofrain,wonderingwhenmyAirMaltaflighttoarrive.

Eventuallymyflightdidarrive.Hourand45minuteslate,AirMaltaflight514leftforVienna.

Flightwasnottoobumpy.Itoucheddownin

Vienna

just15minutesbeforemybusdeparture.Inervouslywaitedattheluggagecarousel,hopingmyluggagewouldarriveontime.Foronce,IpraytotheeLordofluggageandconveyorbelts,pleasedelivermyrucksackbeforeeveryone’sluggage.Buthellno.Itarrivedpromptlyat7pmintheoversizedluggagecarousel.It’stimetostartusingasuitcaselikenormalpeople.

ItwasthelastbustoPrague.

Thesensiblethingtodoatthispointwouldhavebeentotakeiteasy.FindacheapbedforthenightandtakethefirstbustomorrowtoVienna.

Butguesswhat.ThisKash,BudgetTravellerdudeisanobstinate,stubbornmule.Hehasmissedtwoflightsthisyearandisinnomoodtomissanotherconnection.Momenthegotthebackpack,heranlikenutstothebusterminal.

Picturethis.AnAsian(almostskinhead)guywithbeardandablackbackpackrunningthroughacrowdedairterminal.Youcanimaginehowmanypeoplewerestaringatmewithaveryconcernedlook.

Thebushadleftamatterof8minutesago

buttherewasmassoftaxisswellingtherank.

SuddenlyIhadthismadcapideaofhoppingonacabandcatchingthe

StudentAgencyBus

atthebusstationinPraguewhereinroughly25minutesitwouldbepickingupafewmorepassengers.

Ihoppedinwithnosecondthoughtintothefirstcabontherank.

That’swhen,ImetGunter.

AfterexchangingbriefpleasantriesItriedtoexplaintohimwhereIwasgoing.

‘CityCentre.

Schoncool.Thatwillbe€30’

hegruntedtohiminthestrongestAustrianaccentyoucanimagine.

Yikes.MybustickettoPraguecostedme€25.

Hehadn’theardofthebusstation(Florenc)fromwherethe

StudentAgencyBus

leftfrom.Imentionedittohimafewtimes.Maybeitwasmypronunciation?Hekeptonshakinghishead.

ItriedmybestAustrianaccent.WhichisprobablyaGermanaccent.WhichisprobablynotaGermanaccent.YouknowHerrFlickfromAlloAllo?Somethinglikehisaccent.Whichconfusedhimfurther.

Lookingathisperplexedlook,anauseatingfeelingsweepsoverme.

Thatfeelinginlifewhencircumstancesmacksyouintheface.Yetstill,youfeelnumb,thatslightlysurrealoutofbodysensationthatyoucan’tbelievethat

THISSOMETIMESAMAZING,SOMETIMESCRAZYTHINGCALLEDLIFE

ishappeningtoyou.

Again.Misadventurewasmybestfriend.

Phoneafriend?

Gunterputsonhisreadingglassesandmanagestofishouthisdinkylittlephone.

Afterananimateddiscussionthatlasted5minutesbutfeelslikeaneternity,Gunterputshisphonedownandnodshisheadreassuringly.

‘Iknowwherezeebassstationiznow.’

Asonewaveofpanicsubsided,anothernaggingissuereareditshead.

Ihadzerocashinmywallet.

IwasdoubtfulthathiscardmachinewouldacceptmyPortuguesebankcard.

Thetensionlevelsrising,werolledintothedarkwetemptystreetsofthecity.

Vienna

waslikethisabandonedghosttownfromazombiemovie.Alllitupandpretty,butnotasoulinsight.GunterwasproddingawayathisGPS,utteringnumerousprofanitiesatit,tryingtofigureoutthebestroutetothebusstation.

Thetrafficlightswereconspiringagainstme,turningredateverystreetweturnedinto.

Finally,withjust2minutestosparewerolledintothebusstationtoseethefamiliarbrightyellowoutershellofthe

StudentAgencyBus.

Thankfully,therewasahugequeuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.

Gunterparksthecarbehindthecoachandthenlooksatmewithabigsmileonhisface.

‘Wemadeit.’

IhaveacrocodilesmileasIfishoutmybankcard.

Suddenly,Gunter’ssmilecreasesintoagrimace.

‘Izoonotthinkmymachinewillacceptzeescard.’

Hetriesitthricebutsomehowthemachinewilljustnotplayalong.

Ifeelafewmoreknotsinmychestnow,mybreathheavyasIseeinfrontofmethebusqueuethinningout.

Gunterthenwaveshishandatsomeofthepeoplewaitinginthecrowdandhollerstothem,askingthemiftheyknewwherethenearestcashmachinewas.

Oneofthemyankstheirheadtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstationwhichisabout500yardsaway.

Thenwithoutmuchexplaining,bothmeandGunterleapoutofthecarandmakeamaddashtofindthiscashmachine.

AfterafewwrongturnswefinallyfindthemachineandIgleefullypopmycardin,onlytoreadthemessageattheATM

‘Outoforder.Sorry.’

Blooddrainsfrommyface.Gunter,pantingforbreath,shakeshishead.

Gameover.Fateseemedtobeconspiringagainstmetoday.

Inthedistance,Icantheluggagedoorofthebusclosing.Thelastremainingpassengersareabouttoboardthebus.IlooktowardsGunter.From:s:///meetgunterthebesttaxidriverinviennaaustria/【題目分析】A.已知故事梗概(Synopsis)：這個(gè)故事主要講述了一位主人公因?yàn)楹桨嘌诱`，錯(cuò)過了前往布拉格的最后一班公共汽車。在焦急之中，他遇到了一位出租車司機(jī)——岡特。岡特盡管對公共汽車站的位置感到困惑,但他還是通過打詢問朋友，最終成功地將主人公帶到了汽車站。然而，在支付車費(fèi)的時(shí)候，主人公發(fā)現(xiàn)自己身上沒有現(xiàn)金，而銀行卡又在提款機(jī)上無法使用。面對這種情況，主人公感到無助和焦慮。B.主要人物特點(diǎn)(Maincharacters)：1.主人公(“我”):一個(gè)行事匆忙的人，面對突發(fā)情況顯得有些慌亂，但關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻還是保持冷靜并盡力尋找解決辦法。2.岡特(Gunter):一個(gè)樂于助人但稍顯粗心的出租車司機(jī)，雖然對地點(diǎn)不熟悉，但愿意通過其他途徑幫助乘客。C.沖突(Conflict)：故事的主要矛盾沖突在于主人公在急需趕往布拉格參加會議的情況下，遇到了一系列的不順:航班延誤、錯(cuò)過最后一班公共汽車、身上沒有現(xiàn)金、銀行卡無法使用。D.高潮(Climax)：高潮部分出現(xiàn)在主人公發(fā)現(xiàn)提款機(jī)故障，無法取出現(xiàn)金支付車費(fèi)，而公共汽車排隊(duì)的人越來越少，主人公感到無助和焦慮。續(xù)寫情節(jié)構(gòu)思(Plotting)E.社會價(jià)值觀(Socialvalues)這篇文章的價(jià)值觀主要體現(xiàn)在互助(如出租車司機(jī)Gunter通過聯(lián)系朋友并詢問信息，幫助“我”確認(rèn)了正確的路線)與友情(后續(xù)寫作中可以提到這次偶遇成了他們友誼的開始)、誠信、責(zé)任感(如承諾回到維也納就打，還有欠錢還錢)與感恩(續(xù)中可寫的在里再次感謝或見面時(shí)的贈(zèng)送禮物、保持后續(xù)友誼等)。這些價(jià)值觀不僅對于個(gè)人成長和成功具有重要意義，也對于構(gòu)建和諧社會和推動(dòng)社會進(jìn)步具有積極作用。續(xù)寫第一段：繼首句，可寫對方的表情反應(yīng)(憤怒、抱怨、無奈，還是理解?)和語言、行動(dòng)描寫，最后應(yīng)寫我向Gunter承諾回到Vienna時(shí)再與他通話。這里有個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)需要注意,“我’怎么知道Gunter的的?這一點(diǎn)必須在第一段寫作中做出描寫，否則屬于與后文第二段首句脫節(jié)（把握伏筆）。續(xù)寫第二段：繼首句，可寫“我”和Gunter在里說了些什么，車費(fèi)是否支付?怎么文付?Gunter是否最終接受?除了支付現(xiàn)金外，是否還需要表示額外的感謝，如擁抱、鮮花?通過這次經(jīng)歷，“我”可能會對自己的行為進(jìn)行一些反思，比如是否應(yīng)該更加謹(jǐn)慎地管理自己的出行計(jì)劃，或者是否應(yīng)該更加冷靜地應(yīng)對突發(fā)情況。同時(shí),“我”也可能會從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到一些寶貴的人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)，以確保不會再遇到類似的問題。在故事的最后,“我”也可能會在維也納再次遇到岡特。他們可能會進(jìn)行一次面對面愉快的交談，分享彼此的經(jīng)歷和感受。這次相遇可能會成為他們友誼的開始，也可能會成為“我”人生中一段難忘的回憶，引發(fā)“我”的一系列感悟。【情節(jié)構(gòu)思】要點(diǎn)1：讀后續(xù)寫致力于解決問題，讀透原文要想方設(shè)法解決問題要點(diǎn)2：“312”構(gòu)思法：3個(gè)銜接句1個(gè)主題句2個(gè)過渡句要點(diǎn)3：運(yùn)用文章中的伏筆 I

met

Gunter

onacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember(第一句就交代故事的人物、時(shí)間).IhadplannedtoflytoVienna(維也納，奧地利首都)andtakeabustoPrague(布拉格（前捷克斯洛伐克首都）)foraconference(故事發(fā)生的背景、地點(diǎn)).Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague(故事矛盾沖突的起因).ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingand

jumpedintothefirsttaxi

ontherankwithoutasecondsought.9月的一個(gè)寒冷、潮濕、令人難忘的夜晚，我遇到了岡特。我原計(jì)劃飛往維也納，然后乘公共汽車去布拉格參加一個(gè)會議。由于一場大風(fēng)暴，我的航班延誤了一個(gè)半小時(shí)。我在去布拉格的最后一班公共汽車出發(fā)前30分鐘在維也納著陸。下飛機(jī)的那一刻，我瘋狂地穿過機(jī)場大樓，跳上了第一輛出租車，沒有人找我。ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthat

lastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.(故事矛盾一及解決)(Gunter人物性格的刻畫，耐心)那是我遇到岡特的時(shí)候。我告訴他我要去哪里，但他說他沒聽說過汽車站。我覺得我的發(fā)音有問題，所以我又慢慢地解釋了一遍，但他看起來仍然很困惑。當(dāng)我正要放棄的時(shí)候，岡特拿出他的小，給一個(gè)朋友打了。在似乎持續(xù)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)的激烈討論之后，岡特放下，啟動(dòng)了汽車。Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.(Gunter人物性格的刻畫，盡心盡力)最后，在只剩下兩分鐘的時(shí)間里，我們駛?cè)肓似囌?。謝天謝地，還有很長的隊(duì)伍等著上車。岡特把出租車停在公共汽車后面，轉(zhuǎn)過身來，臉上帶著燦爛的笑容看著我?！拔覀兂晒α?，”他說。JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet(故事矛盾二).IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthe

cardmachinejustdidnotplayalong(問題解決不成功).AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.(故事矛盾三)就在這時(shí)，我意識到我的錢包里沒有現(xiàn)金。當(dāng)我掏出我的葡萄牙銀行卡時(shí)，我向他露出了歉意的微笑。他試了好幾次，但卡片機(jī)就是不起作用。當(dāng)我看到排隊(duì)的公共汽車越來越少時(shí)，一種無助感涌上心頭。Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."(問題解決不成功)這時(shí)，岡特指著汽車站的候車大廳。入口處有一臺提款機(jī)。我跳下車，瘋狂地跑向機(jī)器，把我的卡片放了進(jìn)去，卻看到提示：“抱歉，機(jī)器故障！”續(xù)寫思路示例：Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.情節(jié)1:Gunter說沒關(guān)系，錢先欠著，你趕緊上車，等你回來的時(shí)候再給。情節(jié)2:我聽了之后非常感動(dòng)，我要了Gunter的并答應(yīng)等我回來我會打給他。情節(jié)3:我趕緊跑過去車站，在公交車開走前成功登上了車(故事矛盾三解決)，我從車窗看出去，向Gunter招手再見。Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.情節(jié)1:我和Gunter約在之前的那個(gè)busstation見面，我們在附近找了一個(gè)咖啡館，我請他喝了咖啡，聊了各自的生活(我也可以聊conference相關(guān)的內(nèi)容)。情節(jié)2:當(dāng)我們準(zhǔn)備離開的時(shí)候，我把打的士的錢給他，他卻拒絕了我，并說我遵守了承諾，也請我喝了咖啡，非常樂意幫助我。情節(jié)3:我們相互告別，去機(jī)場的路上，我再次回憶這次旅程，Gunter的幫助讓那個(gè)夜晚充滿了溫情和感動(dòng)?！纠恼宫F(xiàn)】例文1（推薦范文）：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.【銜接1】Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.【過渡1】Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.

“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”

Iexplained.

“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”

Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.

“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”

AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.【銜接2】Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.【銜接3】Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.【過渡2】Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentIsawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe

“doublecarride”,backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.IhadnochoicebuttogivehimanattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.【主題1】Inthisway,webecamegoodfriendsandkeptintouchwitheachotherregularly.IfeltblessedtohavesuchawarmheartedfriendlikeGunterwhohasaheartofgold.

例文2：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Uponsharingthenews,Iquicklyloweredmyhead,notdaringtolookhimin

the

eyes.Stillweigheddownbythefrustrationandembarrassment,Iwasatalosswhattodonext.

Just

at

my

wit’s

end,Gunter’svoicebrokethesilence,“Yourbusisgoingtodepart！Forgetthetaxifee！YoucantakeitasatokenofkindnessoftheViennacity!”

IlookedupandfoundGunter’seyesshiningwithsincerity.Deeplytouched,IpromisedtocallGuntertopayhimbackandthenhurriedlydashedtothebus.Four